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-> ''Shipwreck in a sea of faces''
-> ''There's a dreamy world out there.''
-> ''Dear friends in higher places,''
-> ''Carry me away from here.''
-> ''Travel light, let the sun eclipse you,''
-> ''For your flight is about to leave.''
-> ''There's more in this great adventure''
-> ''Than you ever believe …''

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-> ''Shipwreck in a sea of faces''
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''There's a dreamy world out there.''
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''Dear friends in higher places,''
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''Carry me away from here.''
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''Travel light, let the sun eclipse you,''
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''For your flight is about to leave.''
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''There's more in this great adventure''
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adventure''\\
''Than you ever believe …''



* AGodAmI: an interesting variant with Mewtwo. Legendary Pokémon are all considered natural gods, with only their level differing, but along with that, all of them 'stand' for something such as truth and ideals, sea, land and sky, victory, protection, arts and so forth. Mewtwo was a god (Legendary) since his birth. It is only after being sterny scolded by the Council and ordered to atone that he received an attribution. Now Mewtwo is the god of artificial Pokémon.
* ApparentlyHumanMerfolk: the naiads, a race of Ancients that look human except for their blue hairs and gills on their neck. They also have a second protective lid.
* ArtifactOfDoom: the Tide Pendant, which ends up in Misty's ownership. It holds the power of a god and was said to have sunk an archipelago the size of the Orange Islands in a single wave. Also, as Misty notes, wanting to abuse its power with every use is a constant threat.
* AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: ranking in Ash's crew is determined by your strength and loyalty to him. So, while Fearow was incredibly strong, the fact he hated Ash placed him at the bottom. Charizard and Clefable, however, are both powerful enough to stand against Legendaries and will die for their Trainer, hence the reason they co-lead the group while Ash is away.
* AuthorAppeal: the author really likes music. Nearly every chapter starts with a song and all battles have a theme. Her preferences are mainly Toto, Phil Collins and various James Bond themes for the songs. The battle themes usually come from Kingdom Hearts or Final Fantasy, but there's also some Pokémon here and there ...

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* AGodAmI: an interesting variant with Mewtwo. Legendary Pokémon are all considered natural gods, with only their level differing, but along with that, all of them 'stand' for something such as truth and ideals, sea, land and sky, victory, protection, arts and so forth. Mewtwo was a god (Legendary) since his birth. It is only after being sterny scolded by the Council and ordered to atone that he received an attribution. Now Mewtwo is the god of artificial Pokémon.
* ApparentlyHumanMerfolk: the naiads, The Naiads, a race of Ancients that look human except for their blue hairs and gills on their neck. They also have a second protective lid.
* ArtifactOfDoom: the The Tide Pendant, which ends up in Misty's ownership. It holds the power of a god and was said to have sunk an archipelago the size of the Orange Islands in a single wave. Also, as Misty notes, wanting to abuse its power with every use is a constant threat.
* AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: ranking Ranking in Ash's crew is determined by your one's strength and loyalty to him. So, while Fearow was incredibly strong, the fact he hated his hatred for Ash placed him at the bottom. Charizard and Clefable, however, are both powerful enough to stand against Legendaries and will die for their Trainer, hence the reason they co-lead the group while Ash is away.
* AuthorAppeal: the The author really likes music. Nearly every chapter starts with a song and all battles have a theme. Her preferences are mainly Toto, Phil Collins and various James Bond themes for the songs. The battle themes usually come from Kingdom Hearts or Final Fantasy, but there's also some Pokémon here and there ...there...



* BadassCrew: the group and their teams. Silver is an old and powerful Aura Guardian with Elemental Aura, Ash is also an Aura Guardian and kicks ass more than the other way around, Misty is a BadassNormal who recently received an ArtifactOfDoom / WeaponOfMassDestruction, Brock is one of the Eight Challenges and even Tracey can hold his own. By "Legends of Johto", Gary has joined as the resident Psychic.
* BadassFamily: or, more exactly, Badass Bloodline. On the father side, the whole family leads one of the most powerful criminal organizations in Kanto. On the mother side, the entire bloodline can be traced back to Sir Aaron, the legendary Aura Guardian of Rota whose mother was an Ancient. Both lines were known for their powerful affinity with Aura.

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* BadassCrew: the The group and their teams. Silver is an old and powerful Aura Guardian with Elemental Aura, Ash is also an Aura Guardian and kicks ass more than the other way around, Misty is a BadassNormal who recently received an ArtifactOfDoom / WeaponOfMassDestruction, the [[ArtifactOfDoom Tide Pendant]] (which also doubles as a WeaponOfMassDestruction), Brock is one of the Eight Challenges and even Tracey can hold his own. By "Legends of Johto", Gary has joined as the resident Psychic.
* BadassFamily: or, more exactly, Badass Bloodline. Ash's family is this. On the father his father's side, the whole family leads one of the most powerful criminal organizations in Kanto. On the his mother side, the entire bloodline can be traced back to Sir Aaron, the legendary Aura Guardian of Rota whose mother was an Ancient. Both lines were known for their powerful affinity with Aura.



* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: Ash's attempt to catch Mewtwo with the Master Ball ended with him and Clefable on their butt.



* CityInABottle: {{Averted}} with the Eight Underwater Cities. They are domed underwater cities of Ancients, but all of them remain aware of the outside world and help the victims of shipwrecks, though they give them a memory-altering serum once they leave to keep their existance hidden. Also, some survivors have the option to stay and become part of the population, such as New Naibel's Nurse Joy's mother.
* ChekhovsGun: The Thunder Stone Surge gave to Ash after their Gym Battle. [[spoiler: Ash uses it to evolve Pikachutwo into Raichu, solving his CloneAngst.]]
* ComingOfAgeStory: the plot behind the entire series. This is basically Ash growing up under the tutelage of a mysterious man, facing various trials and the reality of life to become stronger as a Trainer and later, an Aura Guardian.
* CurbStompBattle: a good deal of Silver's fight, and later Ash's once he starts getting stronger. The fight against Giovanni is a subversion: Ash won 6-0, but Giovanni proved to be more than a match.
* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: While not exactly a good reason, Ash's supposed father Bruno did have a reason why he went on a journey and never came back: [[spoiler: he found out that Ash is actually his brother Giovanni's son.]]

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* CityInABottle: {{Averted}} with the Eight Underwater Cities. They are domed underwater cities of Ancients, but all of them remain aware of the outside world and help the victims of shipwrecks, though they give them a memory-altering serum once they leave to keep their existance existence hidden. Also, some survivors have the option to stay and become part of the population, such as the mother of New Naibel's Nurse Joy's mother.
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* ChekhovsGun: The Thunder Stone Lt. Surge gave to Ash after their Gym Battle. [[spoiler: Ash uses it Battle [[spoiler:is later used to evolve Pikachutwo into Raichu, solving his CloneAngst.]]
* ComingOfAgeStory: the The plot behind the entire series. This is basically Ash growing up under the tutelage of a mysterious man, facing various trials and the reality of life to become stronger as a Trainer and later, an Aura Guardian.
* CurbStompBattle: a A good deal of Silver's fight, and later Ash's once he starts getting stronger. The fight against Giovanni is a subversion: Ash won 6-0, but Giovanni proved to be more than a match.
* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: While not exactly a good reason, Ash's supposed father Bruno father, Bruno, did have a reason why he went on a journey and never came back: [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he found out that Ash is actually the son of his brother Giovanni's son.brother, Giovanni.]]



* DeathOfTheOldGods: the Ean gods weren't exactly old, but they all died sealing the rifts threatening reality, leaving the Eans/Ancients godless and without any divine support. [[spoiler: It is later revealed that, aside from the elemental gods who were KilledOffForReal during the ean war, the other five are slowly coming back to life. Nathea was the first to return and Troban is also living in the Reverse World alongside Giratina, though he is an amnesiac teenager.]]

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* DeathOfTheOldGods: the The Ean gods weren't exactly old, but they all died sealing the rifts threatening reality, leaving the Eans/Ancients godless and without any divine support. [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It is later revealed that, aside from the elemental gods who were KilledOffForReal during the ean war, the other five are slowly coming back to life. Nathea was the first to return and Troban is also living in the Reverse World alongside Giratina, though he is an amnesiac teenager.]]



** BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: Ash's attempt to catch Mewtwo with the Master Ball ended with him and Clefable on their butt.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: in the fifth chapter of Mysteries of the sea, Silver reveals a darker side of the Pokémon World to the heroes: the fact that poachers and hunters kill some Pokémon ''for their jewels and hides''. The author makes a parallel with real-life practice of hunting animals for their fur and ivory.
* EatingTheEyeCandy: when Melody meets up with a bare-chested Ash on his way to the showers, she just can't help commenting him on his athletic body ... and touch both the six-pack on his stomach and those muscular arms of his.

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** BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: Ash's attempt to catch Mewtwo with the Master Ball ended with him and Clefable on their butt.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: in In the fifth chapter of Mysteries ''Mysteries of the sea, sea'', Silver reveals a darker side of the Pokémon World to the heroes: the fact that poachers and hunters kill some Pokémon ''for their jewels and hides''. The author makes a parallel with real-life practice of hunting animals for their fur and ivory.
* EatingTheEyeCandy: when Melody meets up with a bare-chested Ash on his way to the showers, she just can't help commenting him on his athletic body ...body... and touch both the six-pack on his stomach and those muscular arms of his.



