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* BearerOfBadNews: When the King's beloved Floette snuck off to finally join the war after being inspired by the Stripling's determination, the King and the Stripling made haste and tried to reach them in time. Before they can move however, a ninja with a Ninjask arrived with news. The ninja doesn't take pride in what he has to deliver to the king as he gives him an item: [[spoiler: a tiny box containing the remains of Floette's flower]].
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* SurpriseCreepy: As with both series, it starts off as a crossover story about Marinette and Adrien going off on their Pokémon journey along with their classmates after they've graduated Lumiose City Academy, exploring the Kalos region and it's rich history and meeting new people along the way. Things slowly change with the appearance of Team Akuma and bits of Kalos' dark history soon unravel. [[spoiler: Marinette and Adrien learn the truth about the three-thousand year old war from Master Fu. Specifically, how Fu was alive during the war and witnessed his king built a machine that's the equivalent to a nuke and set it off, destroying virtually everything in order to end the war]].
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** Lila is set up to be a more formidable rival for Marinette than Chloé, having traveled around longer and competed in a couple of League Conferences up to the present day. Though how well she actually did in the Conferences remains unanswered.

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** Lila is set up to be a more formidable rival for Marinette than Chloé, having traveled around longer and competed in a couple of League Conferences up to the present day. Though how well she actually did in the Conferences remains unanswered. [[spoiler: In Chapter 50 it's revealed that at the Johto Silver Conference, she only made the Top 128. After that, she managed to reach the Top 64 of the Hoenn Ever Grande Conference.]]
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** After Master Fu finishes the story of the three-thousand-year old war and the king in Chapter 57, Marinette comes to this realization.
--->'''Marinette''': [[spoiler: I know I said I'd listen to your story, but... it's really way into detail for a story that is not in any history book... But a tale like yours to be given this much depth and to be actually true, then]]...\\
'''Master Fu''': [[spoiler: ... I would've had to be there live, correct]]?\\
'''Marinette''': [[spoiler: But how...? You'd have to be over three-thousand... years... old]].
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*** Fu mentions to Marinette that when he's not travelling the region, he has taken residency in Lumiose City as a local Pokémon masseuse.

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*** ** Fu mentions to Marinette in the same chapter that when he's not travelling the region, he has taken residency in Lumiose City as a local Pokémon masseuse.

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*** Chloé's mother is revealed to have left her family to pursue a career as a fashion critic in the Unova region; the Pokémon universe's equivalent to New York City.



* NeverSayDie: Averted as unlike the two kid-friendly series this story is made up of, the word "death" and straightforward death threats are used. And considering that Yveltal, the embodiment of death and destruction, is involved, it's a given.

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** When Marinette asks Fu why he chose her in Chapter 57, she all but quotes the same lines she says in the opening of the original series.
--> '''Marinette:''' "I'm just... Marinette. I'm just a normal girl with a normal life."
*** Fu mentions to Marinette that when he's not travelling the region, he has taken residency in Lumiose City as a local Pokémon masseuse.
* NeverSayDie: Averted as unlike the two kid-friendly series this story is made up of, the word "death" and straightforward death threats are used. And considering that Yveltal, the embodiment of death and destruction, is involved, it's a given. This is prominent In Chapter 57 where the three-thousand year old Kalos war don't shy away from the harsh reality of the heavy death tolls in the war.
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** Unlike in the main series, Marinette is understandably upset with Fu [[WhatTheHellHero for entrusting important artifacts to two young trainers and painting them as big red targets for Team Akuma; endangering them and the civilians]]. She only calms down and listens to Fu's story after he explains his reason for his actions to her


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* TitleDrop: The Miraculous Master in the story's title is dropped in Chapter 57 [[spoiler: as the name of Fu's group of Bond Phenomenon emissaries given to them by the three-thousand year old king]].
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* FanArt: A Website/DeviantArt artist drew this fabulous piece of [[ https://www.deviantart.com/gracefulart693/art/Miraculous-Pokemon-Master-Lady-Ledian-791406071 Marinette / Lady Ledian]].

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* FanArt: A Website/DeviantArt artist drew this fabulous piece of [[ https://www.[[https://www.deviantart.com/gracefulart693/art/Miraculous-Pokemon-Master-Lady-Ledian-791406071 Marinette / & Lady Ledian]].
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* FanArt: A Website/DeviantArt artist drew this fabulous piece of [[ https://www.deviantart.com/gracefulart693/art/Miraculous-Pokemon-Master-Lady-Ledian-791406071 Marinette/Lady Ledian]].

