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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]]'' is a FixFic of the first season of ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]].
The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy.
The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]]'' is a FixFic of fanfic that reimagines the first season of ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]].
Theteams challenges are identical to those of canon, but the team compositions are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Owen, Cody, Gwen, Heather, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Leshawna, Izzy, Katie, Sadie, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy.
Ezekiel. As a result, the elimination order is significantly reshuffled, many new friendships, rivalries, and romances are born, and characters who didn't get much of a chance in the season get more opportunities to shine.
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* AscendedExtra: Several contestants who served as fodder characters in the canon season receive large amounts of focus here, particularly Noah, Ezekiel, and Justin.
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* BigNo: Tyler lets out a long one beofre he has to face his phobia of chickens.
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* BigNo: Tyler lets out a long one beofre before he has to face his phobia of chickens.
* DemotedToExtra: Geoff, Leshawna, and DJ go from major players in the canon season to the first ones voted off in the story.
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* ForWantOfANail: The story shows how different TDI would have been by swapping a few members from one team to another. There's also a bit of AlternateCharacterInterpretation when it comes to some characters.
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* ForWantOfANail: The story shows how different TDI would ''Total Drama Island'' could have been by swapping a few members from one team to another. There's also a bit of AlternateCharacterInterpretation when it comes to some characters.
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* HannibalLecture: Noah gives one to Courtney regarding her obvious plan to [[spoiler: use Bridgette and Trent]].
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* HannibalLecture: Noah gives one to Courtney regarding her obvious plan to [[spoiler: use [[spoiler:use Bridgette and Trent]].
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* KickTheDog: Justin a few times.
* LoveTriangle: Cody/Bridgette/Harold, Owen/Izzy/Ezekiel, Tyler/Lindsay/Justin.
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* KickTheDog: Justin does this a few times.
times, such as turning Katie and Sadie against each other for little reason.
* LoveTriangle:Cody/Bridgette/Harold, Owen/Izzy/Ezekiel, Tyler/Lindsay/Justin.Let's see: we have Cody and Harold both trying to impress Bridgette (all while Cody is also crushing on Gwen), Owen crushing on Izzy while she is hanging around Ezekiel, and Tyler trying to impress Lindsay who's more interested in Justin.
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* MoralEventHorizon: In-universe, Ezekiel believes that Justin turning [[spoiler:Katie and Sadie]] against each other exposes him as irredeemable.
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* ReplacementGoldfish: Gwen rebuffed Bridgette's offer of friendship because she thinks that Bridgette is trying to replace [[spoiler:Courtney, who was eliminated the previous challenge]] with her. Although the truth is that [[spoiler: Gwen thinks that Bridgette has feelings for Trent]].
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* OddFriendship: Noah and Owen's friendship from canon occurs here, but much earlier this time and with Cody included as a core member of the group.
* OutOfFocus: The Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* ReplacementGoldfish: Gwen rebuffed Bridgette's offer of friendship because she thinks that Bridgette is trying to replace [[spoiler:Courtney, who was eliminated the previous challenge]] with her. Although the truth is that[[spoiler: Gwen [[spoiler:Gwen thinks that Bridgette has feelings for Trent]].
* OutOfFocus: The Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* ReplacementGoldfish: Gwen rebuffed Bridgette's offer of friendship because she thinks that Bridgette is trying to replace [[spoiler:Courtney, who was eliminated the previous challenge]] with her. Although the truth is that
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* SatelliteCharacter: Tyler is far more concerned about getting Lindsay's attention than the competition. [[spoiler: And Justin knows how to take advantage of this as well]]. Still, he's not a SatelliteLoveInterest.
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* SatelliteCharacter: Tyler is far more concerned about getting Lindsay's attention than the competition. [[spoiler: And [[spoiler:And Justin knows how to take advantage of this as well]]. Still, he's not a SatelliteLoveInterest.
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** Noah and Cody are ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fans.
