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'''[=AngelPaw=]:''' "THAT'S TERRIBLE!"
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* ParentalSubstitute: Moontree to Crimsonkit and Angelkit.
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%% * TheHero: Chapter 2 leads us to believe that the cats filling this role in the story will be Angelkit and Crimsonkit.
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The original was NOT cut off. this is a popular misconception do to most version of the fanfic you can find online being unfinished and the series by Moonkitti being unfinnished. the original fanfic was in fact finished. you can find see it through the wayback machine. https://web.archive.org/web/20120410143007/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6295790/1/StarKis_Prophecy
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* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a Christmas Episode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
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* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a Christmas Episode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
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* BuxomIsBetter: {{Implied}} with [=EarthBlue=].
-->'''[=EarthBlue=]:''' A beautiful she-cat with a buxom personality
-->'''[=EarthBlue=]:''' A beautiful she-cat with a buxom personality
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''[[https://web.archive.org/web/20120410143001/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7762530/1/StarKits_PRophec_2_The_Two_Sibinglgs StarKits PRophec 2: The Two Sibinglgs]]'' is a sequel to the famed ''Literature/WarriorCats'' TrollFic, ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy''. It was co-written by xdark.rosesx and her new 'boyfriend' Tomas; however, it was deleted from FF.net before being completed.
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!! Relevant tropes:
* TheAce: Firepaw, apparently the most attractive apprentice in the forest.
* AmazingTechnicolourWildlife: Some of the warriors have bizarre fur colours like green, blue, or pink.
* AmbiguousGender: Quite a few cats in the allegiances don't have their gender specified.
* AndThatsTerrible:
--> '''[=FirePaw=]:''' "Riverclan is holding her HOSTAGE!"
--> '''[=AngelPaw=]:''' "THAT'S TERRIBLE!"
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Crimsonkit is a '''black''' cat (definitely not an albino) and yet, has red eyes.
%%* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy original]].
* BigNo: Crimsonpaw, after her new mentor was revealed to be [[spoiler:Marijuanaskin]].
* BuxomIsBetter: {{Implied}} with [=EarthBlue=].
-->'''[=EarthBlue=]:''' A beautiful she-cat with a buxom personality
* CaptainObvious: When Lightningstrike remarks about how special it is that [[spoiler: Angelpaw]] was assigned [[spoiler: Rainstar herself]] as a mentor.
%% * ChickMagnet: [=FirePaw=], because of his good looks.
* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a Christmas Episode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
* DarknessVonGothickName: The names of pretty much every Shadowclan cat; special mentions for Losthope, Depressedheart, and Ravennight.
%%* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw.]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
** Pawstep's apprentice name would have been Paw'''paw'''.
** Starburn, should he become leader, will be called Star'''star'''.
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Pawstep receives a prophecy from [=StarClan=] by conversing with the [=StarClan=] cats in a dream.
* DenserAndWackier: As a whole, it's an even more obvious TrollFic than the original ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy'', with NonstandardCharacterDesign and very... unfortunate names for many characters abound.
* DrugsAreBad: Attempted with the character of Marijuanaskin. He has no hair because of his drug addiction. He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
* {{Emoticon}}: One actually appears in a sentence that Angelkit speaks.
%% * TheHero: Chapter 2 leads us to believe that the cats filling this role in the story will be Angelkit and Crimsonkit.
* HappilyAdopted: Angelkit and Crimsonkit, by Moontree.
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: Used word for word in the first sentence of chapter one.
%%* LoveAtFirstSight: Angelpaw and Firepaw
%%* LuminescentBlush: Angelpaw, after she saw Firepaw
* MeaningfulName: Almost all of the cast have names with clear meanings. It's explicitly stated that Angelkit got her name because of her white fur, and Crimsonkit because of her [[TechnicolourEyes red eyes]].
%% * MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Darknesspaw. His description literally calls him evil.
%% * NebulousEvilOrganisation: [=RiverClan=]
* NonStandardCharacterDesign: There's at least ''one'' in each clan, excluding [=ThunderClan=] ([[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife because pretty much all of them have technicolor fur]]).
** In [=RiverClan=], we have Melodypaw, a young green she-cat with green eyes.
** In [=ShadowClan=], we have Bloodpaw, a blood-colored she-cat with vein-colored eyes.
** In [=WindClan=], we have Crowpaw, a blue tom with blue eyes.
** And, finally, in [=MapleClan=], we have Butterflypaw, who may be the oddest of all. They have pink fur, butterfly wings, and yellow eyes.
* OneParagraphChapter: Well, they're a bit longer than a single paragraph, but they're still all incredibly short (around 100 words long).
* ParentalAbandonment: Angelkit and her sister, Crimsonkit, [[spoiler: with both their parents dead.]]
* ParentalFavoritism: Uglykit's name should explain everything.
* ParentalNeglect: Moontree's kits, Uglykit, Stonekit, and Pinekit are completely forgotten and not mentioned.
* ParentalSubstitute: Moontree to Crimsonkit and Angelkit.
* PointOfView: The story is usually told in third person, but changes to first person halfway through Chapter 4. And then it changes back yet again.
%% * RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly {{Subverted}} with Crimsonkit.
%% * RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
* TalkingInYourDreams: Pawstep has a dream conversation with the [=StarClan=] cats.
* ThemeNaming: Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to the sky.
%%* {{Sequel}}: Duh.
