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-->"Blech!" spat Bonnie. "Ugh, come on! That was so... treacly. Yuck, feel like I need to scrape off all that sugar and honey..." she trailed off while swinging a leg over her log. She made a show of scratching at her green fur, rubbing off the happiness of [[spoiler:Leroy's]] ending.* SophisticatedAsHell:

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-->"Blech!" spat Bonnie. "Ugh, come on! That was so... treacly. Yuck, feel like I need to scrape off all that sugar and honey..." she trailed off while swinging a leg over her log. She made a show of scratching at her green fur, rubbing off the happiness of [[spoiler:Leroy's]] ending.ending.
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* SickeninglySweet: InUniverse, Bonnie finds [[spoiler:Leroy's love story]] to be too sweet for its own good.
-->"Blech!" spat Bonnie. "Ugh, come on! That was so... treacly. Yuck, feel like I need to scrape off all that sugar and honey..." she trailed off while swinging a leg over her log. She made a show of scratching at her green fur, rubbing off the happiness of [[spoiler:Leroy's]] ending.
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* TastesLikeDiabetes: InUniverse, Bonnie finds [[spoiler:Leroy's love story]] to be too sweet for its own good.
-->"Blech!" spat Bonnie. "Ugh, come on! That was so... treacly. Yuck, feel like I need to scrape off all that sugar and honey..." she trailed off while swinging a leg over her log. She made a show of scratching at her green fur, rubbing off the happiness of [[spoiler:Leroy's]] ending.
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** [[spoiler:Leroy]] is this as well considering that [[spoiler:he really was just a flat character in [[WesternAnimation/LeroyAndStitch the film that bears his name]], while in this story he truly becomes the focus of the main plot]].

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** [[spoiler:Leroy]] is this as well considering that [[spoiler:he really was just a flat character in [[WesternAnimation/LeroyAndStitch the film that bears his name]], while in this story he truly becomes the focus of the main plot]].plot.]]
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->''"{{What if}}?" A powerful question. Both scary and enlightening. For one night, around a warm campfire, one very large and special ohana will dive into this question, and as long as the snacks hold out, they'll discover more about the power of "What if?" Come join them around the campfire to hear some wild answers to "What if?"''\\

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->''"{{What if}}?" if}}" A powerful question. Both scary and enlightening. For one night, around a warm campfire, one very large and special ohana will dive into this question, and as long as the snacks hold out, they'll discover more about the power of "What if?" Come join them around the campfire to hear some wild answers to "What if?"''\\
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# '''[[spoiler:Gantu]]''': What if 626 got caught by [[spoiler:Gantu (in a huge case of WishFulfillment)]]?

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# '''[[spoiler:Gantu]]''': What if 626 got caught by [[spoiler:Gantu (in a huge case of WishFulfillment)]]?WishFulfillment)?]]
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# '''[[spoiler:Leroy (X-629)[[note]]At the time this story was written, Leroy was not officially numbered 629 yet.[[/note]]]]''': What if 626 was a successful CEO of a legitimate company he and Jumba started [[spoiler:who then falls in love with one of their investors, Angel]]?

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# '''[[spoiler:Leroy (X-629)[[note]]At the time this story was written, Leroy was not officially numbered 629 yet.[[/note]]]]''': What if 626 was a successful CEO of a legitimate company he and Jumba started [[spoiler:who then falls in love with one of their investors, Angel]]?Angel?]]



# '''Slushy (X-523)''': What if 626 ended up on an ice planet [[spoiler:ruled by 523, who was believed to have been long lost]]?
# '''Heckler (X-322)''': What if 626 was a successful pod racer [[spoiler:whose career seems to end after he is blinded in an accident]]?
# '''Jumba''': What if 626 [[spoiler:became a giant just after his creation]]? (It should be noted that [[spoiler:this was written well before ''Animation/StitchAndAi''[='=]s release]].)

