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* IdiotBall: Robin has it rolling in the palm of her hand (although to be fair she has plenty good reasons to have trust issues) for believing Luffy will simply either abandon or forget about her [[spoiler:despite being his first...everything. [[GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex And we do mean]] ''everything.'']] '''Monkey "Die-before-I-let-my-friends-be-hurt" Luffy.'''
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* IdiotBall: Robin has it rolling in the palm of her hand (although to be fair she has plenty good reasons to have trust issues) for believing Luffy will simply either abandon or forget about her [[spoiler:despite being his first...everything. [[GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex And we do mean]] mean ''everything.'']] '''Monkey "Die-before-I-let-my-friends-be-hurt" Luffy.'''
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: Luffy and [[spoiler:Robin]].
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* RasputinianDeath: [[spoiler:Marcus, OH SO MUCH. It took several chapters, and massive blows from Wiper, Enel, Luffy, Vivi, Pagaya and Luffy again to do him in - surviving millions of volts, brutal beatings, being torn to shreds by a sandstorm and even losing half of his body to '''six Reject Dials''', an attack that ''vaporized'' everything else around him. Even reduced to little more than a head and heart, he's still raving about murdering everyone around him.]]
** [[spoiler:While he dies with a single attack,]] Haraden the five-eighth giant captain of the ''Mary Elisabeth'', takes an unholy amount of punishment from the whole crew (minus Luffy) before the latter ends up knocking him up with an attack with "the power of an apocalypse". Before that, he was [[spoiler: ground with sand, bathed in Carue's acidic breath, cut, kicked, shot in the eyes, shot with a bazooka, electrocuted by the Clima-Sword...]]
** [[spoiler:While he dies with a single attack,]] Haraden the five-eighth giant captain of the ''Mary Elisabeth'', takes an unholy amount of punishment from the whole crew (minus Luffy) before the latter ends up knocking him up with an attack with "the power of an apocalypse". Before that, he was [[spoiler: ground with sand, bathed in Carue's acidic breath, cut, kicked, shot in the eyes, shot with a bazooka, electrocuted by the Clima-Sword...]]
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* RasputinianDeath: [[spoiler:Marcus, OH SO MUCH. It took several chapters, and massive blows from Wiper, Enel, Luffy, Vivi, Pagaya and Luffy again to do him in - -- surviving millions of volts, brutal beatings, being torn to shreds by a sandstorm and even losing half of his body to '''six Reject Dials''', an attack that ''vaporized'' everything else around him. Even reduced to little more than a head and heart, he's still raving about murdering everyone around him.]]
** [[spoiler:While he dies with a single attack,]] Haraden the five-eighth giant captain of the ''MaryElisabeth'', Elisabeth'' takes an unholy amount of punishment from the whole crew (minus Luffy) before the latter ends up knocking him up with an attack with "the power of an apocalypse". Before that, he was [[spoiler: ground with sand, bathed in Carue's acidic breath, cut, kicked, shot in the eyes, shot with a bazooka, electrocuted by the Clima-Sword...]]
** [[spoiler:While he dies with a single attack,]] Haraden the five-eighth giant captain of the ''Mary
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* EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: One of the mercenaries at Water 7 ate a Devil Fruit that lets her turn things into spinning disks, including herself.
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* NeckSnap: Luffy to Bellamy. [[spoiler:Though the latter survived, barely, due to his Devil Fruit.]]
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* UpToEleven: What happens whenever someones Devil 'awakens' from sleep after they were eaten. [[spoiler:Mr Rumble himself]] states they are in a whole new league from normal ones.
** Luffy has awakened the [[spoiler:Rumble Rumble Fruit]], a fruit that when unawakened is called one of the ''invincibles'', now it's awakened all other unawakened Logia's might as well bend over and kiss their asses goodbye.
** In Chapter 30 Luffy uses an amount of power equivalent to the apocalypse. Mr Rumbles response?
--> "Well, it's a start."
