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* DeadFicDeadFic: Came close, but wound up being narrowly subverted under the condition that we still continue to show support for the author while it's on Hiatus.
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Sadly, due to the author's desire to focus on college, the story has been cancelled.

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Sadly, due to the author's desire to focus on college, the story has been cancelled.put on hiatus until further notice.
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Sadly, due to the author's desire to focus on college, the story has been cancelled.


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* DeadFic
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Between all the Echoes and the Mane Six at one period of time or another arguably. They may not be real, but that doesn't stop the mares from half-jokingly seeing them as a potential boyfriend.

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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Between all the Echoes Guards and the Mane Six at one period of time or another arguably. They may [[spoiler: not be real, real]], but that doesn't stop the mares from half-jokingly seeing them as a potential boyfriend.
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* GoodHurtsEvil: Since Sombra runs on ThePowerOfHate, when the Element of Kindness is active, its aura hurts him.



* MadeOfKryptonite: Since Sombra runs on ThePowerOfHate, when the Element of Kindness is active, its aura hurts him.

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** The Crystal Empire's timeline has also been somewhat tweaked, in that it returned from Sombra's curse about a year before the story started, and Cadance took control without fighting Sombra (who appears to still be sealed away).

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** The Crystal Empire's timeline has also been somewhat tweaked, in that it returned from Sombra's curse about a year before the story started, and Cadance Cadence took control without fighting Sombra (who appears to still be sealed away).doesn't get out of his can until Chrysalis releases him).



** The Fearsense ability of the Element of Kindness is pretty much MindRape, forcing those on the receiving end to experience their worst fears.



* BewareTheNiceOnes[=/=]BewareTheQuietOnes: When Fluttershy taps into the full power of the Element of Kindness, she scares ''Sombra'' and nearly curbstomps Chrysalis, until the former uses Spike as a hostage to distract her.



* FantasticDrug: Changelings produce an enzyme called Phoria that reduces their victims to a euphoric, near-catatonic state that allows the Changelings to easily contain them and feed on their emotions. It's stated that Phoria is highly addictive, and rescued victims have been known to go through intense withdrawal symptons and even sometimes actively seek out Changeling Hives so they can be recaptured.

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* FantasticDrug: Changelings produce an enzyme called Phoria Phora that reduces their victims to a euphoric, near-catatonic state that allows the Changelings to easily contain them and feed on their emotions. It's stated that Phoria Phora is highly addictive, and rescued victims have been known to go through intense withdrawal symptons and even sometimes actively seek out Changeling Hives so they can be recaptured.



* InSpiteOfANail: Chrysalis still impersonates Cadence, though the main plot derails her plan to stage a wedding as a way of infiltrating Equestria.



* MadeOfKryptonite: Since Sombra runs on ThePowerOfHate, when the Element of Kindness is active, its aura hurts him.



** Granny Smith's axe ''Aconitum,'' also known as [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aconitum "wolf's bane"]].

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** Granny Smith's axe ''Aconitum,'' also known as [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aconitum "wolf's bane"]].bane"]], which she used in the slaughter of the Timber Wolves.


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** Sombra was also sealed away, as per canon, though in this case, he doesn't get loose until Chrysalis frees him.


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* VillainTeamUp: Chrysalis frees Sombra from his imprisonment in order to help her take over the Crystal Empire (and by extension, all of Tarandus) as part of her larger plan for a full-scale invasion of Equestria. She keeps him on a short leash, however, which makes him plot against her even more than he probably already would be anyway.
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Between all the Echoes and the Mane Six at one period of time or another arguably. They may not be real, but that doesn't stop the mares from half-jokingly seeing them as an option.

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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Between all the Echoes and the Mane Six at one period of time or another arguably. They may not be real, but that doesn't stop the mares from half-jokingly seeing them as an option.a potential boyfriend.
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Between all the Echoes and the Mane Six at one period of time or another arguably. They may not be real, but that doesn't stop the mares from half-jokingly seeing them as an option.
**Same is true vice-versa, albeit to a lesser extent.
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** The Crystal Empire's timeline has also been somewhat tweaked, in that it returned from Sombra's curse about a year before the story started, and Cadance took control without fighting Sombra (who appears to still be sealed away).


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* BigGood: The Princesses, of course. [[spoiler: But beyond even them is Harmony.]]


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* TheEmpire: The Crystal Empire originally lived up to the name, dominating Tarandus and subjugating the other races there. This lasted until Celestia and Luna defeated Discord and convinced the Crystal Ponies to give up their territory and live in peace. Then Sombra eventually showed up and tried to revive the empire, but he was eventually defeated before he could expand the borders.


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* EvilMentor: Sombra ''tried'' to be one to Cadance back in the day, but she was too pure to corrupt.