%%* TechnicolourEyes: Almost every single cat listed in the allegiances.
%%* TheUnfavourite: Crimsonpaw, at least to Rainstar.
%%* UnfortunateNames: Marijuanaskin
* ValentinesDayEpisodes: Chapter 4 [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin THE VALENTINS]] [[RougeAnglesOfSatin DAY SPECAIL!]]
%%* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Surprisingly, only the author's note.
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!! Relevant tropes:
* TheAce: Firepaw, apparently the most attractive apprentice in the forest.
* AmazingTechnicolourWildlife: Some of the warriors have bizarre fur colours like green, blue, or pink.
* AmbiguousGender: Quite a few cats in the allegiances don't have their gender specified.
* AndThatsTerrible:
--> '''[=FirePaw=]:''' "Riverclan is holding her HOSTAGE!"
--> '''[=AngelPaw=]:''' "THAT'S TERRIBLE!"
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Crimsonkit is a '''black''' cat (definitely not an albino) and yet, has red eyes.
%%* BeigeProse: Just as guilty of it as the [[Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy original]].
* BigNo: Crimsonpaw, after her new mentor was revealed to be [[spoiler:Marijuanaskin]].
* BuxomIsBetter: {{Implied}} with [=EarthBlue=].
-->'''[=EarthBlue=]:''' A beautiful she-cat with a buxom personality
* CaptainObvious: When Lightningstrike remarks about how special it is that [[spoiler: Angelpaw]] was assigned [[spoiler: Rainstar herself]] as a mentor.
%% * ChickMagnet: [=FirePaw=], because of his good looks.
* CutShort: Stopped updating after the Valentine's Day special ([[CallBack much like how the original ended after a Christmas Episode]]), and seeing as it's been almost a ''decade'' as of the time of writing, it most likely will never update again.
* DarknessVonGothickName: The names of pretty much every Shadowclan cat; special mentions for Losthope, Depressedheart, and Ravennight.
%%* DamselInDistress: [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw.]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
** Pawstep's apprentice name would have been Paw'''paw'''.
** Starburn, should he become leader, will be called Star'''star'''.
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Pawstep receives a prophecy from [=StarClan=] by conversing with the [=StarClan=] cats in a dream.
* DenserAndWackier: As a whole, it's an even more obvious TrollFic than the original ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy'', with NonstandardCharacterDesign and very... unfortunate names for many characters abound.
* DrugsAreBad: Attempted with the character of Marijuanaskin. He has no hair because of his drug addiction. He is also said to be unfit to mentor [[spoiler: Crimsonpaw]] because of his addiction.
* {{Emoticon}}: One actually appears in a sentence that Angelkit speaks.
%% * TheHero: Chapter 2 leads us to believe that the cats filling this role in the story will be Angelkit and Crimsonkit.
* HappilyAdopted: Angelkit and Crimsonkit, by Moontree.
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: Used word for word in the first sentence of chapter one.
%%* LoveAtFirstSight: Angelpaw and Firepaw
%%* LuminescentBlush: Angelpaw, after she saw Firepaw
* MeaningfulName: Almost all of the cast have names with clear meanings. It's explicitly stated that Angelkit got her name because of her white fur, and Crimsonkit because of her [[TechnicolourEyes red eyes]].
%% * MusicalThemeNaming: Cats in [=RiverClan=]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Darknesspaw. His description literally calls him evil.
%% * NebulousEvilOrganisation: [=RiverClan=]
* NonStandardCharacterDesign: There's at least ''one'' in each clan, excluding [=ThunderClan=] ([[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife because pretty much all of them have technicolor fur]]).
** In [=RiverClan=], we have Melodypaw, a young green she-cat with green eyes.
** In [=ShadowClan=], we have Bloodpaw, a blood-colored she-cat with vein-colored eyes.
** In [=WindClan=], we have Crowpaw, a blue tom with blue eyes.
** And, finally, in [=MapleClan=], we have Butterflypaw, who may be the oddest of all. They have pink fur, butterfly wings, and yellow eyes.
* OneParagraphChapter: Well, they're a bit longer than a single paragraph, but they're still all incredibly short (around 100 words long).
* ParentalAbandonment: Angelkit and her sister, Crimsonkit, [[spoiler: with both their parents dead.]]
* ParentalFavoritism: Uglykit's name should explain everything.
* ParentalNeglect: Moontree's kits, Uglykit, Stonekit, and Pinekit are completely forgotten and not mentioned.
* ParentalSubstitute: Moontree to Crimsonkit and Angelkit.
* PointOfView: The story is usually told in third person, but changes to first person halfway through Chapter 4. And then it changes back yet again.
%% * RedEyesTakeWarning: Seemingly {{Subverted}} with Crimsonkit.
%% * RougeAnglesOfSatin: Although lessened by the addition of an editor (Tomas).
* TalkingInYourDreams: Pawstep has a dream conversation with the [=StarClan=] cats.
* ThemeNaming: Cats in [=WindClan=] are named after birds and other things related to the sky.
%%* {{Sequel}}: Duh.
%%* TechnicolourEyes: Almost every single cat listed in the allegiances.
%%* TheUnfavourite: Crimsonpaw, at least to Rainstar.
%%* UnfortunateNames: Marijuanaskin
* ValentinesDayEpisodes: Chapter 4 [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin THE VALENTINS]] [[RougeAnglesOfSatin DAY SPECAIL!]]
%%* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Surprisingly, only the author's note.
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