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* AuthorAvatar: Believe it or not, a vast majority of the Guardians are this, going from the similar names of the characters to the usernames of the people involved during the creation of the work.
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* AuthorAvatar: Believe it or not, a vast majority The Guardians themselves are this, consisting of people who have sent their OCs to the author (whose avatar is Psyche). This is compounded by the reviewers, a good chunk of them consisting of the people who have submitted their characters, referring to their characters in the first person. Many of them have similar names and/or usernames to the Guardians are this, going from the similar names of the characters to the usernames of the people involved during the creation of the work.themselves.
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Just as she's about to die, Pit is released and it turns out she's his guardian. He takes over and fends Marth off.
It gets more convoluted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, with chapters dedicated to their awakening. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though. Due to the premise, the fic is very OC-heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
It gets more convoluted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, with chapters dedicated to their awakening. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though. Due to the premise, the fic is very OC-heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
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Just as she's about to die, Pit is released and it turns out she's his guardian. Guardian. He takes over and fends Marth off.off before the two of them escape. And thus begins the awakening of the Smashers and their bonding with their respective Guardians.
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Each Smasher has their own Guardian, with chapters dedicated to their awakening. As the story progresses, more of the Guardians awaken and bond with their Smashers, culminating in a small group slowly turning into a powerful united front.
It gets more convoluted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, with chapters dedicated to their awakening. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though. Due to the premise, the fic is very OC-heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
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Each Smasher has their own Guardian, with chapters dedicated to their awakening. As the story progresses, more of the Guardians awaken and bond with their Smashers, culminating in a small group slowly turning into a powerful united front.
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** BadassNormal: Cameron, Nask, Golfer, Squall and Ridere before being possessed with their smashers.
** BadassLongcoat: Squall, Chester and Eclipse, for some examples.
** BadassBookworm: Cimar. Oh dear LORD, Cimar.
** TookALevelInBadass: EVERY SINGLE GUARDIAN after possession.
** BadassLongcoat: Squall, Chester and Eclipse, for some examples.
** BadassBookworm: Cimar. Oh dear LORD, Cimar.
** TookALevelInBadass: EVERY SINGLE GUARDIAN after possession.
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** BadassNormal: Cameron, Nask, Golfer, Squall Squall, and Ridere before being possessed with their smashers.
** BadassLongcoat: Squall,Chester Chester, and Eclipse, for some examples.
Eclipse.
** BadassBookworm:Cimar. Oh dear LORD, Cimar.
** TookALevelInBadass:EVERY SINGLE GUARDIAN Every Guardian after possession.possession.
** BadassLongcoat: Squall,
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** TookALevelInBadass:
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* BigFuckingSword: Ragnell, of course!
* BigFuckingGun: While some guardians have some type of gun, KOR is noted to carry the biggest ones, as he has been seen with a minigun and a large machine gun (though he switches for a sniper later)
* BigFuckingGun: While some guardians have some type of gun, KOR is noted to carry the biggest ones, as he has been seen with a minigun and a large machine gun (though he switches for a sniper later)
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* BigFuckingSword: Ragnell, of course!
Ragnell.
* BigFuckingGun: While some guardians have some type of gun, KOR is noted to carry the biggest ones, as he has been seen with a minigun and a large machine gun (though he switches for a sniperlater)later).
* BigFuckingGun: While some guardians have some type of gun, KOR is noted to carry the biggest ones, as he has been seen with a minigun and a large machine gun (though he switches for a sniper
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* DesperationAttack: Each one of the guardians have one. And it's also different from the smashers in various ways.
* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation as to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu.
Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.
* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation as to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu.
Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.
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* DesperationAttack: Each one of the guardians have has one. And it's also different from the smashers Smashers in various ways.
* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation as to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu.
Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.ways.
* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation as to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu.
Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.