** Luffy has awakened the [[spoiler:Rumble Rumble Fruit]], a fruit that when unawakened is called one of the ''invincibles'', now it's awakened all other unawakened Logia's might as well bend over and kiss their asses goodbye.
** In Chapter 30 Luffy uses an amount of power equivalent to the apocalypse. Mr Rumbles response?
--> "Well, it's a start."
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* KnifeNut: Luffy temporarily takes to using knives after losing his Devil Fruit powers.
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* AboveGoodAndEvil: [[spoiler: Mr Rumble claims to be, because he's lightning incarnate. Lightning isn't good or evil, lightning just wants to ''burn''.]]
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* AboveGoodAndEvil: [[spoiler: Mr Rumble claims to be, because he's lightning incarnate. Lightning isn't good or evil, lightning just wants to ''burn''.]]''burn'']].
* AdaptationalBadass:
** Vivi ends up [[spoiler:being the one who eats Crocodile’s [[SandBlasted Sand-Sand fruit]] after it went back into circulation and being able to use Conqueror’s Haki]].
** Nami takes up sword fighting.
** Usopp ends up [[spoiler:eating the Toad-Toad fruit]].
* AdaptationalBadass:
** Vivi ends up [[spoiler:being the one who eats Crocodile’s [[SandBlasted Sand-Sand fruit]] after it went back into circulation and being able to use Conqueror’s Haki]].
** Nami takes up sword fighting.
** Usopp ends up [[spoiler:eating the Toad-Toad fruit]].
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* DeadFic: It was last updated on October 13th, 2015.
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* BattleInTheCentreOfTheMind: [[spoiler:Luffy is on the receiving end of a [[CurbStompBattle very quick beatdown]] from Mr Rumble.]]
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* BattleInTheCentreOfTheMind: BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler:Luffy is on the receiving end of a [[CurbStompBattle very quick beatdown]] from Mr Rumble.]]
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* AmbiguouslyGay: According to Tashigi, [[spoiler: Admiral Akainu]]. Telling him by Den Den Mushi, [[spoiler:during her own trial for treason]], might be the girl's CrowningMomentOfAwesome, in canon and fanon both.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: According to Tashigi, [[spoiler: Admiral Akainu]]. Telling him by Den Den Mushi, [[spoiler:during her own trial for treason]], might be the girl's CrowningMomentOfAwesome, in canon and fanon both.treason]].
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* DarkestHour: It will be difficult to top Water Seven in sheer darkness: [[spoiler: Usopp is almost dead, Franky -who was responsible for Usopp's injury- was killed by an out-of-control Luffy, ''Luffy lost control of his Devil Fruit'', Robin breaks up with him, as a result of his depression ''so does Nami'', Iceburg is about to be murdered...'''''And the new ship is filled with A THOUSAND OF SEASTONE-LACED HIGH-YIELD DYNAMITE''''' that Lucci detonates while there's hundreds of people around it. And Robin is forced to watch.]]
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* DarkestHour: It will be difficult to top Water Seven in sheer darkness: [[spoiler: Usopp is almost dead, Franky -who was responsible for Usopp's injury- was killed by an out-of-control Luffy, ''Luffy lost control of his Devil Fruit'', Robin breaks up with him, as a result of his depression ''so does Nami'', Iceburg is about to be murdered...'''''And the new ship is filled with A THOUSAND TONS OF SEASTONE-LACED HIGH-YIELD DYNAMITE''''' that Lucci detonates while there's hundreds of people around it. And Robin is forced to watch.]]
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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Luffy's suggestions to the shipwrights for the crew's new ship are mostly simple practical ideas: a cushion for his favorite seat on the figurehead, tables that can be bolted down in storms, hammocks with adjustable heights, and he wants the ship to fly.
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* ContinuityNod: Even after losing his Devil Fruit, Luffy is still a rather poor swimmer as he ate it before learning how to swim properly.
