History Fanfic / ToukenDanshiAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix

%%* PapaWolf: The fic tries to make the saniwa this, but he comes off as a {{Meddling Parent|s}}.

* MeddlingParents: The saniwa is a Black Hawk – he derides Hogwarts as not safe enough for his adoptive son to study in and coerces Dumbledore into granting Harry special treatment, even going so far as to threaten to ''relocate the entire Citadel onto Hogwarts grounds'', practically threatening to ''declare war'' on them, until the school gives in.

* HappilyAdopted: Arguably [[UpToEleven too happily]] by means of ArtisticLicenseLaw – abandoned Harry was adopted by ''the Imperial family'' and becomes Japanese royalty ''despite being fully British'' before later apparently being adopted by the saniwa, all while still retaining royalty status. All this is despite his never being stated to have undergone an immigration process.

* PapaWolf: The fic tries to make the saniwa this, but he comes off as a {{Meddling Parent|s}}.

* SparedByTheAdaptation: James and Lily Potter.
* StoryBreakerTeamUp: Aside from the problems listed in IntercontinuityCrossover, there's the fact the swords' fighting style would logically be at a disadvantage compared to wizards' ranged spell-casting. However, the fic goes the other way around, with the former's constantly assaulting the latter, while the latter stand around and never intervene.

* WouldBeRudeToSayGenocide: Hizamaru apparenly has [[FantasticRacism "Muggle's Bane"]] as an extra name. Nobody has a problem with this; even the Potters of all people are more concerned about the Genji's famous owners than the fact Muggle genocide is being treated as a cool name.

* IntercontinuityCrossover: The fic seems to forget the two continuities being crossed over are set ''3 centuries apart'', to say nothing of the incompatible worldbuilding and cultural elements.

* WouldBeRudeToSayGenocide: Hizamaru apparenly has [[FantasticRacism "Muggle's Bane"]] as an extra name. Nobody has a problem with this.

* WeirdCrossover: It's ''Touken Ranbu'' meets ''Harry Potter'' and ''not'' PlayedForLaughs, a parody or anything of the sort. It doesn't get any weirder than that.

* ConflictBall: If Harry hates going to Hogwarts and only wants to finish his required schooling so he can keep his magic, why doesn't he and his crew take the wiser, more diplomatic route of ''just going along with it'' and not getting hated by everyone? Why make negotiations with Hogwarts more difficult and pick fights with everyone every step of the way?

* DiplomaticImpunity: Even though Harry and co. are essentially national representatives, their open hostility against the British never nets them any consequences on themselves or international relations.

** A white British person, with no Japanese blood and no relation to the divine-descended Imperial family, gets to be part of the family that plays an important role in Japanese public consciousness as their national symbol and even gets ''an actual royal title''. That would go over ''[[SarcasmMode fantastically]]'' with the Japanese public.