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The premise of the story is that after [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl the Subspace Emissary]], Tabuu is (somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where soulless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
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The premise of the story is that after [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl the Subspace Emissary]], Tabuu is (somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where soulless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
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The premise of the story is that after [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl the Subspace Emissary]], Tabuu is (somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas (Just roll with it...) for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where soulless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
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The premise of the story is that after [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl the Subspace Emissary]], Tabuu is (somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas (Just roll with it...) for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where soulless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
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It gets more convulted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, with chapters dedicated to their awakening. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though. Due to the premise, the fic is very OC heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
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It gets more convulted convoluted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, with chapters dedicated to their awakening. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though. Due to the premise, the fic is very OC heavy, OC-heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
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* ActorAllusion: Ness and Kirby are awakened at the same time and are bonded to a group of twins. It's subtle, but it's a nod to both character sharing Creator/MakikoOhmoto as their Japanese VA.
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* ActorAllusion: Ness and Kirby are awakened at the same time and are bonded to a group of twins. It's subtle, but it's a nod to both character characters sharing Creator/MakikoOhmoto as their Japanese VA.
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* ActorAllusion: Ness and Kirby are awakened at the same time and are bonded to a group of twins. It's subtle, but it's a nod to both character sharing Creator/MakikoOhmoto as their Japanese VA.
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* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation as to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu. Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.
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* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation as to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu.
Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that'sit.it.
* {{Dystopia}}: The scenery of the fanfic matches that of YA dystopia novels, but they're applied to the worlds affiliated with the Super Smash Bros.
Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's
* {{Dystopia}}: The scenery of the fanfic matches that of YA dystopia novels, but they're applied to the worlds affiliated with the Super Smash Bros.
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"[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5738295/27/Super_Smash_Brothers_Guardians_Arise Guardians Arise]]" is a ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' fanfic written by {{PitFTW}}. It was released on February 10, 2010, and finished on April 19, 2012.
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"[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5738295/27/Super_Smash_Brothers_Guardians_Arise Guardians Arise]]" is a ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' fanfic written by {{PitFTW}}.[=PitFTW=]. It was released on February 10, 2010, and finished on April 19, 2012.
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* {{Sequel}}: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story. '''WARNING: READING THE SEQUEL HAVE MEANT YOU HAVE KNOWN AND READ THE FIRST STORY, SO THE THINGS RELATED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY WILL BE UNMARKED'''
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* {{Sequel}}: A sequel sequel, ''The Awakening'', is now in progress.released. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story. '''WARNING: READING THE SEQUEL HAVE MEANT YOU HAVE KNOWN AND READ THE FIRST STORY, SO THE THINGS RELATED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY WILL BE UNMARKED'''here]], but as of 2023, it hasn't been updated in nearly a decade.
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A group of more than five is not a Five Man Band.
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* FiveManBand: The 'Main' characters, in order of screentime.
** TheHero: Rinku/Link
** TheLancer: Heather/Wolf
** TheSmartGuy: Cimar/Zelda
** TheBigGuy: Cam/Ike, but they aren't stupid, and they are most DEFINITELY one of the most dangerous.
** TheChick: Psyche/Pit, but of the ActionGirl variety
** SixthRanger: Heather/Wolf [[spoiler:Until her Blood Contract makes her go evil]]
** TeamPet: Pikana/Pikachu, but don't say it to her face.
** TheHero: Rinku/Link
** TheLancer: Heather/Wolf
** TheSmartGuy: Cimar/Zelda
** TheBigGuy: Cam/Ike, but they aren't stupid, and they are most DEFINITELY one of the most dangerous.
** TheChick: Psyche/Pit, but of the ActionGirl variety
** SixthRanger: Heather/Wolf [[spoiler:Until her Blood Contract makes her go evil]]
** TeamPet: Pikana/Pikachu, but don't say it to her face.
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* AuthorAvatar: Believe it or not, a vast majority of the Guardians are this, going from the similar names of the characters to the usernames of the people involved during the creation of the work.
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The premise of the story is that after [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl the Subspace Emissary]], Tabuu is (somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls, and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas (Just roll with it...) for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where souless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
Just as she's about to die, Pit is released and it turns out she's his guardian. He takes over, and fends Marth off.
It gets more convulted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, and EACH HAS AT LEAST A THIRD OF A CHAPTER DEDICATED TO THEM. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though. Due to the premise, the fic is very OC heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
Just as she's about to die, Pit is released and it turns out she's his guardian. He takes over, and fends Marth off.
