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* TalkingAnimal:
** Spike, a dog, who can speak in wranglish, due to magic
** Kikai No Kawa of Sailor Orbital, an alien cat, who speaks in Japanese, and then wranglish after she gets it [[NeuralImplanting beamed]] into her mind.
** Spike, a dog, who can speak in wranglish, due to magic
** Kikai No Kawa of Sailor Orbital, an alien cat, who speaks in Japanese, and then wranglish after she gets it [[NeuralImplanting beamed]] into her mind.
* ToughSpikesAndStuds: From ''Group Precipitation'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/266/group-precipitation/pointed-fashion-statement-by-fome "Pointed Fashion Statement, by FoME"]]: Former villainess Sunset Shimmer wears a jacket with spikes, which her girlfriend even calls SpikesOfVillainy.
--> '''Sunset''': [[spoiler:"Fine, the truth is that I like leather jackets because they're a harmless way for me to feel like a bad girl, and this one is ridiculous enough to make it farcical while still giving me that safe little thrill."]]
--> '''Sunset''': [[spoiler:"Fine, the truth is that I like leather jackets because they're a harmless way for me to feel like a bad girl, and this one is ridiculous enough to make it farcical while still giving me that safe little thrill."]]
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** Spike, a dog, who can speak in wranglish, due to magic
** Kikai No Kawa of Sailor Orbital, an alien cat, who speaks in Japanese, and then wranglish after she gets it [[NeuralImplanting beamed]] into her mind.
* ToughSpikesAndStuds: From ''Group Precipitation'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/266/group-precipitation/pointed-fashion-statement-by-fome "Pointed Fashion Statement, by FoME"]]: Former villainess Sunset Shimmer wears a jacket with spikes, which her girlfriend even calls SpikesOfVillainy.
--> '''Sunset''': [[spoiler:"Fine, the truth is that I like leather jackets because they're a harmless way for me to feel like a bad girl, and this one is ridiculous enough to make it farcical while still giving me that safe little thrill."]]
** Spike, a dog, who can speak in wranglish, due to magic
** Kikai No Kawa of Sailor Orbital, an alien cat, who speaks in Japanese, and then wranglish after she gets it [[NeuralImplanting beamed]] into her mind.
* ToughSpikesAndStuds: From ''Group Precipitation'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/266/group-precipitation/pointed-fashion-statement-by-fome "Pointed Fashion Statement, by FoME"]]: Former villainess Sunset Shimmer wears a jacket with spikes, which her girlfriend even calls SpikesOfVillainy.
--> '''Sunset''': [[spoiler:"Fine, the truth is that I like leather jackets because they're a harmless way for me to feel like a bad girl, and this one is ridiculous enough to make it farcical while still giving me that safe little thrill."]]
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* ToughSpikesAndStuds: From ''Group Precipitation'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/266/group-precipitation/pointed-fashion-statement-by-fome "Pointed Fashion Statement, by FoME"]]: Former villainess Sunset Shimmer wears a jacket with spikes, which her girlfriend even calls SpikesOfVillainy.
--> '''Sunset''': [[spoiler:"Fine, the truth is that I like leather jackets because they're a harmless way for me to feel like a bad girl, and this one is ridiculous enough to make it farcical while still giving me that safe little thrill."]]
--> '''Sunset''': [[spoiler:"Fine, the truth is that I like leather jackets because they're a harmless way for me to feel like a bad girl, and this one is ridiculous enough to make it farcical while still giving me that safe little thrill."]]
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* CarryABigStick: Sailor Orbital gets a Mystic Mace.
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* CarryABigStick: Sailor Orbital gets a Mystic Mace.Mace:
--> "It's basically a mace, made with modern day technology, that can also generate magical pulses of energy for pushing back crowds."
--> "It's basically a mace, made with modern day technology, that can also generate magical pulses of energy for pushing back crowds."
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%%[[spoiler:'''Derpy''']] "Well, there's me."
