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The first story deals with Jon's squiring by Stannis and his arrival at Dragonstone. The sequel, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4406963/chapters/10008533 The Knight of Storm's End]]'', covers Stannis and Renly's attempts to expose Jaime and Cersei's incest and survive the resultant Lannister revolt. A third part, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/6601954/chapters/15103999 A Dull Affair]]'', covers Robert and Margery's wedding and Stannis's attempt to convict Littlefinger for the murder of Jon Arryn.
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The first story deals with Jon's squiring by Stannis and his arrival at Dragonstone. The sequel, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4406963/chapters/10008533 The Knight of Storm's End]]'', covers Stannis and Renly's attempts to expose Jaime and Cersei's incest and survive the resultant Lannister revolt. A third part, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/6601954/chapters/15103999 A Dull Affair]]'', covers Robert and Margery's Margaery's wedding and Stannis's attempt to convict Littlefinger for the murder of Jon Arryn.
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* InVinoVeritas: Stannis contrives to get Jaime so drunk that [[spoiler:he proudly and publicly confesses to incest as Cersei looks on in horror]].
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* BreakTheHaughty: Like canon, Jon learns some much needed humiliation regarding how privileged he is compared to most other bastards.
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* BreakTheHaughty: BreakTheHaughty:
** Like canon, Jon learns some much needed humiliation regarding how privileged he is compared to most other bastards.
** Like canon, Jon learns some much needed humiliation regarding how privileged he is compared to most other bastards.
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* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler:Renly and Joffrey Baratheon, and Lysa Arryn]].
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* NotSoSimilar: It's pointed out that as similar as they are in terms of personality, Stannis and Jon's lives are different. They both grew up in the shadows of the elder brothers, but Stannis was repeatedly put down by both of them; by playful jests or deliberate. Whereas Jon had grown up loved by most of his siblings in spite of his situation.
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* NotSoSimilar: NotSoSimilar:
** It's pointed outthat that, as similar as they are in terms of personality, Stannis and Jon's lives are different. They both grew up in the shadows of the elder brothers, but Stannis was repeatedly put down by both of them; by them, through playful jests or deliberate. Whereas deliberate insults, whereas Jon had grown up loved by most of his siblings in spite of his situation.
** It's pointed out
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3921901/chapters/8781790 The Squire Of Dragonstone]]'', by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EmynIthilien/pseuds/EmynIthilien EmynIthilien]], is an ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' fanfic in which Jon Snow goes to Dragonstone as Stannis Baratheon's squire rather than joining the Night Watch.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3921901/chapters/8781790 The Squire Of of Dragonstone]]'', by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EmynIthilien/pseuds/EmynIthilien EmynIthilien]], is an ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' fanfic in which Jon Snow goes to Dragonstone as Stannis Baratheon's squire rather than joining the Night Watch.
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* WarIsHell: Jon learns comes to this conclusion after experiencing it for the first time and lets out some StressVomit.
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* WarIsHell: Jon learns comes to this conclusion after experiencing it for the first time and lets out some StressVomit.StressVomit.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Jon had learned swimming by swimming in Winterfell's moat. Stannis points out the difference between a moat ("a stagnant body of water") and the sea, causing Jon to realize he's not a good swimmer compared to Davos' sons and other experienced sailors.
** Robert's been an alcoholic since he was about eighteen years old. Quitting cold turkey at this point would likely make things worse for him; leading him to drink a simple if rather weak ale.
** Littlefinger may have been a smarmy jerkass but his point regarding the Baratheons was somewhat accurate, as their are children who resemble more their mother than their father. Or in some cases, neither of them. And aside from being a Troll, Stannis has pointed out that there has been a blonde or red-haired Stark in previous generations, if not noted.
** Edric may have and be strong enough for a miniature warhammer, but that doesn’t mean he knows how to use it. And compared to the more experienced Jon, he's not a match for him.
** Robert's been an alcoholic since he was about eighteen years old. Quitting cold turkey at this point would likely make things worse for him; leading him to drink a simple if rather weak ale.
** Littlefinger may have been a smarmy jerkass but his point regarding the Baratheons was somewhat accurate, as their are children who resemble more their mother than their father. Or in some cases, neither of them. And aside from being a Troll, Stannis has pointed out that there has been a blonde or red-haired Stark in previous generations, if not noted.
** Edric may have and be strong enough for a miniature warhammer, but that doesn’t mean he knows how to use it. And compared to the more experienced Jon, he's not a match for him.
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* LikeASonToMe: Over time, Stannis comes to treat Jon almost as a son. Unsurprisingly, this unnerves Selyse Barethon, especially given that she has been unable to provide Stannis with a male heir.
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* LikeASonToMe: Over time, Stannis comes to treat Jon almost as a son. Unsurprisingly, this unnerves Selyse Barethon, Baratheon, especially given that she has been unable to provide Stannis with a male heir.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3921901/chapters/8781790 The Squire Of Dragonstone]]'', by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EmynIthilien/pseuds/EmynIthilien EmynIthilien]], is an Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire fanfic in which Jon Snow goes to Dragonstone as Stannis Baratheon's squire rather than joining the Night Watch.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3921901/chapters/8781790 The Squire Of Dragonstone]]'', by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EmynIthilien/pseuds/EmynIthilien EmynIthilien]], is an Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' fanfic in which Jon Snow goes to Dragonstone as Stannis Baratheon's squire rather than joining the Night Watch.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3921901/chapters/8781790 The Squire Of Dragonstone]]'', by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EmynIthilien/pseuds/EmynIthilien EmynIthilien]], is an Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire fanfic in which Jon Snow goes to Dragonstone as Stannis Barethon's squire rather than joining the Night Watch.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3921901/chapters/8781790 The Squire Of Dragonstone]]'', by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EmynIthilien/pseuds/EmynIthilien EmynIthilien]], is an Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire fanfic in which Jon Snow goes to Dragonstone as Stannis Barethon's Baratheon's squire rather than joining the Night Watch.