** In a more conventional example, the author mentions The Kobold Necromancer as the inspiration for writing this story.
* OutOfFocus: The Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* VillainDecay: Although Heather retains her canonical attitudes, not having anyone dumb or naive enough to manipulate makes her far less effective as a villain.
** In a more conventional example, the author mentions The Kobold Necromancer as the inspiration for writing this story.
* OutOfFocus: The Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* VillainDecay: Although Heather retains her canonical attitudes, not having anyone dumb or naive enough to manipulate makes her far less effective as a villain.
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** Noah and Cody are both ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fans.
fans and begin their friendship by bonding over it.
** Noah reads ''Literature/NineteenEightyFour'' and ''Literature/SherlockHolmes'' stories.
** In a more conventional example, the author mentions [[Fanfic/TotalDramaComebackSeries The KoboldNecromancer Necromancer]] as the inspiration for writing this story.
* OutOfFocus: The Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* VillainDecay: Although Heather retains her canonical attitudes, not having anyone dumb or naive enough to manipulate makes her far less effective as a villain.villain.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]]'' is a FixFic of the first season of ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. Argudas]].
The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, andIzzy.
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The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and
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* MoralEventHorizon: In-universe, Ezekiel believes that Justin turning [[spoiler:Katie and Sadie]] against each other exposes him as irredeemable.
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* AbortedArc: [[spoiler: Heather and Duncan's alliance]] pretty much goes nowhere, given what happens to the former.
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* AbortedArc: [[spoiler: Heather and Duncan's alliance]] alliance pretty much goes nowhere, given nowhere because of what happens to Heather.
* AdaptationalBadass: Justin doesn't resemble his canon counterpart so much as his canonical {{expy}} Alejandro, who was created in canon to be theformer.villain that Justin was meant to be but never really became.
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** During one of her first confessional entries, Heather says that she hand in mind to pick two people dumb enough to manipulate, even saying that Lindsay and Beth would be perfect candidates.
* BigBad:
** BigBadEnsemble: Justin for the Killer Bass, Heather for the Screaming Gophers.
*** BigBadDuumvirate: Duncan forced Heather to form an equal partnership with him if she wants his help, much to her chagrin.
** During one of her first confessional entries, Heather says that she hand in mind to pick two people dumb enough to manipulate, even saying that Lindsay and Beth would be perfect candidates.
* BigBad:
** BigBadEnsemble: Justin for the Killer Bass, Heather for the Screaming Gophers.
*** BigBadDuumvirate: Duncan forced Heather to form an equal partnership with him if she wants his help, much to her chagrin.
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* AllohistoricalAllusion:
** During one of her first confessional entries, Heather says that she hand in mind to pick two people dumb enough to manipulate, even saying that Lindsay and Beth would be perfect candidates.
* BigBad:
** BigBadEnsemble: Justin for the Killer Bass, Heather for the Screaming Gophers.
***BigBadDuumvirate: Duncan forced forces Heather to form an equal partnership with him if she wants his help, much to her chagrin.chagrin.
* BigBadEnsemble: Justin for the Killer Bass, Heather for the Screaming Gophers.
** During one of her first confessional entries, Heather says that she hand in mind to pick two people dumb enough to manipulate, even saying that Lindsay and Beth would be perfect candidates.
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* BrainlessBeauty: Subverted. Noah thinks that Justin is all looks and no intelligence. If he and Justin weren't on different teams, Justin would show him how '''wrong''' he is.
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* {{Expy}}: Justin here ressembles much more Alejandro than his canon counterpart. Fortunately, he hasn't become a VillainSue.
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* GameChanger: [[spoiler: Heather being transferred to the Killer Bass. Given her personality and that she's one of the few people who figured out Justin's nature, it will shake a lot the KB dynamics.]]
* HannibalLecture: Noah gives one to Courtney in chapter 5 [[spoiler:regarding her obvious plan to use Bridgette and Trent]].
