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* BiTheWay: Kaz [[spoiler:isn't really turned off by the idea of being in a relationship with Ryoji, and admits to having feelings for him - but has much stronger feelings for Aigis]].
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* ShoutOut: To a lot of things, really. To ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'', to ''{{Franchise/Danganronpa}}'', to ''{{VideoGame/Tekken}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Drakengard}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Kingdom Hearts}}'', [[UpToEleven to]] ''{{Disney/Frozen}}''...it's kind of hard to keep track. Unsurprisingly, the most shout-outs go to ''{{Franchise/Shin Megami Tensei}}'' games.
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* ShoutOut: To a lot of things, really. To ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'', to ''{{Franchise/Danganronpa}}'', to ''{{VideoGame/Tekken}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Drakengard}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Kingdom Hearts}}'', ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'', [[UpToEleven to]] ''{{Disney/Frozen}}''...''WesternAnimation/Frozen2013''... it's kind of hard to keep track. Unsurprisingly, the most shout-outs go to ''{{Franchise/Shin Megami Tensei}}'' ''Franchise/ShinMegamiTensei'' games.
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* ShoutOut: To a lot of things, really. To ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'', to ''{{VisualNovel/Danganronpa}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Tekken}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Drakengard}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Kingdom Hearts}}'', [[UpToEleven to]] ''{{Disney/Frozen}}''...it's kind of hard to keep track. Unsurprisingly, the most shout-outs go to ''{{Franchise/Shin Megami Tensei}}'' games.
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* ShoutOut: To a lot of things, really. To ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'', to ''{{VisualNovel/Danganronpa}}'', ''{{Franchise/Danganronpa}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Tekken}}'', ''{{VideoGame/Tekken}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Drakengard}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Kingdom Hearts}}'', [[UpToEleven to]] ''{{Disney/Frozen}}''...it's kind of hard to keep track. Unsurprisingly, the most shout-outs go to ''{{Franchise/Shin Megami Tensei}}'' games.
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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Kazuto has some...issues with religion. Seeing as how the ruler of the ''SMT''-verse is a worship-hungry despot ''FAR'' from the loving God seen in TheBible, it's not very surprising.
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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: Kazuto has some...issues with religion. Seeing as how the ruler of the ''SMT''-verse is a worship-hungry despot ''FAR'' from the loving God seen in TheBible, Literature/TheBible, it's not very surprising.
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* GuileHero: Kaz [[CloudCuckooLander may not act it from time to time]], but he's shown to be pretty smart. And really good at deductions. [[spoiler: When a murder took place in the school, Kaz was able to find out that it was supernatural in nature before anyone else, just from environmental clues]]. It also helps that he's been exposed to some [[DarkAndTroubledPast pretty weird stuff]] when he was young, so he's a little more GenreSavvy than most of the other characters.
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* GuileHero: Kaz [[CloudCuckooLander may not act it from time to time]], but he's shown to be pretty smart. And really good at deductions. [[spoiler: When a murder took place in the school, Kaz was able to find out that it was supernatural in nature before anyone else, just from environmental clues]]. It also helps that he's been exposed to some [[DarkAndTroubledPast pretty weird stuff]] when he was young, so he's a little more GenreSavvy experienced than most of the other characters.
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Taken straight from ''TheEmpireStrikesBack.'' Kazuto and Aigis proclaim their love one last time before Kaz faces off in his personal final battle against Philemon.]]
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Taken straight from ''TheEmpireStrikesBack.''Film/TheEmpireStrikesBack.'' Kazuto and Aigis proclaim their love one last time before Kaz faces off in his personal final battle against Philemon.]]
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* CanonWelding: Canon Welds the ''Persona'' series with several other JRPG series. We've got ''{{Videogame/Drakengard}}'' elements, ''{{Videogame/NieR}}'' characters, elements from the ''[[Franchise/TalesSeries Tales]]'' series, characters from ''[[Videogame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance Revengeance]]'', and: of course: ''abundant'' [[ContinuityNod Continuity Nods]] to ''[[Franchise/ShinMegamiTensei SMT]]'' games. The author even threw in a bit of ''Videogame/DevilSurvivor'', with Frosty!
