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* MadeOfExplodium: Marshall's fire truck - it exploded quite easily in comparison to cars in UsefulNotes/RealLife.
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The story is a tribute to the author's favorite character, Marshall, as well as a slightly more serious take on the PAW Patrol's history and the pup's backstories.
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The story is a tribute to [[Creator/HavocHound the author's author's]] favorite character, Marshall, as well as a slightly more serious take on the PAW Patrol's history and the pup's backstories.
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* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead at the [[spoiler: firetruck's crash site. They later find his bloody collar, and assume that he really ''is dead'']].
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* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead at the [[spoiler: firetruck's crash site. They later find his bloody bloodied collar, and assume that he really ''is dead'']]. dead'']].
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: While no one dies, Marshall and Chase engage each other in one to vent, much to Skye, Zuma, Rubble, and Rocky's horror. Blaze intervenes when the other four try to diffuse the situation.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: While no one dies, Marshall and Chase engage each other in one to vent, much to Skye, Zuma, Rubble, and Rocky's horror. Blaze intervenes when the other four try to diffuse the situation.
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* NeverSayDie: Averted. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
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* AdultFear: Blaze and Misty's reaction to [[spoiler: their son Marshall's death]].
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* AdultFear: Blaze and Misty's reaction to [[spoiler: their son Marshall's (supposed) death]].
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** Also, Ryder nearly looses it when he finds out about the hurtful things the pups said to Marshall.
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** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased]].
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** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased]].deceased]], and earlier on, they take the news of their words driving Marshall away very badly.
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* LegallyDead /NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler: Marshall]].
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* LegallyDead /NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler: Marshall]].Marshall. This leads the pups to assume the worst, though he turns out fine (if barely)]].
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* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead at the [[spoiler: firetruck's crash site]].
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* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead at the [[spoiler: firetruck's crash site]].site. They later find his bloody collar, and assume that he really ''is dead'']].
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* ToiletHumor: In addition the two original screw ups Marshall caused in the actual episode, the fic starts off with Marshall accidentally peeing on a squirrel.
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* ToiletHumor: In addition to the two original screw ups Marshall caused in the actual episode, the fic starts off with Marshall accidentally peeing on a squirrel.
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* ShipTease: Blaze says to Everest that she has his permission to marry his son, welcoming her into the family, [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents much to both pups chagrins.]]
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* ShipTease: Blaze says to Everest that she has his permission to marry his son, welcoming her into the family, [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents much to both pups pups' chagrins.]]
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* ShipTease: Blaze says to Everest that she has his permission to marry his son, welcoming her into the family, [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents much to both pups chagrins.]]
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The sequel, called "Everest Gone Missing", features the Paw Patrol team going to look for Everest who runs away after a wolf attack specifically aimed at her. It can be read [[ https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11852613/1/Everest-Gone-Missing here]].
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The sequel, called "Everest Gone Missing", features the Paw Patrol team going to look for Everest who runs away after a wolf attack specifically aimed at her. It can be read [[ https://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11852613/1/Everest-Gone-Missing here]].
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The sequel, called "Everest Gone Missing", features the Paw Patrol team going to look for Everest who runs away after a wolf attack specifically aimed at her. It can be read [[ https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11852613/1/Everest-Gone-Missing here]].
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* MoodWhiplash: In-universe example. Skye has perked up from her funk after Marshall broke the TV upon realizing what a nice day it is and decides to ask Ryder if she can go flying. Only when she gets there, Ryder starts yelling at her, much to her obvious confusion and distress.
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** In Rocky's flashback, [[GangOfBullies Butch, Crash and Sharper]] stamp on one for Ryder and Chase when it's revealed that not only did they beat up Rocky but they also called Zuma retarded for his speech impediment.
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* TrueCompanions: What all the pups and Ryder consider the team to be. Zuma cements it when he mentally places all of the other pups as siblings in his head with Ryder as the [[TeamDad "dad"]] and comes to the realization that the entire team (their "family") was hurt when they chased off Marshall.
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* FurryReminder: When Chase gets confrontational at Everest's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Ryder's command of "Heel!" makes him stand down, albeit with a distressed whine.
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* DarkerandEdgier: Expect to see violence, blood, and death in this story.