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* ActuallyADoombot: The crew beat Doflaming after Skypiea only for him to be revealed as his Black Knight technique (which creates a clone out of string).
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* DeathByAdaptation: Crocodile, [[spoiler:Gan Fall, Pagaya, Enel, the Foxy Pirates, and Franky]].
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: The first time [[spoiler:Mr. Rumble]] shows true approval of Luffy is after the latter [[spoiler:electrocutes Franky]].
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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Gan Fall's]] death is part of a complex plan to [[spoiler:defeat Enel]].
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Franky stares in horror after [[spoiler:Usopp is impaled when Franky's jackhammer explodes]].
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Franky stares in horror after [[spoiler:Usopp is impaled when Franky's jackhammer explodes]].
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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Gan Fall's]] death is part of a complex plan to [[spoiler:defeat Enel]].
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* CrazyPrepared: "Crazy Eyes" carries a Seastone dagger despite such a weapon's most likely horrendous cost. [[spoiler: And keeps a smaller one, made of Seastone too, in his boot.]]
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* CrazyPrepared: Marcus wears a vest and underclothes made with fibers from a rare wood that's considered the most buoyant material in the world, just in case he falls into the ocean.
** "Crazy Eyes" carries a Seastone dagger despite such a weapon's most likely horrendous cost. [[spoiler: And keeps a smaller one, made of Seastone too, in his boot.]]
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* DarkestHour: It will be difficult to top Water Seven in sheer darkness: [[spoiler: Usopp is almost dead, Franky -who was responsible for Usopp's injury- was killed by an out-of-control Luffy, ''Luffy lost control of his Devil Fruit'', Robin breaks up with him, as a result of his depression ''so does Nami'', Iceburg is about to be murdered...'''''And the new ship is filled with SEVERAL KILOTONS OF SEASTONE-LACED HIGH-YIELD DYNAMITE''''' that Lucci detonates while there's hundreds of people around it. And Robin is forced to watch.]]
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* DarkestHour: It will be difficult to top Water Seven in sheer darkness: [[spoiler: Usopp is almost dead, Franky -who was responsible for Usopp's injury- was killed by an out-of-control Luffy, ''Luffy lost control of his Devil Fruit'', Robin breaks up with him, as a result of his depression ''so does Nami'', Iceburg is about to be murdered...'''''And the new ship is filled with SEVERAL KILOTONS A THOUSAND OF SEASTONE-LACED HIGH-YIELD DYNAMITE''''' that Lucci detonates while there's hundreds of people around it. And Robin is forced to watch.]]
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* ConfusionFu: Nami realizes that if she doesn't know what the dials she's using do, then neither does Ohm when she attacks with them.
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* PsychicStatic: During the climax of her fight with Ohm, Nami thinks about her crew to keep him from realizing she's creating a tornado.
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* CrapsackWorld: It's even worse than the original One Piece World
** We have privateers who are basically "Pirates with a badge". So long as they don't commit obvious acts of piracy they're left alone
** Smoker is more ruthless in this timeline than when he originally was
** The revolutionaries aren't shown to be as clear cut good guys i.e. They work with Monet and Caesar Clown.
** The Strawhats themselves. Remember in the manga where they didn't kill anyone? Well here they do.
** CP9 is shown to be much more ruthless instead of just stated being so.
** We have privateers who are basically "Pirates with a badge". So long as they don't commit obvious acts of piracy they're left alone
** Smoker is more ruthless in this timeline than when he originally was
** The revolutionaries aren't shown to be as clear cut good guys i.e. They work with Monet and Caesar Clown.
** The Strawhats themselves. Remember in the manga where they didn't kill anyone? Well here they do.
** CP9 is shown to be much more ruthless instead of just stated being so.
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* YouShallNotPass: Sanji pulls one when several mercenaries try to [[spoiler:kill Usopp who's still in Intensive Care]].