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* CanonWelding: Canon Welds the ''Persona'' series with several other JRPG series. We've got ''{{Videogame/Drakengard}}'' elements, ''{{Videogame/NieR}}'' characters, elements from the ''[[Franchise/TalesSeries ''[[VideoGame/TalesSeries Tales]]'' series, characters from ''[[Videogame/MetalGearRisingRevengeance Revengeance]]'', and: of course: ''abundant'' [[ContinuityNod Continuity Nods]] to ''[[Franchise/ShinMegamiTensei SMT]]'' games. The author even threw in a bit of ''Videogame/DevilSurvivor'', with Frosty!
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The author is planning a ''VideoGame/{{Persona 4}}'' fic as a direct sequel, and has created a {{Crossover}} fic with fellow fanfic writer [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~lastdragonborn LastDragonborn]] titled ''VideoGame/PersonaQ: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10346641/1/Persona-Q-Shadows-of-the-Heart Shadows of the Heart]]''.
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The author is planning a ''VideoGame/{{Persona 4}}'' fic as a direct sequel, and has created a {{Crossover}} fic with fellow fanfic writer [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~lastdragonborn LastDragonborn]] titled ''VideoGame/PersonaQ: ''[[VideoGame/PersonaQShadowOfTheLabyrinth Persona Q]]: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10346641/1/Persona-Q-Shadows-of-the-Heart Shadows of the Heart]]''.
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[[caption-width-right:300:''"'You don't owe this world anything. You never have. You never will."'' [[labelnote:Pictured from left to right]][[RobotGirl Aigis]], [[OriginalCharacter Kazuto]][[/labelnote]]]]
[[caption-width-right:300:''"'You don't owe this world anything. You never have. You never will."'' [[labelnote:Pictured from left to right]][[RobotGirl Aigis]], [[OriginalCharacter Kazuto]][[/labelnote]]]]
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* ShoutOut: To a lot of things, really. To ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Danganronpa}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Tekken}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Drakengard}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Kingdom Hearts}}'', [[UpToEleven to]] ''{{Disney/Frozen}}''...it's kind of hard to keep track. Unsurprisingly, the most shout-outs go to ''{{Franchise/Shin Megami Tensei}}'' games.
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* ShoutOut: To a lot of things, really. To ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Danganronpa}}'', ''{{VisualNovel/Danganronpa}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Tekken}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Drakengard}}'', to ''{{Videogame/Kingdom Hearts}}'', [[UpToEleven to]] ''{{Disney/Frozen}}''...it's kind of hard to keep track. Unsurprisingly, the most shout-outs go to ''{{Franchise/Shin Megami Tensei}}'' games.
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* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler:In a more literal example than most. See Reincarnation below.]]
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* {{Reincarnation}}: [[spoiler:Kazuto Takeba is technically a reincarnation of Kazumi Tsukino ''and'' Shiori Mikami, as Philemon fused both of their souls together to make him. Additionally, Kazumi Tsukino is the reincarnation of ''Nyx''.]]
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* {{Reincarnation}}: [[spoiler:Kazuto Takeba is technically a reincarnation of Kazumi Tsukino ''and'' Shiori Mikami, as Philemon fused both of their souls together to make him. Additionally, Kazumi Tsukino is the reincarnation of ''Nyx''.]] [[spoiler:And ''again'', later on in the story, there appears to be some sort of third element in the mix that made Kazuto, one who goes by the name of Akame, the Red-Eyed Killer.]]
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* Irony: [[spoiler:Minato Arisato gave his life to seal Nyx away. Kazuto Takeba gave his life to release Nyx onto the world.]]
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* Irony: [[spoiler:Minato {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Minato Arisato gave his life to seal Nyx away. Kazuto Takeba gave his life to release Nyx onto the world.]]
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Taken straight from ''TheEmpireStrikesBack.'' Kazuto and Aigis proclaim their love one last time before Kaz faces off in his personal final battle against Philemon.]]
-> [[spoiler: '''Aigis:''' I love you.]]
-> [[spoiler: '''Kazuto:''' I know.]]
-> [[spoiler: '''Aigis:''' I love you.]]
-> [[spoiler: '''Kazuto:''' I know.]]
* TheCameo: [[spoiler:Minato Arisato is repeatedly referenced throughout the story and seen in visions as the "blue-haired hero" who saved the world from Nyx. And he appears to greet Kaz when Kazuto dies.]]
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** Kazuto is [[spoiler: not human at all. He's a ''replica'' of a human. Having been created by Philemon, who used elements from different universes to help create a proper personality for him, Kazuto is merely a puppet used for the sole purpose of being TheHero of his universe, destined to save the world and sacrifice himself in the process of doing so. When he figures this out, Kaz goes into a ''massive'' HeroicBSOD because he ''was never his own person'', along with the fact that the ideals that he had stuck to for so long were merely borrowed, never his own. Kind of makes his identity issues HarsherInHindsight, huh]]?