* DogStereotype: Used for Bebe, an OC that's a poodle. But strongly subverted for Tina, an OC golden retriever.
* EtTuBrute: Marshall's reaction to Chase calling him an annoyance. It's even worse in the context of them being BloodBrothers.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: All the pups' (sans Everest) reaction when they realized that they made Marshall run away.
* DogStereotype: Used for Bebe, an OC that's a poodle. But strongly subverted for Tina, an OC golden retriever.
* EtTuBrute: Marshall's reaction to Chase calling him an annoyance. It's even worse in the context of them being BloodBrothers.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: All the pups' (sans Everest) reaction when they realized that they made Marshall run away.
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* DarkerandEdgier: Expect to see violence, blood, AdultFear: Blaze and death in this story.
* DogStereotype: Used for Bebe, an OC that's a poodle. But strongly subverted for Tina, an OC golden retriever.
* EtTuBrute:Misty's reaction to [[spoiler: their son Marshall's reaction to Chase calling him an annoyance. It's even worse death]].
* [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]]: Tina the golden retriever and Bebe the poodle who bullied Skye in thecontext of them being BloodBrothers.
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*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: All the pups' (sans Everest) reaction when they realized that they made AmbiguouslyChristian: Marshall run away.when he spreads the gospel of "Puppy Heaven" to [[spoiler: Chase after his father's funeral]] during a flashback in chapter 6.
* DogStereotype: Used for Bebe, an OC that's a poodle. But strongly subverted for Tina, an OC golden retriever.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Although all the other pups (sans Everest) make their anger and frustrations with Marshall clear, Chase and Skye are the ones to verbally attack Marshall directly.
* WhatTheHellHero: Ryder's reaction to the pups when he finds out what they said to Marshall via a video chat with him. Skye ends up getting the brunt of it, but she was one of the pups who tore into Marshall the most.
** And later on [[spoiler: Everest gives a brief one to Chase when the pups arrive at Jake's cabin where Marshall is resting after she and Jake saved him]].
** And after that [[spoiler: Marshall gives a scathing and well deserved one to the other pups]].
* NeverSayDie: Averted. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath: Marshall in Chapter 6.]]
* AmbiguouslyChristian: Marshall when he spreads the gospel of "Puppy Heaven" to [[spoiler: Chase after his father's funeral]] during a flashback in chapter 6.
* [[CrystalDragonJesus Crystal Puppy Jesus]]: Marshall's description of Puppy Heaven.
* WhatTheHellHero: Ryder's reaction to the pups when he finds out what they said to Marshall via a video chat with him. Skye ends up getting the brunt of it, but she was one of the pups who tore into Marshall the most.
** And later on [[spoiler: Everest gives a brief one to Chase when the pups arrive at Jake's cabin where Marshall is resting after she and Jake saved him]].
** And after that [[spoiler: Marshall gives a scathing and well deserved one to the other pups]].
* NeverSayDie: Averted. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath: Marshall in Chapter 6.]]
* AmbiguouslyChristian: Marshall when he spreads the gospel of "Puppy Heaven" to [[spoiler: Chase after his father's funeral]] during a flashback in chapter 6.
* [[CrystalDragonJesus Crystal Puppy Jesus]]: Marshall's description of Puppy Heaven.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Although all the other pups (sans Everest) make their anger and frustrations with Marshall clear, Chase and Skye are the ones to verbally attack Marshall directly.
* WhatTheHellHero: Ryder's reaction to the pups when he finds out what they said to Marshall via a video chat with him. Skye ends up getting the brunt of it, but she was one of the pups who tore into Marshall the most.
** And later onBigNo: Rubble [[spoiler: Everest gives a brief one to Chase when the pups arrive at Jake's cabin where Marshall is resting after she and Jake saved him]].
** And after that [[spoiler: Marshall gives a scathing and well deserved one to the other pups]].
* NeverSayDie: Averted. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath: Marshall in Chapter 6.]]
* AmbiguouslyChristian: Marshall when he spreads the gospel of "Puppy Heaven" to [[spoiler: Chase after his father's funeral]] during a flashback in chapter 6.
* [[CrystalDragonJesus Crystal Puppy Jesus]]: Marshall's description of Puppy Heaven.declared deceased]].