* {{Fiction 500}}: just where does Silver's money come from?
* {{Foreshadowing}}: during his training with Lorelei, Ash stumbles across a book called ''Mysteries of the sea''. When asked what his favorite part, Ash answers with the theory regarding Shamouti Islands being the "Cradle of Life". Fast forward to the sequel, which happens in the Orange Islands. What is it called? [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9341429/1/Pok%C3%A9mon-Mysteries-of-the-sea Pokémon: Mysteries of the sea.]]

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* {{Fiction 500}}: Fiction500: just where does Silver's money come from?
* {{Foreshadowing}}: during {{Foreshadowing}}:
** During
his training with Lorelei, Ash stumbles across a book called ''Mysteries of the sea''. When asked what his favorite part, Ash answers with the theory regarding Shamouti Islands being the "Cradle of Life". Fast forward to the sequel, which happens in the Orange Islands. What is it called? [[http://www.''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9341429/1/Pok%C3%A9mon-Mysteries-of-the-sea Pokémon: Mysteries of the sea.]]sea]]''.



* HalfHumanHybrid: thanks to the Ancients breeding with the inhabitants of the Pokémon world. Several of them, a Nurse Joy included, can be seen in New Naibel. As a subversion, the Ancients counted several races among which were the humans, so unions between humans from Eä (the Ancient world) and humans from the Pokémon world don't count.
* HeelFaceTurn: after the incident with James's parents, the two groups become fast friends. Giovanni even orders the trio to keep an eye on his son.
* JerkassGods: as far as Silver is concerned, the Legendary Council is that to him as he more or less sees himself as their slave. The truth is that some Legendaries, like Darkrai and Lugia, do feel sorry for him and wants to alleviate his burden. Dialga and Palkia, however, hate him.
* LampshadeHanging: during Axew's first training session, Pikachu explains the kid what STAB is. Axew is quick to note how it sounds exactly like 'to stab', and Onix to wonder if the humans had FunWithAcronyms on this one.
* LittleBitBeastly: some Ancient species like the [[BeastMan felians]] and tree-walkers have animalistic traits. The Nurse Joy of New Naibel is a tree-walker hybrid, which can be told from her tail and eyes.

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* AGodAmI: An interesting variant with Mewtwo. Legendary Pokémon are all considered natural gods, with only their level differing, but along with that, all of them 'stand' for something such as truth and ideals, sea, land and sky, victory, protection, arts and so forth. Mewtwo was a god (Legendary) since his birth. It is only after being sternly scolded by the Council and ordered to atone that he received an attribution. Now Mewtwo is the god of artificial Pokémon.
* HalfHumanHybrid: thanks Thanks to the Ancients breeding with the inhabitants of the Pokémon world. Several world, several of them, a Nurse Joy included, can be seen in New Naibel. As a subversion, the Ancients counted several races among which were the humans, so unions between humans from Eä (the Ancient world) and humans from the Pokémon world don't count.
* HeelFaceTurn: after After the incident with James's parents, both the two groups Rocket Trio and Ash's group become fast friends. Giovanni even orders the trio to keep an eye on his son.
* JerkassGods: as As far as Silver is concerned, the Legendary Council is that this to him as he more or less sees himself as their collective slave. The truth is that some Legendaries, like Darkrai and Lugia, do feel sorry for him and wants to alleviate his burden. Dialga and Palkia, however, hate him.
* LampshadeHanging: during During Axew's first training session, Pikachu explains the kid what STAB is. Axew is quick to note how it sounds exactly like 'to stab', and Onix to wonder if the humans had FunWithAcronyms on this one.
* LittleBitBeastly: some Some Ancient species like the [[BeastMan felians]] Felians]] and tree-walkers Tree-walkers have animalistic traits. The Nurse Joy of New Naibel is a tree-walker hybrid, which can be told from her tail and eyes.



* MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast: or, more exactly, Lugia's Song makes every Pokémon stop whatever they're doing at the moment to listen to you. They may heed your words or not, but apart from the cases of deep-seated blood frenzy, a Pokémon hearing you sing Lugia's Song will stop and listen to you.Ash's version is closer to the trope due to him being an {{Empath}} specializing in taming wild Pokémon.

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* MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast: or, more exactly, Lugia's Song makes every Pokémon stop whatever they're doing at the moment to listen to you. They may heed your words or not, but apart from the cases of deep-seated blood frenzy, a Pokémon hearing you sing Lugia's Song will always stop and listen to you.listen. Ash's version is closer to the trope due to him being an {{Empath}} TheEmpath specializing in taming wild Pokémon.



* OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions: during the Council gathering, one Legendary mentions this is what happened to mankind thanks to science and progress, something they blame the Ancients for. Another notes that the Legendaries' influence can still be felt and active and some scientists actually recognize the Legendaries play a role as gods keeping the world intact.
* ParentalAbandonment: Simon's mom is dead and Ash's father never returned.
* {{Precursors}}: the Ancients, a civilization of very advanced humanoid aliens who migrated to this world three thousand years before the story and set the bases of the modern world. By the time of the story, everyone think they're gone. They introduced Aura to the world and Silver is one of them, just like Sir Aaron's mother.
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* OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions: during During the Council gathering, one Legendary mentions this is what happened to mankind thanks to science and progress, something they blame the Ancients for. Another notes that the Legendaries' influence can still be felt and active and some scientists actually recognize the Legendaries play a role as gods keeping the world intact.
* ParentalAbandonment: Simon's mom is dead and Ash's father never returned.
returned. Ash's father is later revealed to be [[spoiler:Giovanni, who leads Team Rocket]]
* {{Precursors}}: the The Ancients, a civilization of very advanced humanoid aliens who migrated to this world three thousand years before the story and set the bases of the modern world. By the time of the story, everyone think thinks they're gone. They introduced Aura to the world and Silver is one of them, just like Sir Aaron's mother.
%%* PurpleProse: scattered in here and there ...there...



* ShoutOut: one chapter describes the crew going to watch a movie. The movie is an homage from the author to WesternAnimation/LegendOfTheGuardiansTheOwlsOfGaHoole.
%%* StaffOfAuthority: human-form Arceus has one.

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* ShoutOut: one One chapter describes the crew going to watch a movie. The movie is an homage from the author to WesternAnimation/LegendOfTheGuardiansTheOwlsOfGaHoole.
based on ''WesternAnimation/LegendOfTheGuardiansTheOwlsOfGaHoole''.
%%* StaffOfAuthority: human-form Human-form Arceus has one.



%%* TakeThat: sometimes pulled out by the author, especially with the mega-evolution stunt.

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%%* TakeThat: sometimes Sometimes pulled out by the author, especially with the mega-evolution stunt.



* TrainingFromHell: Ash's four weeks of training with the Elite Four. With Bruno: heavy physical training that ended with him and his team facing a ''giant Steelix''. With Lorelei: hours and hours of reading books with practice the afternoon, something Ash isn't used to. With Agatha: dropped in a haunted and very hostile powerplant to climb his way up the food chain and optionally defeat a giant Haunter. With Lance: a little of everything and especially amplifying Ash's empathic skills. Note that Lance also put the kid against his Gyarados, and he had troubles even with the beast holding off ...
* UltimateBlacksmith: the Legendary Blacksmith, which is regularly mentionned in the stories. He is an Ancient of incredible powers who forged many artifacts that appeared in various legends over the ages. His main créations, however, are the World Disk he offered to the Legendary Council as a peace offering from his people and Heart and Soul Flutes, properties of the Chosen with a Golden Heart and the Chosen with a Silver Soul. [[spoiler: Ash currently owns the Heart Flute.]]

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* TrainingFromHell: Ash's four weeks of training with the Elite Four. With Bruno: heavy physical training that ended with him and his team facing a ''giant Steelix''. With Lorelei: hours and hours of reading books with practice in the afternoon, something Ash isn't used to. With Agatha: dropped in a haunted and very hostile powerplant to climb his way up the food chain and optionally defeat a giant Haunter. With Lance: a little of everything and especially amplifying Ash's empathic skills. Note that Lance also put the kid against his Gyarados, and he had troubles even with the beast holding off ...
off...
* UltimateBlacksmith: the The Legendary Blacksmith, which is regularly mentionned in the stories. He Blacksmith is an Ancient of incredible powers who forged many artifacts that appeared in various legends over the ages. His main créations, creations, however, are the World Disk he offered to the Legendary Council as a peace offering from his people and Heart and Soul Flutes, properties of the Chosen with a Golden Heart and the Chosen with a Silver Soul. [[spoiler: Ash currently owns the Heart Flute.]]



* WeaponOfMassDestruction: the main use of the Tide Pendant. The Ancients destroyed one of their countries in a single attack with it. Kinda normal for a gem hosting the powers of a god ...

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* WeaponOfMassDestruction: the The main use of the Tide Pendant. The Ancients destroyed one of their countries in a single attack with it. Kinda normal for a gem hosting the powers of a god ...god...



* {{Whoopi Epiphany Speech}}: Ash delivers an absolutly beautiful one during the fight between cloned Pokémon and their originals that doubles with {{Talking The Monster To Death}}. And it '''works'''!!! The best part? The boy isn't speaking, just playing Lugia's song with a flute. It's his ''heart'' that's doing the talking. {{Chosen One}}, indeed ...