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# '''Slushy (X-523)''': What if 626 ended up on an ice planet [[spoiler:ruled by 523, who was believed to have been long lost]]?
lost?]]
# '''Heckler (X-322)''': What if 626 was a successful pod racer [[spoiler:whose career seems to end after he is blinded in an accident]]?
accident?]]
# '''Jumba''': What if 626 [[spoiler:became a giant just after his creation]]? creation?]] (It should be noted that [[spoiler:this was written well before ''Animation/StitchAndAi''[='=]s release]].)release.]])



* CoolVersusAwesome: Jumba's story has [[spoiler:{{Kaiju}}!]]626 fight against [[spoiler:[[HumongousMecha Robo-Pleakley]]]].

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* CoolVersusAwesome: Jumba's story has [[spoiler:{{Kaiju}}!]]626 fight against [[spoiler:[[HumongousMecha Robo-Pleakley]]]].Robo-Pleakley]].]]



* DamnedByFaintPraise: When [[spoiler:Gantu]] asks Nani what she thought of his story, she replies, "It was...hmm...a novel approach. Something, er, unexpected."

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* DamnedByFaintPraise: When [[spoiler:Gantu]] asks Nani what she thought of his story, she replies, "It was...hmm... hmm... a novel approach. Something, er, unexpected."



* GreenEyedMonster: This fic explains that for some unknown reason, [[spoiler:Gantu]] has never been able to let go of [[spoiler:his hatred for Stitch]] and has tried to exact vengeance on him. Thus, [[spoiler:Gantu got fired from his position as captain again sometime before the events of this fic as a result]].

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* GreenEyedMonster: This fic explains that for some unknown reason, [[spoiler:Gantu]] has never been able to let go of [[spoiler:his hatred for Stitch]] and has tried to exact vengeance on him. Thus, [[spoiler:Gantu got fired from his position as captain again sometime before the events of this fic as a result]].result.]]



** During Nani's story when she acts out the Grand Councilwoman telling "Super Stitch" about Experiment 149, Bonnie interrupts questioning and then approving how she is the bad guy of the story. After the brief outburst, Nani resumes her story with the Grand Councilwoman saying how 149 is "[[TotallyRadical totally cool]] with being the bad guy, and doing [[BuffySpeak bad guy things]]."

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** During Nani's story when she acts out the Grand Councilwoman telling "Super Stitch" about Experiment 149, Bonnie interrupts questioning and then approving how she is the bad guy of the story. After the brief outburst, Nani resumes her story with the Grand Councilwoman saying how 149 is "[[TotallyRadical totally cool]] with being the bad guy, and doing [[BuffySpeak bad guy things]]."things]]".



-->"Blech!" spat Bonnie. "Ugh, come on! That was so...treacly. Yuck, feel like I need to scrape off all that sugar and honey..." she trailed off while swinging a leg over her log. She made a show of scratching at her green fur, rubbing off the happiness of [[spoiler:Leroy's]] ending.
* TranquilFury: Stitch gives a DeathGlare to [[spoiler:Leroy]] when the latter acts out [[spoiler:CEO!626 and Angel making out]] in his story. He then walks up to [[spoiler:the doppelganger experiment]] ready to chew him out for the act, silencing all the others' laughter in the process, until [[spoiler:Leroy stops laughing and begins coughing and rolling around in pain. [[SubvertedTrope Stitch quickly calms down at that point]] and helps Leroy back up]].

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-->"Blech!" spat Bonnie. "Ugh, come on! That was so... treacly. Yuck, feel like I need to scrape off all that sugar and honey..." she trailed off while swinging a leg over her log. She made a show of scratching at her green fur, rubbing off the happiness of [[spoiler:Leroy's]] ending.
* TranquilFury: Stitch gives a DeathGlare to [[spoiler:Leroy]] when the latter acts out [[spoiler:CEO!626 and Angel making out]] in his story. He then walks up to [[spoiler:the doppelganger experiment]] ready to chew him out for the act, silencing all the others' laughter in the process, until [[spoiler:Leroy stops laughing and begins coughing and rolling around in pain. [[SubvertedTrope Stitch quickly calms down at that point]] and helps Leroy back up]].up.]]



* WishFulfillment: [[spoiler:Gantu's story is basically him wishing that he defeated Experiment 626]].

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* WishFulfillment: [[spoiler:Gantu's story is basically him wishing that he defeated Experiment 626]].626.]]



