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* InnocenceLost: Chapter 18 features Sakura furiously attacking Satome when he kidnaps Tomoyo and tries to rape her, climaxing when she allows the Mirror to break a mirror and castrate him. The chapter is rightfully named "Sakura's Loss of Innocence."
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** One of Satome's goons also wets himself after Meiling kicks the asses of his friends.
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* CanonForeigner: AlternateReality versions of Kurogane and Fye from ''Anime/TsubasaReservoirChronicle'' appear in the fic, here as {{Occult Detective}}s hired to investigate Sakura's attacker.
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'''''Shadow of the Dragon''''' is a ''Manga/CardCaptorSakura'' ContinuationFic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/22510/Lord-Archive Lord Archive]]. It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2081666/1/Shadow-of-the-Dragon here]].
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** Sakura's "battle costume" for chapter 15 had a logo that all but references ''TheGhostbusters''.
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* CripplingCastration: In chapter 18, Sakura arrives JustInTime to save Tomoyo from being raped by Satome. After she kicks him into a wall, the Mirror Card manifests in the form of Tomoyo, shatters a mirror, and declares that Satome will ''never'' hurt a girl [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil like that]] again before stabbing him in the groin with the mirror shards; the next chapter outright confirms that the Mirror castrated Satome.
-->'''Shinji Asaba''': Satome is a girl now.
-->'''Shinji Asaba''': Satome is a girl now.
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* AdultsAreUseless: The faculty at school repeatedly fail to take Satome's bullying seriously, resulting in multiple rape victims. It's only after he tries to rape Tomoyo in chapter 18 only for Sakura to stop him violently and him to be arrested that they finally take him seriously.
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* AdultsAreUseless: The faculty at school repeatedly fail to take Satome's bullying seriously, resulting in multiple rape victims. It's only after he tries to rape Tomoyo in chapter 18 only for Sakura to stop him violently and him to be arrested that they finally take him seriously. By the time of chapter 30, Teikei, the school disciplinarian, has learned from this, as shown by his plan to deal how the school has gotten out of hand:
-->'''Kiriha''': You're not going to take care of this quietly?\\
'''Teikei''': Trying to take care of a "minor bullying issue" quietly and carefully got us multiple rape victims. This school has gotten out of hand. We need to reign in the trouble. Make sure the students know we're serious about the rules, or else they will grow bolder and cause even more damage to the school and themselves.
-->'''Kiriha''': You're not going to take care of this quietly?\\
'''Teikei''': Trying to take care of a "minor bullying issue" quietly and carefully got us multiple rape victims. This school has gotten out of hand. We need to reign in the trouble. Make sure the students know we're serious about the rules, or else they will grow bolder and cause even more damage to the school and themselves.
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* TooDumbToLive: Even after being beaten senseless and getting a death threat from Syaoran, Satome still keeps targeting Sakura and her friends. This not only gets his hand broken, but eventually gets him arrested and ultimately killed.
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* AssholeVictim: Satome is a SerialRapist who tried to force himself on both Sakura and Tomoyo on two different occasions. No one, in-universe or out, feels sympathetic towards him when Sakura beats him up and allows the Mirror to castrate him in chapter 18.
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* ParentalObliviousness: In chapter 19, Himiko Satome apparently had no idea just how much of a monster her son was (said son being a vicious bully and SerialRapist who has been causing trouble at the school for a ''very'' long time) until after she discovers he's been arrested for trying to rape Tomoyo.
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* ParentalObliviousness: In chapter 19, Himiko Satome apparently had no idea just how much of a monster her son was (said son being a vicious bully and SerialRapist who has been causing trouble at the school for a ''very'' long time) until after she discovers he's been arrested for trying to rape Tomoyo. Of course, this is at least in part because she never returned any of the school's calls or showed up at any parent-teacher conferences.
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* StrawMisogynist: Satome, hands down. During chapter 10, he states outright that girls are worthless and only good for making babies.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: In chapter 18, when Satome kidnaps Tomoyo and tries to rape her, Sakura shows up just in time, kicks him through a wall, and allows the Mirror card to castrate him with glass shards. While Sakura is left guilt-ridden over her part in it, considering he had tried to rape both Tomoyo ''and'' Sakura previously, and is confirmed to have raped seven different girls in the next chapter, you won't feel bad for him: Meiling states outright that even if it wasn't the right thing to do, Satome certainly deserved it.
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* NotSoWellIntentionedExtremist: The entire reason that [[spoiler: Meiling's grandfather]] is staging these attacks on Sakura is because he wants [[spoiler: Meiling's engagement with Syaoran to be reinstated]]. However, while he claims he's doing it [[spoiler: for Meiling's happiness]], Sakura and Syaoran are able to piece together rather quickly that he's only doing it because [[spoiler:he wants to "correct" his failings to the Li clan and produce a purer heir by having magic-wielding great-grandchildren]]; Fanren even states outright in chapter 18 that he's only doing it for himself. In any event, the fact that his plans have repeatedly caused collateral damage and endangered innocent lives prevents him from being sympathetic.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: The entire reason that [[spoiler: Meiling's grandfather]] is staging these attacks on Sakura is because he wants [[spoiler: Meiling's engagement with Syaoran to be reinstated]]. Of course, he's prevented from being sympathetic because he's actively trying to ''murder'' Sakura, and has repeatedly caused collateral damage and endangered innocent lives.
