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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: [[spoiler:Shirou gets very angry with Shakespeare & attempts to kill him after the latter pushes him too far.]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
** [[spoiler:Shirou gets very angry with Shakespeare & attempts to kill him after the latter pushes him too far.]]]]
** Saber's issues with Mordred are such that her attempt to ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject are hilariously inept, something Rin and Shirou notice. A rare moment where this trope is treated seriously and still PlayedForLaughs.
** [[spoiler:Shirou gets very angry with Shakespeare & attempts to kill him after the latter pushes him too far.
** Saber's issues with Mordred are such that her attempt to ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject are hilariously inept, something Rin and Shirou notice. A rare moment where this trope is treated seriously and still PlayedForLaughs.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: The author has confirmed that Sieg & Jeanne are not going to become a couple in this story.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: AdaptationalRomanceDowngrade: The author has confirmed that Sieg & Jeanne are not going to become a couple in this story.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444 TheMaster4444]]'' set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12890660/1/The-Third-Faction The Third Faction]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4652465/TheMaster4444 TheMaster4444]]'' set after the events of the Unlimited Blade Works route that follows Shirou and Rin navigating the events of ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' ''Literature/FateApocrypha'' after being reunited with Saber as the third faction in the Great Holy Grail War.
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* HonourBeforeReason: Arturia, remembering how [[LightNovel/FateZero Diarmuid met his end]], chooses not to allow Siegfried to fall without a proper fight and so [[spoiler:gives him Avalon to regenerate his missing heart even though it is a huge loss in a war against so many Servants.]]
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* HonourBeforeReason: Arturia, remembering how [[LightNovel/FateZero [[Literature/FateZero Diarmuid met his end]], chooses not to allow Siegfried to fall without a proper fight and so [[spoiler:gives him Avalon to regenerate his missing heart even though it is a huge loss in a war against so many Servants.]]
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Shirou and Karna obviously have no concept of what an {{Inherently Funny Word|s}} is, because they do ''not'' get what's so funny or weird about the third faction being called "periwinkle". Shirou states several times that he doesn't get it (in response to Gordes laughing his head off and Rin despairing), while Karna straight up states that it's a perfectly fine colour and they should take pride in it.
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Even though Rin is a top class mage, she's still providing power to two Servants. Without enough magical energy for the Servants, this would naturally limit their abilities. She attempts to fix this problem for Shirou by providing him with Jewels as an emergency.
** Even though, she's a little more in touch with her humanity, it's really not enough to even begin to fix the bad blood between Arturia & Mordred. To her credit, Arturia is trying, but neither she nor Mordred has ever been the best with dealing or processing their emotions. One conversation in the midst of trying to kill each other isn't going to instantly solve their issues as one has been out of touch from her humanity for so long that it stunted her emotional & social development & the other is essentially a child in a teenager's body.
** Fiore is one of the kindest people in the Fate series, but due to her Magus upbringing, she doesn't know of or understand certain things. This is played out as she cannot understand at all why Rin would choose to leave her alive after their fight, as it it atypical of a Magus' (Especially in a Holy Grail War) behavior, not realizing that despite being a magus, Rin is a kind person.
** Even though Rin is a top class mage, she's still providing power to two Servants. Without enough magical energy for the Servants, this would naturally limit their abilities. She attempts to fix this problem for Shirou by providing him with Jewels as an emergency.
** Even though, she's a little more in touch with her humanity, it's really not enough to even begin to fix the bad blood between Arturia & Mordred. To her credit, Arturia is trying, but neither she nor Mordred has ever been the best with dealing or processing their emotions. One conversation in the midst of trying to kill each other isn't going to instantly solve their issues as one has been out of touch from her humanity for so long that it stunted her emotional & social development & the other is essentially a child in a teenager's body.
** Fiore is one of the kindest people in the Fate series, but due to her Magus upbringing, she doesn't know of or understand certain things. This is played out as she cannot understand at all why Rin would choose to leave her alive after their fight, as it it atypical of a Magus' (Especially in a Holy Grail War) behavior, not realizing that despite being a magus, Rin is a kind person.