* WhatTheHellHero: Ryder's reaction to the pups when he finds out what they said to Marshall via a video chat with him. Skye ends up getting the brunt of it, but she was one of the pups who tore into Marshall the most.
** And later on
** And after that [[spoiler: Marshall gives a scathing and well deserved one to the other pups]].
* NeverSayDie: Averted. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath: Marshall in Chapter 6.]]
* AmbiguouslyChristian: Marshall when he spreads the gospel of "Puppy Heaven" to [[spoiler: Chase after his father's funeral]] during a flashback in chapter 6.
* [[CrystalDragonJesus Crystal Puppy Jesus]]: Marshall's description of Puppy Heaven.
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* HowlOfSorrow: Chase when he discovers that Marshall ran away because of how he and the pups treated him.
* {{Revenge}}: Chase and Skye [[spoiler: kill a bear when they think it ate Marshall]].
* {{Revenge}}: Chase and Skye [[spoiler: kill a bear when they think it ate Marshall]].
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* HowlOfSorrow: Chase when he discovers that BreakTheCutie: Marshall ran away because of how he and is the pups treated him.
* {{Revenge}}: Chase and Skyemain receiver of throughout the course of the story.
** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler:kill a bear when they think it ate Marshall]].Marshall is declared deceased]].
* [[CrystalDragonJesus Crystal Puppy Jesus]]: Marshall's description of Puppy Heaven.
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* {{Revenge}}: Chase and Skye
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* [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]]: Tina the golden retriever and Bebe the poodle who bullied Skye in the past.
* ToiletHumor: In addition the two original screw ups Marshall caused in the actual episode, the fic starts off with Marshall accidentally peeing on a squirrel.
* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead at the [[spoiler: firetruck's crash site]].
* UnstoppableRage: Chase vs [[spoiler: the bear.]]
* AdultFear: Blaze and Misty's reaction to [[spoiler: their son Marshall's death]].
* HeroicBSOD: Chase after [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased.]]
* GangOfBullies / TerribleTrio: Butch, Crash, and Sharper; who beat up [[spoiler: Rocky]] during a flashback.
* HappilyAdopted: Rocky lived in an orphanage before Ryder took him into the PAW Patrol.
* BreakTheCutie: Marshall is the main receiver of throughout the course of the story.
** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased]].
* BigNo: Rubble [[spoiler: when Marshall is declared deceased]].
* ToiletHumor: In addition the two original screw ups Marshall caused in the actual episode, the fic starts off with Marshall accidentally peeing on a squirrel.
* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead at the [[spoiler: firetruck's crash site]].
* UnstoppableRage: Chase vs [[spoiler: the bear.]]
* AdultFear: Blaze and Misty's reaction to [[spoiler: their son Marshall's death]].
* HeroicBSOD: Chase after [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased.]]
* GangOfBullies / TerribleTrio: Butch, Crash, and Sharper; who beat up [[spoiler: Rocky]] during a flashback.
* HappilyAdopted: Rocky lived in an orphanage before Ryder took him into the PAW Patrol.
* BreakTheCutie: Marshall is the main receiver of throughout the course of the story.
** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased]].
* BigNo: Rubble [[spoiler: when Marshall is declared deceased]].
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* DogStereotype: Used for Bebe, an OC that's a poodle. But strongly subverted for Tina, an OC golden retriever.
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* EtTuBrute: Marshall's reaction to Chase calling him an annoyance. It's even worse in the context of them being BloodBrothers.
* GangOfBullies / TerribleTrio: Butch, Crash, and Sharper; who beat up [[spoiler: Rocky]] during a flashback.
* HappilyAdopted: Rocky lived in an orphanage before Ryder took him into the PAW Patrol.
* HeroicBSOD: Chase after [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased.]]
* HowlOfSorrow: Chase when he discovers that Marshall ran away because of how he and the pups treated him.
* LegallyDead /NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler: Marshall]].
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: All the pups' (sans Everest) reaction when they realized that they made Marshall run away.
* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead at the [[spoiler: firetruck's crash site]].
* NeverSayDie: Averted. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Although all the other pups (sans Everest) make their anger and frustrations with Marshall clear, Chase and Skye are the ones to verbally attack Marshall directly.