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* YouShallNotPass: Sanji pulls one when several mercenaries try to [[spoiler:kill Usopp who's still in Intensive Care]].
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* BigEater: Despite no longer being a rubber man, Luffy maintains his appetite. Since he can't eat as much, he instead eats more often.
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* ClickHello: [[spoiler:Usopp]] does this to one of the mercenaries with his own grenade launcher.
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** Later, [[spoiler:having been robbed of most of his senses allows Zoro to fully awaken Observation Haki]].
* DisasterDominoes: [[spoiler:The explosion Lucci set off managed to damage part of Water 7's foundation.]] If part of it goes, the entire place will follow soon after.
* DisasterDominoes: [[spoiler:The explosion Lucci set off managed to damage part of Water 7's foundation.]] If part of it goes, the entire place will follow soon after.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Subverted. It begins like this, but [[spoiler: Luffy ends up killing Crocodile.]]
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* TheBadGuyWins: Subverted. It begins like this, but [[spoiler: Luffy ends up killing Crocodile.]]
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** Infusing an inanimate object with any Devil Fruit that isn't a Zoan turns it completely passive. A sword is infused with a Devil Fruit that allows the user to disable a person's senses but which sense is chosen completely at random.
* BondOneLiner: [[spoiler:Usopp]] gives one after shooting a mercenary with his own grenade launcher.
* CutHimselfShaving: [[spoiler:Aisa]] claims the mercenary Wiper had been fighting that's currently lying in a pool of blood "tripped and knocked herself out".
* EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: One of the mercenaries at Water 7 ate a Devil Fruit that lets her turn things into spinning disks, including herself.
* ExactWords: One mercenary claims he hasn't eaten a Devil Fruit and he hasn't. His ''sword'' however has.
** Said sword disables one sense each time it cuts someone. However, this applies to more than the five main senses. It also applies to things like hand-eye coordination, sense of pain, and timing.
* ExactWords: One mercenary claims he hasn't eaten a Devil Fruit and he hasn't. His ''sword'' however has.
** Said sword disables one sense each time it cuts someone. However, this applies to more than the five main senses. It also applies to things like hand-eye coordination, sense of pain, and timing.
* ForcedToWatch: Lucci waits to [[spoiler:detonate a massive bomb]] until Robin is close enough to witness it.
* SchmuckBait: [[spoiler:Aisa]] claims this about leaving her alone in a room full of Devil Fruits she was told not to touch.
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* UpToEleven: What happens whenever someones Devil 'awakens' from sleep after they were eaten. Mr Rumble himself states they are in a whole new league from normal ones.
** Luffy has awakened the Rumble Rumble Fruit, a fruit that when unawakened is called one of the ''invincibles'', now it's awakened all other unawakened Logia's might as well bend over and kiss their asses goodbye.
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* UpToEleven: What happens whenever someones Devil 'awakens' from sleep after they were eaten. Mr [[spoiler:Mr Rumble himself himself]] states they are in a whole new league from normal ones.
** Luffy has awakened the [[spoiler:Rumble RumbleRumble Fruit, Fruit]], a fruit that when unawakened is called one of the ''invincibles'', now it's awakened all other unawakened Logia's might as well bend over and kiss their asses goodbye.
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* WorfHadTheFlu: During Water 7, most of the Straw Hat's were badly injured by [[spoiler:a massive bomb Lucci had detonated]].
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** One of the Water 7 mercenaries threatens to kill Aisa. Then later reveals she's getting paid to kill her anyway.
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** More recently [[spoiler:Zoro]] has awakened Observation Haki and [[spoiler:Aisa]] ate a Devil Fruit.
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** Gan Fall gathers up every grape on Skypiea so that [[spoiler:the Metal-Metal Fruit will reincarnate into one of them when he dies]].
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** The existence of [[spoiler:Mr. Rumble]] is based off a canon rumor that [[spoiler:Devil Fruits contain demons that fight if they're in close proximity]].
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* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler:Mr. Rumble]].