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** Doubly so due to taking inspiration and characters from other ''VideoGame/KanColle'' fics.fics, particularly ''FanFic/ForEarthAndHerColonies'' and ''FanFic/KantOCelleQuest'', respectively.
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Can be found here: [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-of-leviathan-a-kancolle-halo-crossover-fic.465935/ here]] on Spacebattles
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Can be found here: [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-of-leviathan-a-kancolle-halo-crossover-fic.465935/ here]] on SpacebattlesSpacebattles and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12232670/1/Rise-of-Leviathan Here]] on Fanfiction.Net.
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* CameBackWrong: Very much how Leviathan and [[spoiler: Umbra]] came back, given the unintended use of Abyssal parts, human flesh, and a hastily thrown together summoning platform. Even the Abyssals aren't sure what to classify them as.
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* CameBackWrong: Very much how Leviathan and [[spoiler: Umbra]] came back, given the unintended use of Abyssal parts, human flesh, and a hastily thrown together thrown-together summoning platform. Even the Abyssals aren't sure what to classify them as.
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* CoolPlane: Leviathan's GA-TL1 Longswords turn out to be some Levi's best assets, capable of destroyer Abyssal interceptors to Nu-class Light Carriers.
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* CoolPlane: Leviathan's GA-TL1 Longswords turn out to be some Levi's best assets, capable of destroyer destroying Abyssal interceptors to Nu-class Light Carriers.
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* BFG: Leviathan's MAC (Magnetic Accelerator Cannon) is so powerful, it can oneshot every Abyssal.
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* BFG: {{BFG}}: Leviathan's MAC (Magnetic Accelerator Cannon) is so powerful, it can oneshot every Abyssal.
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* In-SeriesNickname: Levi for Leviathan.
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* In-SeriesNickname: InSeriesNickname: Levi for Leviathan.
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* TheBattlestar: Levi is considered by both the Humans forest and Abyssals as one.
* TheDreaded: Modern nuclear submarines are this to the Abyssals. They are one of the few watercraft the Humans can use to venture close to the Abyssal home turf. Abyssals hate them to the point that in chapter 27, they chose to focus their attention on a lone Virginia class nuclear submarine instead of the supply convoy they were harassing.
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* NormalFishinaTinyPond: UNSC Leviathan, in her home universe, may be powerful but she is hopelessly outclassed by most Covenant warships. On 21st Century Earth, she proves that she is the most deadly shipgirl around.
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* MacrossMissileMassacre: Levi resorts to using her Archer Missile pods whenever it's no ideal to use her MAC. And it's super effective. She is also called the "Guided Missile Princess" by Abyssal Forces.
* NormalFishinaTinyPond: UNSC Leviathan, in her home universe, may be powerful but she is hopelessly outclassed by most Covenant warships. On 21st Century Earth, she proves that she is the most deadlyshipgirl around.ship girl around. Ancher Missiles, something rather ineffective against the Alien Covenant, Proves to be utterly devasting against the Abyssals.
* NormalFishinaTinyPond: UNSC Leviathan, in her home universe, may be powerful but she is hopelessly outclassed by most Covenant warships. On 21st Century Earth, she proves that she is the most deadly
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* BFG: Leviathan's MAC (Magnetic Accelerator Cannon) is so powerful it can oneshot every Abyssal.
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* ADayintheLimelight: A number of examples exist
** Admiral Stanford and the UNSC Eridani Fleet get this in the first chapter as they attempt to hold off the Covenant long enough for the UNSC Pillar of Autumn to escape.
** Leviathan's ODST and Marine Complement get their spotlight during the ground battles of Manila.
** Taiha Squadron, Levi's Longsword squadron, get's their own spotlight in Chapter 27 as they decimate Abyssal air and sea forces.
** Admiral Stanford and the UNSC Eridani Fleet get this in the first chapter as they attempt to hold off the Covenant long enough for the UNSC Pillar of Autumn to escape.
** Leviathan's ODST and Marine Complement get their spotlight during the ground battles of Manila.
** Taiha Squadron, Levi's Longsword squadron, get's their own spotlight in Chapter 27 as they decimate Abyssal air and sea forces.
* BFG: Leviathan's MAC (Magnetic Accelerator Cannon) is so powerful it can oneshot every Abyssal.
* CoolPlane: Leviathan's GA-TL1 Longswords turn out to be some Levi's best assets, capable of destroyer Abyssal interceptors to Nu-class Light Carriers.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Leviathan is described as black armour plates, eyes that burned like stars and born as an Abyssal, the same beings trying to destroy Human nations. Yet despite this, Leviathan is more than happy to fight alongside Humans and shipgirls due to her loyalty to the UNSC and Humanity.