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* FanArt: A Website/DeviantArt artist drew this fabulous piece of [[ https://www.deviantart.com/gracefulart693/art/Miraculous-Pokemon-Master-Lady-Ledian-791406071 Marinette/Lady Marinette / Lady Ledian]].

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* FanArt: A Website/DeviantArt artist drew this fabulous piece of [[ https://www.deviantart.com/gracefulart693/art/Miraculous-Pokemon-Master-Lady-Ledian-791406071 Marinette/Lady Ledian]].



* PowerOfFriendship: An essential factor between a trainer and their Pokémons, especially when a strong bond is important in Mega Evolution. In addition, certain Pokémon evolved through maxed friendship with their trainers [[spoiler: like when Marinette's Togepi evolved into Togetic in Chapter 34 and her Swadloon evolving into Leavanny in Chapter 46]].
* PowerOfTrust: It plays an important role between a trainer and their Pokémons as a trainer has to rely on their Pokémons' abilities and a Pokémon must have faith in their trainer's orders in order to pull off risky tactics.

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* PowerOfFriendship: An essential factor between a trainer and their Pokémons, Pokémon, especially when a strong bond is important in Mega Evolution. In addition, certain Pokémon evolved through maxed friendship with their trainers [[spoiler: like when Marinette's Togepi evolved into Togetic in Chapter 34 and her Swadloon evolving into Leavanny in Chapter 46]].
* PowerOfTrust: It plays an important role between a trainer and their Pokémons as a trainer has to rely on their Pokémons' Pokémon's abilities and a Pokémon must have faith in their trainer's orders in order to pull off risky tactics.



* ThirteenIsUnlucky: The Lumiose Badlands is assigned as the thirteenth Kalos route and Adrien finds himself hiding from persisting Trainers in Chapter 31 who are after him [[spoiler: due to his father's message to all trainers to challenge him]]. Although a strong trainer, Adrien [[KnowWhenToFoldEm knows]] he and his team won't survive the relentless onslaught of Trainers.

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The Lumiose Badlands is assigned as the thirteenth Kalos route and Adrien finds himself hiding from persisting Trainers in Chapter 31 who are after him [[spoiler: due to his father's message to all trainers to challenge him]]. Although a strong trainer, Adrien [[KnowWhenToFoldEm knows]] he and his team won't survive the relentless onslaught of Trainers.Trainers.
** Invoked in Chapter 46 when Marinette mentioned [[NoodleIncident doing something embarrassing during Adrien's thirteenth birthday, somehow involving Kim and Alix in another one of their competitions]].
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** Adrien retains his [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E05MrPigeon allergy of feathers]] [[spoiler: as shown in his and Lady Ledian's battle against Mr. Pidgeot and Mega Pidgeot with the latter molting some feathers his way]]. Good thing he doesn't currently own a Flying-type with feathers.

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** Adrien retains his [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E05MrPigeon [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E05MrPidgeon allergy of feathers]] [[spoiler: as shown in his and Lady Ledian's battle against Mr. Pidgeot and Mega Pidgeot with the latter molting some feathers his way]]. Good thing he doesn't currently own a Flying-type with feathers.
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** Adrien retains his [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E5MrPigeon allergy of feathers]] [[spoiler: as shown in his and Lady Ledian's battle against Mr. Pidgeot and Mega Pidgeot with the latter molting some feathers his way]]. Good thing he doesn't currently own a Flying-type with feathers.

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** Adrien retains his [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E5MrPigeon [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E05MrPigeon allergy of feathers]] [[spoiler: as shown in his and Lady Ledian's battle against Mr. Pidgeot and Mega Pidgeot with the latter molting some feathers his way]]. Good thing he doesn't currently own a Flying-type with feathers.



** Max references how Nathaniel tended to [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E9TheEvillustrator doze off and daydream in class]] in Chapter 38.

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** Max references how Nathaniel tended to [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E9TheEvillustrator [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E09TheEvillustrator doze off and daydream in class]] in Chapter 38.

