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* AchillesHeel: Artyom is an incredibly skilled Ranger, but he has little training when it comes to Aura, and has difficulty fighting Ruby during training. While he has caught up somewhat, [[spoiler: he is no match for Ozpin or Cinder... until he forces his way into her mind]].
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* RealityEnsues:
** Artyom is an incredibly skilled Ranger, but he has little training when it comes to Aura, and has difficulty fighting Ruby during training. While he has caught up somewhat, [[spoiler: he is no match for Ozpin or Cinder... until he forces his way into her mind]].
** [[spoiler: Maiden powers or no, Amber has spent a ton of time in a coma, and will have to go through therapy to get her limbs back into shape]]
** Artyom is an incredibly skilled Ranger, but he has little training when it comes to Aura, and has difficulty fighting Ruby during training. While he has caught up somewhat, [[spoiler: he is no match for Ozpin or Cinder... until he forces his way into her mind]].
** [[spoiler: Maiden powers or no, Amber has spent a ton of time in a coma, and will have to go through therapy to get her limbs back into shape]]
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* {{Adorkable}}: Malysh. Justified, since he's in a disguise. His true form is scary enough to scare Ironwood.
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* PoroitSpeak: Not extremely common, but Artyom does slip a few Russian words into his speech from time to time.
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* PoroitSpeak: PoirotSpeak: Not extremely common, but Artyom does slip a few Russian words into his speech from time to time.
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* ThisIsMyNameOnForeign: At the beginning of the story, Artyom simply refers to the Dark One child as "Little One". When he first gains the ability to speak... whatever it is they speak on Remnant, he accidentally [[PoroitSpeak slips back into Russian]], and refers to him as Malysh, which is Russian for "Little One"[[note]]Or baby, or kid, or small boy, etc.[[/note]], which Ruby assumes is his name. Malysh decides to say yes, since the two of them realise that Malysh didn't actually ''have'' a name beforehand.
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* ThisIsMyNameOnForeign: At the beginning of the story, Artyom simply refers to the Dark One child as "Little One". When he first gains the ability to speak... whatever it is they speak on Remnant, he accidentally [[PoroitSpeak [[PoirotSpeak slips back into Russian]], and refers to him as Malysh, which is Russian for "Little One"[[note]]Or baby, or kid, or small boy, etc.[[/note]], which Ruby assumes is his name. Malysh decides to say yes, since the two of them realise that Malysh didn't actually ''have'' a name beforehand.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/light-at-the-end-metro-2033-rwby.332879/ Light at the end]]'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' and ''Videogame/MetroLastLight'' written by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/blindingphoenix.288916/ Blinding Phoenix]].
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/light-at-the-end-metro-2033-rwby.332879/ Light at the end]]'' End]]'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' and ''Videogame/MetroLastLight'' written by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/blindingphoenix.288916/ Blinding Phoenix]].
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** Artyom is an incredibly skilled Ranger, but he has little training when it comes to Aura, and has difficulty fighting Ruby during training. While he has caught up somewhat, [[spoiler: he is no match for Ozpin or Cinder... until he forces his was way into her mind]].
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* {{Adorkable}}: The Dark One child. Justified, since he's in a disguise. His true form is scary enough to scare Ironwood.
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* {{Adorkable}}: The Dark One child.Malysh. Justified, since he's in a disguise. His true form is scary enough to scare Ironwood.
* CombatPragmatist: Artyom, full stop. Ruby beating you in a training match? Shoot out the lights, and take advantage of your years in the darkness of the Metro to sneak up on her! Need an improvised explosive? Some fire dust and a bent gun barrel will do the trick!
* CurbStompBattle [[BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind In the Center Of The Mind]]: [[spoiler: Artyom goes into Cinder's mind to free the pieces of Amber's soul, returning the full power of the Fall Maiden to her. Artyom easily ignores Cinder's mental attempts to fight back, and notes that her soul is so whithered that he might be able to destroy it right than and there]].
* CurbStompBattle [[BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind In the Center Of The Mind]]: [[spoiler: Artyom goes into Cinder's mind to free the pieces of Amber's soul, returning the full power of the Fall Maiden to her. Artyom easily ignores Cinder's mental attempts to fight back, and notes that her soul is so whithered that he might be able to destroy it right than and there]].