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* {{Whoopi Epiphany Speech}}: WhoopiEpiphanySpeech: Ash delivers an absolutly absolutely beautiful one during the fight between cloned Pokémon and their originals that doubles with {{Talking The Monster To Death}}. TalkingTheMonsterToDeath. And it '''works'''!!! The best part? The boy isn't speaking, just playing Lugia's song with a flute. It's flute -- t's his ''heart'' that's doing the talking. {{Chosen One}}, indeed ...talking.
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Cloning Blues has been renamed to Clone Angst and redefined to only be about people angsting about being a clone. Removing "clones exist" usage.


* CloningBlues: averted with Ashling. He was separated early enough from Mewtwo's mental link that he wasn't brainwashed like the other poké-clones and looks differently enough from Ash that he can simply be considered his younger brother. Played straight with the other clones, though. Especially Pikachutwo/[[spoiler: Raichutwo]].
* ChekhovsGun: the Thunder Stone Surge gave to Ash after their Gym Battle. [[spoiler: Ash uses it to evolve Pikachutwo into Raichu, solving his CloningBlues issues.]]

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* CloningBlues: averted with Ashling. He was separated early enough from Mewtwo's mental link that he wasn't brainwashed like the other poké-clones and looks differently enough from Ash that he can simply be considered his younger brother. Played straight with the other clones, though. Especially Pikachutwo/[[spoiler: Raichutwo]].
* ChekhovsGun: the The Thunder Stone Surge gave to Ash after their Gym Battle. [[spoiler: Ash uses it to evolve Pikachutwo into Raichu, solving his CloningBlues issues.CloneAngst.]]

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* PurpleProse: scattered in here and there ...

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* StaffOfAuthority: human-form Arceus has one.

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* SurprisinglyGoodEnglish: the author apologized countless times for her spelling and strange gramar/syntax by explaining she wasn't a native English speaker, being French instead. One reviewer commented that she wrote it better than ''he'' did!
* TakeThat: sometimes pulled out by the author, especially with the mega-evolution stunt.

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* SurprisinglyGoodEnglish: the author apologized countless times for her spelling and strange gramar/syntax by explaining she wasn't a native English speaker, being French instead. One reviewer commented that she wrote it better than ''he'' did!
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%%* TakeThat: sometimes pulled out by the author, especially with the mega-evolution stunt.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: ranking in Ash's crew is determined by your strength and loyalty to him. So, while Fearow was incredibly strong, the fact he hated Ash placed him at the bottom. Charizard and Clefable, however, are both powerful enough to stand against Legendaries and will die for their Trainer, hence the reason they co-lead the group while Ash is away.

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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: ranking in Ash's crew is determined by your strength and loyalty to him. So, while Fearow was incredibly strong, the fact he hated Ash placed him at the bottom. Charizard and Clefable, however, are both powerful enough to stand against Legendaries and will die for their Trainer, hence the reason they co-lead the group while Ash is away.
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An Alternatve Universe in which a mysterious man washes in Pallet Town and becomes a father substitute/mentor to Ash. Written by Elia41. Currently has two sequel, Pokémon: Mystery of the seas, and Pokémon: Legends of Johto.

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An A ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'' Alternatve Universe in which a mysterious man washes in Pallet Town and becomes a father substitute/mentor to Ash. Written by Elia41. Currently has two sequel, Pokémon: Mystery of the seas, and Pokémon: Legends of Johto.


* AwesomeMcCoolname: most of Ash's Pokémon's True Names. Just look at it: Fleeting Flash, Jet Stream, ''Blazefire'' ... Nightsong and Silent Hope are quite nice too and Silver has two Pokémon like that: Odin the Articuno and Blitz, the Zebstrika. Blitz means 'lightining' in german ... Finally, Lya was named after one of Silver's ancestors, Lya '''''Flamedancer'''''.
** As a rule of thumb, a Pokémon's TrueName is either this or a MeaningfulName.
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* AdultFear: the series being centered on the journey of a young Trainer and his mentor, it was bound to show up...
** The First Movie chapter presents Silver with a particularly nasty dilemma: avenge your recently-petrified foster son or [[spoiler: give up revenge to prevent the genocide of your people]]. Silver tearfully chooses to give up revenge.
** Giovanni was hit by this in his backstory, which explains how he and Silver became friends: a rival criminal gang kidnapped his son and murdered his spouse when she tried to stop them. Later, his son became disgusted with having a criminal for a father and ran away.
** [[spoiler: Delia has to live with the knowledge that her husband Bruno will never return because of a one-night-stand with her brother-in-law resulted in her being pregnant with Ash.]]
** During the Indigo Conference, Professor Oak has to watch his grandson ''snap'' and go in a rampage that only stops after Ash breaks his mind, which leaves him comatose for nearly a year.
** It works the other way. In the Third Movie chapter, not only does Molly loses both of her parents, ''Ash'' sees his mother kidnapped before him and later has his elder brother push him out of the way of crystal pikes, getting nearly killed in the process.
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* HighConcept: A boy meets a mysterious man by a stormy night. Five years later, the two travel together. Awesomeness ensues.