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** Following his loss to Marinette and Adrien in the Tag Team battle finals in Chapter 13, Max was said to be getting over his SoreLoser tendencies since leaving the Academy.
** Lila's official debut in Chapter 26 mirrors her first appearance in the chronologically last episode of Season 1 in the show.
** Adrien retains his allergy of feathers [[spoiler: as shown in his and Lady Ledian's battle against Mr. Pidgeot and Mega Pidgeot with the latter molting some feathers his way]]. Good thing he doesn't currently own a Flying-type with feathers.

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** Following his loss to Marinette and Adrien in the Tag Team battle finals in Chapter 13, Max was said to be getting over his SoreLoser tendencies [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E15TheGamer since leaving the Academy.
Academy]].
** Lila's official debut in Chapter 26 mirrors her [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E24Volpina first appearance appearance]] in the chronologically last episode of Season 1 in the show.
** Adrien retains his [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E5MrPigeon allergy of feathers feathers]] [[spoiler: as shown in his and Lady Ledian's battle against Mr. Pidgeot and Mega Pidgeot with the latter molting some feathers his way]]. Good thing he doesn't currently own a Flying-type with feathers.



** Max references how Nathaniel tended to doze off and daydream in class in Chapter 38.

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** Max references how Nathaniel tended to [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E9TheEvillustrator doze off and daydream in class class]] in Chapter 38.38.
** Alya mentions that [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E13TheMime Mylène's father works in theatre]] in Chapter 55.



** Alix and Nathaniel talking about what they fear in the beginning of Chapter 55 references "Sandboy".

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** Alix and Nathaniel talking about what they fear in the beginning of Chapter 55 references "Sandboy"."[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS02E19Sandboy Sandboy]]".


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** Simon Grimault and Marc Anciel are introduced in Chapter 56 and are Psychic-users in this setting, the former specializing in [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E22SimonSays hypnotism and tarot card reading]] and the latter specializing in [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS02E17Reverser Inverse Battles]].
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** Chapter 55, [[spoiler: [[TheBusCameBack Chloé makes her big return]] by challenging Marinette and winning her rematch fight. The loss results in Marinette letting her Togetic decide if[[WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility she wants to evolve into Togekiss]]. Meanwhile, Adrien meets Master Fu, being the first of the two to meet him in person]].

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** Chapter 55, [[spoiler: [[TheBusCameBack Chloé makes her big return]] by challenging Marinette and winning her rematch fight. The loss results in Marinette letting her Togetic decide if[[WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility if [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility she wants to evolve into Togekiss]]. Meanwhile, Adrien meets Master Fu, being the first of the two to meet him in person]].
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: In Chapter 55, [[spoiler: During Marinette's rematch against Chloé with Tikki and Pollen, Chloé reveals Pollen's natural ability as a Vespiquen to command and control male Combees to aid their queen. Marinette points out it's no different from brainwashing, while Chloé argues that's just the natural order within the Vespiquen and Combee's society; different from human's]].


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*** In the same chapter, Alya's Amaura isn't used that often because she's only adaptable to cold climates and so far are no where near any cold environments at any point of the journey so far. In addition, the slightest change in weather would be uncomfortably warm for her and a danger to her health.


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** Chapter 55, [[spoiler: [[TheBusCameBack Chloé makes her big return]] by challenging Marinette and winning her rematch fight. The loss results in Marinette letting her Togetic decide if[[WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility she wants to evolve into Togekiss]]. Meanwhile, Adrien meets Master Fu, being the first of the two to meet him in person]].
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** The Lumiose Siege that occurred in Chapter 38-40 is essentially a terrorist attack on an unsuspecting populace where the trainers are separated from their families in the middle of the chaos. And with Chapter 50, this also applies to [[spoiler: Poison Moth himself, or his true identity, Gabriel Agreste. Not only did his minions organized an unauthorized attack on Lumiose City while he was away, but his [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes son]] was in the city when said attack occurred]].


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*** [[spoiler: Chloé's Vespiquen]] is Pollen.


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** Chapter 17, where Master Fu is seen watching Marinette and Adrien while sensing a great danger that's about to descend on the Kalos region.
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** Alya mentions in Chapter 55 that her sister, Nora, who stayed back in Alola, keeps on telling her to return to Alola for her own safety ever since she heard of Team Akuma's recent activities.


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*** Alix even correctly guessed what Marinette would fear: Adrien telling her he loves another girl, much to Marinette's horror.