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* CastFullOfGay: {{Discussed}} in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/45/group-precipitation/sonnenunterganglied-by-fome Sonnenunterganglied]]:
--> '''Sunset''': Sunset took a deep breath, then said, "I have to ask; given all the student bodies of all of the versions of Canterlot High, is there a single heterosexual girl among them?"\\
--> '''Sunset''': Sunset took a deep breath, then said, "I have to ask; given all the student bodies of all of the versions of Canterlot High, is there a single heterosexual girl among them?"\\
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%%--> '''Sunset''': Sunset took a deep breath, then said, "I have to ask; given all the student bodies of all of the versions of Canterlot High, is there a single heterosexual girl among them?"\\
%%--> '''Sunset''': Sunset took a deep breath, then said, "I have to ask; given all the student bodies of all of the versions of Canterlot High, is there a single heterosexual girl among them?"\\
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* EveryoneIsGay: {{Discussed}} in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/45/group-precipitation/sonnenunterganglied-by-fome Sonnenunterganglied]]:
--> '''Sunset''': Sunset took a deep breath, then said, "I have to ask; given all the student bodies of all of the versions of Canterlot High, is there a single heterosexual girl among them?"\\
[[spoiler:'''Derpy''']] "Well, there's me."
--> '''Sunset''': Sunset took a deep breath, then said, "I have to ask; given all the student bodies of all of the versions of Canterlot High, is there a single heterosexual girl among them?"\\
[[spoiler:'''Derpy''']] "Well, there's me."
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* CreaturesByManyOtherNames: In ''Group Precipitation'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/254/group-precipitation/x-ray-examination-by-jenna-cipher-and-fome "X-Ray Examination, by Jenna Cipher and FoME"]], a alien species has multiple possible translations for its name:
--> "They are the... how to translate the term? Astrals? Quintessentials?"\\
Ditzy quirked an eyebrow. "You copied my knowledge of Wranglish. How can you not know?"\\
Kikai paced about the bed. "Because your language is a hair-splitting kleptomaniac with commitment issues.
--> "They are the... how to translate the term? Astrals? Quintessentials?"\\
Ditzy quirked an eyebrow. "You copied my knowledge of Wranglish. How can you not know?"\\
Kikai paced about the bed. "Because your language is a hair-splitting kleptomaniac with commitment issues.
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* FlashyTeleportation: A possible Unicorn aspect spell, and given the nature of teleportion in the source work, it's flashy:
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/46/group-precipitation/perimeter-patrol-by-masterweaver Group Precipitation: Perimeter Patrol]]: On why Sunset Shimmer's not helping with the current problem:
--->"'parently she's got some more important stuff ta work out. Somethin' bout a space agency experimentin' with teleportation."
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/238/group-precipitation/transubstantia-shunned-by-void-knight-fome-and-artiestroke "Transubstantia-shunned, by Void Knight, FoME, and ArtieStroke"]]:
---> [[gold:FWOOMP!]]\\
“Sunset? Wha—”\\
[...]\\
“And ''that'',” said Sunset, “is when I teleported to you.”
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/46/group-precipitation/perimeter-patrol-by-masterweaver Group Precipitation: Perimeter Patrol]]: On why Sunset Shimmer's not helping with the current problem:
--->"'parently she's got some more important stuff ta work out. Somethin' bout a space agency experimentin' with teleportation."
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/238/group-precipitation/transubstantia-shunned-by-void-knight-fome-and-artiestroke "Transubstantia-shunned, by Void Knight, FoME, and ArtieStroke"]]:
---> [[gold:FWOOMP!]]\\
“Sunset? Wha—”\\
[...]\\
“And ''that'',” said Sunset, “is when I teleported to you.”
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* FlashyTeleportation: A possible Unicorn aspect spell, and given the nature of teleportion in the source work, it's flashy:
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/46/group-precipitation/perimeter-patrol-by-masterweaver Group Precipitation: Perimeter Patrol]]: On why Sunset Shimmer's not helping with the current problem:
--->"'parently she's got some more important stuff ta work out. Somethin' bout a space agency experimentin' with teleportation."
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/238/group-precipitation/transubstantia-shunned-by-void-knight-fome-and-artiestroke "Transubstantia-shunned, by Void Knight, FoME, and ArtieStroke"]]:
---> [[gold:FWOOMP!]]\\
“Sunset? Wha—”\\
[...]\\
“And ''that'',” said Sunset, “is when I teleported to you.”