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Noah and Cody show signs of becoming this as the story goes on. The author has explicitly stated in the description of the story that [=NoCo=] will not happen.
* HannibalLecture: Noah gives one to Courtney in chapter 5 [[spoiler:regarding her obvious plan to use Bridgette and Trent]].
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Noah and Cody show signs of becoming this as the story goes on. The author has explicitly stated in the description of the story that [=NoCo=] will not happen.
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* GameChanger: [[spoiler: Heather being transferred to the Killer Bass. Given her personality and that she's one Bass profoundly disrupts a number of the few people who figured out Justin's nature, it will shake a lot the KB dynamics.]]
Bass' internal dynamics.
* HannibalLecture: Noah gives one to Courtneyin chapter 5 [[spoiler:regarding regarding her obvious plan to [[spoiler: use Bridgette and Trent]].
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Noah and Cody show signs of becoming this as the story goes on. The author has explicitly stated in the description of the story that [=NoCo=] will not happen.Trent]].
* HannibalLecture: Noah gives one to Courtney
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Noah and Cody show signs of becoming this as the story goes on. The author has explicitly stated in the description of the story that [=NoCo=] will not happen.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Justin, like you wouldn't believe. It reached a now level during the fifth challenge, where he [[spoiler: made Katie and Sadie think that the other badmouthed them behind their backs and hate each other, just ''because he could''.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: Justin, like you wouldn't believe. It reached a now level during the fifth challenge, where he [[spoiler: made Justin turns Katie and Sadie think that the against each other badmouthed them behind their backs for no other reason than [[ForTheEvulz because he can]].
* MythologyGag: During one of her first confessional entries, Heather says that she hand in mind to pick two people dumb enough to manipulate, even saying that Lindsay andhate each other, just ''because he could''.]]Beth would be perfect candidates.
* MythologyGag: During one of her first confessional entries, Heather says that she hand in mind to pick two people dumb enough to manipulate, even saying that Lindsay and
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* ShoutOut: After Ezekiel performs his talent during the Talent Show challenge (to shoot an arrow through ten rings), Noah asks [[Literature/TheOdyssey if he can build a giant wooden horse as well]].
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** After Ezekiel performs his talent during the Talent Show challenge (to shoot an arrow through ten rings), Noah asks [[Literature/TheOdyssey if he can build a giant wooden horse as well]].
** After Ezekiel performs his talent during the Talent Show challenge (to shoot an arrow through ten rings), Noah asks [[Literature/TheOdyssey if he can build a giant wooden horse as well]].
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* OutOfFocus: So far, the Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* VillainDecay: Heather. Not that she isn't any different from how she is in canon (Season 1 at least), but the story clearly shows that without somebody dumb or naive enough to manipulate, she's a far less effective villain.
* VillainDecay: Heather. Not that she isn't any different from how she is in canon (Season 1 at least), but the story clearly shows that without somebody dumb or naive enough to manipulate, she's a far less effective villain.
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* OutOfFocus: So far, the The Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* VillainDecay:Heather. Not that she isn't any different from how she is in canon (Season 1 at least), but the story clearly shows that without somebody Although Heather retains her canonical attitudes, not having anyone dumb or naive enough to manipulate, she's a manipulate makes her far less effective as a villain.
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* GameChanger: [[spoiler: Heather being transferred to the Killer Bass. Given her personality and that he's one of the few people who figured out Justin's nature, it will shake a lot the KB dynamics.]]
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* GameChanger: [[spoiler: Heather being transferred to the Killer Bass. Given her personality and that he's she's one of the few people who figured out Justin's nature, it will shake a lot the KB dynamics.]]
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* AbortedArc: [[Heather and Duncan's alliance]] pretty much goes nowhere, given what happens to the former.
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* AbortedArc: [[Heather [[spoiler: Heather and Duncan's alliance]] pretty much goes nowhere, given what happens to the former.
