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* RealityEnsues: The Storm King's invasion was not an easy thing to get over, as many of the characters couldn't sleep and even had nightmares about it.
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* TheAtoner: Tempest, of course.
** Grubber as well, especially when he found out ponies have had their homes destroyed and became fatally ill as a result of the Storm King's invasion.
** Grubber as well, especially when he found out ponies have had their homes destroyed and became fatally ill as a result of the Storm King's invasion.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Grubber, a rather humorous character, is left shaken after seeing somepony die right in front of him. Even more so knowing that there were two other ponies that had died within two days from illness thanks to the Storm King destroying their homes.
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* PleaseWakeUp: Grubber tried waking a pony up after the pony dropped dead from an illness he had.
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* RealityEnsues: The Storm King's invasion was not an easy thing to get over, as many of the characters couldn't sleep and even had nightmares about it.
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* JustFollowingOrders: The reason why Celestia allowed Grubber and Tempest to have a second chance. They were just following the Storm King's orders.
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* ItsPersonal: Shining Armor was not happy with Tempest turning Cadence into stone, as some of the other tropes can tell you.
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* BrokenBird: Razzle Fizzle. Moon Dancer recalled that, ever since her parents died, Razzle would not stop screaming and begging for Fizzlepop to come home. And then she found out about Tempest's involvement with the Storm King.
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This trope is about unexpectedly realistic outcomes. This is the expectation for this genre of fic.
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* WouldHitAGirl: At the Crystal Empire, once Tempest announces that she has come to atone for her actions, Shining Armor answers by punching her in the face. Justified since she turned Cadance to stone.
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* WouldHitAGirl: At the Crystal Empire, once Tempest announces that she has come to atone for her actions, Shining Armor answers by punching slapping her in the face. Justified since she turned did turn Cadance to stone.
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* WouldHitAGirl: At the Crystal Empire, once Tempest announces that she has come to atone for her actions, Shining Armor answers by punching her in the face.
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* WouldHitAGirl: At the Crystal Empire, once Tempest announces that she has come to atone for her actions, Shining Armor answers by punching her in the face. Justified since she turned Cadance to stone.
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* AndThisIsFor: Tempest is greeted at the Crystal Empire by Shining Armor with a punch to her face, which he responds with "That's for [[TakenForGranite turning my wife to stone]]!"
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* AndThisIsFor: Tempest is greeted at the Crystal Empire by Shining Armor with a punch to swat at her face, which he responds with "That's "That was for [[TakenForGranite turning my wife to stone]]!"
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** Futhermore, there were lots of casualties in Canterlot from Tempest's attack on the city.
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** Futhermore, there were lots of casualties in Canterlot from Tempest's attack on the city.city.
* ReformedButRejected: The whole point of the story is about Tempest being rejected by everypony despite her redemption.
* WouldHitAGirl: At the Crystal Empire, once Tempest announces that she has come to atone for her actions, Shining Armor answers by punching her in the face.
* ReformedButRejected: The whole point of the story is about Tempest being rejected by everypony despite her redemption.
* WouldHitAGirl: At the Crystal Empire, once Tempest announces that she has come to atone for her actions, Shining Armor answers by punching her in the face.
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** Despite her HeelFaceTurn, Tempest is [[ReformedButRejected reviled]] by the ponies in Ponyville for her involvement in the Storm King's plot. Even her sister, Razzle Fizzle, is furious with her actions. This proves that just because [[AllLovingHero Twilight]] is willing to forgive Tempest, it doesn't mean anybody ''else'' is going to automatically follow suit.
** Applejack and Rainbow Dash point out during Chapter 8 that even if Tempest ''did'' do a genuine HeelFaceTurn, she still ''cannot'' go unpunished for her crimes (which include conquering Equestria and other countries, enslaving those populations, and joining forces with a maniac emperor, [[DisproportionateRetribution all because she broke her horn]]) because that would not be fair to the thousands, maybe even millions, of victims who suffered because of her.
** Applejack and Rainbow Dash point out during Chapter 8 that even if Tempest ''did'' do a genuine HeelFaceTurn, she still ''cannot'' go unpunished for her crimes (which include conquering Equestria and other countries, enslaving those populations, and joining forces with a maniac emperor, [[DisproportionateRetribution all because she broke her horn]]) because that would not be fair to the thousands, maybe even millions, of victims who suffered because of her.