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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: in the fifth chapter of Mysteries of the sea, Silver reveals a darker side of the Pokémon World to the heroes: the fact that poachers and hunters kill some Pokémon ''for their jewels and hides''. The author makes a parallel with real-life practice of hunting animals for their fur and ivory.



* RealityEnsues: in the fifth chapter of Mysteries of the sea, Silver reveals a darker side of the Pokémon World to the heroes: the fact that poachers and hunters kill some Pokémon ''for their jewels and hides''. The author makes a parallel with real-life practice of hunting animals for their fur and ivory.
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* ThePrecursors: the Ancients, a civilization of very advanced humanoid aliens who migrated to this world three thousand years before the story and set the bases of the modern world. By the time of the story, everyone think they're gone. They introduced Aura to the world and Silver is one of them, just like Sir Aaron's mother.

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* ThePrecursors: {{Precursors}}: the Ancients, a civilization of very advanced humanoid aliens who migrated to this world three thousand years before the story and set the bases of the modern world. By the time of the story, everyone think they're gone. They introduced Aura to the world and Silver is one of them, just like Sir Aaron's mother.
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* {{Action Mom}}: Delia, who was a Rocket scientist and descends from Sir Aaron.

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* {{Action Mom}}: ActionMom: Delia, who was a Rocket scientist and descends from Sir Aaron.



* {{Affably Evil}}: Team Rocket is only evil because they are criminals. That apart, they are pretty nice guys, especially around Ash.
* AGodIAm: an interesting variant with Mewtwo. Legendary Pokémon are all considered natural gods, with only their level differing, but along with that, all of them 'stand' for something such as truth and ideals, sea, land and sky, victory, protection, arts and so forth. Mewtwo was a god (Legendary) since his birth. It is only after being sterny scolded by the Council and ordered to atone that he received an attribution. Now Mewtwo is the god of artificial Pokémon.

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* {{Affably Evil}}: AffablyEvil: Team Rocket is only evil because they are criminals. That apart, they are pretty nice guys, especially around Ash.
* AGodIAm: AGodAmI: an interesting variant with Mewtwo. Legendary Pokémon are all considered natural gods, with only their level differing, but along with that, all of them 'stand' for something such as truth and ideals, sea, land and sky, victory, protection, arts and so forth. Mewtwo was a god (Legendary) since his birth. It is only after being sterny scolded by the Council and ordered to atone that he received an attribution. Now Mewtwo is the god of artificial Pokémon.



* {{Author Appeal}}: the author really likes music. Nearly every chapter starts with a song and all battles have a theme. Her preferences are mainly Toto, Phil Collins and various James Bond themes for the songs. The battle themes usually come from Kingdom Hearts or Final Fantasy, but there's also some Pokémon here and there ...
* {{Awesome McCoolname}}: most of Ash's Pokémon's True Names. Just look at it: Fleeting Flash, Jet Stream, ''Blazefire'' ... Nightsong and Silent Hope are quite nice too and Silver has two Pokémon like that: Odin the Articuno and Blitz, the Zebstrika. Blitz means 'lightining' in german ... Finally, Lya was named after one of Silver's ancestors, Lya '''''Flamedancer'''''.

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* {{Author Appeal}}: AuthorAppeal: the author really likes music. Nearly every chapter starts with a song and all battles have a theme. Her preferences are mainly Toto, Phil Collins and various James Bond themes for the songs. The battle themes usually come from Kingdom Hearts or Final Fantasy, but there's also some Pokémon here and there ...
* {{Awesome McCoolname}}: AwesomeMcCoolname: most of Ash's Pokémon's True Names. Just look at it: Fleeting Flash, Jet Stream, ''Blazefire'' ... Nightsong and Silent Hope are quite nice too and Silver has two Pokémon like that: Odin the Articuno and Blitz, the Zebstrika. Blitz means 'lightining' in german ... Finally, Lya was named after one of Silver's ancestors, Lya '''''Flamedancer'''''.
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* CannotTellALie: Reshiram, the Dragon of Truth, is literally incappable of lying, as per his nature. Everything he says is taken as face value by the Council.

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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: While not exactly a good reason, Ash's supposed father Bruno did have a reason why he went on a journey and never came back: [[spoiler: he found out that Ash wasn't his son and is actually his brother Giovanni's son.]]