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** Kazuto is [[spoiler: not human at all. He's a ''replica'' of a human. human, specifically Shiori Mikami, a friend of the original protagonist of the whole story, Kazumi Tsukino. Having been created by Philemon, who used elements from different universes to help create a proper personality for him, Kazuto is merely a puppet used for the sole purpose of being TheHero of his universe, destined to save the world and sacrifice himself in the process of doing so. so, precisely because Philemon discovered that the original person set to be the Hero of the universe was the reincarnation of the ''mother of all Shadows'', Nyx. When he Kaz figures this out, Kaz he goes into a ''massive'' HeroicBSOD because he ''was never his own person'', along with the fact that the ideals that he had stuck to for so long were merely borrowed, never his own. Kind of makes his identity issues HarsherInHindsight, huh]]?
* FamousLastWords: [[spoiler: "Heh. I knew I wouldn't like you." From Kaz, directed to Minato Arisato.]]
** [[spoiler:He ultimately goes through with it.]]
* Irony: [[spoiler:Minato Arisato gave his life to seal Nyx away. Kazuto Takeba gave his life to release Nyx onto the world.]]
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** And now, [[spoiler: it's giving Meta Twists to ''itself,'' as Kazumi Tsukino, the original protagonist of the universe, turns out to be alive, alive (despite having been thrown into Monad by Philemon to die), is slowly being given the point of view of the story, and it's quite possible that she will overtake the role as protagonist.]]
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* {{Reincarnation}}: [[spoiler:Kazuto Takeba is technically a reincarnation of Kazumi Tsukino ''and'' Shiori Mikami, as Philemon fused both of their souls together to make him. Additionally, Kazumi Tsukino is the reincarnation of ''Nyx''.]]
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It has a premise similar to AFoolNamedFortune and LusnatiStyle, replacing the blue-haired protagonist of the original game with a fresh OriginalCharacter. However, it is ''very'' different from both fics, in that basically, it's a {{Deconstruction}} of the SelfInsertFic, playing out things how they'd normally play out from the beginning (to the point where the main character's initially named after the author himself) and eventually rearing its ugly, roaring head when you'd least expect it to, shedding some new light on the trope.
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It has a premise similar to AFoolNamedFortune Fanfic/AFoolNamedFortune and LusnatiStyle, Fanfic/LusnatiStyle, replacing the blue-haired protagonist of the original game with a fresh OriginalCharacter. However, it is ''very'' different from both fics, in that basically, it's a {{Deconstruction}} of the SelfInsertFic, playing out things how they'd normally play out from the beginning (to the point where the main character's initially named after the author himself) and eventually rearing its ugly, roaring head when you'd least expect it to, shedding some new light on the trope.
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* {{Retcon}}: [[spoiler: In-universe; whenever the universe would go down a path Philemon doesn't like, he'd reset the timeline and hope things would go better the next time. ''Four'' times, this happened]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Kaz knows he's most likely gonna die on the last Full Moon, against Philemon. And he does it because he loves his daughter, Aigis, and everyone else.]]
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* ItHasBeenAnHonor: [[spoiler: Kaz's mystical companions invoke this when it's apparent that he's gonna go on a SuicideMission to get his daughter back. It hurts.]]
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** And now, [[spoiler: it's giving Meta Twists to ''itself,'' as Kazuto's original counterpart, Kazumi, is slowly being given the point of view of the story, and it's quite possible that she will overtake the role as protagonist.]]
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** And now, [[spoiler: it's giving Meta Twists to ''itself,'' as Kazuto's Kazumi Tsukino, the original counterpart, Kazumi, protagonist of the universe, turns out to be alive, is slowly being given the point of view of the story, and it's quite possible that she will overtake the role as protagonist.]]
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* [[spoiler: DecoyProtagonist: The fic is ''slowly'' gravitating towards Kaz not being the actual protagonist of the story, and indeed is shifting the point of view over to his original counterpart: Kazumi Tsukino.]]
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* NiceGuy: Kaz is this through and through. Except when something hurts the people he loves. [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Then...]]
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Kazumi Tsukino, theperson whom Kazuto had been based off of, original protagonist of the Spring of Hope universe and one of the original foundations of Kazuto's existence, is alive, alive and kicking, despite having been left by Philemon in Monad to die.]]