* {{Revenge}}: Chase and Skye [[spoiler: kill a bear when they think it ate Marshall]].
* ToiletHumor: In addition the two original screw ups Marshall caused in the actual episode, the fic starts off with Marshall accidentally peeing on a squirrel.
* UnstoppableRage: Chase vs [[spoiler: the bear.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Ryder's reaction to the pups when he finds out what they said to Marshall via a video chat with him. Skye ends up getting the brunt of it, but she was one of the pups who tore into Marshall the most.
** And later on [[spoiler: Everest gives a brief one to Chase when the pups arrive at Jake's cabin where Marshall is resting after she and Jake saved him]].
** And after that [[spoiler: Marshall gives a scathing and well deserved one to the other pups]].
* GangOfBullies / TerribleTrio: Butch, Crash, and Sharper; who beat up [[spoiler: Rocky]] during a flashback.
* HappilyAdopted: Rocky lived in an orphanage before Ryder took him into the PAW Patrol.
* HeroicBSOD: Chase after [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased.]]
* HowlOfSorrow: Chase when he discovers that Marshall ran away because of how he and the pups treated him.
* LegallyDead /NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler: Marshall]].
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: All the pups' (sans Everest) reaction when they realized that they made Marshall run away.
* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead at the [[spoiler: firetruck's crash site]].
* NeverSayDie: Averted. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Although all the other pups (sans Everest) make their anger and frustrations with Marshall clear, Chase and Skye are the ones to verbally attack Marshall directly.
* {{Revenge}}: Chase and Skye [[spoiler: kill a bear when they think it ate Marshall]].
* ToiletHumor: In addition the two original screw ups Marshall caused in the actual episode, the fic starts off with Marshall accidentally peeing on a squirrel.
* UnstoppableRage: Chase vs [[spoiler: the bear.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Ryder's reaction to the pups when he finds out what they said to Marshall via a video chat with him. Skye ends up getting the brunt of it, but she was one of the pups who tore into Marshall the most.
** And later on [[spoiler: Everest gives a brief one to Chase when the pups arrive at Jake's cabin where Marshall is resting after she and Jake saved him]].
** And after that [[spoiler: Marshall gives a scathing and well deserved one to the other pups]].
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* NeverSayDie: Averted ''HARD''. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
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* BreakTheCutie: Marshall is the main receiver of this over and over again over the course of the story.
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* RoaringRampageofRevenge: Chase vs [[spoiler: the bear.]]
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* RoaringRampageofRevenge: UnstoppableRage: Chase vs [[spoiler: the bear.]]]]
* AdultFear: Blaze and Misty's reaction to [[spoiler: their son Marshall's death]].
* AdultFear: Blaze and Misty's reaction to [[spoiler: their son Marshall's death]].
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* EasilyForgiven: Marshall, in spite of all the pain he went through.
--> '''''Blaze:''' "He was going to forgive you all no matter what. {laughs} That's just how Marshall is."''
--> '''''Blaze:''' "He was going to forgive you all no matter what. {laughs} That's just how Marshall is."''
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* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead, [[spoiler: until they see the bear.]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: Chase nearly sails right over it twice, first [[spoiler: in the flashback of his father's funereal]] and again [[spoiler: after Marshall's funereal]].
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* DespairEventHorizon: Chase nearly sails right over it twice, first [[spoiler: in the flashback of his father's funereal]] funeral]] and again [[spoiler: after Marshall's funereal]].funeral]].
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* TheWoobie: Marshall is already an Adorkable ButtMonkey, but the pain he goes through during the story grants him complete Woobie status.
* BreakTheCutie: Marshall is the main receiver of this over and over again over the course of the story.
** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased]].
* BigNo: Rubble [[spoiler: when Marshall is declared deceased]].
* DespairEventHorizon: Chase nearly sails right over it twice, first [[spoiler: in the flashback of his father's funereal]] and again [[spoiler: after Marshall's funereal]].
* BreakTheCutie: Marshall is the main receiver of this over and over again over the course of the story.
** The other pups, (sans Everest) are also broken when [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased]].
* BigNo: Rubble [[spoiler: when Marshall is declared deceased]].