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** With Malysh's help, Ironwood manages to discover that there are infiltrators in the Beacon Academy.
** Ozpin and his group try to capture the infiltrators. It failed but forces Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald to go towards Amber.
** Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun to cinders]].
** Ozpin and his group try to capture the infiltrators. It failed but forces Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald to go towards Amber.
** Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun to cinders]].
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** [[spoiler: With Malysh's help, Ironwood manages to discover that there are infiltrators in the Beacon Academy.
Academy.]]
** [[spoiler: Ozpin and his group try to capture the infiltrators. It failed but forces Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald to go towards Amber. \n]]
** [[spoiler: Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun tocinders]]. cinders]]]].
* MindRape: How Malysh defeats [[spoiler:Mercury]].
** [[spoiler: Ozpin and his group try to capture the infiltrators. It failed but forces Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald to go towards Amber.
** [[spoiler: Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun to
* MindRape: How Malysh defeats [[spoiler:Mercury]].
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* PoroitSpeak: Not extremely common, but Artyom does slip a few Russian words into his speech from time to time.
* PsychicBlockDefense: When [[MasterOfIllusion Emerald]] tries to use her powers on Artyom to make him think she disappeared, they work for a little bit... [[spoiler: only for her to then reappear a few steps away, scream and fall unconscious with [[PsychicNosebleed blood coming out of her nose]]]]
* RealityEnsues:
** Artyom is an incredibly skilled Ranger, but he has little training when it comes to Aura, and has difficulty fighting Ruby during training. While he has caught up somewhat, [[spoiler: he is no match for Cinder... until he his was into her mind]].
** [[spoiler: Maiden powers or no, Amber has spent a ton of time in a coma, and will have to go through therapy to get her limbs back into shape]]
* PsychicBlockDefense: When [[MasterOfIllusion Emerald]] tries to use her powers on Artyom to make him think she disappeared, they work for a little bit... [[spoiler: only for her to then reappear a few steps away, scream and fall unconscious with [[PsychicNosebleed blood coming out of her nose]]]]
* RealityEnsues:
** Artyom is an incredibly skilled Ranger, but he has little training when it comes to Aura, and has difficulty fighting Ruby during training. While he has caught up somewhat, [[spoiler: he is no match for Cinder... until he his was into her mind]].
** [[spoiler: Maiden powers or no, Amber has spent a ton of time in a coma, and will have to go through therapy to get her limbs back into shape]]
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* ThisIsMyNameOnForeign: At the beginning of the story, Artyom simply refers to the Dark One child as "Little One". When he first gains the ability to speak... whatever it is they speak on Remnant, he accidentally [[PoroitSpeak slips back into Russian]], and refers to him as Malysh, which is Russian for "Little One"[[note]]Or baby, or kid, or small boy, etc.[[/note]], which Ruby assumes is his name. Malysh decides to say yes, since the two of them realise that Malysh didn't actually ''have'' a name beforehand.
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After the events of ''Last Light'', Artyom is send to investigate the disappearances in the Prospekt Mira-Rizhskaya tunnel. There, he loss consciousness and when he wakes up, he finds himself in the surface. But not just any surface, but the surface of the world of Remnant.
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After the events of ''Last Light'', Artyom is send sent to investigate the disappearances in the Prospekt Mira-Rizhskaya tunnel. There, he loss loses consciousness and when he wakes up, up he finds himself in on the surface. But not Not just any surface, but the surface of the world of Remnant.
Remnant.
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* {{Adorkable}}: The Dark One child. Justified, since he's in a disguise. His true form is scary enough to scared Ironwood.
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* {{Adorkable}}: The Dark One child. Justified, since he's in a disguise. His true form is scary enough to scared scare Ironwood.
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** Ozpin and his group try to capture the infiltrators. It failed and forces Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald to go towards Amber.
** Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun to cinder]].
** Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun to cinder]].
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** Ozpin and his group try to capture the infiltrators. It failed and but forces Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald to go towards Amber.
** Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun tocinder]].cinders]].
** Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun to
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* VodkaDrunkenski: Averted. Artyom only drinks during social event or celebration. It's just that he's used to drink [[GargleBlaster Shroom Vodka]], which is strong enough to "knock you on your ass." Thus, he can remain sober while Amber starts to getting drunk.
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* VodkaDrunkenski: Averted. Artyom only drinks during social event or celebration. It's just that he's used to drink drinking [[GargleBlaster Shroom Vodka]], which is strong enough to "knock you on your ass." Thus, he can remain sober while Amber starts to getting get drunk.
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* BoringButPractical: Artyom's new weapon in Remnant is a scaled up, advanced weapon based off of the ''Vintorez''. Unlike [[MixAndMatchWeapon most weapons used by Huntsmen and Huntresses]], it only has one mode; firearm mode.
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* ReliablyUnreliableGuns: The Bastard Gun, which is little more than a piece of metal with a firing pin and a barrel. The first weapon that Artyom creates when he arrives in Remnant. [[{{Understatement}} Ruby doesn't like it]].
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* MundaneLuxury: For Artyom, it's almost ''everything'' that the people of Remnant taken for granted. Clean air, drinkable water, fruits, and many other things.
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* {{Adorkable}}: The Dark One child. Justified, since he's in a disguise. His true form is scary enough to scared Ironwood.
* ForWantOfANail: Artyom and Malysh's arrival derail the ''RWBY'' canon.
** With Malysh's help, Ironwood manages to discover that there are infiltrators in the Beacon Academy.
** Ozpin and his group try to capture the infiltrators. It failed and forces Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald to go towards Amber.
** Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun to cinder]].
* MundaneLuxury: For Artyom, it's almost ''everything'' that the people of Remnant taken for granted. Clean air, drinkable water, fruits, and many otherthings.things.
* VodkaDrunkenski: Averted. Artyom only drinks during social event or celebration. It's just that he's used to drink [[GargleBlaster Shroom Vodka]], which is strong enough to "knock you on your ass." Thus, he can remain sober while Amber starts to getting drunk.
* ForWantOfANail: Artyom and Malysh's arrival derail the ''RWBY'' canon.
** With Malysh's help, Ironwood manages to discover that there are infiltrators in the Beacon Academy.
** Ozpin and his group try to capture the infiltrators. It failed and forces Cinder, Mercury, and Emerald to go towards Amber.
** Amber survives, regains her power, and [[LaserGuidedKarma burns Cinder]] [[IncrediblyLamePun to cinder]].
* MundaneLuxury: For Artyom, it's almost ''everything'' that the people of Remnant taken for granted. Clean air, drinkable water, fruits, and many other
* VodkaDrunkenski: Averted. Artyom only drinks during social event or celebration. It's just that he's used to drink [[GargleBlaster Shroom Vodka]], which is strong enough to "knock you on your ass." Thus, he can remain sober while Amber starts to getting drunk.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/light-at-the-end-metro-2033-rwby.332879/ Light at the end]]'' is a crossover between ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' and ''Videogame/MetroLastLight'' written by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/blindingphoenix.288916/ Blinding Phoenix]].
After the events of ''Last Light'', Artyom is send to investigate the disappearances in the Prospekt Mira-Rizhskaya tunnel. There, he loss consciousness and when he wakes up, he finds himself in the surface. But not just any surface, but the surface of the world of Remnant.
Soon after, Artyom and the Dark One child (later named Malysh), find themselves getting involved in the troubles of Remnant.
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!!''Light at the End'' contains the following tropes:
*MundaneLuxury: For Artyom, it's almost ''everything'' that the people of Remnant taken for granted. Clean air, drinkable water, fruits, and many other things.
After the events of ''Last Light'', Artyom is send to investigate the disappearances in the Prospekt Mira-Rizhskaya tunnel. There, he loss consciousness and when he wakes up, he finds himself in the surface. But not just any surface, but the surface of the world of Remnant.
Soon after, Artyom and the Dark One child (later named Malysh), find themselves getting involved in the troubles of Remnant.
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!!''Light at the End'' contains the following tropes:
*MundaneLuxury: For Artyom, it's almost ''everything'' that the people of Remnant taken for granted. Clean air, drinkable water, fruits, and many other things.