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*** In fact, [[spoiler: Marinette's Feebas had great difficulty in mastering Ice Beam and it took her 15 chapters to finally be able to perform Ice Beam properly, though she had help from Marinette's great-grand uncle]].


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** Although the heroes seemingly won, Poison Moth has this to say at the end of Chapter 52.
---> '''Poison Moth:''' [[spoiler: Yveltal's energy signature has been identified. Time to go Legendary Pokémon hunting]].
** Near the end of Chapter 55, Adrien meets a certain elderly man for the first time.
---> '''Master Fu:''' ''[[To Adrien]]'' [[spoiler: Hello, Liepard Noir]].

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** Chapter 52 ends with [[spoiler: Poison Moth locating Yveltal's location after analyzing Lieard Noir's keystone patterns]].
** Chapter 55 takes this up a notch with our two heroes. [[spoiler: Adrien meets Master Fu for the first time and Marinette letting her Togetic decide if she wants to evolve into Togekiss via Shiny Stone after she lost to Chloeacute;'s Honchkrow]].

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** Chapter 52 ends with [[spoiler: Poison Moth locating Yveltal's location after analyzing Lieard Liepard Noir's keystone patterns]].
** Chapter 55 takes this up a notch with our two heroes. [[spoiler: Adrien meets Master Fu for the first time and Marinette letting her Togetic decide if she wants to evolve into Togekiss via Shiny Stone after she lost to Chloeacute;'s Chloé's Honchkrow]].


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** Alix and Nathaniel talking about what they fear in the beginning of Chapter 55 references "Sandboy".
*** At the end of the same chapter, Marinette's choice of words [[spoiler: to Togetic]] when presenting the [[spoiler: Shiny Stone for her to evolve with]] mimics [[spoiler: how Ladybug presents the responsibility of the Miraculous to new allies]].

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** In Chapter 54, [[spoiler: Wayhem]] mentions having sat in for Adrien's exhibition battle against his father back in Chapter 43 and being subjected to [[TranquilFury Marinette's Gardevoir's Psychic]] when opinions over the battle got out of hand. He remarked that girl (Marinette) was scary]].

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* {{Cliffhanger}}: The author enjoys leaving cliffhangers at the ending of each chapter on a regular basis. Particularly:
** Chapter 2 ends with Adrien about to give his answer to Marinette and Alya on his decision to accompany them (mostly for Marinette) to Santalune City.
** Chapter 10 ends with Marinette finally gathers the courage to properly ask Adrien to be her tag-team partner for the Parfum Palace tournament and awaits his response.
** Chapter 11 ends with Marinette running away from Adrien out of shame and disappointment in herself for being useless during their first tag-team battle together.
** Chapter 17 ends with [[spoiler: the first appearance of Master Fu observing Marinette and Adrien with Wayazz and Zygarde while alluding to an upcoming crisis that will befall the Kalos Region and is in possession of the keystones of Xerneas and Yveltal]].
** Chapter 18 ends with [[spoiler: the two Team Akuma grunts spying on Marinette and her friends before continuing their plans for Glittering Cave]].
** Chapter 19 ends with [[spoiler: Marinette and Nino separated from Adrien and Alya after escaping from a swarm of Woobats caused by Team Akuma and Marinette's Pokémon Egg to start showing signs of hatching]].
** Chapter 20 ends with [[spoiler: Poison Moth using the kidnapped Ivan and his Rhyhorn as his first test subject for his Bond Hybrid experiments]].
** Chapter 21 ends with [[spoiler: Marinette and Adrien receiving the keystones of Xerneas and Yvetal respectively from a mysterious sender (Master Fu)]].
** Chapter 24 ends with [[spoiler: Lady Ledian and Swaddle being saved just in time by Liepard Noir and Meowstic in the heroes debut against Team Akuma and their first Bond Hybrid]].
** Chapter 26 ends with the debut of [[TheRival Lila Rossi]].
** Chapter 27 ends with Lila giving Marinette a warning, revealing her true colors.
** Chapter 29 ends with [[spoiler: Alya revealing to Marinette that she has an internship in the Lumiose Press and that she'll start tomorrow, meaning she'll have to leave her best friend]].
** Chapter 33 ends with [[spoiler: Lady Ledian and Liepard Noir facing against Team Akuma in the Power Plant along with their new Bond Hybrid, Mr. Pidgeot]].
** Chapter 37 ends with [[spoiler: several Team Akuma grunts planning an unauthorized attack with Lumiose City to lure out Lady Ledian and Liepard Noir]].
** Chapter 38 ends with [[spoiler: Team Akuma carrying out their onslaught within Lumiose City and Marinette and her friends split into groups to find their parents in the chaos]].
** Chapter 39 ends with [[spoiler: Lady Ledian and Liepard Noir facing against a pair of Team Akuma Admins in a tag-team battle with their Kirlias, with the Psychic-Type Pokémons revealing they knew who the other were]].
** Chapter 40 ends with [[spoiler: Adrien receiving a message from his father that he'll have an exhibition match against his father, the Champion, in two days]].
** Chapter 47 ends with [[spoiler: Marinette witnessing Lila [[ForcefulKiss forcibly kissing]] Adrien]].
** Chapter 50 ends with [[spoiler: shedding a bit of light on Poison Moth's motives and revealing his true identity as none other than the current Kalos Champion, Gabriel Agreste]].
** Chapter 51 ends with [[spoiler: the newly introduced Delphox Rouge coming to the heroic duo's aid]].
** Chapter 52 ends with [[spoiler: Poison Moth locating Yveltal's location after analyzing Lieard Noir's keystone patterns]].
** Chapter 55 takes this up a notch with our two heroes. [[spoiler: Adrien meets Master Fu for the first time and Marinette letting her Togetic decide if she wants to evolve into Togekiss via Shiny Stone after she lost to Chloeacute;'s Honchkrow]].
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*** In the same chapter, the meaningful words that [[spoiler: Kagami]] received from her mother before leaving for her journey are "When a life meets another life, something is born." This was the recurring quote by Cynthia in the anime during the ''Diamond & Pearl'' saga meant to revolve around Ash and Paul.


