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* ScrabbleBabble: Subverted - four of the girls play ''TabletopGame/{{Scrabble}}'' at Applejack's house at one point (Pinkie and Applejack are playing Go Fish in the same room), and both Sunset and Twilight play real words that they have to explain - Sunset's is "Alicorn", which she explains by pointing to Twilight, and Twilight's is "zax", which Rainbow Dash doesn't believe is real even after Applejack says she used one a while back. It's soon confirmed to be a type of cutting tool.
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* ScrabbleBabble: Subverted - four of the girls play ''TabletopGame/{{Scrabble}}'' at Applejack's house at one point (Pinkie and Applejack are playing Go Fish ''TabletopGame/GoFish'' in the same room), and both Sunset and Twilight play real words that they have to explain - Sunset's is "Alicorn", which she explains by pointing to Twilight, and Twilight's is "zax", which Rainbow Dash doesn't believe is real even after Applejack says she used one a while back. It's soon confirmed to be a type of cutting tool.
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* ScrabbleBabble: Subverted - four of the girls play Scrabble at Applejack's house at one point (Pinkie and Applejack are playing Go Fish in the same room), and both Sunset and Twilight play real words that they have to explain - Sunset's is "Alicorn", which she explains by pointing to Twilight, and Twilight's is "zax", which Rainbow Dash doesn't believe is real even after Applejack says she used one a while back. It's soon confirmed to be a type of cutting tool.
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* ScrabbleBabble: Subverted - four of the girls play Scrabble ''TabletopGame/{{Scrabble}}'' at Applejack's house at one point (Pinkie and Applejack are playing Go Fish in the same room), and both Sunset and Twilight play real words that they have to explain - Sunset's is "Alicorn", which she explains by pointing to Twilight, and Twilight's is "zax", which Rainbow Dash doesn't believe is real even after Applejack says she used one a while back. It's soon confirmed to be a type of cutting tool.
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* IllTimedSneeze: Just as Sunset's about to tell the others about Twilight's current state, Twilight sneezes from inside Sunset's backpack, blowing her cover.
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* OhCrap: Sunset's reaction to Twilight's SneezeOfDoom IllTimedSneeze is [[UnusualEuphemism "Oh, Horseapples..."]]
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* SimpleSolutionWontWork: When Twilight frets over the fact that the portal's mana resonation coil broke and she had used her last one in an experiment, Rainbow Dash half-heartedly asks why she can't just remove it and use it anyway. Twilight retorts that the coil is a delicate piece of equipment that synchronizes with whatever it's installed into, and that removing one and placing it in another machine could have catastrophic results.
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* CallBack: Just before entering the Mirror Portal, Twilight warns Spike [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E20ItsAboutTime not to overdo it on ice cream again]].
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* ItWasWithYouAllAlong: Late in the story, Flash's father mentions an incident where his wife spent an hour looking for her glasses, only to find them in her pocket.
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[[caption-width-right:230:Sunset's Little Twilight]]
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/279135/sunsets-little-twilight Sunset's Little Twilight]] is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls My Little Pony: Equestria Girls]] fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/PoisonClaw [=PoisonClaw=]]].
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/279135/sunsets-little-twilight Sunset's Little Twilight]] is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls My Little Pony: Equestria Girls]] fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/PoisonClaw [=PoisonClaw=]]].
[=PoisonClaw=]]]. It is complete.
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* ScrabbleBabble: Subverted - four of the girls play Scrabble at Applejack's house at one point (Pinkie and Applejack are playing Go Fish in the same room), and both Sunset and Twilight play real words that they have to explain - Sunset's is "Alicorn", which she explains by pointing to Twilight, and Twilight's is "zax", which Rainbow Dash doesn't believe is real even after Applejack says she used one a while back. It's soon confirmed to be a type of cutting tool.
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* BrokenGlassPenalty: Courtesy of Rainbow Dash and Rarity, the front window of Applejack's house ends up smashed by a wayward soccer ball.
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* BrokenGlassPenalty: Courtesy of Rainbow Dash and Rarity, the front window of Applejack's house ends up smashed by a wayward soccer ball. Twilight manages to (mostly) repair it with considerable magic effort on her part, though.
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* CoolBike: Sunset's preferred mode of transportation
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* CantBelieveISaidThat: Sunset thinks this after she realized she just used the phrase "Hold your horses".
* CoolBike: Sunset's preferred mode oftransportationtransportation is a motorcycle.
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* HiddenInPlainSight: Rarity's plan to hide Twilight hinges on this idea, with help from an EmbarrassingAnimalSuit
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* HiddenInPlainSight: Rarity's plan to hide Twilight hinges on this idea, with help from an EmbarrassingAnimalSuitEmbarrassingAnimalSuit.
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* OhCrap: Sunset's reaction to Twilight's SneezeOfDoom is [[UnusualEuphemism "Oh, Horseapples..."]]
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* CooldownHug: When Twilight begins to freak out over possibly being stuck in the human, Fluttershy calms her down with one of these.