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* AbortedArc: [[Heather and Duncan's alliance]] pretty much goes nowhere, given what happens to the former.
* AffablyEvil: Justin is very nice, polite and soft spoken. All while manipulating everybody in his team and doing all kind of henious actions without showing any kind of remorse.
* AffablyEvil: Justin is very nice, polite and soft spoken. All while manipulating everybody in his team and doing all kind of henious actions without showing any kind of remorse.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Noah has this reaction when Cody mentions that his fear is "to defuse a time bomb under pressure."
-->'''Noah''': As opposed to the time bomb where there is no pressure? Please diffuse this tickling bomb, Mr. Anderson, but don't feel pressured in any way. Take all the time in the world.
* {{Expy}}: Justin here ressembles much more Alejandro than hiscannon canon counterpart. Fortunately, he hasn't become a VillainSue.
-->'''Noah''': As opposed to the time bomb where there is no pressure? Please diffuse this tickling bomb, Mr. Anderson, but don't feel pressured in any way. Take all the time in the world.
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* ImNotHereToMakeFriends: Or get a girlfriend, in Noah's case (which is the complete opposite of Cody).
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy.
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** Noah and Cody are VideoGame/MassEffect fans.
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** Noah and Cody are VideoGame/MassEffect ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fans.
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* BigBad: Justin for the Killer Bass, Heather for the Screaming Gophers. Though the author had stated that Justin is the main villain of the story.
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** During one of her first confessional entries, Heather says that she hand in mind to pick two people dumb enough to manipulate, even saying that Lindsay and Beth would be perfect candidates.
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** BigBadEnsemble: Justin for the Killer Bass, Heather for the ScreamingGophers. Though the author had stated that Justin is the main villain of the story.Gophers.
*** BigBadDuumvirate: Duncan forced Heather to form an equal partnership with him if she wants his help, much to her chagrin.
** During one of her first confessional entries, Heather says that she hand in mind to pick two people dumb enough to manipulate, even saying that Lindsay and Beth would be perfect candidates.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy. The fic has been getting great reviews from fans.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy. The fic has been getting great reviews from fans.
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* CargoCult: Izzy and Ezekiel's hat. According to herself, that's why she steals it from him all the time.
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-->'''Izzy:'''The toque has powers that even I cannot comprehend. I am its most humble servant.
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* CombatPragmatist: Justin had this approach towards challenges.
* ForWantOfANail: the story shows how different TDI would have been by swapping a few members from one team to another. There's also a bit of AlternateCharacterInterpretation when it comes to some characters.
* CombatPragmatist: Justin had this approach towards challenges.
* ForWantOfANail: the story shows how different TDI would have been by swapping a few members from one team to another. There's also a bit of AlternateCharacterInterpretation when it comes to some characters.
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* TheChessmaster: Justin manipulates and controls the members of his team almost like real chess pieces. By the second challenge, the Killer Bass are firmly on in his grip.
* CombatPragmatist: Justinhad has this approach towards challenges.
* ForWantOfANail:the The story shows how different TDI would have been by swapping a few members from one team to another. There's also a bit of AlternateCharacterInterpretation when it comes to some characters.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Justin, like you wouldn't believe. It reached a now level during the fifth challenge, where he [[spoiler: made Katie and Sadie think that the other badmouthed them behind their backs and hate each other, just ''because he could'']]
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* ManipulativeBastard: Justin, like you wouldn't believe. It reached a now level during the fifth challenge, where he [[spoiler: made Katie and Sadie think that the other badmouthed them behind their backs and hate each other, just ''because he could'']]could''.]]
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* BigBad: Justin for the Killer Bass, Heather for the Screaming Gophers. Thought the author had stated that Justin is the main villain of the storty.
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* BigBad: Justin for the Killer Bass, Heather for the Screaming Gophers. Thought the author had stated that Justin is the main villain of the storty.