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** [[spoiler: At the end of Chapter 53,]] Adrien had this reaction upon being approached by a then unknown challenger, [[spoiler: revealed to be [[LoonyFan Wayhem]] next chapter]].

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** In Chapter 54, [[spoiler: Wayhem]] mentions having sat in for Adrien's exhibition battle against his father back in Chapter 43 and being subjected to [[TranquilFury Marinette's Gardevoir's Psychic]] when opinions over the battle got out of hand. He remarked that girl (Marinette) was scary]].



* InternalReveal: [[spoiler: Marinette and Adrien figure out that the Key Stones they received (courteously by Master Fu) are connected to Xerneas and Yveltal respectively in Chapter 51]].

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** Adrien learns from [[spoiler: Wayhem]] about Marinette [[TranquilFury effectively silencing]] the bickering crowd via Gardevoir's Psychic after he lost to his father in his Exhibition Match.
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** The final question Juleka solves in the Pokémon Quiz theme for the Anistar Showcase to move on to the Freestyle Performance in Chapter 54 is "Who's that Pokémon?" [[spoiler: The answer is Jigglypuff seen from above]].


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*** [[spoiler: Rotom]] shocks her again for kicks in Chapter 53 by possessing her phone.
** It seems whenever Adrien's Litleo/Pyroar is sent to battle, he ends up becoming infatuated with the opponent. Such opponents were Mylène's Flabébé [[spoiler: and Wayhem's Delcatty]].

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* BaitAndSwitch: Near the end of Chapter 50, after Adrien has a harsh reprimanding from his father for not following his training schedule, the scene cuts to a familiar Venomoth observing the boy and Poison Moth going through his usual monologue before he chooses his next Bond Hybrid... [[spoiler: turns out Poison Moth, or rather, Gabriel, is just checking up on Adrien Gym progress and whereabouts]].

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** Subverted in Chapter 54. [[spoiler: The ending of Chapter 53 made it look like the challenger that caught up to Adrien was Kagami as she made a brief appearance holding the door of the Anistar Café for Marinette and Alya. The challenger turns out to be Wayhem in the following chapter, but Kagami eventually joins in upon crossing paths with Adrien]].
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* GoldfishPoopGang: [[spoiler: The trio of punks from the Lost Hotel in Chapter 49]] made a reappearance in Chapter 53. However, [[spoiler: Marinette and her friends never actually fight them as someone else winds up chasing them off]].

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