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A ''LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom'' fanfic, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27863962/chapters/68222430 The Blue House, Wanalei, Oswary Isles]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/bleucheese/pseuds/bleucheese bleucheese]].
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A ''LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom'' ''Literature/MyNextLifeAsAVillainessAllRoutesLeadToDoom'' fanfic, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27863962/chapters/68222430 The Blue House, Wanalei, Oswary Isles]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/bleucheese/pseuds/bleucheese bleucheese]].
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Dewicking Ill Boy
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Everyone reacts with horror to the revelation of what the Ministry was using the children for. Alan especially, since it is likely [[spoiler: he was spliced into his bastard half-brother's body[[note]]In the original material, Alan was an IllBoy, but why and how he returned to normal health has not been explained. This presents a scenario that can be interpreted as a successful case of Sirius and Raphael's ordeal.[[/note]]]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Everyone reacts with horror to the revelation of what the Ministry was using the children for. Alan especially, since it is likely [[spoiler: he was spliced into his bastard half-brother's body[[note]]In the original material, Alan was an IllBoy, ill boy, but why and how he returned to normal health has not been explained. This presents a scenario that can be interpreted as a successful case of Sirius and Raphael's ordeal.[[/note]]]].
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** While it may have been within his power to exile his former fiancée, Jeord can't convince anyone that Maria is a suitable spouse for a potential heir to the throne, and he is exiled himself.
** Katarina's exile was not because she had been bullying a commoner, but because of court politics. Maria's subsequent banishment for marrying a prince without permission is partially to placate Katarina's family, who are offended that a commoner was used as justification for the banishment of a Duke's daughter.
** While Raphael can perfectly mimic Jeord's appearance, he doesn't have Jeord's memories so Nicol realizes he's an imposter almost immediately.
** Jeord's love for the new and interesting Maria fades once they are married. While he is still protective of her, he is not faithful...Or he wouldn't be if any of the women he chases would give him the time of day.
** While it may have been within his power to exile his former fiancée, Jeord can't convince anyone that Maria is a suitable spouse for a potential heir to the throne, and he is exiled himself.
** Katarina's exile was not because she had been bullying a commoner, but because of court politics. Maria's subsequent banishment for marrying a prince without permission is partially to placate Katarina's family, who are offended that a commoner was used as justification for the banishment of a Duke's daughter.
** While Raphael can perfectly mimic Jeord's appearance, he doesn't have Jeord's memories so Nicol realizes he's an imposter almost immediately.
** Jeord's love for the new and interesting Maria fades once they are married. While he is still protective of her, he is not faithful...Or he wouldn't be if any of the women he chases would give him the time of day.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Jeord is implied to be this. Maria and Nicol are the only people who really seem to care about him and Nicol admits to being disgusted with Jeord's treatment of Katarina.
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* RealityEnsues: While it may have been within his power to exile his former fiancée, Jeord can't convince anyone that Maria is a suitable spouse for a potential heir to the throne, and he is exiled himself.
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* RealityEnsues: SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** While it may have been within his power to exile his former fiancée, Jeord can't convince anyone that Maria is a suitable spouse for a potential heir to the throne, and he is exiled himself.
** While it may have been within his power to exile his former fiancée, Jeord can't convince anyone that Maria is a suitable spouse for a potential heir to the throne, and he is exiled himself.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Jeord is implied to be this. Maria and Nicol are the only people who really seem to care about him and Nicol admits to being disgusted with Jeord's treatment of Katarina.
* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: Jeord somehow managed to win the love of both Katarina and Maria during his lifetime. Even Jeord's best friend thinks that being the object of Jeord's affections is punishment enough for any sins Maria may have committed getting involved with an engaged man.
* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: Jeord somehow managed to win the love of both Katarina and Maria during his lifetime. Even Jeord's best friend thinks that being the object of Jeord's affections is punishment enough for any sins Maria may have committed getting involved with an engaged man.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Everyone reacts with horror to the revelation of what the Ministry was using the children for. Alan especially, since it is likely [[spoiler: he was spliced into his bastard half-brother's body[[note]]In the original material, Alan was an IllBoy, but why and how he returned to normal health has not been explained. This presents a scenario that can be interpreted as a successful case of [[spoiler:Sirius and Raphael]]'s ordeal.[[/note]]]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Everyone reacts with horror to the revelation of what the Ministry was using the children for. Alan especially, since it is likely [[spoiler: he was spliced into his bastard half-brother's body[[note]]In the original material, Alan was an IllBoy, but why and how he returned to normal health has not been explained. This presents a scenario that can be interpreted as a successful case of [[spoiler:Sirius Sirius and Raphael]]'s Raphael's ordeal.[[/note]]]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Everyone reacts with horror to the revelation of what the Ministry was using the children for. Alan especially, since it is likely [[spoiler: he was spliced into his bastard half-brother's body]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Everyone reacts with horror to the revelation of what the Ministry was using the children for. Alan especially, since it is likely [[spoiler: he was spliced into his bastard half-brother's body]].body[[note]]In the original material, Alan was an IllBoy, but why and how he returned to normal health has not been explained. This presents a scenario that can be interpreted as a successful case of [[spoiler:Sirius and Raphael]]'s ordeal.[[/note]]]].
