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* CantFightFate: Despite the fact the Players can change things aside from a remix, Ren notes that some things ''can't'' change like the [[spoiler: Fall of Beacon]] and other 'events'. This also sadly includes [[spoiler: Pyrrha'sdeath]].
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* EndearinglyDorky: Lampshaded by a "lot" of characters. Nora and Nurse Sprigan point out that, quite possibly, it is one of the main traits that make him such a {{Chick Magnet}}.
* GenreSavvy: Ren. Often {{lampshades}} tropes like {{Unwanted Harem}}. [[spoiler: In his battle with Cross Hare, Ren monologues about how such battles are often the time to give a speech about Power of Friendship and the like.]]
* GenreSavvy: Ren. Often {{lampshades}} tropes like {{Unwanted Harem}}. [[spoiler: In his battle with Cross Hare, Ren monologues about how such battles are often the time to give a speech about Power of Friendship and the like.]]
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* EndearinglyDorky: Lampshaded by a "lot" of characters. Nora and Nurse Sprigan point out that, quite possibly, it is one of the main traits that make him such a {{Chick Magnet}}.ChickMagnet.
* GenreSavvy: Ren. Often {{lampshades}} tropes like{{Unwanted Harem}}.UnwantedHarem. [[spoiler: In his battle with Cross Hare, Ren monologues about how such battles are often the time to give a speech about Power of Friendship and the like.]]
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* WorldsStrongestMan: [[spoiler: Roman Torchwick]] of all people is this. He is not only the first Player to be born, but has experienced countless lifetimes of battle long before the others. Both [[spoiler: Adam and Ren]], other Players, see him as the strongest among them and during the dock fight of Black and White, he proves it by beating ''everyone'' despite having a useless arm, outnumbered, and facing powerful foes. One of the OC's Tsuki herself states he was stronger than she could see with Ren adding he wasn't even serious.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: [[spoiler: Roman Torchwick]] of all people is this. He is not only the first Player to be born, but has experienced countless lifetimes of battle long before the others. Both [[spoiler: Adam and Ren]], other Players, see him as the strongest among them and during the dock fight of Black and White, he proves it by beating ''everyone'' despite having a useless arm, outnumbered, and facing powerful foes. One of the OC's Tsuki herself states he was stronger than she could see with Ren adding he wasn't even serious.serious.
* YouCantFightFate: Despite the fact the Players can change things aside from a remix, Ren notes that some things ''can't'' change like the [[spoiler: Fall of Beacon]] and other 'events'. This also sadly includes [[spoiler: Pyrrha's death]].
* YouCantFightFate: Despite the fact the Players can change things aside from a remix, Ren notes that some things ''can't'' change like the [[spoiler: Fall of Beacon]] and other 'events'. This also sadly includes [[spoiler: Pyrrha's death]].
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* AdaptionalBadass: Anybody who is a Player becomes this as they relive the lives over and over thus learning new tricks. Jaune himself is a lot more powerful and because of his rising strength, motivates this re-run of RWBY and others to be stronger as well. Of course other Players on the side of bad like [[spoiler: Roman Torchwick]] and [[spoiler; Adam]] are even stronger than him along with Ren.
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* AdaptionalBadass: AdaptationalBadass: Anybody who is a Player becomes this as they relive the lives over and over thus learning new tricks. Jaune himself is a lot more powerful and because of his rising strength, motivates this re-run of RWBY and others to be stronger as well. Of course other Players on the side of bad like [[spoiler: Roman Torchwick]] and [[spoiler; [[spoiler: Adam]] are even stronger than him along with Ren.
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* AdaptionalBadass: Anybody who is a Player becomes this as they relive the lives over and over thus learning new tricks. Jaune himself is a lot more powerful and because of his rising strength, motivates this re-run of RWBY and others to be stronger as well. Of course other Players on the side of bad like [[spoiler: Roman Torchwick]] and [[spoiler; Adam]] are even stronger than him along with Ren.
* BerserkButton: Ren has this when Jaune declares he'll beat the Game on his first try. Angered that Jaune would say that when the other Players including him have tried for a near eternity and always failing.