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/46/group-precipitation/perimeter-patrol-by-masterweaver Group Precipitation: Perimeter Patrol]]: On why Sunset Shimmer's not helping with the current problem:
--->"'parently she's got some more important stuff ta work out. Somethin' bout a space agency experimentin' with teleportation."
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/238/group-precipitation/transubstantia-shunned-by-void-knight-fome-and-artiestroke "Transubstantia-shunned, by Void Knight, FoME, and ArtieStroke"]]:
---> [[gold:FWOOMP!]]\\
“Sunset? Wha—”\\
[...]\\
“And ''that'',” said Sunset, “is when I teleported to you.”
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---> [[gold:FWOOMP!]]\\
“Sunset? Wha—”\\
[...]\\
“And ''that'',” said Sunset, “is when I teleported to you.”
---> [[gold:FWOOMP!]]\\
“Sunset? Wha—”\\
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“And ''that'',” said Sunset, “is when I teleported to you.”
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* ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle'':
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/9/story-shuffle/aftershock Aftershock]]
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on Rock On]]
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/9/story-shuffle/aftershock Aftershock]]
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on Rock On]]
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* ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle2DoubleMasters'':
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/15/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/melting-of-the-minds "Melting of the Minds"]]
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/28/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/developmestuction "Developmestuction"]]
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/15/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/melting-of-the-minds "Melting of the Minds"]]
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/28/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/developmestuction "Developmestuction"]]
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* From the ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle'' series:
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle1'':
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/9/story-shuffle/aftershock Aftershock]]
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on Rock On]]
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle2DoubleMasters'':
** *** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/15/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/melting-of-the-minds "Melting of the Minds"]]
** *** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/28/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/developmestuction "Developmestuction"]]
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle1'':
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/9/story-shuffle/aftershock Aftershock]]
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on Rock On]]
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle2DoubleMasters'':
* JobTitle: ''Group Precipitation'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/25/group-precipitation/mad-scientists-best-friend-by-eonaon-and-fome "Mad Scientist's Best Friend, by EonAon and FoME"]].
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* OutSick: The premise of ''Future Congestive''. Sweetie Belle catches a cold that leaves her unable to "turn off" her future sight and causes whatever she sneezes on to instantly age by years or decades.
* PostModernMagik: A staple of the setting.
* PostModernMagik: A staple of the setting.
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* ScienceCannotComprehendPhlebotinum: The human world's magic was not intended to be particularly flashy or widespread, and as such actively resists any attempt to study or analyze it beyond a handful of permitted rituals.
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* AlternativeCalendar: ''Group Precipitation'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/157/group-precipitation/adult-fear-by-void-knight "Adult Fear"]]: On a grave stone, years are noted in A.S, which is a different than expected in the rest of the stories. The Author's Note notes that as non-canon:
--> And for the record, no, no one's proposed starting over when it comes to counting years. Imagine the headaches involved in converting every computer system on Earth to a new calendar.
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/group/210047/the-oversaturated-world The Oversaturated World]] is a collection of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fan-fiction set in the human world after the events of ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/oversaturation Oversaturation]]'', by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/FanOfMostEverything FanOfMostEverything]].
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/group/210047/the-oversaturated-world The Oversaturated World]] is a collection of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fan-fiction set in the human world after the events of ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/269241/oversaturation Oversaturation]]'', by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/FanOfMostEverything FanOfMostEverything]].
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/443208/psychosynthesis "Psychosynthesis"]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/444821/such-sweet-lunacy "Such Sweet Lunacy"]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/444821/such-sweet-lunacy "Such Sweet Lunacy"]]
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/397891/anon-a-miss-tip Anon-a-Miss Tip]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/399765/celestias-little-shop-of-horrors Celestia's Little Shop of Horrors]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401677/user-not-recognized User Not Recognized]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/409871/mosh-pitMosh Pit]]Mosh-Pit]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/426337/divine-labor Divine Labor]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/399765/celestias-little-shop-of-horrors Celestia's Little Shop of Horrors]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401677/user-not-recognized User Not Recognized]]
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* ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle2DoubleMasters'':
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/15/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/melting-of-the-minds "Melting of the Minds"]]
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/28/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/developmestuction "Developmestuction"]]
* ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle2DoubleMasters'':
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/15/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/melting-of-the-minds "Melting of the Minds"]]
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/28/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/developmestuction "Developmestuction"]]
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* ArtificialLimbs: Sunny Flare lost her hands and her parents in a car accident, five years prior to the setting of ''Blue Sunny Days and Pink Lemonade''. She now wears fully functional prostheses with built-in battery packs.
