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** General Black for his rogue army, Sherry for The Piranhas, Bret for his group, Darius for his group, Woodrow for The X in Baltimore, Calvin for his group.
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** General Black for his rogue army, Sherry for The Piranhas, Bret for his group, Darius for his group, Woodrow for The X in Baltimore, Calvin for his the X as a whole group.
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** Chapter 27, [[spoiler:Sheila, Kotaro]]
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** General Black for his rogue army, Sherry for The Piranhas, Bret for his group, Darius for his group, Woodrow for The X.
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** From Chapters 21-25, Woodrow, the leader of the X, serves as the primary antagonist.
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* DwindlingParty: Tragically played straight with the Loud family. As of now, only [[spoiler: Lincoln, Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lana, Lisa and Lily remain.]].
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* DwindlingParty: Tragically played straight with the Loud family. As of now, only [[spoiler: Lincoln, Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lana, Lisa and Lily remain.]].
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** David becomes the leader of his group, and later the town of Houlton, from Chapter 2 to 15 (with the exception of 5) before Lori assumes leadership of Houlton.
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** From Chapters 21-25, Woodrow, the leader of the X, serves as the primary antagonist.
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** Chapter 25, [[spoiler:Dr. White, Woodrow]]
** Chapter 25, [[spoiler:Dr. White, Woodrow]]
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** Chapter 20, [[spoiler:Sergei, Rusty, Mr. Spokes, Leni Loud, General Black]]
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** Chapter 18, [[spoiler:Buck]]
** Chapter 19, [[spoiler:Donovan Bree]]
** Chapter 20, [[spoiler:Sergei, Rusty, Mr. Spokes,Leni Loud, Mr. Coleman, Leni, General Black]]Black]]
** Chapter 22, [[spoiler:Ted, Mrs. Coleman]]
** Chapter 19, [[spoiler:Donovan Bree]]
** Chapter 20, [[spoiler:Sergei, Rusty, Mr. Spokes,
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** Chapter 2, [[spoiler:Flip, Bumper Sr., Beatrix, Bumper Jr.]]
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** Chapter 15, [[spoiler:Richard, Rita and Lynn Sr]]
12, [[spoiler:Derrick]]
** Chapter20, [[spoiler:Leni Loud]]
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** Chapter 14, [[spoiler:Mr. and Mrs.Pingrey, Pingrey]]
** Chapter 15, [[spoiler:Rita and Lynn Sr., Sandy, Richard]]
** Chapter 16, [[spoiler:Wavehead, Tabby]]
** Chapter 17, [[spoiler:Dana]]
** Chapter 20, [[spoiler:Sergei, Rusty, Mr. Spokes, Leni Loud, General Black]]
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** Chapter 15, [[spoiler:Rita and Lynn Sr., Sandy, Richard]]
** Chapter 16, [[spoiler:Wavehead, Tabby]]
** Chapter 17, [[spoiler:Dana]]
** Chapter 20, [[spoiler:Sergei, Rusty, Mr. Spokes, Leni Loud, General Black]]
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** Chapter 11,
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Largely inspired by ''[[Series/TheWalkingDead The Walking Dead]]'', but not a Xover.
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** General Black, a Desert Eagle.
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* InfantImmortality: Shockingly averted as of 23, [[spoiler:when Lisa is forced to put down Zoey, Carol's infant daughter]].
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* InfantImmortality: Shockingly averted as of 23, [[spoiler:when Lisa is forced to put down Zoey, Carol's infant daughter]].
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** Luna Loud, one of the group’s best snipers. She's (canonically) in love with Sam, who shares her feelings.
** Sam Sharp [[note]] proven canon since Racing Hearts [[/note]] protects the group whenever she can, and also one of the group’s best shots as of Chapter 20.
** Luna Loud, one of the group’s best snipers. She's (canonically) in love with Sam, who shares her feelings.
** Sam Sharp [[note]] proven canon since Racing Hearts [[/note]] protects the group whenever she can, and also one of the group’s best shots as of Chapter 20.
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* ArtificialLimbs:
* AscendedExtra: Benny, Luan's SateliteLoveInterest from the TV show. [[note]]at the time this fic was published, Benny's only appearance had been "''L is for Love''", prior to receiving more characterization in "''Stage Plight''"[[/note]]
* AscendedExtra: Benny, Luan's SateliteLoveInterest from the TV show. [[note]]at the time this fic was published, Benny's only appearance had been "''L is for Love''", prior to receiving more characterization in "''Stage Plight''"[[/note]]
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ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler:Clyde]]
* AscendedExtra: Benny, Luan'sSateliteLoveInterest SatelliteLoveInterest from the TV show. [[note]]at the time this fic was published, Benny's only appearance had been "''L is for Love''", prior to receiving more characterization in "''Stage Plight''"[[/note]]
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** In 20, [[spoiler:Luan successfully sneaks up on Black and slices both his arms off before he can kill Lori and Lincoln]].
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** Chapter 7, [[spoiler:Tad]]
** Chapter 8,[[spoiler:Liam and [[spoiler:Liam, Chunk]]
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** Chapter 2, [[spoiler:The Yates and Flippy]]
** Chapter 8, [[spoiler:Liam and Chunk]]
** Chapter 11, [[spoiler:Missy, Sherry, Darcy]]
** Chapter 15, [[spoiler:Richard, Rita and Lynn Sr]]
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** In Chapter 25, Jace gets into a bloody fight with Sam after she mentions that he failed to protect Alex.
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