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%%* FishOutOfTemporalWater: FishOutOfTemporalWater:
** All of the ship-girls, as well as theAbyssals.Abyssals.
** Doubly so for Leviathan and Umbra. Space-Faring vessels from the 2500s finding themselves in the early 21st century.
** All of the ship-girls, as well as the
** Doubly so for Leviathan and Umbra. Space-Faring vessels from the 2500s finding themselves in the early 21st century.
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* LogicalWeakness: While Levi's armour is strong enough to resist andy Abyssal attacks, the came cannot be said for her missile launch tubes
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* MacrossMissileMassacre: Because she can't use her MAC as openly during the battle of Manile due to the risk of friendly fire or collateral damage, Leviathan decides to drown the first batch of Abyssals she runs into with a bunch of anti-ship missiles. It's super effectives.
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* OhCrap:
** The Human Admiralty's reaction when Leviathan reveals that radiation was detected during the battle, radiation that [[spoiler: either came from a slip space drive or a nuclear weapon]].
** The Abyssals who summoned Leviathan also have this reaction when the UNSC ship turns on them.
** The Human Admiralty's reaction when Leviathan reveals that radiation was detected during the battle, radiation that [[spoiler: either came from a slip space drive or a nuclear weapon]].
** The Abyssals who summoned Leviathan also have this reaction when the UNSC ship turns on them.
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** The Human Admiralty's reaction when Leviathan reveals that radiation was detected during the battle, radiation that [[spoiler: either came from a slip space drive or a live nuclear weapon]].
** TheAbyssals who summoned reaction of the Destroyer Princess when Leviathan also have this reaction when the UNSC ship turns on them. decides to start shooting every Abyssal in her sight with her MAC
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* WhamLine: As it turns out, Leviathan was not the only UNSC space ship summoned by the Abyssal. Or rather, she's the only UNSC ship summoned (so far), but not the only spaceship.
--> '''Leviathan:''' "Umbra? Edge of Umbra is that really you?."
--> '''Edge on Umbra (ONI Prowler) "Suprise!"
--> '''Leviathan:''' "Umbra? Edge of Umbra is that really you?."
--> '''Edge on Umbra (ONI Prowler) "Suprise!"
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* Macross Missile Massacre: MacrossMissileMassacre: Because she can't use her MAC as openly during the battle of Manile due to the risk of friendly fire or collateral damage, Leviathan decides to drown the first batch of Abyssals she runs into with a bunch of anti-ship missiles. It's super effectives.
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* A Day in the Limelight: A number of examples exist
** Admiral Stanford and the UNSC Eridani Fleet get this in the first chapter as they attempt to hold off the Covenant long enough for the UNSC Pillar of Autumn to escape.
** Leviathan's ODST and Marine Complement get their spotlight during the ground battles of Manila.
** Taiha Squadron, Levi's Longsword squadron, get's their own spotlight in Chapter 27 as they decimate Abyssal air and sea forces.
** Admiral Stanford and the UNSC Eridani Fleet get this in the first chapter as they attempt to hold off the Covenant long enough for the UNSC Pillar of Autumn to escape.
** Leviathan's ODST and Marine Complement get their spotlight during the ground battles of Manila.
** Taiha Squadron, Levi's Longsword squadron, get's their own spotlight in Chapter 27 as they decimate Abyssal air and sea forces.
* LogicalWeakness: While Levi's armour is strong enough to resist andy Abyssal attacks, the came cannot be said for her missile launch tubes
* Macross Missile Massacre: Because she can't use her MAC as openly during the battle of Manile due to the risk of friendly fire or collateral damage, Leviathan decides to drown the first batch of Abyssals she runs into with a bunch of anti-ship missiles. It's super effectives.
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* OhCrap!: The Human Admiralty's reaction when Leviathan reveals that radiation was detected during the battle, radiation that [[spoiler: either came from a slip space drive or a nuclear weapon]].
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* OhCrap!: OhCrap!:
** The Human Admiralty's reaction when Leviathan reveals that radiation was detected during the battle, radiation that [[spoiler: either came from a slip space drive or a nuclearweapon]].weapon]].