It gets more convulted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, and EACH HAS AT LEAST A THIRD OF A CHAPTER DEDICATED TO THEM. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though. Due to the premise, the fic is very OC heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
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The premise of the story is that after [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl the Subspace Emissary]], Tabuu is (somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls, souls and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas (Just roll with it...) for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where souless soulless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
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Just as she's about to die, Pit is released and it turns out she's his guardian. He takesover, over and fends Marth off.
It gets more convulted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian,and EACH HAS AT LEAST A THIRD OF A CHAPTER DEDICATED TO THEM.with chapters dedicated to their awakening. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though. Due to the premise, the fic is very OC heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
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Just as she's about to die, Pit is released and it turns out she's his guardian. He takes
It gets more convulted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian,
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Psyche and Pit started off basically bickering at each other. As the story progresses, they soften up and start acting more like partners.
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Psyche and Pit started off basically bickering at each other. As the story progresses, they soften up and start acting more like partners.
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* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu. Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.
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* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation as to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu. Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Mah explains to Golfer that the slave humans are so mistreated by Tabuu, that most think death are the best thing that could happen to them.
* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out.
* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Mah explains to Golfer that the slave humans are so mistreated by Tabuu, that most think death are is the best thing that could happen to them.
* FreudianTrio:There Many trios are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out.
* FreudianTrio:
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Link keeps saying Zelda is not his girlfriend, while Zelda keeps refusing to admit she has feelings for Link in the beggining of the story.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Link keeps saying Zelda is not his girlfriend, while Zelda keeps refusing to admit she has feelings for Link in at the beggining beginning of the story.
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"[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5738295/27/Super_Smash_Brothers_Guardians_Arise Guardians Arise]]" is a ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' fanfic written by PitFTW. It was released on February 10, 2010, and finished on April 19, 2012.
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"[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5738295/27/Super_Smash_Brothers_Guardians_Arise Guardians Arise]]" is a ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' fanfic written by PitFTW.{{PitFTW}}. It was released on February 10, 2010, and finished on April 19, 2012.
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Wanted to keep it a bit more mature and reasonable, rather than written by someone gushing over it too much,
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"[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5738295/27/Super_Smash_Brothers_Guardians_Arise Guardians Arise]]" is a relatively popular ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' fanfic notable for two main things: [[LoadsandLoadsofCharacters Many Characters]], and MUCH awesome.
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"[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5738295/27/Super_Smash_Brothers_Guardians_Arise Guardians Arise]]" is a relatively popular ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' fanfic notable for two main things: [[LoadsandLoadsofCharacters Many Characters]], written by PitFTW. It was released on February 10, 2010, and MUCH awesome.
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"[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5738295/27/Super_Smash_Brothers_Guardians_Arise Guardians Arise]]" is a relatively popular Super Smash Brothers fanfic notable for two main things: [[LoadsandLoadsofCharacters Many Characters]], and MUCH awesome.
The premise of the story is that after the Subspace Emissary, Tabuu is (Somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls, and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas (Just roll with it...) for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where souless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
The premise of the story is that after the Subspace Emissary, Tabuu is (Somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls, and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas (Just roll with it...) for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where souless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
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"[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5738295/27/Super_Smash_Brothers_Guardians_Arise Guardians Arise]]" is a relatively popular Super Smash Brothers ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' fanfic notable for two main things: [[LoadsandLoadsofCharacters Many Characters]], and MUCH awesome.
The premise of the story is that after [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl the SubspaceEmissary, Emissary]], Tabuu is (Somehow, (somehow, it's never explained and the fact is Lampshaded by Marth and Ike fairly quickly) [[NotQuiteDead not actually dead]], and swiftly defeats all of the smashers. Master Hand manages to save their souls, and locks them in jars as balls of inert gas (Just roll with it...) for them to eventually be released and occupy a compatible body at some point in the future. 100 years later, enter [[AuthorAvatar Psyche]] and Austin, a pair of slaves in Tabuu's new regime, where souless puppets of the Smasher's bodies are now his feared elite soldiers. They find Master Hand's diary, when Marth comes upon them and attacks, killing Austin as Psyche runs like hell.