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** Discord ''also'' started the war between the Crystal Ponies and the other races of Tarandus that led to the formation of the Crystal Empire.
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* FalseFlagOperation: Discord started the Blood War between Metallic and Chromatic dragons by killing the dragon leader/progenitor Io and planting evidence that made each side think the other was responsible. Celestia and Luna eventually exposed the truth, but the war has left deep distrust between the two types of dragons ever since.
* FantasticCasteSystem: Changelings are split into six types: Drones (basic {{Mooks}}), Workers, Scouts, Behemoths ([[GiantMook Giant]] {{Mook Lieutenant}}s), Wardens (priests who guard Discord's shrine), and Royals (the Queen and Princesses).
* FantasticDrug: Changelings produce an enzyme called Phoria that reduces their victims to a euphoric, near-catatonic state that allows the Changelings to easily contain them and feed on their emotions. It's stated that Phoria is highly addictive, and rescued victims have been known to go through intense withdrawal symptons and even sometimes actively seek out Changeling Hives so they can be recaptured.


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** The Blood War between the Metallic and Chromatic dragons, triggered by Discord [[FalseFlagOperation making each side think the other killed their leader/progenitor Io]]. This war lasted for the entire Era of Discord (''centuries'', if not longer), and it was only after his defeat that Celestia and Luna were able to reveal the truth and end the war.


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* MonsterProgenitor: Io, the first dragon, created by [[spoiler: Harmony and Discord]], who based the rest of the species on his design.


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** All dragons swear by Io, the first of their kind.


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** The author used [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons D&D]] edition 3.5 rules in his design for the dragons.
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** Also, Granny Smith's axe ''Aconitum''. Also known as [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aconitum "wolf's bane"]].

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** Also, Granny Smith's axe ''Aconitum''. Also ''Aconitum,'' also known as [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aconitum "wolf's bane"]].
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** Also, Granny Smith's axe ''Aconitum''. Also known as [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aconitum "wolf's bane"]].
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** [[spoiler: Celestia still bears the scars from when she tried to kill herself. Her breast plate hides them.]]
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** The retroactive editing throws a bit into Fluttershy's trip to Dragon Turtle Lake in Act 1; when Master is listing recent affairs in Equestria's neighbors, he offhandedly mentions Chrysalis having recently become Queen, and how she might prove dangerous in the future. Cut ahead to Act 2, where we find out that the Changelings have begun invading Gildesdale as a prelude to invading Equestria.


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* {{Rewrite}}: A minor example. As the story's gone on, [=CyborgSamurai=] has gone back and edited previous chapters, usually altering dialogue or adding small scenes, in order to better reflect later developments.


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* TheSpymaster: Master is a downplayed example; he has connections and lines of communication with other animals pretty much everywhere, which he uses to keep tabs on events both in Equestria itself and amongst its neighbor states.
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* [[spoiler: CreatingLife: Harmony and Discord created Equestria and the rest of the world from a lifeless rock, and worked together to create the ponies and most of the other forms of life on the planet. That said, it appears they created some by themselves -- according to [[AllThereInTheManual the author's forum notes]], Harmony made the Dragon Turtles, and Discord made the Changelings, for example.]]



* MookLieutenant: Behemoth-type Changelings appear to be this, due to size and the fact that the one named Veraxi was apparently in charge of the attack on Gallopfrey.



** When the group is scattered and the (physical) Elements jumbled amongst them, Spike ends up with the Element of Loyalty. Yes, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 Spike is the new Rainbow Dash]].



* PoweredByAForsakenChild: [[spoiler: Zemblani sacrificed Horizon -- just a two-year-old foal -- to try and use his Lifeforce to force open the Gates of Tartarus. The Echoes were attached to his Lifeforce to keep him alive, now trapped at the center of the barrier in the Gates. And it turns out, part of him is still conscious...]]

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* PoweredByAForsakenChild: [[spoiler: Zemblani sacrificed Horizon -- just a two-year-old foal -- to try and use his Lifeforce to force open the Gates Gate of Tartarus. The Echoes were attached to his Lifeforce to keep him alive, now trapped at the center of the barrier in the Gates.Gate. And it turns out, part of him is still conscious...]]



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Twilight gives one to Trixie when she tries to invoke SympathyForTheDevil, saying she's been looked down her whole life by nobles like Twilight.

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Twilight gives one to Trixie when she tries to invoke SympathyForTheDevil, saying she's been looked down on her whole life by nobles like Twilight.
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** Rainbow Dash pulling off the Sonic Rainboom (in this continuity, for the first time since she got her cutie mark) in order to save Esra and Tastar from [[spoiler: a giant dragon]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Cancer spent a chunk of his life as a slave in a Gryphon arena, until Celestia rescued him during a diplomatic mission.