* CantFightFate: Despite the fact the Players can change things aside from a remix, Ren notes that some things ''can't'' change like the [[spoiler: Fall of Beacon]] and other 'events'. This also sadly includes [[spoiler: Pyrrha'sdeath]].
* CantFightFate: Despite the fact the Players can change things aside from a remix, Ren notes that some things ''can't'' change like the [[spoiler: Fall of Beacon]] and other 'events'. This also sadly includes [[spoiler: Pyrrha'sdeath]].
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* WorldsStrongestMan: [[spoiler: Roman Torchwick]] of all people is this. He is not only the first Player to be born, but has experienced countless lifetimes of battle long before the others. Both [[spoiler: Adam and Ren]], other Players, see him as the strongest among them and during the dock fight of Black and White, he proves it by beating ''everyone'' despite having a useless arm, outnumbered, and facing powerful foes. One of the OC's Tsuki herself states he was stronger than she could see with Ren adding he wasn't even serious.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
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* CharacterDevelopment: Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, everyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
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* {{Deconstruction}}: While not going full dark and edgy on readers, the story does show how certain aspects of becoming a Gamer. While the array of abilities, skills and other perks are awesome, one should not forget that this means you are playing someone's game.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: While not going full dark and edgy on readers, the The story does show how certain aspects of becoming a Gamer. While the array of abilities, skills and other perks are awesome, one should not forget that this means you are still playing someone's game.
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** Due to the nature of the Resets and Remixes, the idea of value of life becomes much less relevant seeing that all the ones who died would be later resurrected with no recollection of their deaths. [[spoiler:Because of this, Ren is quite nonchalant about killing off {{Non Player Character}}s that are around him.]]
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** Due to the nature of the Resets and Remixes, the idea of value of life becomes much less relevant seeing that -- all the ones who died would be later resurrected with no recollection of their deaths. [[spoiler:Because of this, Ren is quite nonchalant about killing off {{Non Player Character}}s that are around him.]]
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* MultipleEndings: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one.
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* MultipleEndings: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, unlimited as in real life, with only one of them being the True one.
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In the RWBY story written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2719191/NeoShadows [=Neoshadows=]]], Jaune Arc is blessed/cursed with the powers of a Gamer and becomes a part of the world much bigger and more dangerous than he knew before.
The fantastic approach author takes towards the Gamer powers can't and will not leave you unsatisfied. While a lot of other writers would gladly focus solely on the main character and his progress, NeoShadows takes time to build each and every character in a way that will entertain the readers. Fight scenes are mouthwatering wit the amount of detail and thought given. Dialogues do splendid job in expressing emotions and atmosphere of different situations and scenarios.
You want the amazing story about the seemingly overdone approach? Well, it is your lucky day!
The fantastic approach author takes towards the Gamer powers can't and will not leave you unsatisfied. While a lot of other writers would gladly focus solely on the main character and his progress, NeoShadows takes time to build each and every character in a way that will entertain the readers. Fight scenes are mouthwatering wit the amount of detail and thought given. Dialogues do splendid job in expressing emotions and atmosphere of different situations and scenarios.
You want the amazing story about the seemingly overdone approach? Well, it is your lucky day!
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The fantastic approach author takes towards the Gamer powers can't and will not leave you unsatisfied. While a lot of other writers would gladly focus solely on the main character and his progress, NeoShadows takes time to build each and every character in a way that will entertain the readers. Fight scenes are mouthwatering wit the amount of detail and thought given. Dialogues do splendid job in expressing emotions and atmosphere of different situations and scenarios.
You want the amazing story about the seemingly overdone approach? Well, it is your lucky day!
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* {{Always Someone Better}}: Even though Jaune is much stronger than he was in Canon, there is still a lot of people he lacks against.
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* {{Always Someone Better}}: AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Even though Jaune is much stronger than he was in Canon, there is still a lot of people he lacks against.
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* {{AwesomeButImpractical}}: For now, at least, one of Jaune's abilities, Shatter Armament allows him to summon a weapon from another world. But it shatters whatever limb is equipped with this weapon as well as cause significant decrease in Strength.
* {{Back from the Dead}}: Just like any other game, once you finished it, it all starts over. Destruction is nullified, deaths are erased and each of the Players return to their respective starting lines.