** The Abyssals who summoned Leviathan also have this reaction when the UNSC ship turns on them.
** The Human Admiralty's reaction when Leviathan reveals that radiation was detected during the battle, radiation that [[spoiler: either came from a slip space drive or a nuclear
** The Abyssals who summoned Leviathan also have this reaction when the UNSC ship turns on them.
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"A look into what happens if you try to summon a shipgirl in a hurry using the blood spilled of your comrades by the enemy. Right now. All over your summoning ground. And you call out in anger for someone to just dish out revenge. Apparently an Abyssal ship-girl. Friendly towards humanity, but brimming with rage against her enemies. Add in that it is a Halo UNSC cruiser and apocalyptic rage is a lot more literal."
"What sticks out in this fic is the expansive world building around the Abyssals, their nature and reasons, as well as extensive insights in how a shipgirl with abyssal like biology would work. And how utterly out of context and terrifying the concept is for everyone else. Everyone."
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-->--'''UNSC Leviathan''', Recently Summoned Kansumi
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One problem. They summoned the Marathon-Class Heavy Cruiser UNSC Leviathan: Former flagship of the UNSC Eridani Fleet, recently destroyed by the Alien Covenant, and very loyal to Humanity.
Needless to say goes very poorly for the Abyssals.
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* OhCrap!: The Human Admiralty's reaction when Leviathan reveals that radiation was detected during the battle, radiation that [[spoiler: either came from a slip space drive or a nuclear weapon]].
* OhCrap!: The Human Admiralty's reaction when Leviathan reveals that radiation was detected during the battle, radiation that [[spoiler: either came from a slip space drive or a nuclear weapon]].
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%%* TheKlutz: Willie D. Porter.
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A look into what happens if you try to summon a shipgirl in a hurry using the blood spilled of your comrades by the enemy. Right now. All over your summoning ground. And you call out in anger for someone to just dish out revenge. Apparently an Abyssal ship-girl. Friendly towards humanity, but brimming with rage against her enemies. Add in that it is a Halo UNSC cruiser and apocalyptic rage is a lot more literal.
What sticks out in this fic is the expansive world building around the Abyssals, their nature and reasons, as well as extensive insights in how a shipgirl with abyssal like biology would work. And how utterly out of context and terrifying the concept is for everyone else. Everyone.
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"What sticks out in this fic is the expansive world building around the Abyssals, their nature and reasons, as well as extensive insights in how a shipgirl with abyssal like biology would work. And how utterly out of context and terrifying the concept is for everyone else.
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* TakingYouWithMe: Taking out a Covenant carrier in a mutual nuclear detonation [[spoiler:when all of her crew were already dead]].
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* TakingYouWithMe: Taking out a Covenant carrier in a mutual nuclear detonation [[spoiler:when all of her crew were already dead]].dead]].
* TheKlutz: Willie D. Porter.
* TheKlutz: Willie D. Porter.
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* BigEater: Shipgirls in general, but Leviathan eats an entire bar and grill out of stock in one sitting.
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* ShoutOut: Happens by the dozen, if you know where to look.
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* EldritchAbomination: The Abyss itself. It definitely exists, and has an agenda, but what that is, or even if it's something the Abyssals themselves can understand, is unknown.
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A look into what happens if you try to summon a shipgirl in a hurry using the blood spilled of your comrades by the enemy. Right now. All over your summoning ground. And you call out in anger for someone to just dish out revenge. Apparently an Abyssal ship-girl. Friendly towards humanity, but brimming with rage against her enemies. Add in that it is a Halo UNSC cruiser and apocalyptic rage is a lot more literal.
What sticks out in this fic is the expansive world building around the Abyssals, their nature and reasons, as well as extensive insights in how a shipgirl with abyssal like biology would work. And how utterly out of context and terrifying the concept is for everyone else. Everyone.
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!!Provides Examples Of:
* AnyoneCanDie: Definitely not the kind of story where everyone lives happily ever after.
* BodyHorror: Abyssal technology and methodology in a nutshell.
* CameBackWrong: Very much how Leviathan and [[spoiler: Umbra]] came back, given the unintended use of Abyssal parts, human flesh, and a hastily thrown together summoning platform. Even the Abyssals aren't sure what to classify them as.
* CrossOver: Very obvious, given who the fic stars. There are some intermingling aspects to both universes that meld into the fic's setting though.
** Doubly so due to taking inspiration and characters from other [[VideoGame/KantaiCollection KanColle]] fics.
* EmpathicWeapon: Hephaestus is essentially this, Double Subverted as he is an AI controlling Levi's tail-weapon.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: All of the ship-girls, as well as the Abyssals.
* HeadbuttingHeroes: Leviathan and Umbra. Leviathan is proper Navy, and Umbra is an ONI Prowler, and the difference in mentalities that those two organizations have is very much shown by how they disagree on methodology.