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* HaremSeeker: From ''Group Precipitation'': [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/335/group-precipitation/that-time-i-didnt-get-reincarnated-as-anything-by-fome "That Time I Didn't Get Reincarnated as Anything"]], about ReincarnateInAnotherWorld and other Isekai. Which Trixie wants. As Fluttershy explains Isekai and analyzes Trixie's want for it, at the core, it's basically this:
--> "It's an anime subgenre where someone gets whisked away from their mundane life and enters a fantastic world, with varying amounts of adventure, romance, and wish fulfillment."\\
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Fluttershy narrowed her eyes. "You just want the harem fantasy, don't you?"\\
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As the cafeteria crowd shifted focus to the Illusions' antics, Pinkie said, "Are we sure Trixie doesn't already have a harem?"\\
[[spoiler:"Trixie likes guys!"]] cried Trixie.
--> "It's an anime subgenre where someone gets whisked away from their mundane life and enters a fantastic world, with varying amounts of adventure, romance, and wish fulfillment."\\
[...]\\
Fluttershy narrowed her eyes. "You just want the harem fantasy, don't you?"\\
[...]\\
As the cafeteria crowd shifted focus to the Illusions' antics, Pinkie said, "Are we sure Trixie doesn't already have a harem?"\\
[[spoiler:"Trixie likes guys!"]] cried Trixie.
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* WorldsBestCharacter: ''Group Precipitation'': "Pre-Patch Exploit, by Masterweaver": Due to a comment by Flurry Heart on Cinch's grumpiness:
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When Abacus Cinch learned ''why'' she'd found herself wearing a hideous sweater that read "World's Grumpiest Gran" and drinking from a similarly captioned mug, her only response was, "You are all tremendously fortunate that my great-granddaughter is as adorable as she is."
--> '''Author's Notes:'''\\\
When Abacus Cinch learned ''why'' she'd found herself wearing a hideous sweater that read "World's Grumpiest Gran" and drinking from a similarly captioned mug, her only response was, "You are all tremendously fortunate that my great-granddaughter is as adorable as she is."
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Well, true, she was best friends with an arguable deity, and yeah her little sister controlled part of fate subconsciously, and her social circle involved a crazy crew of characters that regularly got involved in wacky shenanigans, and she herself had helped to save the world a few times, and there was the possibility her principal was using the school to scout for super heroes, and technically she had acquired a skin condition that she had yet to see replicated by anybody else...\\\
...but the point was, by most standards, she was an ordinary farmer. Not the kind of girl that went on adventures.\\
Well, true, she was best friends with an arguable deity, and yeah her little sister controlled part of fate subconsciously, and her social circle involved a crazy crew of characters that regularly got involved in wacky shenanigans, and she herself had helped to save the world a few times, and there was the possibility her principal was using the school to scout for super heroes, and technically she had acquired a skin condition that she had yet to see replicated by anybody else...\\\
...but the point was, by most standards, she was an ordinary farmer. Not the kind of girl that went on adventures.\\
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* AlternativeSelfNameChange: Discussed in multiple chapters of ''Group Precipitation'':
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/347/group-precipitation/myriad-paths-by-gmblackjack-and-fome "Myriad Paths]]:
*** With multiple Rarities needing differentiation:
---> Magnum sighed. "Rarity..."\\
"Yes?" All the Rarities in the room asked, save for the sole stallion.\\
Magnum twitched. "You all need to get yourselves codenames or something, this happens FAR too often."\\
"Even me?" the stallion asked.\\
"Elusive, you are in the clear, for now. ...The rest of you, on the other hand, hoof, or crystalline appendage..."\\
"Rarity is such a perfect name!" One of the humans tossed her hair back. "Why would we give it up?"\\
"Because if you don't think of something else we're going to have to start referring to each other by number, and I think we all know enough Twilights to see how that would go wrong."