* VagueAge: While Lilo is described as a little girl in chapter one and still acts as naïve as we know her to be in the franchise, Nani mentions her getting "free room and board" in chapter two, suggesting that this fic might be taking place in Lilo's college years.

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* VagueAge: While Lilo is described as a little girl in chapter one and still acts as naïve as we know her to be in the franchise, Nani mentions her getting "free room and board" in chapter two, Chapter 2, suggesting that this fic might be taking place in Lilo's college years.
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* DeadFic: Last updated in April 2016, but the author would abandon it in favor of writing ''WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}}'' fics since. He last updated one of his stories on Website/FanFictionDotNet since May 2018.

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* DeadFic: Last updated in April 2016, but the author would abandon it in favor of writing ''WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}}'' fics since. He last updated one of his stories on Website/FanFictionDotNet since in May 2018.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Leroy, who seems to have taken a very hard crash landing, gets convinced by Lilo to tell a rather romantic love story about Stitch and Angel. From there, Leroy starts to care about the ''ʻohana'', and they actually grow concerned for him. The main story shifts to the ''ʻohana'' trying to prove to the Grand Councilwoman that Leroy has redeemed himself and should stay with them on Earth.]]

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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Leroy, who seems to have taken a very hard crash landing, gets convinced by Lilo to tell a rather romantic love story about Stitch and Angel. From there, Leroy starts to care about the ''ʻohana'', ''ʻohana'', and they actually grow concerned for him. The main story shifts to the ''ʻohana'' ''ʻohana'' trying to prove to the Grand Councilwoman that Leroy has redeemed himself and should stay with them on Earth.]]



** [[spoiler:Gantu's]] story, where he imagines himself as [[spoiler:"Supreme Commander" of the Galactic Federation finally capturing 626]]. The ''ʻohana'' [[SarcasmMode really]] ''[[SarcasmMode love]]'' this tale he spins.

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** [[spoiler:Gantu's]] story, where he imagines himself as [[spoiler:"Supreme Commander" of the Galactic Federation finally capturing 626]]. The ''ʻohana'' ''ʻohana'' [[SarcasmMode really]] ''[[SarcasmMode love]]'' this tale he spins.



** There are a couple minor [=OoC=] issues, however. One is that [[spoiler:the Grand Councilwoman]] calls Stitch "Experiment 626" when [[spoiler:she's]] actually been calling him "Stitch" in the franchise ever since the end of [[WesternAnimation/LiloAndStitch the original film]]. The other is that when Lilo gets scared after the "werewolf ninjas" disrupt the party, hugs Stitch for comfort... and in a brief OutOfCharacterMoment, she [[MotorMouth rapidly]] tells him how she's glad that he's not hurt, praises him for how brave he is, and thanks him for protecting her and the ''ʻohana''. Although that reaction ''is'' realistic of typical young girls in such situations, Lilo--who is anything ''but'' typical--would not ever do the MotorMouth part like in this story, and she already knows how bulletproof and brave her best friend is, so she wouldn't actually be ''that'' terribly concerned for Stitch's safety then.

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** There are a couple minor [=OoC=] issues, however. One is that [[spoiler:the Grand Councilwoman]] calls Stitch "Experiment 626" when [[spoiler:she's]] actually been calling him "Stitch" in the franchise ever since the end of [[WesternAnimation/LiloAndStitch the original film]]. The other is that when Lilo gets scared after the "werewolf ninjas" disrupt the party, hugs Stitch for comfort... and in a brief OutOfCharacterMoment, she [[MotorMouth rapidly]] tells him how she's glad that he's not hurt, praises him for how brave he is, and thanks him for protecting her and the ''ʻohana''.''ʻohana''. Although that reaction ''is'' realistic of typical young girls in such situations, Lilo--who is anything ''but'' typical--would not ever do the MotorMouth part like in this story, and she already knows how bulletproof and brave her best friend is, so she wouldn't actually be ''that'' terribly concerned for Stitch's safety then.



* VagueAge: While Lilo is described as a little girl in chapter one and still acts as naïve as we know her to be in the franchise, Nani mentions her getting "free room and board" in chapter two, suggesting that this fic might be taking place in Lilo's college years.