The premise of the story is that after [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl the Subspace
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** SixthRanger: Heather/Wolf [[spoiler: Until her Blood Contract makes her go evil]]
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** SixthRanger: Heather/Wolf [[spoiler: Until [[spoiler:Until her Blood Contract makes her go evil]]
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* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out. Bingo. Many Freudian Trios.
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* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out. Bingo. Many Freudian Trios.
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* PutOnABus: You'd think it happens to a majority of the Non-Main Guardians, who disappear for chapters and then reappear for small but important scenes. [[spoiler: Example: Sam doesn't appear for a few chapters except as small bits of no importance, then mentions the missing Guardians and goes to find them, needing to be rescued himself later.]]
* ReverseTrap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
** Could be a SweetPollyOliver rather than a ReverseTrap since she used her helmet to conceal her identity.
* Sequel: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story. '''WARNING: READING THE SEQUEL HAVE MEANT YOU HAVE KNOWN AND READ THE FIRST STORY, SO THE THINGS RELATED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY WILL BE UNMARKED'''
* ReverseTrap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
** Could be a SweetPollyOliver rather than a ReverseTrap since she used her helmet to conceal her identity.
* Sequel: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story. '''WARNING: READING THE SEQUEL HAVE MEANT YOU HAVE KNOWN AND READ THE FIRST STORY, SO THE THINGS RELATED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY WILL BE UNMARKED'''
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* PutOnABus: You'd think it happens to a majority of the Non-Main Guardians, who disappear for chapters and then reappear for small but important scenes. [[spoiler: Example: [[spoiler:Example: Sam doesn't appear for a few chapters except as small bits of no importance, then mentions the missing Guardians and goes to find them, needing to be rescued himself later.]]
*ReverseTrap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
** Could be a SweetPollyOliver rather than a ReverseTrap since she used her helmet to conceal her identity.
* Sequel:{{Sequel}}: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story. '''WARNING: READING THE SEQUEL HAVE MEANT YOU HAVE KNOWN AND READ THE FIRST STORY, SO THE THINGS RELATED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY WILL BE UNMARKED'''
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** Could be a SweetPollyOliver rather than a ReverseTrap since she used her helmet to conceal her identity.
* Sequel:
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* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out. Bingo. Many Freudian Trios
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* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out. Bingo. Many Freudian TriosSweetPollyOliver: Naskara, who at her first appearance used her helmet to conceal her identity.
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* ComedicRelief: Ridere all the way.
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* ComedicRelief: Ridere all the way.CapsLock: Heather has an entire rant filled with this in a certain chapter.
* MoodWhiplash: Happens at some occasions.
* PluckyComicRelief: Ridere all the way.
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* TearJerker: A lot of people's backstories, and a lot of smasher's lives after getting turned into gas (Wifes dead, etc.), but Ike and Cam's go into...a little TOO MUCH detail.
** YMMV, as it is a bit cliche.
** YMMV, as it is a bit cliche.
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It gets more convulted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, and EACH HAS AT LEAST A THIRD OF A CHAPTER DEDICATED TO THEM. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though.
Due to the premise, the fic is very OC heavy, so it's not to everyone's tastes.
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It gets more convulted from there. Each smasher has its own guardian, and EACH HAS AT LEAST A THIRD OF A CHAPTER DEDICATED TO THEM. There is a small group that you could call the 'Main' characters, though.
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* Aww,Look!TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Psyche and Pit started off basically bickering at each other. As the story progresses, they soften up and start acting more like partners.
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* Aww,Look!TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Heather was to be hanged for crimes such as treason, attempted murder and ''littering''.
* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Psyche and Pit started off basically bickering at each other. As the story progresses, they soften up and start acting more like partners.
* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Psyche and Pit started off basically bickering at each other. As the story progresses, they soften up and start acting more like partners.
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** BadassLongcoat: Many a male character has one
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** BadassLongcoat: Many a male character has oneSquall, Chester and Eclipse, for some examples.
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** TookALevelInBadass: EVERY SINGLE GUARDIAN after possession
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** TookALevelInBadass: EVERY SINGLE GUARDIAN after possessionpossession.