* TheChessmaster: Justin manipulates and controls the members of his team almost like real chess pieces. By the second challenge, the Killer Bass are firmly on his grip.
* CombatPragmatist: Justin had this approach towards challenges.
* CombatPragmatist: Justin had this approach towards challenges.
* HiddenDepths: Izzy towards the end of the fifth challenge shows to have a soft and vulnerable side.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Lindsay can be this at times.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Lindsay can be this at times.
* KickTheDog: Justin a few times.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Justin, like you wouldn't believe.
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* ReplacementGoldfish: Gwen rebuffed Bridgette's offer of friendship because she thinks that Bridgette is trying to replace [[spoiler:Courtney, who was eliminated the previous challenge]] with her. Although the truth is that [[spoiler: Gwen thinks that Bridgette has feelings for Trent]].
* ReplacementGoldfish: Gwen rebuffed Bridgette's offer of friendship because she thinks that Bridgette is trying to replace [[spoiler:Courtney, who was eliminated the previous challenge]] with her. Although the truth is that [[spoiler: Gwen thinks that Bridgette has feelings for Trent]].
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** In a more straight example, the author mentions The Kobold Necromancer as the inspiration for writing this story.
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** In a more straight conventional example, the author mentions The Kobold Necromancer as the inspiration for writing this story.
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* SatelliteCharacter: Tyler is far more concerned about getting Lindsay's attention than the competition. [[spoiler: And Justin knows how to take advantage of this as well]]. Still, he's not a ShallowLoveInterest.
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* SatelliteCharacter: Tyler is far more concerned about getting Lindsay's attention than the competition. [[spoiler: And Justin knows how to take advantage of this as well]]. Still, he's not a ShallowLoveInterest.SatelliteLoveInterest.
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* VillainDecay: Heather. Not that he isn't any different from how he is in canon (Season 1 at least), but the story clearly shows that without somebody dumb or naive enough to manipulate, she's a far less effective villain.
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* VillainDecay: Heather. Not that he she isn't any different from how he she is in canon (Season 1 at least), but the story clearly shows that without somebody dumb or naive enough to manipulate, she's a far less effective villain.
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* BrainlessBeauty: Subverted. Noah thinks that Justin is all looks and no intelligence. If he and Justin weren't on different teams, Justin would show him how '''wrong''' he is.
* TheCharmer: Justin, on both girls and boys.
* ForWantOfANail: the story shows how different TDI would have been by swapping a few members from one team to another. There's also a bit of AlternateCharacterInterpretation when it comes to some characters.
* TheCharmer: Justin, on both girls and boys.
* ForWantOfANail: the story shows how different TDI would have been by swapping a few members from one team to another. There's also a bit of AlternateCharacterInterpretation when it comes to some characters.
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* LoveTriangle: Cody/Bridgette/Harold, Owen/Izzy/Ezekiel, Tyler/Lindsay/Justin.
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* JediMindTrick: Izzy hypnotizes Leshawna so she forgets hearing Ezekiel's sexist comment.
* LoveTriangle: Cody/Bridgette/Harold, Owen/Izzy/Ezekiel,Tyler/Lindsay/Justin.Tyler/Lindsay/Justin.
* ManipulativeBastard: Justin, like you wouldn't believe.
* RunningGag: A bucket of water falling on Cody, and Izzy stealing Ezekiel's hat.
* SatelliteCharacter: Tyler is far more concerned about getting Lindsay's attention than the competition. [[spoiler: And Justin knows how to take advantage of this as well]]. Still, he's not a ShallowLoveInterest.
* ShoutOut: After Ezekiel performs his talent during the Talent Show challenge (to shoot an arrow through ten rings), Noah asks [[Literature/TheOdyssey if he can build a giant wooden horse as well]].