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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: While not exactly a good reason, Ash's supposed father Bruno did have a reason why he went on a journey and never came back: [[spoiler: he found out that Ash wasn't his son and is actually his brother Giovanni's son.]]



** [[spoiler: The same way, there are clues regarding Ash's nature as the Chosen with a Golden Heart in the very first story (Ash isn't acknowledged as such before Mysteries of the Seas). First, he witnesses Ho-Oh on his first day as a Trainer, potentially because Ho-Oh had come checking on his Chosen. Then there is the way he gets Fearrow to become loyal - Fearrow is even convinced he's the Golden Heart afterwards, much to the other Pokémon's disbelief. Finally, there is his WhoopiEpiphanySpeech during the First Movie, which is basically his powers as the Golden Heart manifesting without the Heart Flute.]]



* UltimateBlacksmith: the Legendary Blacksmith, which is regularly mentionned in the stories. He is an Ancient of incredible powers who forged many artifacts that appeared in various legends over the ages. His main créations, however, are the World Disk he offered to the Legendary Council as a peace offering from his people and Heart and Soul Flutes, properties of the Chosen with a Golden Heart and the Chosen with a Silver Soul. [[spoiler: Ash currently owns the Heart Flute.]]



* {{Whoopi Epiphany Speech}}: Ash delivers an absolutly beautiful one during the fight between cloned Pokémon and their originals that doubles with {{Talking The Monster To Death}}. And it '''works'''!!! The best part? The boy isn't speaking, just playing Lugia's song with a flute. It's his ''heart'' that's doing the talking. {{Chosen One}}, indeed ... To quote:
-->''"Stop fighting! Violence only brings pain! Do you really want to die, wounded and exhausted? Tell me, what are you fighting for? Because Mewtwo ordered it? Mewtwo is blind from the pain and delusion he was a victim of. Even if he created you, his fight isn't yours. You weren't the fooled ones. You weren't the ones who got hurt. Not all humanity is bad. There is good and evil in everyone. In you, in me, in them. And yet, are we fighting one another? Are you fighting because you want to be your own self? The conditions of one's birth do not determine who he really is. His being depends of his choices and actions. My father is a criminal and I myself am illegitimate. And yet, am I a criminal? Am I a bastard? No. And neither are you. You were cloned from other Pokémon, but that doesn't mean you are those Pokémon. Why? Because Mewtwo copied the DNA only. He didn't duplicate the Pokémon's heart and mind. These things are yours alone. In that regard, you are different. In that regard, you are yourself. And no one else. Are you fighting for a place in the world? The world is large. There are plenty of areas where humans do not live and plenty where they do. There is place for everybody to live, grow and develop into what he was meant to be. Don't fight to take someone else's place. Violence only brings pain and no one wants to live in pain. Take instead what is rightfully yours. Everyone has a place where he belongs. I have found mine. My friends have found theirs at my side. What stops you from seizing your chance and find the place your heart is longing for? What stops you from being happy? Not me. And not anyone here but your own blindness. Open your eyes to the world around. Open your heart to the others. You do not have to fight. You never had to."''

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* {{Whoopi Epiphany Speech}}: Ash delivers an absolutly beautiful one during the fight between cloned Pokémon and their originals that doubles with {{Talking The Monster To Death}}. And it '''works'''!!! The best part? The boy isn't speaking, just playing Lugia's song with a flute. It's his ''heart'' that's doing the talking. {{Chosen One}}, indeed ... To quote:\n-->''"Stop fighting! Violence only brings pain! Do you really want to die, wounded and exhausted? Tell me, what are you fighting for? Because Mewtwo ordered it? Mewtwo is blind from the pain and delusion he was a victim of. Even if he created you, his fight isn't yours. You weren't the fooled ones. You weren't the ones who got hurt. Not all humanity is bad. There is good and evil in everyone. In you, in me, in them. And yet, are we fighting one another? Are you fighting because you want to be your own self? The conditions of one's birth do not determine who he really is. His being depends of his choices and actions. My father is a criminal and I myself am illegitimate. And yet, am I a criminal? Am I a bastard? No. And neither are you. You were cloned from other Pokémon, but that doesn't mean you are those Pokémon. Why? Because Mewtwo copied the DNA only. He didn't duplicate the Pokémon's heart and mind. These things are yours alone. In that regard, you are different. In that regard, you are yourself. And no one else. Are you fighting for a place in the world? The world is large. There are plenty of areas where humans do not live and plenty where they do. There is place for everybody to live, grow and develop into what he was meant to be. Don't fight to take someone else's place. Violence only brings pain and no one wants to live in pain. Take instead what is rightfully yours. Everyone has a place where he belongs. I have found mine. My friends have found theirs at my side. What stops you from seizing your chance and find the place your heart is longing for? What stops you from being happy? Not me. And not anyone here but your own blindness. Open your eyes to the world around. Open your heart to the others. You do not have to fight. You never had to."''
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** As early as the second chapter, we're clued in that Ash has Aura powers. First, his reflexes become inexplicably sharper when in danger, but when the Spearow flock attacks and Ash stands between them and Pikachu, he can feel a strange energy welling in him as his hands glow '''blue'''. Silver even wonders about it afterwards. Had Pikachu not interfered, it is very likely that Ash's powers might have awakened right then.
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** [[spoiler: Delia has to live with the knowledge that her husband Bruno will never return because of a one-night-stand with her brother-in-law that resulted in her being pregnant with Ash.]]
** During the Indigo Conference, Professor Oak has to watch his wrandson ''snap'' and go in a rampage that only stops after Ash breaks his mind, which leaves him comatose for nearly a year.