* {{Broken Ace}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] is the most distinct example. He has the knowledge of numerous lifetimes, an entire array of abilities and skills, but he can never [[save Pyrrha and his parents]] no matter how hard he tries.
* {{Character Development}}:
** Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
* {{Cosmic Plaything}}: [[spoiler: Ren]] views everyone and himself as such. Deaths, suffering, devastation and pain that everyone around him goes through is nothing more than entertainment for whatever deity controls the world.
* {{Back from the Dead}}: Just like any other game, once you finished it, it all starts over. Destruction is nullified, deaths are erased and each of the Players return to their respective starting lines.
* {{Broken Ace}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] is the most distinct example. He has the knowledge of numerous lifetimes, an entire array of abilities and skills, but he can never [[save Pyrrha and his parents]] no matter how hard he tries.
* {{Character Development}}:
** Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
* {{Cosmic Plaything}}: [[spoiler: Ren]] views everyone and himself as such. Deaths, suffering, devastation and pain that everyone around him goes through is nothing more than entertainment for whatever deity controls the world.
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* {{AwesomeButImpractical}}: AwesomeButImpractical: For now, at least, one of Jaune's abilities, Shatter Armament allows him to summon a weapon from another world. But it shatters whatever limb is equipped with this weapon as well as cause significant decrease in Strength.
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*{{Back from the Dead}}: Just like any other game, once you finished it, it all starts over. Destruction is nullified, deaths are erased and each of the Players return to their respective starting lines.
* {{Broken Ace}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] is the most distinct example. He has the knowledge of numerous lifetimes, an entire array of abilities and skills, but he can never [[save Pyrrha and his parents]] no matter how hard he tries.
* {{Character Development}}:
**CharacterDevelopment: Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
*{{Cosmic Plaything}}: CosmicPlaything: [[spoiler: Ren]] views everyone and himself as such. Deaths, suffering, devastation and pain that everyone around him goes through is nothing more than entertainment for whatever deity controls the world.
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* {{Broken Ace}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] is the most distinct example. He has the knowledge of numerous lifetimes, an entire array of abilities and skills, but he can never [[save Pyrrha and his parents]] no matter how hard he tries.
* {{Character Development}}:
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* {{Downer Beginning}}: [[spoiler: Jaune dies at the beginning of the story. Yup, that's right. Jaune dies at the hands of the WF Lieutenant while the Beacon falls. Sure, he gets a kiss from Weiss but it is gone in a Reset.]]
* {{Determined Defeatist}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] appears to be one throughout most of the story. No matter what route he took, it always ended in another Reset, causing him to lose most of his hope for winning the game. [[spoiler: As of chapter 20, Jaune helps him regain some drive to move towards victory.]]
* {{Determined Defeatist}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] appears to be one throughout most of the story. No matter what route he took, it always ended in another Reset, causing him to lose most of his hope for winning the game. [[spoiler: As of chapter 20, Jaune helps him regain some drive to move towards victory.]]
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* {{Downer Beginning}}: DownerBeginning: [[spoiler: Jaune dies at the beginning of the story. Yup, that's right. Jaune dies story at the hands of the WF Lieutenant while the Beacon falls. Sure, he gets a kiss from Weiss but it is gone in a Reset.]]
*{{Determined Defeatist}}: DeterminedDefeatist: [[spoiler:Ren]] appears to be one throughout most of the story. No matter what route he took, it always ended in another Reset, causing him to lose most of his hope for winning the game. [[spoiler: As of chapter 20, Jaune helps him regain some drive to move towards victory.]]
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* {{Genre Savvy}}: Ren. Often {{lampshades}} tropes like {{Unwanted Harem}}. [[spoiler: In his battle with Cross Hare, Ren monologues about how such battles are often the time to give a speech about Power of Friendship and the like.]]
* {{HeelFace Turn}}: As well as {{FaceHeel Turn}}
** According to Ren, in each Reset, Cardin would go through either of these two.
** Also, it is implied that, in some of the Resets, [[spoiler:Jaune]] is the one to abandon everyone and go down the dark path.