** In a more straight example, the author mentions The Kobold Necromancer as the inspiration for writing this story.
* OutOfFocus: So far, the Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* VillainDecay: Heather. Not that he isn't any different from how he is in canon (Season 1 at least), but the story clearly shows that without somebody dumb or naive enough to manipulate, she's a far less effective villain.
* LoveTriangle: Cody/Bridgette/Harold, Owen/Izzy/Ezekiel,
* ManipulativeBastard: Justin, like you wouldn't believe.
* RunningGag: A bucket of water falling on Cody, and Izzy stealing Ezekiel's hat.
* SatelliteCharacter: Tyler is far more concerned about getting Lindsay's attention than the competition. [[spoiler: And Justin knows how to take advantage of this as well]]. Still, he's not a ShallowLoveInterest.
* ShoutOut: After Ezekiel performs his talent during the Talent Show challenge (to shoot an arrow through ten rings), Noah asks [[Literature/TheOdyssey if he can build a giant wooden horse as well]].
** In a more straight example, the author mentions The Kobold Necromancer as the inspiration for writing this story.
* OutOfFocus: So far, the Killer Bass get far less focus and attention than the Screaming Gophers.
* VillainDecay: Heather. Not that he isn't any different from how he is in canon (Season 1 at least), but the story clearly shows that without somebody dumb or naive enough to manipulate, she's a far less effective villain.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Noah and Cody show signs of becoming this as the story goes on. The author has explicitly stated in the description of the story that [=NoCo=] will not happen.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Noah and Cody show signs of becoming this as the story goes on. The author has explicitly stated in the description of the story that [=NoCo=] will not happen.happen.
* LoveTriangle: Cody/Bridgette/Harold, Owen/Izzy/Ezekiel, Tyler/Lindsay/Justin.
* LoveTriangle: Cody/Bridgette/Harold, Owen/Izzy/Ezekiel, Tyler/Lindsay/Justin.
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* BreakThemByTalking / HannibalLecture: In a way, Noah does this to Courtney in chapter 5 [[spoiler:regarding her obvious plan to use Bridgette and Trent]].
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* BreakThemByTalking / HannibalLecture: In a way, Noah does this gives one to Courtney in chapter 5 [[spoiler:regarding her obvious plan to use Bridgette and Trent]].
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* BreakThemByTalking: In a way, Noah does this to Courtney in chapter 5 [[spoiler:regarding her obvious plan to use Bridgette and Trent]].
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* BreakThemByTalking: BreakThemByTalking / HannibalLecture: In a way, Noah does this to Courtney in chapter 5 [[spoiler:regarding her obvious plan to use Bridgette and Trent]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy. The fic is already gaining quite a bit of popularity within the fandom.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy. The fic is already gaining quite a bit of popularity within the fandom.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Noah and Cody show signs of becoming this as the story goes on. The author has explicitly stated in the description of the story that [=NoCo=] will not happen.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Noah and Cody show signs of becoming this as the story goes on. The author has explicitly stated in the description of the story that [=NoCo=] will not happen.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, {=LeShawna=}, Ezekiel, and Izzy. The fic is already gaining quite a bit of popularity within the fandom.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, {=LeShawna=}, Leshawna, Ezekiel, and Izzy. The fic is already gaining quite a bit of popularity within the fandom.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The fic is already gaining popularity within the fandom.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The teams are switched around slightly. The Screaming Gophers consist of Owen, Cody, Gwen, Bridgette, Heather, Courtney, Duncan, Eva, Harold, Trent, and Noah, while the Killer Bass consists of Justin, Katie, Sadie, Lindsay, Beth, Tyler, Geoff, DJ, {=LeShawna=}, Ezekiel, and Izzy. The fic is already gaining quite a bit of popularity within the fandom.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8116625/1/Total-Drama-Island-A-New-Beginning Total Drama Island: A New Beginning]] is a FixFic of the first season of TotalDrama by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3811383/Argudas Argudas]]. The fic is already gaining popularity within the fandom.
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