*** With multiple Lyras needing differentiation:
----> Agent Heartstrings—it was easier to just think of her that way than constantly trying to say which Lyra one meant
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/6/group-precipitation/proper-notation-by-tophe "Proper Notation"]]: The human and pony versions of Twilight Sparkle consider using a different name for the other to differentiate themselves with Twilight-E being considered for Equestria Twilight before remembering that Earth begins with E too.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/347/group-precipitation/myriad-paths-by-gmblackjack-and-fome "Myriad Paths]]:
*** With multiple Rarities needing differentiation:
---> Magnum sighed. "Rarity..."\\
"Yes?" All the Rarities in the room asked, save for the sole stallion.\\
Magnum twitched. "You all need to get yourselves codenames or something, this happens FAR too often."\\
"Even me?" the stallion asked.\\
"Elusive, you are in the clear, for now. ...The rest of you, on the other hand, hoof, or crystalline appendage..."\\
"Rarity is such a perfect name!" One of the humans tossed her hair back. "Why would we give it up?"\\
"Because if you don't think of something else we're going to have to start referring to each other by number, and I think we all know enough Twilights to see how that would go wrong."
*** With multiple Lyras needing differentiation:
----> Agent Heartstrings—it was easier to just think of her that way than constantly trying to say which Lyra one meant
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323071/6/group-precipitation/proper-notation-by-tophe "Proper Notation"]]: The human and pony versions of Twilight Sparkle consider using a different name for the other to differentiate themselves with Twilight-E being considered for Equestria Twilight before remembering that Earth begins with E too.
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-->"After some discussion with the Aztlan institute and a few purchases of my own from a few Company of D.R.E.A.M.S. subsidiaries, I've managed to wrangle together a basic outfit kit for each of us."
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-->"After some discussion with the Aztlan institute and a few purchases of my own from a few Company of D.R.E.A.M.S. subsidiaries, I've managed to wrangle together a basic outfit kit for each of us.""\\
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"Actually no." Blue moved her hands up to the sailor collar. "The jewel on the chest is the outfit conversion module--you put your hand to it and say a keyphrase, you switch back to your civilian clothes. The ribbons serve as thaumatic dispersion units, keeping hostile magic from overwhelming the wearer. And the collar itself is woven with the Identity Derecognition Pattern."\\
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"Actually no." Blue moved her hands up to the sailor collar. "The jewel on the chest is the outfit conversion module--you put your hand to it and say a keyphrase, you switch back to your civilian clothes. The ribbons serve as thaumatic dispersion units, keeping hostile magic from overwhelming the wearer. And the collar itself is woven with the Identity Derecognition Pattern."\\"
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--> "After some discussion with the Aztlan institute and a few purchases of my own from a few Company of D.R.E.A.M.S. subsidiaries, I've managed to wrangle together a basic outfit kit for each of us."
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--> Ditzy tilted her head. "Those are Crossworlds Guardian Emergency Worker Uniforms, aren't they?"
--> [...]
--> I ditched the helmets and rigged together something different." She tapped a tiara resting on one of the mannequin's heads. "This is a micro-radio, complete with earbuds, that will let us remain in contact if we are anywhere within... three, four miles of each other. They are not aerodynamic, so there's not going to be any Lunar Tiara Action."
--> [...]
--> "Are the colored collars and miniskirts just so we can look like Sailor Luna and her pals?"
--> "Actually no." Blue moved her hands up to the sailor collar. "The jewel on the chest is the outfit conversion module--you put your hand to it and say a keyphrase, you switch back to your civilian clothes. The ribbons serve as thaumatic dispersion units, keeping hostile magic from overwhelming the wearer. And the collar itself is woven with the Identity Derecognition Pattern."
--> [...]
--> I ditched the helmets and rigged together something different." She tapped a tiara resting on one of the mannequin's heads. "This is a micro-radio, complete with earbuds, that will let us remain in contact if we are anywhere within... three, four miles of each other. They are not aerodynamic, so there's not going to be any Lunar Tiara Action."
--> [...]
--> "Are the colored collars and miniskirts just so we can look like Sailor Luna and her pals?"
--> "Actually no." Blue moved her hands up to the sailor collar. "The jewel on the chest is the outfit conversion module--you put your hand to it and say a keyphrase, you switch back to your civilian clothes. The ribbons serve as thaumatic dispersion units, keeping hostile magic from overwhelming the wearer. And the collar itself is woven with the Identity Derecognition Pattern."