* DespairEventHorizon: Chase nearly sails right over it twice, first [[spoiler: in the flashback of his father's funereal]] and again [[spoiler: after Marshall's funereal]].
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* Blood Brothers: BloodBrothers: Marshall and Chase with a slightly morbid context.
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* ToiletHumor: In addition the two original screw ups Marshall caused in the actual episode, the fic starts off with Marshall accidentally peeing on a squirrel.
* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead, [[spoiler: until they see the bear.]]
* RoaringRampageofRevenge: Chase vs [[spoiler: the bear.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Chase after [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased.]]
* NeverFoundTheBody: Chase uses this a reason for not believing Marshall is dead, [[spoiler: until they see the bear.]]
* RoaringRampageofRevenge: Chase vs [[spoiler: the bear.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Chase after [[spoiler: Marshall is declared deceased.]]
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* NeverSayDie: Averted ''HARD''. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father and Ryder's mother]].
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* NeverSayDie: Averted ''HARD''. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father father, Marshall's grandmother, and Ryder's mother]].
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* [[CrystalDragonJesus Crystal Puppy Jesus]]: Marshall's description of Puppy Heaven. Heaven.
* Blood Brothers: Marshall and Chase with a slightly morbid context.
* HowlOfSorrow: Chase when he discovers that Marshall ran away because of how he and the pups treated him.
* DeathWail: [[spoiler: Chase]] gives a gut wrenching one in chapter 7. What makes it worse is that the author makes sure to differentiate it from a HowlOfSorrow.
* [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]]: Tina the golden retriever and Bebe the poodle who bullied Skye in the past.
* Blood Brothers: Marshall and Chase with a slightly morbid context.
* HowlOfSorrow: Chase when he discovers that Marshall ran away because of how he and the pups treated him.
* DeathWail: [[spoiler: Chase]] gives a gut wrenching one in chapter 7. What makes it worse is that the author makes sure to differentiate it from a HowlOfSorrow.
* [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]]: Tina the golden retriever and Bebe the poodle who bullied Skye in the past.
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* AmbiguouslyChristian: Marshall when he spreads the gospel of "Puppy Heaven" to [[spoiler: Chase after his father's funeral]] during a flashback in chapter 6.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Ryder's reaction to the pups when he finds out what they said to Marshall via a video chat with him. Skye ends up getting the brunt of it, but she was one of the pups who tore into Marshall the most.
** And later on [[spoiler: Everest gives a brief one to Chase when the pups arrive at Jake's cabin where Marshall is resting after she and Jake saved him]].
* NeverSayDie: Averted ''HARD''. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father and Ryder's mother]].
* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath: Marshall in Chapter 6.]]
** And later on [[spoiler: Everest gives a brief one to Chase when the pups arrive at Jake's cabin where Marshall is resting after she and Jake saved him]].
* NeverSayDie: Averted ''HARD''. Among the dead are [[spoiler: Chase's father and Ryder's mother]].
* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath: Marshall in Chapter 6.]]
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In this adaptation of Pups Save a Friend, Marshall performs his biggest blunder ever, which causes the other pups to insult Marshall for real. After they discover that Marshall has run away, the pups try to get him back to apologize while remembering all the times Marshall has been there for them. Meanwhile, Marshall tries to make it to Jake's mountain, but faces serious dangers along the way.
The story is a tribute to the author's favorite character, Marshall, as well as a slightly more serious take on the PAW Patrol's history and the pup's backstories.
Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11059644/1/Marshall-Gone-Missing here]].
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!! This ''WesternAnimation/PawPatrol'' FanFic provides examples of:
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: All the pups' (sans Everest) reaction when they realized that they made Marshall run away.
* BerserkButton: The ONLY thing that will get a pup as sweet as Rubble mad is preventing him from seeing the Apollo the Superpup cartoon.
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The story is a tribute to the author's favorite character, Marshall, as well as a slightly more serious take on the PAW Patrol's history and the pup's backstories.
Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11059644/1/Marshall-Gone-Missing here]].
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!! This ''WesternAnimation/PawPatrol'' FanFic provides examples of:
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: All the pups' (sans Everest) reaction when they realized that they made Marshall run away.
* BerserkButton: The ONLY thing that will get a pup as sweet as Rubble mad is preventing him from seeing the Apollo the Superpup cartoon.
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