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* CooldownHug: When Twilight begins to freak out over possibly being stuck in the human, human world for an unknown amount of time, Fluttershy calms her down with one of these.
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* HiddenInPlainSight: Rarity's plan to hide to Twilight hinges on this idea, with help from an EmbarrassingAnimalSuit
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* HiddenInPlainSight: Rarity's plan to hide to Twilight hinges on this idea, with help from an EmbarrassingAnimalSuit
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/279135/sunsets-little-twilight Sunset's Little Twilight]] is an [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls My Little Pony: Equestria Girls]] fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/PoisonClaw [=PoisonClaw=]]].
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/279135/sunsets-little-twilight Sunset's Little Twilight]] is an a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls My Little Pony: Equestria Girls]] fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/PoisonClaw [=PoisonClaw=]]].
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* HiddenInPlainSight:
* NotAMorningPerson: Pinkie Pie, of all people.
* MyEyesAreUpHere: Sunset's response when Rainbow gets a peek up her shirt.
* MustHaveCaffeine
* [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Punctuated! For! Emphasis!]]
--> '''Twilight:'''Don't. Say. Anything.
* RidiculouslyCuteCritter:
* NotAMorningPerson: Pinkie Pie, of all people.
* MyEyesAreUpHere: Sunset's response when Rainbow gets a peek up her shirt.
* MustHaveCaffeine
* [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Punctuated! For! Emphasis!]]
--> '''Twilight:'''Don't. Say. Anything.
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* HiddenInPlainSight:
HiddenInPlainSight: Rarity's plan to hide to Twilight hinges on this idea, with help from an EmbarrassingAnimalSuit
* LuminescentBlush: Fluttershy tries to hide her blushing face when Twilight innocently asks [[AlienAmongUs what a bra is.]]
* MyEyesAreUpHere: Sunset's response when Rainbow gets a peek up her shirt.
* NotAMorningPerson: Pinkie Pie, of all people. \n* MyEyesAreUpHere: Sunset's response when Rainbow gets She shambles into the kitchen like a peek up zombie in her shirt.
* MustHaveCaffeine
[[MustHaveCaffeine pursuit of coffee.]]
* [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Punctuated! For!Emphasis!]]
Emphasis!]]: Upon seeing the full extent of Twilight's EmbarrassingAnimalSuit, Rainbow Dash is ready to bust a gut. Twilight's response?
-->'''Twilight:'''Don't.'''Twilight:''' Don't. Say. Anything.
* RidiculouslyCuteCritter: The typical reaction to the tiny Twilight.
* LuminescentBlush: Fluttershy tries to hide her blushing face when Twilight innocently asks [[AlienAmongUs what a bra is.]]
* MyEyesAreUpHere: Sunset's response when Rainbow gets a peek up her shirt.
* NotAMorningPerson: Pinkie Pie, of all people.
* MustHaveCaffeine
* [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Punctuated! For!
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* RidiculouslyCuteCritter: The typical reaction to the tiny Twilight.
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* YourMagicsNoGoodHere: Despite still being a pony, Twilight is unable to use magic at first. Even after she's able to get around this, the magic is so different from what she's used to, coupled with her smaller size, that even simple spells become much more difficult, and some even impossible without fear of injury.
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* YourMagicsNoGoodHere: Despite still being a pony, Twilight is unable to use magic at first. Even after she's able to get around this, the magic is so different from what she's used to, coupled with her smaller size, that even simple spells become much more difficult, and some even impossible without fear of injury.injury.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/279135/sunsets-little-twilight Sunset's Little Twilight]] is an My Little Pony: Equestria Girls fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/PoisonClaw [=PoisonClaw=]]].
Twilight had planned to visit Sunset Shimmer and her friends over in the other world for a nice, quiet weekend, away from all the worries and problems associated with being a Princess of Equestria. Unfortunately, things rarely go as planned.
After an accident cuts her off from Equestria, Twilight finds herself stuck in the human world until the gateway between the two worlds can be fixed. Which wouldn't normally be a problem...
Twilight had planned to visit Sunset Shimmer and her friends over in the other world for a nice, quiet weekend, away from all the worries and problems associated with being a Princess of Equestria. Unfortunately, things rarely go as planned.
After an accident cuts her off from Equestria, Twilight finds herself stuck in the human world until the gateway between the two worlds can be fixed. Which wouldn't normally be a problem...
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/279135/sunsets-little-twilight Sunset's Little Twilight]] is an [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls My Little Pony: Equestria Girls Girls]] fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/PoisonClaw [=PoisonClaw=]]].
Twilight had planned to visit Sunset Shimmer and her friends over in the other world for a nice, quiet weekend, away from all the worries and problems associated with being a Princess of Equestria. [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong Unfortunately, things rarely go asplanned.
planned.]] After an accident cuts her off from Equestria, Twilight finds herself stuck in the human world until the gateway between the two worlds can be fixed. Which wouldn't normally be a problem...