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[...
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I ditched the helmets and rigged together something different." She tapped a tiara resting on one of the mannequin's heads. "This is a micro-radio, complete with earbuds, that will let us remain in contact if we are anywhere within... three, four miles of each other. They are not aerodynamic, so there's not going to be any Lunar Tiara Action.
-->
[...
-->
"Are the colored collars and miniskirts just so we can look like Sailor Luna and her
-->
"Actually no." Blue moved her hands up to the sailor collar. "The jewel on the chest is the outfit conversion module--you put your hand to it and say a keyphrase, you switch back to your civilian clothes. The ribbons serve as thaumatic dispersion units, keeping hostile magic from overwhelming the wearer. And the collar itself is woven with the Identity Derecognition Pattern.
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/463635/future-congestive Future Congestive]]
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* SuperheroTeamUniform: The GALAX-E Girls, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349607/6/crossworlds-guardian-sailor-orbital/outfitting-and-armory-some-problems-are-encountered ''Crossworlds Guardian, Sailor Orbital!'': "Outfitting and Armory! Some Problems are Encountered."]], who wear modified Crossworld Guardian suits, paraphrased with these quotes:
--> "After some discussion with the Aztlan institute and a few purchases of my own from a few Company of D.R.E.A.M.S. subsidiaries, I've managed to wrangle together a basic outfit kit for each of us."
--> Ditzy tilted her head. "Those are Crossworlds Guardian Emergency Worker Uniforms, aren't they?"
--> [...]
--> I ditched the helmets and rigged together something different." She tapped a tiara resting on one of the mannequin's heads. "This is a micro-radio, complete with earbuds, that will let us remain in contact if we are anywhere within... three, four miles of each other. They are not aerodynamic, so there's not going to be any Lunar Tiara Action."
--> [...]
--> "Are the colored collars and miniskirts just so we can look like Sailor Luna and her pals?"
--> "Actually no." Blue moved her hands up to the sailor collar. "The jewel on the chest is the outfit conversion module--you put your hand to it and say a keyphrase, you switch back to your civilian clothes. The ribbons serve as thaumatic dispersion units, keeping hostile magic from overwhelming the wearer. And the collar itself is woven with the Identity Derecognition Pattern."
--> "After some discussion with the Aztlan institute and a few purchases of my own from a few Company of D.R.E.A.M.S. subsidiaries, I've managed to wrangle together a basic outfit kit for each of us."
--> Ditzy tilted her head. "Those are Crossworlds Guardian Emergency Worker Uniforms, aren't they?"
--> [...]
--> I ditched the helmets and rigged together something different." She tapped a tiara resting on one of the mannequin's heads. "This is a micro-radio, complete with earbuds, that will let us remain in contact if we are anywhere within... three, four miles of each other. They are not aerodynamic, so there's not going to be any Lunar Tiara Action."
--> [...]
--> "Are the colored collars and miniskirts just so we can look like Sailor Luna and her pals?"
--> "Actually no." Blue moved her hands up to the sailor collar. "The jewel on the chest is the outfit conversion module--you put your hand to it and say a keyphrase, you switch back to your civilian clothes. The ribbons serve as thaumatic dispersion units, keeping hostile magic from overwhelming the wearer. And the collar itself is woven with the Identity Derecognition Pattern."
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Crosswicking.
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* AlliterativeList: How Ditzy described pizzas in ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/430918/1/go-emps/and-keep-on-going Go, Emps! - And Keep on Going!]]''
--> calorie-crowded, heart-harming, sodium-stuffed, cancer-causing, fat-filled pizzas.
--> calorie-crowded, heart-harming, sodium-stuffed, cancer-causing, fat-filled pizzas.