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* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler:Renly and Joffrey Baratheon, and Lysa Arryn.]].
* ChocolateBaby: As in canon, the primary piece of evidence cited in support of the Jaime/Cersei prosecution is the golden hair of the Lannister children.
* CoolSword: As in canon, Jon gets one. Instead of a valyrian steel sword, it's a regular if finely crafted bastard sword that once belonged to Steffon Baratheon called Clash.
* ChocolateBaby: As in canon, the primary piece of evidence cited in support of the Jaime/Cersei prosecution is the golden hair of the Lannister children.
* CoolSword: As in canon, Jon gets one. Instead of a valyrian steel sword, it's a regular if finely crafted bastard sword that once belonged to Steffon Baratheon called Clash.
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* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler:Renly and Joffrey Baratheon, and Lysa Arryn.]].
Arryn]].
* ChocolateBaby: As in canon, the primary piece of evidence cited in support of the Jaime/Cersei prosecution is the golden hair ofthe Lannister children.
Joffrey, Myrcella and Tommen Baratheon.
* CoolSword: As in canon, Jon gets one. Instead of avalyrian Valyrian steel sword, it's a regular if finely crafted bastard sword that once belonged to Steffon Baratheon called Clash.
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* CoolSword: As in canon, Jon gets one. Instead of a
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* ForWantOfANail: The premise being what would happen if Stannis had arrived with Robert's party in Winterfell.
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* ForWantOfANail: The premise being what would happen if Stannis had arrived with accompanied Robert's party in Winterfell.Winterfell, instead of just sailing off to Dragonstone.
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* Knighting: Jon is knighted shortly after saving Stannis from drowning by travelling to Shipbreaker Bay.
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* Knighting: {{Knighting}}: Jon is knighted shortly after saving Stannis from drowning by travelling to Shipbreaker Bay.
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** Jon notes that he and Edric Storm are quite similar. They've both been acknowledged by their respective fathers, raised in a castle, granted an education; being more privileged than most bastards would be. But whereas Jon was raised and cared for by his father, Edric was more or less cared for by Cortnay Penrose rather than Renly or Robert, who did nothing but provide gifts for him. Jon's siblings love him wit5h Sansa and Catelyn being the exception, whereas Renly and Stannis find Edric tolerable to say the least.
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** Jon notes that he and Edric Storm are quite similar. They've both been acknowledged by their respective fathers, raised in a castle, granted an education; being more privileged than most bastards would be. But whereas Jon was raised and cared for by his father, Edric was more or less cared for by Cortnay Penrose rather than Renly or Robert, who did nothing but provide gifts for him. Jon's siblings love him wit5h with Sansa and Catelyn being the exception, whereas Renly and Stannis find Edric tolerable to say the least.
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* PetTheDog: Figuratively, and literally. Catelyn thanks Ghost for [[spoiler:saving Robb. By proxy, she also thanks Jon.]]
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Baelish somehow escapes and leaves King's Landing, [[spoiler:after his plan to frame Robb and Margaery goes awry. It's implied Varys had a hand in it, along with Lysa's suicide.]]
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Baelish somehow escapes and leaves King's Landing, [[spoiler:after his plan to frame Robb and Margaery goes awry. It's implied Varys had a hand in it, along with Lysa's suicide.]]
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* PetTheDog: Figuratively, and literally. Catelyn thanks Ghost for [[spoiler:saving Robb. By proxy, she also thanks Jon.]]
Jon]].
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Baelish somehow escapes and leaves King's Landing, [[spoiler:after his plan to frame Robb and Margaery goes awry. It's implied Varys had a hand in it, along with Lysa'ssuicide.]]suicide]].
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Baelish somehow escapes and leaves King's Landing, [[spoiler:after his plan to frame Robb and Margaery goes awry. It's implied Varys had a hand in it, along with Lysa's
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* TheSquire: Jon starts off squiring for Stannis and [[spoiler:later takes up Edric Storm as his own.]]
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Jon had learned swimming by swimming in Winterfell's moat. Stannis points out the difference between a moat and the sea, causing Jon to realize he's not a good swimmer compared to Davos' sons and other experienced sailors.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Jon had learned swimming by swimming in Winterfell's moat. Stannis points out the difference between a moat and the sea, causing Jon to realize he's not a good swimmer compared to Davos' sons and other experienced sailors.
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* TheSquire: Jon starts off squiring for Stannis and [[spoiler:later takes up Edric Storm as his own.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Jon had learned swimming by swimming in Winterfell's moat. Stannis points out the difference between a moat ("a stagnant body of water") and the sea, causing Jon to realize he's not a good swimmer compared to Davos' sons and other experienced sailors.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Jon had learned swimming by swimming in Winterfell's moat. Stannis points out the difference between a moat ("a stagnant body of water") and the sea, causing Jon to realize he's not a good swimmer compared to Davos' sons and other experienced sailors.