** [[spoiler: Ren]] himself went through the {{Face-Heel Turn}} numerous times in a desperate attempt to bring the game to the end. [[spoiler: No such luck though.]]
* {{God Is Evil}}: While it is still unclear whether who exactly is playing the role of the God in this universe, his/her deeds are less than stellar. Locking people in the neverending cycle of repeating their lives over and over again, with only a select few aware of it. Not to mention, in Jaune's case, [[spoiler: taking away his entire life and giving it away to another version of him.]]
* {{Multiple Endings}}: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one.
* {{Original Character}}: Several and, oh God, are they just spectacular? Seriously, after reading about these guys, you will WISH they were Canon. Backstories, powers and personalities are just astonishing.
* {{HeelFace Turn}}: As well as {{FaceHeel Turn}}
** According to Ren, in each Reset, Cardin would go through either of these two.
** Also, it is implied that, in some of the Resets, [[spoiler:Jaune]] is the one to abandon everyone and go down the dark path.
** [[spoiler: Ren]] himself went through the {{Face-Heel Turn}} numerous times in a desperate attempt to bring the game to the end. [[spoiler: No such luck though.]]
* {{God Is Evil}}: While it is still unclear whether who exactly is playing the role of the God in this universe, his/her deeds are less than stellar. Locking people in the neverending cycle of repeating their lives over and over again, with only a select few aware of it. Not to mention, in Jaune's case, [[spoiler: taking away his entire life and giving it away to another version of him.]]
* {{Multiple Endings}}: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one.
* {{Original Character}}: Several and, oh God, are they just spectacular? Seriously, after reading about these guys, you will WISH they were Canon. Backstories, powers and personalities are just astonishing.
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* {{Genre Savvy}}: GenreSavvy: Ren. Often {{lampshades}} tropes like {{Unwanted Harem}}. [[spoiler: In his battle with Cross Hare, Ren monologues about how such battles are often the time to give a speech about Power of Friendship and the like.]]
* {{HeelFace Turn}}: As well as {{FaceHeel Turn}}
** According to Ren, in each Reset, Cardin would go through either of these two.
** Also, it is implied that, in some of the Resets, [[spoiler:Jaune]] is the one to abandon everyone and go down the dark path.
**%%* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Ren]] himself went through the {{Face-Heel Turn}} turn numerous times in a desperate attempt to bring the game to the end. [[spoiler: No such luck though.]]
*{{God Is Evil}}: GodIsEvil: While it is still unclear whether who exactly is playing the role of the God in this universe, his/her deeds are less than stellar. Locking people in the neverending cycle of repeating their lives over and over again, with only a select few aware of it. Not to mention, in Jaune's case, [[spoiler: taking away his entire life and giving it away to another version of him.]]
*{{Multiple Endings}}: MultipleEndings: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one.
* {{Original Character}}: Several and, oh God, are they just spectacular? Seriously, after reading about these guys, you will WISH they were Canon. Backstories, powers and personalities are just astonishing.----
** According to Ren, in each Reset, Cardin would go through either of these two.
** Also, it is implied that, in some of the Resets, [[spoiler:Jaune]] is the one to abandon everyone and go down the dark path.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Lampshaded by a "lot" of characters. Nora and Nurse Sprigan point out that, quite possibly, it is one of the main traits that make him such a {{Chick Magnet}}.
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-->Life is a game. In an attempt to save a friend during the Breach, Jaune Arc died. Brought back to life with powers of a Gamer, he must now attempt to beat the game called life. He's not alone though. Every win or lose ends in a Reset, so how will he beat a game that never ends?
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In the RWBY story written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2719191/NeoShadows Neoshadows]], Jaune Arc is blessed/cursed with the powers of a Gamer and becomes a part of the world much bigger and more dangerous than he knew before.
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In the RWBY story written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2719191/NeoShadows Neoshadows]], [=Neoshadows=]]], Jaune Arc is blessed/cursed with the powers of a Gamer and becomes a part of the world much bigger and more dangerous than he knew before.
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* {{Cosmic Plaything}}: [[spoiler: Ren]] views everyone and himself as such. Deaths, suffering, devastation and pain that everyone around him goes through is nothing more than enterainment for whatever deity controls the world.