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**
* LongList: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349607/3/crossworlds-guardian-sailor-orbital/unforeseen-complications-friends-give-their-advice the third chapter]] of ''Crossworlds Guardian, Sailor Orbital!'', used by Ditzy to show her WeirdnessMagnet status:
--> Ever since the Saturation, I've been bounced across universes, met several versions of myself both human and horse, fought off a giant swarm of replicating cybernetic waffles, visited by a spirit of Yuletide past who got the wrong address, shanghaied into finding incredibly saucy pirate booty, interned for a transdimensional organization responsible for space expansion in some universes, stopped no less than thirteen apocalypse cults, contracted the first case of teleportitis despite not having a unicorn aspect, stripped naked for science three times, encountered an invisible fluffy tentacle monster that demanded entirely platonic cuddles, crashed Vinyl's car through the roof of a skyscraper, and had to babysit my own daughter from the future."\\
[...]\\
"What I'm saying," she continued, "is that I'm a weirdness magnet. At this point, I just roll with it."
--> Ever since the Saturation, I've been bounced across universes, met several versions of myself both human and horse, fought off a giant swarm of replicating cybernetic waffles, visited by a spirit of Yuletide past who got the wrong address, shanghaied into finding incredibly saucy pirate booty, interned for a transdimensional organization responsible for space expansion in some universes, stopped no less than thirteen apocalypse cults, contracted the first case of teleportitis despite not having a unicorn aspect, stripped naked for science three times, encountered an invisible fluffy tentacle monster that demanded entirely platonic cuddles, crashed Vinyl's car through the roof of a skyscraper, and had to babysit my own daughter from the future."\\
[...]\\
"What I'm saying," she continued, "is that I'm a weirdness magnet. At this point, I just roll with it."
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* TimeStandsStill: From ''Playing Hero'''s ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349631/3/playing-hero/a-minty-fresh-adventurer A Minty Fresh Adventurer]]'' has its title be a reference to the Pony Platforming Project's [[http://www.dragon-mango.com/ponygame/colgate.htm Minty Fresh Adventure!]], with a time-manipulating Minuette, using a time-stop spell cast by {{call|ingYourAttacks}} "'''Clock up.'''", to [[spoiler:foil a bank robbery]]:
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* TimeStandsStill: From ''Playing Hero'''s ''[[https://www.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349631/3/playing-hero/a-minty-fresh-adventurer A "A Minty Fresh Adventurer]]'' Adventurer"]] has its title be a reference to the Pony Platforming Project's [[http://www.dragon-mango.com/ponygame/colgate.htm Minty Fresh Adventure!]], ''VideoGame/MintyFreshAdventure'', with a time-manipulating Minuette, using a time-stop spell cast by {{call|ingYourAttacks}} "'''Clock up.'''", to [[spoiler:foil a bank robbery]]:
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* WeirdnessMagnet: Ditzy flat out calls herself this in Sailor Orbital, listing a litany of [[NoodleIncident Noodle Incidents]] to back up her claim.
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* WeirdnessMagnet: Ditzy flat out calls herself this in Sailor Orbital, listing having {{long list}}ed a litany of [[NoodleIncident Noodle Incidents]] {{Noodle Incident}}s to back up her claim.claim:
--> Ever since the Saturation, I've been bounced across universes, met several versions of myself both human and horse, fought off a giant swarm of replicating cybernetic waffles, visited by a spirit of Yuletide past who got the wrong address, shanghaied into finding incredibly saucy pirate booty, interned for a transdimensional organization responsible for space expansion in some universes, stopped no less than thirteen apocalypse cults, contracted the first case of teleportitis despite not having a unicorn aspect, stripped naked for science three times, encountered an invisible fluffy tentacle monster that demanded entirely platonic cuddles, crashed Vinyl's car through the roof of a skyscraper, and had to babysit my own daughter from the future."\\
[...]\\
"What I'm saying," she continued, "is that I'm a weirdness magnet. At this point, I just roll with it."
--> Ever since the Saturation, I've been bounced across universes, met several versions of myself both human and horse, fought off a giant swarm of replicating cybernetic waffles, visited by a spirit of Yuletide past who got the wrong address, shanghaied into finding incredibly saucy pirate booty, interned for a transdimensional organization responsible for space expansion in some universes, stopped no less than thirteen apocalypse cults, contracted the first case of teleportitis despite not having a unicorn aspect, stripped naked for science three times, encountered an invisible fluffy tentacle monster that demanded entirely platonic cuddles, crashed Vinyl's car through the roof of a skyscraper, and had to babysit my own daughter from the future."\\
[...]\\
"What I'm saying," she continued, "is that I'm a weirdness magnet. At this point, I just roll with it."