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Kazumi Tsukino, the
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* NiceGuy: Kaz is this through and through. Except when something hurts the people he loves. [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Then...]]
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* ThereIsAnother: [[spoiler: Kazumi Tsukino, Kazuto's the original counterpart, protagonist of the Spring of Hope universe, is ''alive.'']]
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: [[spoiler: Kaz is deeply affected by this when he realizes that he's just a replica, forged by Philemon to be TheHero of the universe]].universe]].
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: [[spoiler: The universe was literally so incomplete that Philemon had to fix it by cherry-picking elements from ''other'' universes]].
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* LovecraftLite: Has many elements which appear straight out of a CosmicHorrorStory type deal, but underlying it all are themes of companionship, courage in the face of adversity, love, hope, and compassion.
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* BiTheWay: Kaz [[spoiler:isn't really turned off by the idea of being in a relationship with Ryoji, and admits to having feelings for him - but has much stronger feelings for Aigis]].
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* BerserkButton: Don't touch the people Kaz loves, or he'll annihilate you. Don't hurt Aigis: ''especially'' not [[LoveInterest Aigis]]. In fact, just don't hurt people in front of him in general. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And don't call him old]].
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* BerserkButton: Don't touch the people Kaz loves, or he'll annihilate you. Don't hurt Aigis: Aigis - ''especially'' not [[LoveInterest Aigis]]. In fact, just don't hurt people in front of him in general. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And don't call him old]].
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* ChildhoodFriend: [[OriginalCharacter Hitomi Tono]] is Kaz's childhood friend. The two have stuck together through thick and thin, having had a tight relationship for many years, which makes it [[spoiler: ''really'' difficult to not feel sorry for them when you discover that Kaz had to prostitute himself for funds to help with Hitomi's medical care years prior to the beginning of the actual story]].
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* ChildhoodFriend: [[OriginalCharacter Hitomi Tono]] Tono is Kaz's childhood friend. The two have stuck together through thick and thin, having had a tight relationship for many years, which makes it [[spoiler: ''really'' difficult to not feel sorry for them when you discover that Kaz had to prostitute himself for funds to help with Hitomi's medical care years prior to the beginning of the actual story]].
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** [[spoiler: Eventually a more straightened-out example when Ryoji expresses having feelings for Kaz]].
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* GoodIsNotNice: Kazuto, full-stop. He's pretty willing to do some ''really'' frightening stuff to those who cross him. This overlaps with HorrifyingHero from time to time.
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* MetaTwist: The fic as a whole. Orpheus isn't his first Persona, it's Thoth. Thanatos isn't what comes out, it's the Demiurge. [[spoiler: And later on, Kaz eventually loses his Wild Card ability]], and then new can of worms upon new can of worms open up, as if you haven't had enough of the twists.
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* MetaTwist: The fic as a whole. Orpheus isn't his first Persona, it's Thoth. Thanatos isn't what comes out, it's the Demiurge. [[spoiler: And later on, Kaz eventually loses his Wild Card ability]], and then new can cans of worms upon new can cans of worms open up, as if you haven't had enough of the twists.
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-> ''"To be thrown into a situation where the odds were constantly stacked against us, and to keep fighting even though we knew we were in over our heads. That's either bravery or stupidity. Maybe, if you twist the meaning enough, it can mean either of these things or even both. Brave and stupid, sums me up quite well."''
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-> ''"To be thrown into a situation where the odds were constantly stacked against us, and to keep fighting even though we knew we were way in over our heads. That's either bravery or stupidity. Maybe, if you twist the meaning enough, it can mean either of these things or even both. Brave and stupid, sums me up quite well."'' [[BigEater Also hungry.]]"''
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The author is planning a ''''VideoGame/{{Persona 4}}'' fic as a direct sequel, and has created a {{Crossover}} fic with fellow fanfic writer [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~lastdragonborn LastDragonborn]] titled ''VideoGame/PersonaQ: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10346641/1/Persona-Q-Shadows-of-the-Heart Shadows of the Heart]]''.
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The author is planning a ''''VideoGame/{{Persona ''VideoGame/{{Persona 4}}'' fic as a direct sequel, and has created a {{Crossover}} fic with fellow fanfic writer [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~lastdragonborn LastDragonborn]] titled ''VideoGame/PersonaQ: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10346641/1/Persona-Q-Shadows-of-the-Heart Shadows of the Heart]]''.
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'''NOTE: Due to the length of the story, there are indeed going to be spoilers for most of the early chapters.'''