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* HeroesWantRedheads: Shinji very much wants his redhead, gorgeous, {{Tsundere}} [[spoiler:wife.]]
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There is also a series of short stories made by a bunch of fans (found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13867910/1/The-2nd-Try-Short-Stories here]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13951884/1/Aki-Chan-s-Adventures here]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14059582/1/Second-Chance here]],[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/49178281 here]], and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14305855/1/What-if-Asuka-and-Shinji-had-a-Child-that-never-existed here]]).
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There is also a series of short stories made by a bunch of fans (found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13867910/1/The-2nd-Try-Short-Stories here]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13951884/1/Aki-Chan-s-Adventures here]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14059582/1/Second-Chance here]],[[https://archiveofourown.here]], [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/49178281 here]], and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14305855/1/What-if-Asuka-and-Shinji-had-a-Child-that-never-existed here]]).
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There is also a series of short stories made by a bunch of fans (found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13867910/1/The-2nd-Try-Short-Stories here]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13951884/1/Aki-Chan-s-Adventures here]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14059582/1/Second-Chance here]], and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/49178281 here]]).
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There is also a series of short stories made by a bunch of fans (found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13867910/1/The-2nd-Try-Short-Stories here]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13951884/1/Aki-Chan-s-Adventures here]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14059582/1/Second-Chance here]], and [[https://archiveofourown.here]],[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/49178281 here]], and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14305855/1/What-if-Asuka-and-Shinji-had-a-Child-that-never-existed here]]).
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** In the first chapter, Asuka goes into Shinji's hospital room after the battle against Leliel. She slaps him for worrying her and then gives him a “welcome back” kiss.
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** In the first chapter, Asuka goes into Shinji's hospital room after the battle against Leliel. She slaps him for worrying her and then gives him a “welcome “welcome back” kiss.
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: In “Raise”, Asuka remembers what she could never catch up with Shinji in spite of working hard to become the best. She also realizes that it doesn’t bother or hurt her anymore.
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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: In “Raise”, Asuka remembers what she could never catch up with Shinji in spite of working hard to become the best. She also realizes that it doesn’t doesn’t bother or hurt her anymore.
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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Shinji and Asuka are married. She’s bold and straightforward, and he quiet and non-confrontational. During the AfterTheEnd section of the story, Asuka took care of physical chores like farming and maintaining their equipment as Shinji was tasked with the household chores and medical care. Asuka usually drove the two of them, made plans and handled everything while he calmed her down when she was angry or reassured her when she was depressed. This can also be seen in how [[spoiler:they act as parents towards Aki]], with Asuka being more stern and Shinji more accommodating. She also loves fighting while he loathes it.
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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: Shinji and Asuka are married. She’s She’s bold and straightforward, and he quiet and non-confrontational. During the AfterTheEnd section of the story, Asuka took care of physical chores like farming and maintaining their equipment as Shinji was tasked with the household chores and medical care. Asuka usually drove the two of them, made plans and handled everything while he calmed her down when she was angry or reassured her when she was depressed. This can also be seen in how [[spoiler:they act as parents towards Aki]], with Asuka being more stern and Shinji more accommodating. She also loves fighting while he loathes it.
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* HurtingHero: Shinji and Asuka had gone through numerous psychological traumas before becoming ChildSoldiers. After the end of the world, they finally got over their problems and insecurities, matured, [[spoiler:became parents]]… and then they were thrown back to the past without previous warning and without [[spoiler:their daughter.]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: Shinji and Asuka had gone through numerous psychological traumas before becoming ChildSoldiers. After the end of the world, they finally got over their problems and insecurities, matured, [[spoiler:became parents]]... and then they were thrown back to the past without previous warning and without [[spoiler:their daughter.]]
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* TheHero: Shinji has learned -and lived through- the consequences of failure and he has [[spoiler:a family]] to protect now, so he is determined to not squander his and Asuka's second chance and become a hero to save everybody. [[spoiler:He succeeds.]]
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Cloning Blues has been renamed to Clone Angst and redefined to only be about people angsting about discovering they're a clone. Removing "clones exist" usage.
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* EverybodyLives: [[spoiler:At the end of the story, not only SEELE's AssimilationPlot has been thwarted and every death in the main cast averted (even Gendo's karmic retribution only puts him in a vegetative state), but Shinji and Asuka's daughter who was assumed to be RetGone is brought back to them, making their family complete again. The only onscreen deaths are Rei (who, [[CloningBlues par for the course]], [[UnexplainedRecovery comes back]]), Kaworu ([[FaceDeathWithDignity after a heartwarming speech to convince a reluctant Shinji of its necessity]]), and Kyoko (by way of HeroicSacrifice).]]
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* EverybodyLives: [[spoiler:At the end of the story, not only SEELE's AssimilationPlot has been thwarted and every death in the main cast averted (even Gendo's karmic retribution only puts him in a vegetative state), but Shinji and Asuka's daughter who was assumed to be RetGone is brought back to them, making their family complete again. The only onscreen deaths are Rei (who, [[CloningBlues par for the course]], course, [[UnexplainedRecovery comes back]]), Kaworu ([[FaceDeathWithDignity after a heartwarming speech to convince a reluctant Shinji of its necessity]]), and Kyoko (by way of HeroicSacrifice).]]