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* VagueAge: While Lilo is described as a little girl in chapter one and still acts as naïve as we know her to be in the franchise, Nani mentions her getting "free room and board" in chapter two, suggesting that this fic might be taking place in Lilo's college years.
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* DamnedByFaintPraise: When [[spoiler:Gantu]] asks Nani what she thought of his story, she replies, "It was…hmm…a novel approach. Something, er, unexpected."

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* DamnedByFaintPraise: When [[spoiler:Gantu]] asks Nani what she thought of his story, she replies, "It was…hmm…a was...hmm...a novel approach. Something, er, unexpected."



* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Leroy, who seems to have taken a very hard crash landing, gets convinced by Lilo to tell a rather romantic love story about Stitch and Angel. From there, Leroy starts to care about the ''ʻohana'', and they actually grow concerned for him. The main story shifts to the ''ʻohana'' trying to prove to the Grand Councilwoman that Leroy has redeemed himself and should stay with them on Earth.]]

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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Leroy, who seems to have taken a very hard crash landing, gets convinced by Lilo to tell a rather romantic love story about Stitch and Angel. From there, Leroy starts to care about the ''ʻohana'', ''ʻohana'', and they actually grow concerned for him. The main story shifts to the ''ʻohana'' ''ʻohana'' trying to prove to the Grand Councilwoman that Leroy has redeemed himself and should stay with them on Earth.]]



** [[spoiler:Gantu's]] story, where he imagines himself as [[spoiler:"Supreme Commander" of the Galactic Federation finally capturing 626]]. The ''ʻohana'' [[SarcasmMode really]] ''[[SarcasmMode love]]'' this tale he spins.

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** [[spoiler:Gantu's]] story, where he imagines himself as [[spoiler:"Supreme Commander" of the Galactic Federation finally capturing 626]]. The ''ʻohana'' ''ʻohana'' [[SarcasmMode really]] ''[[SarcasmMode love]]'' this tale he spins.



** There are a couple minor [=OoC=] issues, however. One is that [[spoiler:the Grand Councilwoman]] calls Stitch "Experiment 626" when [[spoiler:she's]] actually been calling him "Stitch" in the franchise ever since the end of [[WesternAnimation/LiloAndStitch the original film]]. The other is that when Lilo gets scared after the "werewolf ninjas" disrupt the party, hugs Stitch for comfort... and in a brief OutOfCharacterMoment, she [[MotorMouth rapidly]] tells him how she's glad that he's not hurt, praises him for how brave he is, and thanks him for protecting her and the ''ʻohana''. Although that reaction ''is'' realistic of typical young girls in such situations, Lilo--who is anything ''but'' typical--would not ever do the MotorMouth part like in this story, and she already knows how bulletproof and brave her best friend is, so she wouldn't actually be ''that'' terribly concerned for Stitch's safety then.

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** There are a couple minor [=OoC=] issues, however. One is that [[spoiler:the Grand Councilwoman]] calls Stitch "Experiment 626" when [[spoiler:she's]] actually been calling him "Stitch" in the franchise ever since the end of [[WesternAnimation/LiloAndStitch the original film]]. The other is that when Lilo gets scared after the "werewolf ninjas" disrupt the party, hugs Stitch for comfort... and in a brief OutOfCharacterMoment, she [[MotorMouth rapidly]] tells him how she's glad that he's not hurt, praises him for how brave he is, and thanks him for protecting her and the ''ʻohana''.''ʻohana''. Although that reaction ''is'' realistic of typical young girls in such situations, Lilo--who is anything ''but'' typical--would not ever do the MotorMouth part like in this story, and she already knows how bulletproof and brave her best friend is, so she wouldn't actually be ''that'' terribly concerned for Stitch's safety then.



-->"Blech!" spat Bonnie. "Ugh, come on! That was so…treacly. Yuck, feel like I need to scrape off all that sugar and honey…" she trailed off while swinging a leg over her log. She made a show of scratching at her green fur, rubbing off the happiness of [[spoiler:Leroy's]] ending.