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* {{Cosmic Plaything}}: [[spoiler: Ren]] views everyone and himself as such. Deaths, suffering, devastation and pain that everyone around him goes through is nothing more than enterainment entertainment for whatever deity controls the world.
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** Due to the nature of the Resets and Remixes, the idea of value of life becomes much less revelant seeing that all the ones who died would be later ressurected with no recollection of their deaths. [[spoiler:Because of this, Ren is quite nonchalant about killing off NPCs that are around him.]]
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** Due to the nature of the Resets and Remixes, the idea of value of life becomes much less revelant relevant seeing that all the ones who died would be later ressurected resurrected with no recollection of their deaths. [[spoiler:Because of this, Ren is quite nonchalant about killing off NPCs {{Non Player Character}}s that are around him.]]
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The fantastic approach author takes towards the Gamer powers can't and will not leave you unsatisfied. While a lot of other writers would gladly focus solely on the main character and his progress, NeoShadows takes time to build each and every character in a way that will entertain the readers. Fight scenes are mouthwatering wit the amount of detail and thought given. Dialogues do splendid job in expressing emotions and atmosphere of different situations and scenarios.
You want the amazing story about the seemingly overdone approach? Well, it is your lucky day!
You want the amazing story about the seemingly overdone approach? Well, it is your lucky day!
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* {{Multiple Endings}}: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one.
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* {{Multiple Endings}}: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one.one.
* {{Original Character}}: Several and, oh God, are they just spectacular? Seriously, after reading about these guys, you will WISH they were Canon. Backstories, powers and personalities are just astonishing.
* {{Original Character}}: Several and, oh God, are they just spectacular? Seriously, after reading about these guys, you will WISH they were Canon. Backstories, powers and personalities are just astonishing.
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* {{Downer Beginning}}: [[spoiler: Jaune dies at the beginning of the story. Yup, that's right. Jaune dies at the hands of the WF Lieutenant while the Beacon falls. Sure, he gets a kiss from Weiss but it is gone in a Reset.]]
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* {{God Is Evil}}: While it is still unclear whether who exactly is playing the role of the God in this universe, his/her deeds are less than stellar. Locking people in the neverending cycle of repeating their lives over and over again, with only a select few aware of it. Not to mention, in Jaune's case, [[spoiler: taking away his entire life and giving it away to another version of him.]]
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* {{Awesome, but Impractical}}: For now, at least, one of Jaune's abilities, Shatter Armament allows him to summon a weapon from another world. But it shatters whatever limb is equipped with this weapon as well as cause significant decrease in Strength.
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* {{Awesome, but Impractical}}: {{AwesomeButImpractical}}: For now, at least, one of Jaune's abilities, Shatter Armament allows him to summon a weapon from another world. But it shatters whatever limb is equipped with this weapon as well as cause significant decrease in Strength.
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* [[Awesome, {{Awesome, but Impractical]]: Impractical}}: For now, at least, one of Jaune's abilities, Shatter Armament allows him to summon a weapon from another world. But it shatters whatever limb is equipped with this weapon as well as cause significant decrease in Strength.
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* {{Heel-Face Turn}}: As well as {{Face-Heel Turn}}
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** [[Neo is an NPC but she still has enough power to make even Adam/The Body of the Gamer uneasy.]]
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** [[Neo [[spoiler:Neo is an NPC but she still has enough power to make even Adam/The Body of the Gamer uneasy.]]
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* {{Always Someone Better}}: Even though Jaune is blessed with
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* {{Always Someone Better}}: Even though Jaune is blessed withmuch stronger than he was in Canon, there is still a lot of people he lacks against.
** [[spoiler: All the three Players other than Jaune have countless playthroughs under their belts. Adam, according to Ren, could easily take out Jaune with his skills alone.]]
** [[Neo is an NPC but she still has enough power to make even Adam/The Body of the Gamer uneasy.]]
* [[Awesome, but Impractical]]: For now, at least, one of Jaune's abilities, Shatter Armament allows him to summon a weapon from another world. But it shatters whatever limb is equipped with this weapon as well as cause significant decrease in Strength.