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* ParentalObliviousness: In chapter 19, Himiko Satome apparently had no idea just how much of a monster her son was (said son being a vicious bully and SerialRapist who has been causing trouble at the school for a ''very'' long time) until after she discovers he's been arrested for trying to rape Tomoyo.
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* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler:Shinji Asaba has a brief sexual encounter with another girl, though only because he wanted to know what it was like to have sex with someone besides Naoko. Naoko responds by kicking his ass.]]
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* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler:Shinji Asaba has a brief sexual encounter with another girl, though only because he wanted to know what it was like to have sex with someone besides Naoko. Naoko responds by kicking his ass.]]
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* JapaneseChristian: Sakura mentions at one point that Tomoeda has a higher-than-usual Christian population and that she herself was baptized, though she identifies more as Shinto.
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* JapaneseChristian: UsefulNotes/JapaneseChristian: Sakura mentions at one point that Tomoeda has a higher-than-usual Christian population and that she herself was baptized, though she identifies more as Shinto.
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* {{Crossover}}: Two omakes features crossovers of CCS with ''XiaolinShowdown'' and ''AvatarTheLastAirbender''.
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* {{Crossover}}: Two omakes features crossovers of CCS with ''XiaolinShowdown'' ''WesternAnimation/XiaolinShowdown'' and ''AvatarTheLastAirbender''.''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''.
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** Chapter 10 has another of Takashi's tall tales where he said the first duels started in Egypt using stone playing cards, a reference to the ''YuGiOh'' animé.
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** Chapter 10 has another of Takashi's tall tales where he said the first duels started in Egypt using stone playing cards, a reference to the ''YuGiOh'' ''Anime/YuGiOh'' animé.
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** In chapter 2, Takashi's tall tales about witches and of the first (recorded) one being from Egypt could've been a reference to ''PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' were it not for the fact that this chapter was published well before the show was aired.
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** In chapter 2, Takashi's tall tales about witches and of the first (recorded) one being from Egypt could've been a reference to ''PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' were it not for the fact that this chapter was published well before the show was aired.
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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: In chapter 19, after Satome is arrested and jailed for his AttemptedRape of Tomoyo, not one of the other students is happy to see him go, with one girl even coming right out and saying that she feels safer with Satome gone.
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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: In chapter 19, after Satome is arrested and jailed for his AttemptedRape of Tomoyo, not one of the other students is happy to see him go, with one girl even coming right out and saying that she feels safer with Satome gone.
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** [[spoiler:However, the chemistry between Meiling and Matsumoto comes to an end in chapter 36, as Matsumoto cheats on Meiling with Megumi.]]
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* BrotherSisterIncest: In chapter 36, it's revealed that Meiling's LoveInterest Matsumoto is a womanizer and had been cheating on her with Megumi, the school slut. Tomoyo reveals through a DNA test that [[spoiler: Matsumoto and Megumi are half-siblings through their father, and Naoko had arranged for them to find out ''after'' they did it to get back at Megumi for seducing her boyfriend; Megumi is justifiably grossed out at this revelation]].
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** In chapter 2, Takashi's tall tales about witches and of the first (recorded) one being from Egypt could've been a reference to ''[[spoiler:PuellaMagiMadokaMagica]]'' were it not for the fact that this chapter was published well before the show was aired.
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** In chapter 2, Takashi's tall tales about witches and of the first (recorded) one being from Egypt could've been a reference to ''[[spoiler:PuellaMagiMadokaMagica]]'' ''PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' were it not for the fact that this chapter was published well before the show was aired.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: The entire reason that [[spoiler: Meiling's grandfather]] is staging these attacks on Sakura is because he wants [[spoiler: Meiling's engagement with Syaoran to be reinstated]]. Of course, he's prevented from being sympathetic because he's actively trying to ''murder'' Sakura, and has repeatedly caused collateral damage and endangered innocent lives.
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* {{Crossover}}: Two omakes features crossovers of CCS with ''XiaolinShowdown'' and ''AvatarTheLastAirbender''.
* EvilLawyerJoke: In chapter 22, Meiling pokes at Takashi for his career choice as lawyer.
--> '''Tomoyo''': I always figured you'd make a good lawyer.
--> '''Meiling''': He certainly lies well enough.
--> '''Tomoyo''': I always figured you'd make a good lawyer.
--> '''Meiling''': He certainly lies well enough.
