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--->'''Shirou''': No! I kill when I have to! No more than that! If I can save someone, then I will!
[[spoiler: --->'''Young Shirou''': Then why didn't you save ''me''?
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** [[spoiler: Young Shirou asks this question to his older self.]]
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** Kiritsugu asks this regarding Shirou's path of becoming a Hero of Justice different from his & EMIYA's.
--->'''Archer''': Your path is not wrong. But you're a fool if you think it's different from ours.
--->'''Shirou''': It will be! I will make it different!
--->'''Kiritsugu''': How?
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion:
** Rin's answer to Fiore's question of why Rin doesn't kill her after defeating her.
--->'''Rin''': "What have I ever done that makes you think I need a reason ''not'' to kill someone?"

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** He has this again regarding Rin, as he would've killed her if she harmed Fiore even if it would have resulted in his own death.



** [[spoiler: Celenike is killed by an explosion Rin sets off during their fight, where cannonically, she uses two Command Spells to try and make Astolfo kill Sieg & Mordred decapitates her without fanfare.]]



* RealityEnsues: Even though Rin is a top class mage, it doesn't mean much she's effectively providing power to two Servants. Without enough magical energy for the Servants, this would naturally limit their abilities. She attempts to fix this problem for Shirou by providing him with Jewels as an emergency.
** Even though, she's a little more in touch with her humanity, it's really not enough to start to fix the bad blood between Arturia & Mordred. To her credit, Arturia is trying, but neither she nor Mordred has ever been the best with dealing with or processing their emotions. One conversation in the midst of trying to kill each other isn't going to instantly solve their issues as one has been out of touch from her humanity for so long that it stunted her emotional & social development & the other is essentially a child in a teenager's body.

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* RealityEnsues: Even though Rin is a top class mage, it doesn't mean much she's effectively still providing power to two Servants. Without enough magical energy for the Servants, this would naturally limit their abilities. She attempts to fix this problem for Shirou by providing him with Jewels as an emergency.
** Even though, she's a little more in touch with her humanity, it's really not enough to start even begin to fix the bad blood between Arturia & Mordred. To her credit, Arturia is trying, but neither she nor Mordred has ever been the best with dealing with or processing their emotions. One conversation in the midst of trying to kill each other isn't going to instantly solve their issues as one has been out of touch from her humanity for so long that it stunted her emotional & social development & the other is essentially a child in a teenager's body.
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* AssholeVictim: Given her personality & the horrible things she did in canon, Celenike definitely qualifies for this.
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* {{Determinator}}: Fate, the Grail War & any number of Servants is going to stop Mordred from her duel of destiny with her father.

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* {{Determinator}}: Fate, the Grail War War, & any number of Servants is not going to stop Mordred from her duel of destiny with her father.
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* QualityOverQuantity: [[spoilers:Rin ends up facing off against three of the Black factions mages on her own. While she does take some hits and uses a fair number of gems by the end of the fight she is the victor. Thanks to her natural talent as a mage, her years of training, and experience fighting in fifth Holy Grail War Rin ends up killing Celenike and putting Fiore and Gordes down for the count.]]

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* QualityOverQuantity: [[spoilers:Rin [[spoiler:Rin ends up facing off against three of the Black factions mages on her own. While she does take some hits and uses a fair number of gems by the end of the fight she is the victor. Thanks to her natural talent as a mage, her years of training, and experience fighting in fifth Holy Grail War Rin ends up killing Celenike and putting Fiore and Gordes down for the count.]]
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* QualityOverQuantity: [[spoilers:Rin ends up facing off against three of the Black factions mages on her own. While she does take some hits and uses a fair number of gems by the end of the fight she is the victor. Thanks to her natural talent as a mage, her years of training, and experience fighting in fifth Holy Grail War Rin ends up killing Celenike and putting Fiore and Gordes down for the count.]

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* QualityOverQuantity: [[spoilers:Rin ends up facing off against three of the Black factions mages on her own. While she does take some hits and uses a fair number of gems by the end of the fight she is the victor. Thanks to her natural talent as a mage, her years of training, and experience fighting in fifth Holy Grail War Rin ends up killing Celenike and putting Fiore and Gordes down for the count.]]]