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-->"Blech!" spat Bonnie. "Ugh, come on! That was so…treacly. so...treacly. Yuck, feel like I need to scrape off all that sugar and honey…" honey..." she trailed off while swinging a leg over her log. She made a show of scratching at her green fur, rubbing off the happiness of [[spoiler:Leroy's]] ending.



* VagueAge: While Lilo is described as a little girl in chapter one and still acts as naïve as we know her to be in the franchise, Nani mentions her getting "free room and board" in chapter two, suggesting that this fic might be taking place in Lilo's college years.

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* VagueAge: While Lilo is described as a little girl in chapter one and still acts as naïve as we know her to be in the franchise, Nani mentions her getting "free room and board" in chapter two, suggesting that this fic might be taking place in Lilo's college years.
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# '''Bonnie (149)''': What if 626 was a renegade who stole from the United Galactic Federation?
# '''[[spoiler:Leroy[[note]]In this fic, he is also numbered 629.[[/note]]]]''': What if 626 was a successful CEO of a legitimate company he and Jumba started [[spoiler:who then falls in love with one of their investors, Angel]]?

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# '''Bonnie (149)''': (X-149)''': What if 626 was a renegade who stole from the United Galactic Federation?
# '''[[spoiler:Leroy[[note]]In '''[[spoiler:Leroy (X-629)[[note]]At the time this fic, he is also story was written, Leroy was not officially numbered 629.629 yet.[[/note]]]]''': What if 626 was a successful CEO of a legitimate company he and Jumba started [[spoiler:who then falls in love with one of their investors, Angel]]?



# '''Slushy (523)''': What if 626 ended up on an ice planet [[spoiler:ruled by 523, who was believed to have been long lost]]?
# '''Heckler (322)''': What if 626 was a successful pod racer [[spoiler:whose career seems to end after he is blinded in an accident]]?

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# '''Slushy (523)''': (X-523)''': What if 626 ended up on an ice planet [[spoiler:ruled by 523, who was believed to have been long lost]]?
# '''Heckler (322)''': (X-322)''': What if 626 was a successful pod racer [[spoiler:whose career seems to end after he is blinded in an accident]]?



# '''[[spoiler:Grand Councilwoman]]''': What if[[spoiler:--nah, she doesn't tell one. '''Cobra Bubbles''' instead tells a story about "What if 626 was forced to work for the Galactic Federation for his freedom by hunting down 629?"]]

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# '''[[spoiler:Grand Councilwoman]]''': What if[[spoiler:--nah, she doesn't tell one. '''Cobra Bubbles''' instead tells a story about "What if 626 was forced to work for the Galactic Federation for his freedom by hunting down 629?"]]X-629?"]]
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* CallBack: Nani's story is based on the "Super Stitch" moment seen in the ending montage of [[Disney/LiloAndStitch the first film]]. She even puts on the same red blanket as a cape and a lacy bra as a headpiece (she couldn't find the exact one he used before).

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* CallBack: Nani's story is based on the "Super Stitch" moment seen in the ending montage of [[Disney/LiloAndStitch [[WesternAnimation/LiloAndStitch the first film]]. She even puts on the same red blanket as a cape and a lacy bra as a headpiece (she couldn't find the exact one he used before).



* DeadFic: Last updated in April 2016, but the author would abandon it in favor of writing ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'' fics since. He last updated one of his stories on Website/FanFictionDotNet since May 2018.

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* DeadFic: Last updated in April 2016, but the author would abandon it in favor of writing ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}}'' fics since. He last updated one of his stories on Website/FanFictionDotNet since May 2018.



** There are a couple minor [=OoC=] issues, however. One is that [[spoiler:the Grand Councilwoman]] calls Stitch "Experiment 626" when [[spoiler:she's]] actually been calling him "Stitch" in the franchise ever since the end of [[Disney/LiloAndStitch the original film]]. The other is that when Lilo gets scared after the "werewolf ninjas" disrupt the party, hugs Stitch for comfort... and in a brief OutOfCharacterMoment, she [[MotorMouth rapidly]] tells him how she's glad that he's not hurt, praises him for how brave he is, and thanks him for protecting her and the ''ʻohana''. Although that reaction ''is'' realistic of typical young girls in such situations, Lilo--who is anything ''but'' typical--would not ever do the MotorMouth part like in this story, and she already knows how bulletproof and brave her best friend is, so she wouldn't actually be ''that'' terribly concerned for Stitch's safety then.