** [[spoiler: All the three Players other than Jaune have countless playthroughs under their belts. Adam, according to Ren, could easily take out Jaune with his skills alone.]]
** [[Neo is an NPC but she still has enough power to make even Adam/The Body of the Gamer uneasy.]]
* [[Awesome, but Impractical]]: For now, at least, one of Jaune's abilities, Shatter Armament allows him to summon a weapon from another world. But it shatters whatever limb is equipped with this weapon as well as cause significant decrease in Strength.
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* {{Multiple Endings}}: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one. Administrivia/{{Renamed Trope|s}
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* {{Multiple Endings}}: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one. Administrivia/{{Renamed Trope|s}
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* {{Always Someone Better}}: Even though Jaune is blessed with
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** Due to the nature of the Resets and Remixes, the idea of value of life becomes much less revelant seeing that all the ones who died would be later ressurected with no recollection of their deaths. [[Because [[spoiler:Because of this, Ren is quite nonchalant about killing off NPCs that are around him.]]
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** [[spoiler: Ren]] himself went through the {{Face-Heel Turn}} numerous times in a desperate attempt to bring the game to the end. [[spoiler: No such luck though.]]]]
* {{Multiple Endings}}: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one. Administrivia/{{Renamed Trope|s}
* {{Multiple Endings}}: Unlike video games, where you have several but limited amount of the outcomes, the Players live in the world that is still as complicated as ours. Thus, the possibility for Endings is unlimited, with only one of them being the True one. Administrivia/{{Renamed Trope|s}
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* {{Back from the Dead}}: Just like any other game, once you finished it, it all starts over. Destruction is nullified, deaths are erased and each of the Players return to their respective starting lines.
* {{Broken Ace}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] is the most distinct example. He has the knowledge of numerous lifetimes, an entire array of abilities and skills, but he can never [[save Pyrrha and his parents]] no matter how hard he tries.
* {{Broken Ace}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] is the most distinct example. He has the knowledge of numerous lifetimes, an entire array of abilities and skills, but he can never [[save Pyrrha and his parents]] no matter how hard he tries.
* {{Cosmic Plaything}}: [[spoiler: Ren]] views everyone and himself as such. Deaths, suffering, devastation and pain that everyone around him goes through is nothing more than enterainment for whatever deity controls the world.
* {{Determined Defeatist}}: [[spoiler:Ren]] appears to be one throughout most of the story. No matter what route he took, it always ended in another Reset, causing him to lose most of his hope for winning the game. [[spoiler: As of chapter 20, Jaune helps him regain some drive to move towards victory.]]
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** According to Ren, in each Reset, Cardin would go through either of these two.
** Also, it is implied that, in some of the Resets, [[spoiler:Jaune]] is the one to abandon everyone and go down the dark path.
** [[spoiler: Ren]] himself went through the {{Face-Heel Turn}} numerous times in a desperate attempt to bring the game to the end. [[spoiler: No such luck though.]]
** According to Ren, in each Reset, Cardin would go through either of these two.
** Also, it is implied that, in some of the Resets, [[spoiler:Jaune]] is the one to abandon everyone and go down the dark path.
** [[spoiler: Ren]] himself went through the {{Face-Heel Turn}} numerous times in a desperate attempt to bring the game to the end. [[spoiler: No such luck though.]]
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* {{Character Development}}:
** Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
** Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
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* {{Genre Savvy}}: Ren. Often {{lampshades}} tropes likehis Canon self. {{Unwanted Harem}}. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry In his battle with Jaune.]]Cross Hare, Ren monologues about how such battles are often the time to give a speech about Power of Friendship and the like.]]
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* {{Deconstruction}}: While not going full dark and edgy on readers, the story does show how certain aspects of being living in abecoming a Gamer. While the array of abilities, skills and other perks are awesome, one should not forget that this means you are playing someone's game.
* {{Character Development}}:
**Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
* {{Character Development}}:
**Cardin is first introduced like his Canon self. [[spoiler: After the Trial by Fire Event, he grows more tolerant of Faunus, preferring to focus more on protecting eveyone, be they Faunus or not. Also, he develops a rivalry with Jaune.]]
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