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* FairPlayVillain: Ryuji Akuma, the assassin hired to kill Sakura in chapter 10, states that he will fight Sakura his own way rather than the way his employer wanted him to... by giving her four days to prepare to a fight to the death, warning her that, if she does not do so, he will simply kill Sakura and her entire family, including Tomoyo and her mother.
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* FairPlayVillain: Ryuji Akuma, the assassin hired to kill Sakura in chapter 10, states that he will fight Sakura his own way rather than the way his employer wanted him to... to… by giving her four days to prepare to a fight to the death, warning her that, if she does not do so, he will simply kill Sakura and her entire family, including Tomoyo and her mother.
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* [[MistakenForGod Mistaken For Angel]]: Chapter 22, two robbers mistake Yue for this and promptly turn themselves in to the cops right after.
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* SecretKeeper: Tomoyo, Touya, and Meiling fill this role, but the first chapter adds Chiharu, Naoko, and Rika to the list. In the second chapter, Mr. Terada and Takashi know as well. Later, we also find out that this also applies to Fujitaka after he discovered Cerberus, and chapter 8 reveals that Sonomi apparently also knew for a long while.
** SecretSecretKeeper: In the chapter 7 omake, it's revealed that Tomoyo's bodyguards knew of Sakura's secret ever since the Shadow Card and have kept quiet of this, but now they're standard {{Secret Keeper}}s.
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** In chapter 2, Takashi's tall tales about witches and of the first (recorded) one being from Egypt could've been a reference to ''[[spoiler:PuellaMagiMadokaMagica]]'' were it not for the fact that this chapter was published well before the show was aired.
** Chapter 10 has another of Takashi's tall tales where he said the first duels started in Egypt using stone playing cards, a reference to the ''YuGiOh'' animé.
** Sakura's "battle costume" for chapter 15 had a logo that all but references ''TheGhostbusters''.
* SpottingTheThread: Renji knew enough about Reiko to [[spoiler:see through her fake Sakura body during sex]].
** SecretSecretKeeper: In the chapter 7 omake, it's revealed that Tomoyo's bodyguards knew of Sakura's secret ever since the Shadow Card and have kept quiet of this, but now they're standard {{Secret Keeper}}s.
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** In chapter 2, Takashi's tall tales about witches and of the first (recorded) one being from Egypt could've been a reference to ''[[spoiler:PuellaMagiMadokaMagica]]'' were it not for the fact that this chapter was published well before the show was aired.
** Chapter 10 has another of Takashi's tall tales where he said the first duels started in Egypt using stone playing cards, a reference to the ''YuGiOh'' animé.
** Sakura's "battle costume" for chapter 15 had a logo that all but references ''TheGhostbusters''.
* SpottingTheThread: Renji knew enough about Reiko to [[spoiler:see through her fake Sakura body during sex]].
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* AllPeriodsArePMS: Chiharu is going through [=PMS=] at the time she and Takashi convince Sakura to put them through a FreakyFridayFlip.
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* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:To describe Satome as an "asshole" is a ''massive understatement'', but he's not the main villain of the fanfic; he's dead by chapter 19. The main villain is an enemy striking at Sakura magically from the shadows.]]
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* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:To To describe Satome as an "asshole" is a ''massive understatement'', but he's not the main villain of the fanfic; he's [[spoiler:he's dead by chapter 19. The main villain is an enemy striking at Sakura magically from the shadows.]]
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* AscendedExtra[=/=]CharacterFocus: Sakura's classmates, i.e. Chiharu, Rika, Naoko and Takashi whom were previously background characters in the canon, play a much greater role in this fan fiction as it explores the lives of all the four classmates as well as their implications.
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* GenerationXerox: In chapter 13, it's established that Sakura, Tomoyo, Rika, Naoko, and Chiharu's mothers are similar to their daughters, albeit with different pairings:
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: An unusual variation in that we only learn this after it's already backfired. [[spoiler:After Shinji cheats on Naoko, Tsuda becomes furious with Shinji, and after reading Shinji the riot act on how Shinji's behavior means Naoko can't trust Shinji, Tsuda reveals that he's mad because Shinji had everything Tsuda wanted, but threw it away. Shinji asks in confusion whether that means Tsuda liked Naoko. Tsuda confirms it by immediately punching Shinji in the face.]]
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** Chapter 23 introduces Megumi, who is explicitly described as a slut and doesn't hesitate to flirt with and try to seduce even taken men. She even has plans to become a prostitute after school, stating it's "good money."
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* FreakyFridayFlip: In chapter 4, Takashi and Chiharu persuade Sakura to use the Change Card to swap their bodies so as to get a view on how tough the other has it. They both come out with better understanding of the other.
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* FreakyFridayFlip: In chapter 4, Takashi and Chiharu persuade Sakura to use the Change Card to swap their bodies so as to get a view on how tough the other has it. They both come out with better understanding of the other.other: Takashi has a better understanding of the inconveniences Chiharu has to deal with being a girl, and Chiharu has a better understanding of how much pressure Takashi's family places on him to succeed.