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* QualityOverQuantity: [[spoilers:Rin ends up facing off against three of the Black factions mages on her own. While she does take some hits and uses a fair number of gems by the end of the fight she is the victor. Thanks to her natural talent as a mage, her years of training, and experience fighting in fifth Holy Grail War Rin ends up killing Celenike and putting Fiore and Gordes down for the count.]



* ThwartedCoupdeGrace: Rin manages to make her way into Yggdmillennia Castle and ends up battling three of the Black factions mages on her own. Each time she gets close to killing one her attempt is interrupted or blocked by one of the others. [[spoiler:She is naturally frustrated by this and ends up just blowing up the room killing one and stunning the other two.]]

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* ThwartedCoupdeGrace: ThwartedCoupDeGrace: Rin manages to make her way into Yggdmillennia Castle and ends up battling three of the Black factions mages on her own. Each time she gets close to killing one her attempt is interrupted or blocked by one of the others. [[spoiler:She is naturally frustrated by this and ends up just blowing up the room killing one and stunning the other two.]]
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* ThwartedCoupdeGrace: Rin manages to make her way into Yggdmillennia Castle and ends up battling three of the Black factions mages on her own. Each time she gets close to killing one her attempt is interrupted or blocked by one of the others. [[spoiler:She is naturally frustrated by this and ends up just blowing up the room killing one and stunning the other two.]]
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* [[Archenemy]]: Shakespeare wants Shirou to be this for Shirou Amakusa.

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* [[Archenemy]]: {{Archenemy}}: Shakespeare wants Shirou to be this for Shirou Amakusa.
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* [[Archenemy]]: Shakespeare wants Shirou to be this for Shirou Amakusa.
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* MindRape: What Shakespeare does to Shirou. Its not quite as effective as it is on Berserker and Ruler in canon but it still leaves him severely rattled.



** Vlad actually gains a significant measure of respect for Rin after she unflinchingly stands up to him and successfully convinces the Black Faction to stand down to allow her and her allies to leave.

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** Vlad actually gains a significant measure of respect for Rin after she unflinchingly stands up to him and successfully convinces the Black Faction to stand down to allow her and her allies to leave.leave.
** Shakespeare believes that Shirou can be this seeing him as the perfect antagonist for his protagonist Shirou Amakusa.
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* {{Adorkable}}: [[spoiler:Mordred]] of all people gets such a reaction, [[{{Squee}} squealing like a little girl]], [[spoiler:once Atalanta agrees to let her pet her lion ears. Atalanta herself is taken aback by the sheer innocence of the moment.]]
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* BeamOWar: [[spoiler:The Hanging Gardens attack (powered via Command Seal) vs. the combined might of Excalibur & Balmung. Also counts as a MomentofAwesome.]]

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* BeamOWar: [[spoiler:The Hanging Gardens attack (powered via Command Seal) vs. the combined might of Excalibur & Balmung. Also counts as a MomentofAwesome.SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.]]



** [[spoiler: Jack and Chiron are killed during Jack's initial debut, where canonically, no Servant or Master died during that confrontation. Chiron's death, in particular, is very notable since he didn't die until the FinalBattle with the Red Faction in the canon timeline as opposed to his very early death here]].

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** [[spoiler: Jack and Chiron are killed during Jack's initial debut, where canonically, no Servant or Master died during that confrontation. Chiron's death, in particular, is very notable since he didn't die until the FinalBattle with the Red Faction in the canon timeline as opposed to his very early death here]].here.]]



* EmbarrassingNickname: This sums up Rin's feelings about the color that their faction of herself, Shirou, and Saber are given by Zelretch. Luckily, Ruler fixes that little pickle by formally dubbing them the Blue Faction in honor of Saber's signature look. Unfortunately, everyone else in the war hasn't been made aware of this, so they still refer to their faction by their initial color designation: [[spoiler:The Periwinkle Faction]].