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** CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Golfer
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** CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: GolferGolfer.
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* BFG: While some guardians have some type of gun, Kor is noted to carry the biggest ones, as he has been seen with a minigun and a large machine gun (though he switches for a sniper later)
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* BFG: BigFuckingGun: While some guardians have some type of gun, Kor KOR is noted to carry the biggest ones, as he has been seen with a minigun and a large machine gun (though he switches for a sniper later)
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* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out. Bingo. Many Freudian Trios
* Kleptomaniac?: Nao. He stole those pages.
* PutonABus: You'd think it happens to a majority of the Non-Main Guardians, who disappear for chapters and then reappear for small but important scenes. [[spoiler: Example: Sam doesn't appear for a few chapters except as small bits of no importance, then mentions the missing Guardians and goes to find them, needing to be rescued himself later.]]
* Kleptomaniac?: Nao. He stole those pages.
* PutonABus: You'd think it happens to a majority of the Non-Main Guardians, who disappear for chapters and then reappear for small but important scenes. [[spoiler: Example: Sam doesn't appear for a few chapters except as small bits of no importance, then mentions the missing Guardians and goes to find them, needing to be rescued himself later.]]
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* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out. Bingo. Many Freudian Trios
Trios.
*Kleptomaniac?: KleptomaniacHero: Nao. He stole those pages.
pages from the diary.
*PutonABus: OurZombiesAreDifferent: Chester and to an extent, KOR.
* PutOnABus: You'd think it happens to a majority of the Non-Main Guardians, who disappear for chapters and then reappear for small but important scenes. [[spoiler: Example: Sam doesn't appear for a few chapters except as small bits of no importance, then mentions the missing Guardians and goes to find them, needing to be rescued himself later.]]
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* PutOnABus: You'd think it happens to a majority of the Non-Main Guardians, who disappear for chapters and then reappear for small but important scenes. [[spoiler: Example: Sam doesn't appear for a few chapters except as small bits of no importance, then mentions the missing Guardians and goes to find them, needing to be rescued himself later.]]
** Could be a SweetPollyOliver rather than a ReverseTrap since she used her helmet to conceal her identity.
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* WhatTheHellHero?: Golfer is on the recieving end of this over the course of MULTIPLE CHAPTERS. Cam being the main source of pain.
* WhyWontYouDie?: Cam is the living embodiment of this. Ike sums it up best in Chapter 27: "Basically kid, you're one walking anti-death machine"
* Why two?: Cam, who carries two different swords even though he himself only uses one of the two.
* WhyWontYouDie?: Cam is the living embodiment of this. Ike sums it up best in Chapter 27: "Basically kid, you're one walking anti-death machine"
* Why two?: Cam, who carries two different swords even though he himself only uses one of the two.
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* WhatTheHellHero?: WhatTheHellHero: Golfer is on the recieving end of this over the course of MULTIPLE CHAPTERS. Cam being the main source of pain.
*WhyWontYouDie?: WhyWontYouDie: Cam is the living embodiment of this. Ike sums it up best in Chapter 27: "Basically kid, you're one walking anti-death machine"
* Why two?: Cam, who carries two different swords even though he himself only uses one of the two.machine"
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* Why two?: Cam, who carries two different swords even though he himself only uses one of the two.
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* AerithAndBob: Applies to both Smashers and Guardians. Some have common names like Joe, Sam, Anna (before changing her name to Pikana) and Heather; while others have names like Squall, Golfer, Naskara and Wrath.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Link keeps saying Zelda is not his girlfriend, while Zelda keeps refusing to admit she has feelings for Link in the beggining of the story.
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* AnimeHair: Some of the guardians' hair, as well as some of the smashers.
* AttemptedRape: Almost happens to Mah. Fortunately, she managed to defend herself.
* Aww,Look!TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Psyche and Pit started off basically bickering at each other. As the story progresses, they soften up and start acting more like partners.
* AttemptedRape: Almost happens to Mah. Fortunately, she managed to defend herself.
* Aww,Look!TheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Psyche and Pit started off basically bickering at each other. As the story progresses, they soften up and start acting more like partners.