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** Despite her HeelFaceTurn, Tempest is [[ReformedButRejected reviled]] by the ponies in Ponyville of Equestria for her involvement in the Storm King's plot.plot, especially since some of them lost family members in the attack. Even her sister, Razzle Fizzle, is furious with her actions. This proves that just because [[AllLovingHero Twilight]] is willing to forgive Tempest, it doesn't mean anybody ''else'' is going to automatically follow suit.
** Applejack and Rainbow Dash point out during Chapter 8 that even if Tempest ''did'' do a genuine HeelFaceTurn, shestill ''cannot'' go unpunished for her crimes (which include conquering Equestria and other countries, enslaving those populations, and joining forces with a maniac emperor, [[DisproportionateRetribution all because she broke her horn]]) because that would not be fair to the thousands, maybe even millions, of victims who suffered because of her. Also, because Tempest's misdeeds were war crimes, that means that it's impossible for her ''not'' to be punished for them.
** Applejack and Rainbow Dash point out during Chapter 8 that even if Tempest ''did'' do a genuine HeelFaceTurn, she
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler:Tempest decides to leave Equestria to spread word of the Storm King's defeat and to fully atone for her actions. Before that, she promises Twilight that she will return and become her Captain of the Royal Guard.]]
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/387696/the-redemption-of-tempest-shadow The Redemption of Tempest Shadow]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/129609/twilightsparkle3562 twilightsparkle3562]], which takes place after [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie2017 the movie]].
Following the events of the movie, Tempest Shadow accepts responsibility for her actions and attempts to atone for her actions while serving under the Storm King.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AndThisIsFor: Tempest is greeted at the Crystal Empire by Shining Armor with a punch to her face, which he responds with "That's for [[TakenForGranite turning my wife to stone]]!"
* RealityEnsues:
** Despite her HeelFaceTurn, Tempest is [[ReformedButRejected reviled]] by the ponies in Ponyville for her involvement in the Storm King's plot. Even her sister, Razzle Fizzle, is furious with her actions. This proves that just because [[AllLovingHero Twilight]] is willing to forgive Tempest, it doesn't mean anybody ''else'' is going to automatically follow suit.
** Applejack and Rainbow Dash point out during Chapter 8 that even if Tempest ''did'' do a genuine HeelFaceTurn, she still ''cannot'' go unpunished for her crimes (which include conquering Equestria and other countries, enslaving those populations, and joining forces with a maniac emperor, [[DisproportionateRetribution all because she broke her horn]]) because that would not be fair to the thousands, maybe even millions, of victims who suffered because of her.
** Later on, it is revealed that the Cutie Mark Crusaders are suffering from PTSD from being locked up in cages when they were prisoners.
** Futhermore, there were lots of casualties in Canterlot from Tempest's attack on the city.
Following the events of the movie, Tempest Shadow accepts responsibility for her actions and attempts to atone for her actions while serving under the Storm King.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AndThisIsFor: Tempest is greeted at the Crystal Empire by Shining Armor with a punch to her face, which he responds with "That's for [[TakenForGranite turning my wife to stone]]!"
* RealityEnsues:
** Despite her HeelFaceTurn, Tempest is [[ReformedButRejected reviled]] by the ponies in Ponyville for her involvement in the Storm King's plot. Even her sister, Razzle Fizzle, is furious with her actions. This proves that just because [[AllLovingHero Twilight]] is willing to forgive Tempest, it doesn't mean anybody ''else'' is going to automatically follow suit.
** Applejack and Rainbow Dash point out during Chapter 8 that even if Tempest ''did'' do a genuine HeelFaceTurn, she still ''cannot'' go unpunished for her crimes (which include conquering Equestria and other countries, enslaving those populations, and joining forces with a maniac emperor, [[DisproportionateRetribution all because she broke her horn]]) because that would not be fair to the thousands, maybe even millions, of victims who suffered because of her.
** Later on, it is revealed that the Cutie Mark Crusaders are suffering from PTSD from being locked up in cages when they were prisoners.
** Futhermore, there were lots of casualties in Canterlot from Tempest's attack on the city.