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Cancer spent a chunk of his life as a slave in a Gryphon Griffon arena, until Celestia rescued him during a diplomatic mission.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromVeryFast: Nightmare Moon's second-in-command during the War of the Sun and Moon was a pony named Mephis ''the Flayer''.

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* NamesToRunAwayFromVeryFast: NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Nightmare Moon's second-in-command during the War of the Sun and Moon was a pony named Mephis ''the Flayer''.
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* TheInsomniac: Rarity is a Type C.
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** Rarity's morning activities in Chapter 7 include a reference to Lyra's endeavors in ''FanFic/BackgroundPony.''

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However, there's more going on than meets the eye. The sins of a forgotten war still linger, and an ancient evil lurks in the shadows, just waiting for the right time to strike. The Mane Six suddenly find themselves once again at the heart of a conspiracy to bring about Eternal Night, and only by awakening their powers and realizing their full potential can they do anything to stop it.

Fortunately, they're not alone. Friends both old and new will help them along the way, and an unseen force will guide them as it seeks to right a wrong made thousands of years ago. The Bearer's journeys will take them outside the borders of Equestria and into the world beyond, and when they return, they'll have the power and experience necessary to save the world, and bring about balance in all things.

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However, there's more going on than meets the eye. The sins of a forgotten war still linger, and an ancient evil lurks in the shadows, just waiting for the right time to strike. The Mane Six suddenly find themselves once again at the heart of a conspiracy to bring about Eternal Night, and only by awakening their powers and realizing their full potential can they do anything to stop it.

Fortunately, they're not alone.
it. Friends both old and new will help them along the way, and an unseen force will guide them as it seeks to right a wrong made thousands of years ago. The Bearer's journeys will take them outside the borders of Equestria and into the world beyond, and when they return, they'll have the power and experience necessary to save the world, and bring about balance in all things.
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* AuthorAvatar: The steampunk-cyborg ship captain that Granny talks to in Gallopfrey appears to be one.
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* DeadLittleSister: Grovi's [[spoiler: actually Virgo's]] sister Crystal Song.
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** And then of course, there's the Changelings.
-->'''Applejack''': If this keeps up, I’m gonna hafta invest in a giant-sized flyswatter.



* FusionDance: The Pegasus Pilgrim and the Changeling Pupa were fused together by Pupa's sister Cocoon to save both of them.

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* FusionDance: The Pegasus pegasus Pilgrim and the Changeling Pupa were fused together by Pupa's sister Cocoon to save both of them.


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* RousingSpeech: Libra apparently gave one when the Order was founded in order to convince them all to put aside their differences and work together.
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** When Cocoon, Pupa, and Pilgrim would are mortally wounded in a cave-in, Cocoon's last act was to fuse Pupa and Pilgrim together in order to save them.

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** When Cocoon, Pupa, and Pilgrim would are were all mortally wounded in a cave-in, Cocoon's last act was to fuse Pupa and Pilgrim together in order to save them.



** When Ras is delivering Ophiuchus' WhatTheHellHero speech to Vigil, it blows back his mane and tail.

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** When Ras is delivering Ophiuchus' WhatTheHellHero "WhatTheHellHero" speech to Vigil, it blows back his mane and tail.
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** When Cocoon, Pupa, and Pilgrim would are mortally wounded in a cave-in, Cocoon's last act was to fuse Pupa and Pilgrim together in order to save them.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author has created a series of forums where he lists information on characters and locations that doesn't necessarily come up in the story.


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* ReligionOfEvil: How much so is debatable, but the Changelings worship Discord (who they call The Shaper), because [[AllThereInTheManual he created them]].
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*** That same chapter has a cameo by the title character of the MLP fic "Echo the Diamond Dog".
** Pilgrim/Pupa's story is based on the MLP fic "The Three Sisters", with some minor modifications. (And permission from the author.)
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** Overusing their Element powers wears the Mane Six out.



* MolotovCocktail: Norric uses some against the Changelings in Gallopfrey.
* {{Mordor}}: The Changeling Wastes are a vast, parched wasteland, which constantly spew toxic gases into the air.



** Applejack more or less becomes this when her Strength power is active.



* PocketDimension: Tartarus is a separate plane created by Celestia as a prison [[spoiler: for Nightmare Moon's army]].



* ResetButton: One of the abilities of the Element of Honesty is "Rejection of Fate", which means that if you don't accept something as having happened, it didn't. [[spoiler: Applejack uses this to save Granny Smith from Eclipse.]]

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* ResetButton: One of the abilities of the Element of Honesty is "Rejection of Fate", which means that if you don't accept something as having happened, it didn't.you can rewind time to prevent it. [[spoiler: Applejack uses this to save Granny Smith from Eclipse.]]]]
** TimeMaster: Applejack eventually realizes that she can also use it to slow down or even temporarily stop time.

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