* BrattyHalfPint: Picho and Pichn are this to Rinku and Cimar. But especially Rinku.
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* Desperation Attack: Each one of the guardians have one. And it's also different from the smashers in various ways.
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* Desperation Attack: DesperationAttack: Each one of the guardians have one. And it's also different from the smashers in various ways.ways.
* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu. Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.
* DeusExMachina: There isn't really that much of an explanation to why Pikana was transformed into a Pikachu. Pikachu says that she was blessed by Arceus, but that's it.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Mah explains to Golfer that the slave humans are so mistreated by Tabuu, that most think death are the best thing that could happen to them.
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* ComedicRelief: Ridere all the way.
* FreudianTrio: There are many trios, most introduced in the same chapter, and balance each other out. Bingo. Many Freudian Trios
* Kleptomaniac?: Nao. He stole those pages.
* Kleptomaniac?: Nao. He stole those pages.
* ReverseTrap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
* TriggerHappy: Aly, who seems to waste so much Ammo she might as well be the military.
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* Kleptomaniac?: Nao. He stole those pages.
* ComedicRelief: Ridere all the way.
* ReverseTrap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
* TriggerHappy: Aly, who seems to waste so much Ammo she might as well be the military.
* ComedicRelief: Ridere all the way.
* ReverseTrap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
* TriggerHappy: Aly, who seems to waste so much Ammo she might as well be the military.
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* Comedic Relief: Ridere all the way.
* Reverse Trap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
* Trigger Happy: Aly, who seems to waste so much Ammo she might as well be the military.
* Reverse Trap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
* Trigger Happy: Aly, who seems to waste so much Ammo she might as well be the military.
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* Comedic Relief: ComedicRelief: Ridere all the way.
*Reverse Trap: ReverseTrap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
*Trigger Happy: TriggerHappy: Aly, who seems to waste so much Ammo she might as well be the military.
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* PutonABus: You'd think it happens to a majority of the Non-Main Guardians, who disappear for chapters and then reappear for small but important scenes. [[spoiler: Example: Sam doesn't appear for a few chapters except as small bits of no importance, then mentions the missing Guardians and goes to find them, needing to be rescued himself later.]]
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* Desperation Attack: Each one of the guardians have one. And it's also different from the smashers in various ways.
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* [[Sequel]]: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story. '''WARNING: READING THE SEQUEL HAVE MEANT YOU HAVE KNOWN AND READ THE FIRST STORY, SO THE THINGS RELATED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY WILL BE UNMARKED'''
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* [[Sequel]]: Sequel: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story. '''WARNING: READING THE SEQUEL HAVE MEANT YOU HAVE KNOWN AND READ THE FIRST STORY, SO THE THINGS RELATED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY WILL BE UNMARKED'''
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* Sequel: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story.
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* Sequel: [[Sequel]]: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story. '''WARNING: READING THE SEQUEL HAVE MEANT YOU HAVE KNOWN AND READ THE FIRST STORY, SO THE THINGS RELATED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY WILL BE UNMARKED'''
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* Sequel: A sequel is now in progress. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8038446/1/Guardians_Arise_The_Awakening here.]] It takes place seven years after the story.
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* WhyWontYouDie?: Cam is the living embodiment of this. Ike sums it up best in Chapter 27: "Basically kid, you're one walking anti-death machine"
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* WhyWontYouDie?: Cam is the living embodiment of this. Ike sums it up best in Chapter 27: "Basically kid, you're one walking anti-death machine"machine"
*Kleptomaniac?: Nao. He stole those pages.
*Comedic Relief: Ridere all the way.
*Reverse Trap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
*Trigger Happy: Aly, who seems to waste so much Ammo she might as well be the military.
*Why two?: Cam, who carries two different swords even though he himself only uses one of the two.
*Kleptomaniac?: Nao. He stole those pages.
*Comedic Relief: Ridere all the way.
*Reverse Trap: Naskara, who at her first appearance looked to be a guy.
*Trigger Happy: Aly, who seems to waste so much Ammo she might as well be the military.
*Why two?: Cam, who carries two different swords even though he himself only uses one of the two.