Twilight had planned to visit Sunset Shimmer and her friends over in the other world for a nice, quiet weekend, away from all the worries and problems associated with being a Princess of Equestria. [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong Unfortunately, things rarely go as
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* FunSize
* HiddenInPlainSight
* CoolBike: Sunset's mode of transportation
* CooldownHug: When Twilight begins to freak out over possibly being stuck in
* CutenessOverload
* FunSize
* HiddenInPlainSight
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* BrokenGlassPenalty:
BrokenGlassPenalty: Courtesy of Rainbow Dash and Rarity, the front window of Applejack's house ends up smashed by a wayward soccer ball.
* CallForward: While remarking on the idea of magic in the human world, Sunset mentions if it would be possible [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames to create a device to track it.]]
* CoolBike: Sunset's preferred mode of transportation
* CooldownHug: When Twilight begins to freak out over possibly being stuckin
in the human, Fluttershy calms her down with one of these.
*CutenessOverload
CutenessOverload: Fluttershy's reaction to the miniature Twilight.
*FunSize
FunSize: Twilight arrives from Equestria no bigger than a cat.
*HiddenInPlainSightHiddenInPlainSight:
* CallForward: While remarking on the idea of magic in the human world, Sunset mentions if it would be possible [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames to create a device to track it.]]
* CoolBike: Sunset's preferred mode of transportation
* CooldownHug: When Twilight begins to freak out over possibly being stuck
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* MyEyesAreUpHere: Sunset's response when Rainbow gets a peek up her shirt.
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* SneezeOfDoom
* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf
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* YourMagicsNoGoodHere
* RidiculouslyCuteCritter
* SneezeOfDoom
* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf
* TranquilFury
* YourMagicsNoGoodHere
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--> ''Twilight:''Don't.'''Twilight:'''Don't. Say. Anything.
*RidiculouslyCuteCritter
RidiculouslyCuteCritter:
*SneezeOfDoom
SneezeOfDoom: Just as Sunset's about to tell the others about Twilight's current state, Twilight sneezes from inside Sunset's backpack, blowing her cover.
*TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf
TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf: Combined with MirrorScare, Sunset briefly sees her pony self staring back at her in the bathroom mirror. When she looks again, it's been replaced by her normal reflection.
*TranquilFury
TranquilFury: Applejack's reaction after Rainbow Dash and Rarity accidentally smash her window.
*YourMagicsNoGoodHereYourMagicsNoGoodHere: Despite still being a pony, Twilight is unable to use magic at first. Even after she's able to get around this, the magic is so different from what she's used to, coupled with her smaller size, that even simple spells become much more difficult, and some even impossible without fear of injury.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/279135/sunsets-little-twilight Sunset's Little Twilight]] is an My Little Pony: Equestria Girls fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/PoisonClaw PoisonClaw
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/279135/sunsets-little-twilight Sunset's Little Twilight]] is an My Little Pony: Equestria Girls fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/PoisonClaw PoisonClaw
Twilight had planned to visit Sunset Shimmer and her friends over in the other world for a nice, quiet weekend, away from all the worries and problems associated with being a Princess of Equestria. Unfortunately, things rarely go as planned.
After an accident cuts her off from Equestria, Twilight finds herself stuck in the human world until the gateway between the two worlds can be fixed. Which wouldn't normally be a problem...
...If she wasn't still a pony.
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!!Sunset's Little Twilight provides examples of:
* AnimalsNotToScale: Despite being a pony, Twilight is described as being no bigger than a small dog or a large cat.
* BrokenGlassPenalty:
* CoolBike: Sunset's mode of transportation
* CooldownHug: When Twilight begins to freak out over possibly being stuck in
* CutenessOverload
* FunSize
* HiddenInPlainSight
* NotAMorningPerson: Pinkie Pie, of all people.
* MyEyesAreUpHere:
* MustHaveCaffeine
* [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Punctuated! For! Emphasis!]]
--> ''Twilight:''Don't. Say. Anything.
* RidiculouslyCuteCritter
* SneezeOfDoom
* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf
* TranquilFury
* YourMagicsNoGoodHere
Twilight had planned to visit Sunset Shimmer and her friends over in the other world for a nice, quiet weekend, away from all the worries and problems associated with being a Princess of Equestria. Unfortunately, things rarely go as planned.
After an accident cuts her off from Equestria, Twilight finds herself stuck in the human world until the gateway between the two worlds can be fixed. Which wouldn't normally be a problem...
...If she wasn't still a pony.
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!!Sunset's Little Twilight provides examples of:
* AnimalsNotToScale: Despite being a pony, Twilight is described as being no bigger than a small dog or a large cat.
* BrokenGlassPenalty:
* CoolBike: Sunset's mode of transportation
* CooldownHug: When Twilight begins to freak out over possibly being stuck in
* CutenessOverload
* FunSize
* HiddenInPlainSight
* NotAMorningPerson: Pinkie Pie, of all people.
* MyEyesAreUpHere:
* MustHaveCaffeine
* [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Punctuated! For! Emphasis!]]
--> ''Twilight:''Don't. Say. Anything.
* RidiculouslyCuteCritter
* SneezeOfDoom
* TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf
* TranquilFury
* YourMagicsNoGoodHere