* HumanWeapon: Ship-Girls as a whole. And Abyssals too, for the most part. Leviathan sees little problem with it, but a lot of other shipgirls and the navies themselves have major issues in regards to this.
* InhumanHuman: Abyssals in a nutshell. Most of them are surprisingly sane and rational, but the bodies they put themselves into are most definitely abnormal.
* Lilliputians: The Fairies of the shipgirls. They not only act as part of the shipgirl, but can act as semi-independent extensions of them too. A fact that creeps out multiple people, even shipgirls from time to time.
** [[spoiler: "Her crew, the ones she could feel running around inside of her, all rang out with reports of readiness and preparation. The fact that they did so with aplomb and eagerness was appreciated... the fact that not a single one of them was in her database was not. It was enough to make her security protocols SCREAM at her, yet for SOME REASON they were utterly silent... Which made as much sense as the rest at this point. Really, the only reason she wasn't pulling every one of the little guys out and demanding answers in a more... physical manner was because the damage that she should have had after blowing herself to kingdom come with a dual nuclear explosion was conspicuously absent and she was not eager to have that change any time soon. That, and she wasn't sure if she'd be pulling out people or organs at this rate..."]]
* PowerUpgradingDeformation: Abyssals can do this to take on the forms of a Sea Monster, their twisted ship's hull form, or a hybrid of the two. Especially when facing regular human ships.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Levi's motivation in a nutshell. Seemingly subverted due to not having any Covenant in the area, but still very much a core part of her personality.
* TakingYouWithMe: Taking out a Covenant carrier in a mutual nuclear detonation [[spoiler:when all of her crew were already dead]].
What sticks out in this fic is the expansive world building around the Abyssals, their nature and reasons, as well as extensive insights in how a shipgirl with abyssal like biology would work. And how utterly out of context and terrifying the concept is for everyone else. Everyone.
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!!Provides Examples Of:
* AnyoneCanDie: Definitely not the kind of story where everyone lives happily ever after.
* BodyHorror: Abyssal technology and methodology in a nutshell.
* CameBackWrong: Very much how Leviathan and [[spoiler: Umbra]] came back, given the unintended use of Abyssal parts, human flesh, and a hastily thrown together summoning platform. Even the Abyssals aren't sure what to classify them as.
* CrossOver: Very obvious, given who the fic stars. There are some intermingling aspects to both universes that meld into the fic's setting though.
** Doubly so due to taking inspiration and characters from other [[VideoGame/KantaiCollection KanColle]] fics.
* EmpathicWeapon: Hephaestus is essentially this, Double Subverted as he is an AI controlling Levi's tail-weapon.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: All of the ship-girls, as well as the Abyssals.
* HeadbuttingHeroes: Leviathan and Umbra. Leviathan is proper Navy, and Umbra is an ONI Prowler, and the difference in mentalities that those two organizations have is very much shown by how they disagree on methodology.
* HumanWeapon: Ship-Girls as a whole. And Abyssals too, for the most part. Leviathan sees little problem with it, but a lot of other shipgirls and the navies themselves have major issues in regards to this.
* InhumanHuman: Abyssals in a nutshell. Most of them are surprisingly sane and rational, but the bodies they put themselves into are most definitely abnormal.
* Lilliputians: The Fairies of the shipgirls. They not only act as part of the shipgirl, but can act as semi-independent extensions of them too. A fact that creeps out multiple people, even shipgirls from time to time.
** [[spoiler: "Her crew, the ones she could feel running around inside of her, all rang out with reports of readiness and preparation. The fact that they did so with aplomb and eagerness was appreciated... the fact that not a single one of them was in her database was not. It was enough to make her security protocols SCREAM at her, yet for SOME REASON they were utterly silent... Which made as much sense as the rest at this point. Really, the only reason she wasn't pulling every one of the little guys out and demanding answers in a more... physical manner was because the damage that she should have had after blowing herself to kingdom come with a dual nuclear explosion was conspicuously absent and she was not eager to have that change any time soon. That, and she wasn't sure if she'd be pulling out people or organs at this rate..."]]
* PowerUpgradingDeformation: Abyssals can do this to take on the forms of a Sea Monster, their twisted ship's hull form, or a hybrid of the two. Especially when facing regular human ships.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Levi's motivation in a nutshell. Seemingly subverted due to not having any Covenant in the area, but still very much a core part of her personality.
* TakingYouWithMe: Taking out a Covenant carrier in a mutual nuclear detonation [[spoiler:when all of her crew were already dead]].