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* EmbarrassingNickname: This sums up Rin's feelings about the color that their faction of herself, Shirou, and Saber are given by Zelretch. Luckily, Ruler fixes that little pickle by formally dubbing them the Blue Faction in honor of Saber's signature look. Unfortunately, everyone else in the war hasn't been made aware of this, so they still refer to their faction by their initial color designation: [[spoiler:The Periwinkle Faction]].Faction.]]



* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome:[[spoiler:Siegfried returns Avalon to Arturia offscreen after they fended off the Hanging Gardens.]]

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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome:[[spoiler:Siegfried OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler:Siegfried returns Avalon to Arturia offscreen after they fended off the Hanging Gardens.]]
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** Jack the Ripper's Master Reika Rikudo canonically died trying to protect Jack from Atalante. Since she isn't present when Jack is killed this time, and more importantly the heroes don't know who or where she is, Reika survives the Grail War this time.

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** Reika Rikudo, Jack the Ripper's Master Reika Rikudo Master, canonically died trying to protect Jack from Atalante. Since she isn't present when Jack is killed this time, and more importantly the heroes don't know who or where she is, Reika survives the Grail War this time.
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** Achilles had the grand opportunity to possible eliminate both Saber of Blue & Black but decided not to do so due to his warrior's vow. Also counts as a WhatAnIdiot moment.

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** Achilles had the grand opportunity to possible eliminate both Saber of Blue & Black but decided not to do so due to his warrior's vow. Also counts as a WhatAnIdiot moment.
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** Even though, she's a little more in touch with her humanity, it's really not enough to start to fix the bad blood between Arturia & Mordred. To her credit, Arturia is trying, but neither she nor Mordred has ever been the best with dealing with or processing their emotions. One conversation in the midst of trying to kill each other isn't going to instantly solve their issues as one has been out of touch from her humanity for so long that it stunted her emotional & social development & the other is essentially a child in a teenager's body.
** Thank to the Dead Shift Command Seals, Shirou is able to keep up with Servants. The problem is because he is using them for the first time, it hasn't fully integrated with his body nor has he had enough time to practice with it, as Shirou himself notes.
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* MirrorMatch: Excluding Astolfo, this is what Siegfried vs. Sieg is.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome:[[spoiler:Siegfried returns Avalon to Arturia offscreen after they fended off the Hanging Gardens.]]
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* Determinator: Fate, the Grail War & any number of Servants is going to stop Mordred from her duel of destiny with her father.

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* Determinator: {{Determinator}}: Fate, the Grail War & any number of Servants is going to stop Mordred from her duel of destiny with her father.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444]]'' set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444]]'' net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444 TheMaster4444]]'' set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444/TheMaster4444]]set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by [[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444/TheMaster4444]]set net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444]]'' set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444]]set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444]]set net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444/TheMaster4444]]set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444 TheMaster4444]] set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444 TheMaster4444]] set net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444]]set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.
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** Jack the Ripper's Master Reika Rikudo canonically died trying to protect Jack from Atalante. Since she isn't present when Jack is killed this time, and more importantly the heroes don;t know who or where she is, Reika survives the Grail War this time.

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** Jack the Ripper's Master Reika Rikudo canonically died trying to protect Jack from Atalante. Since she isn't present when Jack is killed this time, and more importantly the heroes don;t don't know who or where she is, Reika survives the Grail War this time.

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* SparedByAdaptation: Unlike in canon, where he died after giving his heart to a dying Sieg, here Siegfried survives his attempted HeroicSacrifice [[spoiler:thanks to Arturia giving him Avalon to regenerate his missing heart.]]

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* SparedByAdaptation: SparedByAdaptation:
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Unlike in canon, where he died after giving his heart to a dying Sieg, here Siegfried survives his attempted HeroicSacrifice [[spoiler:thanks to Arturia giving him Avalon to regenerate his missing heart.]]]]
** Jack the Ripper's Master Reika Rikudo canonically died trying to protect Jack from Atalante. Since she isn't present when Jack is killed this time, and more importantly the heroes don;t know who or where she is, Reika survives the Grail War this time.

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