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** There are a couple minor [=OoC=] issues, however. One is that [[spoiler:the Grand Councilwoman]] calls Stitch "Experiment 626" when [[spoiler:she's]] actually been calling him "Stitch" in the franchise ever since the end of [[Disney/LiloAndStitch [[WesternAnimation/LiloAndStitch the original film]]. The other is that when Lilo gets scared after the "werewolf ninjas" disrupt the party, hugs Stitch for comfort... and in a brief OutOfCharacterMoment, she [[MotorMouth rapidly]] tells him how she's glad that he's not hurt, praises him for how brave he is, and thanks him for protecting her and the ''ʻohana''. Although that reaction ''is'' realistic of typical young girls in such situations, Lilo--who is anything ''but'' typical--would not ever do the MotorMouth part like in this story, and she already knows how bulletproof and brave her best friend is, so she wouldn't actually be ''that'' terribly concerned for Stitch's safety then.



* ScheduleSlip: The story was updated on a monthly basis, but the author missed March 2016 and uploaded the ninth chapter in April. It hasn't been updated since, especially when the author became dedicated to a ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'' fic he started later that same month. He has been doing nothing but ''Zootopia'' fics ever since, despite stating at one point that he would eventually return to ''The Fire of Futures Past'', and later has gone into hiatus due to his personal life getting in the way.

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* ScheduleSlip: The story was updated on a monthly basis, but the author missed March 2016 and uploaded the ninth chapter in April. It hasn't been updated since, especially when the author became dedicated to a ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}}'' fic he started later that same month. He has been doing nothing but ''Zootopia'' fics ever since, despite stating at one point that he would eventually return to ''The Fire of Futures Past'', and later has gone into hiatus due to his personal life getting in the way.
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* DeadFic: Last updated in April 2016, but the author would abandon it in favor of writing ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'' fics since. He has also been on hiatus from Website/FanFictionDotNet since November 2017.

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* DeadFic: Last updated in April 2016, but the author would abandon it in favor of writing ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'' fics since. He has also been last updated one of his stories on hiatus from Website/FanFictionDotNet since November 2017.May 2018.



* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Leroy, who seems to have taken a very hard crash landing, gets convinced by Lilo to tell a rather romantic love story about Stitch and Angel. From there, Leroy starts to care about the ''[='=]ohana'', and they actually grow concerned for him. The main story shifts to the ''[='=]ohana'' trying to prove to the Grand Councilwoman that Leroy has redeemed himself and should stay with them on Earth.]]

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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Leroy, who seems to have taken a very hard crash landing, gets convinced by Lilo to tell a rather romantic love story about Stitch and Angel. From there, Leroy starts to care about the ''[='=]ohana'', ''ʻohana'', and they actually grow concerned for him. The main story shifts to the ''[='=]ohana'' ''ʻohana'' trying to prove to the Grand Councilwoman that Leroy has redeemed himself and should stay with them on Earth.]]



** [[spoiler:Gantu's]] story, where he imagines himself as [[spoiler:"Supreme Commander" of the Galactic Federation finally capturing 626]]. The ''[='=]ohana'' [[SarcasmMode really]] ''[[SarcasmMode love]]'' this tale he spins.

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** [[spoiler:Gantu's]] story, where he imagines himself as [[spoiler:"Supreme Commander" of the Galactic Federation finally capturing 626]]. The ''[='=]ohana'' ''ʻohana'' [[SarcasmMode really]] ''[[SarcasmMode love]]'' this tale he spins.
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# '''Jumba''': What if 626 [[spoiler:became a giant just after his creation]]?

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# '''Jumba''': What if 626 [[spoiler:became a giant just after his creation]]?creation]]? (It should be noted that [[spoiler:this was written well before ''Animation/StitchAndAi''[='=]s release]].)

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