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* TheNicknamer: Chopper doesn't call any of the crew by their names. It runs from heartwarming, like calling Hera
"Mom", to insulting, like calling Kanan and Zeb "Stupid Jedi" and "Grumpy Oaf" respectively.
"Mom", to insulting, like calling Kanan and Zeb "Stupid Jedi" and "Grumpy Oaf" respectively.
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* TheNicknamer: Chopper doesn't call any of the crew by their names. It runs from heartwarming, like calling Hera
Hera "Mom", to insulting, like calling Kanan and Zeb "Stupid Jedi" and "Grumpy Oaf" respectively.
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Kanan finds Ezra seven years earlier than in canon. As a result, he hasn't had the time or the emotional support Hera gave him to begin healing from the trauma of Order 66. So he's a hot mess trying to protect an abused child from the Empire. It goes...[[RealityEnsues predictably]].
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Kanan finds Ezra seven years earlier than in canon. As a result, he hasn't had the time or the emotional support Hera gave him to begin healing from the trauma of Order 66. So he's a hot mess trying to protect an abused child from the Empire. It goes...[[RealityEnsues predictably]].
predictably.
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* RealityEnsues: Not having the maturity or stability the canon Kanan had when meeting Ezra, fic Kanan makes even more mistakes and doesn't suddenly become a better person once he has a child to take care of.
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* TheNicknamer: Chopper doesn't call any of the crew by their names. It runs from heartwarming, like calling Hera
"Mom", to insulting, like calling Kanan and Zeb "Stupid Jedi" and "Grumpy Oaf" respectively.
"Mom", to insulting, like calling Kanan and Zeb "Stupid Jedi" and "Grumpy Oaf" respectively.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Kanan's way of coping with Order 66, as in canon. He had been getting better after joining up with Hera but went back hard after the one year anniversary of leaving Ezra behind.
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* DrowningMySorrows: Kanan's way of coping with Order 66, as in canon. He had been getting better after joining up with Hera but went back hard after the one year one-year anniversary of leaving Ezra behind.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Having been raised by his bigoted aunt and uncle, Ezra has to unlearn some of their opinions about non-humans after joining up with Hera.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Having been raised by his bigoted aunt and uncle, eight-year-old Ezra has to unlearn some of their opinions about non-humans after joining up with Hera.Hera. Hera is understanding because of his background but explains that some words aren't okay.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Having been raised by his bigoted aunt and uncle, Ezra has to unlearn some of their opinions about non-humans after joining up with Hera.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: While infiltrating the imperial training corps on Lothal, Sabine meets a rich girl from Coruscant who does unusually well in training and claims to technically be a Lothali native. A few chapters later, Ezra hears her name and recognizes her as [[spoiler: his cousin]].
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* InSpiteOfANail: Zeb is still Spectre 4 despite joining the crew after Ezra. Somewhat justified as Ezra didn't start running missions with the crew until after Zeb joined, meaning he didn't really need a codename before then.
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** Sabine assumes that Ezra is a spoiled brat based on his immaturity and how the crew dotes on him. She doesn't know that Ezra is an abuse victim who Kanan rescued rather than his biological son.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Zeb initially thinks that the crew doesn't know about Ezra's force powers based on Ezra's reaction to using them.
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** Since Ezra joined the crew earlier, he's Spectre 5 rather than Spectre 6.
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** When on the run, Kanan and Ezra have to wait an extra day because the captain of the ship leaving that day has a reputation.
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** When on the run, run after being outed as force users, Kanan and Ezra have to wait stay an extra day in a shadow port because the captain of the ship leaving that day has a reputation.
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* TropaholicsAnonymous: Kanan attends a support group to help with his drinking problem.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: While the trap involving Luminara is sprung when Ezra is ten, it still acts as the push Kanan needs to start training Ezra for real.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12075666/chapters/27358389 The Undeserving]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/LessAttitudeMoreAltitude/pseuds/LessAttitudeMoreAltitude LessAttitudeMoreAltitude]] is a WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels fanfic.
Kanan finds Ezra seven years earlier than in canon. As a result, he hasn't had the time or the emotional support Hera gave him to begin healing from the trauma of Order 66. So he's a hot mess trying to protect an abused child from the Empire. It goes...[[RealityEnsues predictably]]
Kanan finds Ezra seven years earlier than in canon. As a result, he hasn't had the time or the emotional support Hera gave him to begin healing from the trauma of Order 66. So he's a hot mess trying to protect an abused child from the Empire. It goes...[[RealityEnsues predictably]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12075666/chapters/27358389 The Undeserving]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/LessAttitudeMoreAltitude/pseuds/LessAttitudeMoreAltitude LessAttitudeMoreAltitude]] is a WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsRebels'' fanfic.
Kanan finds Ezra seven years earlier than in canon. As a result, he hasn't had the time or the emotional support Hera gave him to begin healing from the trauma of Order 66. So he's a hot mess trying to protect an abused child from the Empire. It goes...[[RealityEnsuespredictably]]
predictably]].
Kanan finds Ezra seven years earlier than in canon. As a result, he hasn't had the time or the emotional support Hera gave him to begin healing from the trauma of Order 66. So he's a hot mess trying to protect an abused child from the Empire. It goes...[[RealityEnsues
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* BiTheWay: Kanan recounts a story to Ezra about "Caleb" making a fool of himself over his crush on a male Twi'lek.