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** [[spoiler: Delia has to live with the knowledge that her husband Bruno will never return because of a one-night-stand with her brother-in-law that resulted in her being pregnant with Ash.]]
** During the Indigo Conference, Professor Oak has to watch his wrandson grandson ''snap'' and go in a rampage that only stops after Ash breaks his mind, which leaves him comatose for nearly a year.
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An Alternatve Universe in which a mysterious man washes in Pallet Town and becomes a father substitute/mentor to Ash. Written by Elia41. A sequel, Pokémon: Mystery of the seas, is at work.

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An Alternatve Universe in which a mysterious man washes in Pallet Town and becomes a father substitute/mentor to Ash. Written by Elia41. A Currently has two sequel, Pokémon: Mystery of the seas, is at work.
and Pokémon: Legends of Johto.
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* AdultFear: the series being centered on the journey of a young Trainer and his mentor, it was bound to show up...
** The First Movie chapter presents Silver with a particularly nasty dilemma: avenge your recently-petrified foster son or [[spoiler: give up revenge to prevent the genocide of your people]]. Silver tearfully chooses to give up revenge.
** Giovanni was hit by this in his backstory, which explains how he and Silver became friends: a rival criminal gang kidnapped his son and murdered his spouse when she tried to stop them. Later, his son became disgusted with having a criminal for a father and ran away.
**[[spoiler: Delia has to live with the knowledge that her husband Bruno will never return because of a one-night-stand with her brother-in-law that resulted in her being pregnant with Ash.]]
** During the Indigo Conference, Professor Oak has to watch his wrandson ''snap'' and go in a rampage that only stops after Ash breaks his mind, which leaves him comatose for nearly a year.
** It works the other way. In the Third Movie chapter, not only does Molly loses both of her parents, ''Ash'' sees his mother kidnapped before him and later has his elder brother push him out of the way of crystal pikes, getting nearly killed in the process.

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* {{Badass}}: everyone, to the point it's almost a {{World of Badass}}.
** BadassAdorable: Axew, once he got his first attack. Butterfree's pink son, Hard Candy, also counts.
** BadassCrew: the group and their teams. Silver is an old and powerful Aura Guardian with Elemental Aura, Ash is also an Aura Guardian and kicks ass more than the other way around, Misty is a BadassNormal who recently received an ArtifactOfDoom / WeaponOfMassDestruction, Brock is one of the Eight Challenges and even Tracey can hold his own. By "Legends of Johto", Gary has joined as the resident Psychic.
** BadassFamily: or, more exactly, Badass Bloodline. On the father side, the whole family leads one of the most powerful criminal organizations in Kanto. On the mother side, the entire bloodline can be traced back to Sir Aaron, the legendary Aura Guardian of Rota whose mother was an Ancient. Both lines were known for their powerful affinity with Aura.

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* {{Badass}}: everyone, to the point it's almost a {{World of Badass}}.
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BadassAdorable: Axew, once he got his first attack. Butterfree's pink son, Hard Candy, also counts.
** * BadassCrew: the group and their teams. Silver is an old and powerful Aura Guardian with Elemental Aura, Ash is also an Aura Guardian and kicks ass more than the other way around, Misty is a BadassNormal who recently received an ArtifactOfDoom / WeaponOfMassDestruction, Brock is one of the Eight Challenges and even Tracey can hold his own. By "Legends of Johto", Gary has joined as the resident Psychic.
** * BadassFamily: or, more exactly, Badass Bloodline. On the father side, the whole family leads one of the most powerful criminal organizations in Kanto. On the mother side, the entire bloodline can be traced back to Sir Aaron, the legendary Aura Guardian of Rota whose mother was an Ancient. Both lines were known for their powerful affinity with Aura.

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