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Crosswicking.
* RoleCalled: ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349607/crossworlds-guardian-sailor-orbital Crossworlds Guardian, Sailor Orbital!]]'', where "Sailor Orbital" is a codename.
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** ''Playing Hero'''s ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349631/3/playing-hero/a-minty-fresh-adventurer A Minty Fresh Adventurer]]'' has its title be a reference to the Pony Platforming Project's [[http://www.dragon-mango.com/ponygame/colgate.htm Minty Fresh Adventure!]], with a time-manipulating Minuette.
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** ''Playing Hero'''s ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349631/3/playing-hero/a-minty-fresh-adventurer A Minty Fresh Adventurer]]'' has its title be a reference to the Pony Platforming Project's [[http://www.dragon-mango.com/ponygame/colgate.htm Minty Fresh Adventure!]], ''VideoGame/MintyFreshAdventure'', with a time-manipulating Minuette.
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/458446/transmission-spectrum Transmission Spectrum]]
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* EverythingExceptMostThings: From the ''Pest Control'' description:
--> Applejack was just an ordinary farmer.\\
\\
Well, true, she was best friends with an arguable deity, and yeah her little sister controlled part of fate subconsciously, and her social circle involved a crazy crew of characters that regularly got involved in wacky shenanigans, and she herself had helped to save the world a few times, and there was the possibility her principal was using the school to scout for super heroes, and technically she had acquired a skin condition that she had yet to see replicated by anybody else...\\
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...but the point was, by most standards, she was an ordinary farmer. Not the kind of girl that went on adventures.\\
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And then she developed a unique form of magic, just in time for the giant bug invasion.\\
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Welp.
--> Applejack was just an ordinary farmer.\\
\\
Well, true, she was best friends with an arguable deity, and yeah her little sister controlled part of fate subconsciously, and her social circle involved a crazy crew of characters that regularly got involved in wacky shenanigans, and she herself had helped to save the world a few times, and there was the possibility her principal was using the school to scout for super heroes, and technically she had acquired a skin condition that she had yet to see replicated by anybody else...\\
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...but the point was, by most standards, she was an ordinary farmer. Not the kind of girl that went on adventures.\\
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And then she developed a unique form of magic, just in time for the giant bug invasion.\\
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Welp.
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--> Applejack was just an ordinary farmer.\\
--> Applejack was just an ordinary farmer.\\
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* OverwhelmingException: From the ''Pest Control'' description:
PirateBooty: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/5/blue-sunny-days-and-pink-lemonade/so-at-one-point-you-meet-up-for-no-reason-at-all Blue Sunny Days and Pink Lemonade - ...so at one point you meet up for no reason at all...]]:
-->Applejack was just an ordinary farmer.“...You know what bugs me?” Lemon finally managed.\\
-->
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Well, true, she was best friends with an arguable deity, and yeah her little sister controlled part of fate subconsciously, and her social circle involved a crazy crew of characters that regularly got involved in wacky shenanigans, and she herself had helped to save the world a few times, and there was the possibility her principal was using the school to scout for super heroes, and technically she had acquired a skin condition that she had yet to see replicated by anybody else...\\
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...but the point was, by most standards, she was an ordinary farmer. Not the kind of girl that went on adventures.\\
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And then she developed a unique form of magic, just in time for the giant bug invasion.\\
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Welp.
* PirateBooty: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/5/blue-sunny-days-and-pink-lemonade/so-at-one-point-you-meet-up-for-no-reason-at-all Blue Sunny Days and Pink Lemonade - ...so at one point you meet up for no reason at all...]]:
--> “...You know what bugs me?” Lemon finally managed.\\
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...but the point was, by most standards, she was an ordinary farmer. Not the kind of girl that went on adventures.\\
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And then she developed a unique form of magic, just in time for the giant bug invasion.\\
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Welp.
* PirateBooty: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/369785/5/blue-sunny-days-and-pink-lemonade/so-at-one-point-you-meet-up-for-no-reason-at-all Blue Sunny Days and Pink Lemonade - ...so at one point you meet up for no reason at all...]]:
--> “...You know what bugs me?” Lemon finally managed.\\
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