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** Salem putting the Crown in their place, turning [[SmugSnake Gillian]] into a cat, and killing Jax isn't so horrifying, even given the power disparity, because they are megalomaniacs kidnapping children to enslave to their wills. Jax is guilty of mind controlling women into sexual slavery.
** Raven and her bandits pillaged and destroyed whole towns and kidnapped people. Then Salem comes along and scares Raven into fleeing, and turns the bandits into her own servants, with Vernal being horribly tormented by Tyrian's "training". Even Jaune takes a little bit of joy from this, since Vernal had tormented him while keeping him hostage.
** [[spoiler: Kidnapping Winter and forcing her into servitude, turning Ironwood's forces into dogs and later turning Irownood into a penguin is pretty satisfying considering the hell they put Jaune and his family through]].
** [[spoiler: Salem finally beating the hell out of Cinder, largely for being such an immature and traitorous bitch who is arrogantly convinced of her own superiority]].



* KickTheSonOfABitch: While Salem is an evil queen, the targets of her wrath are unpleasant people who nobody will shed a tear for.
** Salem putting the Crown in their place, turning [[SmugSnake Gillian]] into a cat, and killing Jax isn't so horrifying, even given the power disparity, because they are megalomaniacs kidnapping children to enslave to their wills. Jax is guilty of mind controlling women into sexual slavery.
** Raven and her bandits pillaged and destroyed whole towns and kidnapped people. Then Salem comes along and scares Raven into fleeing, and turns the bandits into her own servants, with Vernal being horribly tormented by Tyrian's "training". Even Jaune takes a little bit of joy from this, since Vernal had tormented him while keeping him hostage.
** [[spoiler: Kidnapping Winter and forcing her into servitude, turning Ironwood's forces into dogs and later turning Irownood into a penguin is pretty satisfying considering the hell they put Jaune and his family through]].
** [[spoiler: Salem finally beating the hell out of Cinder, largely for being such an immature and traitorous bitch who is arrogantly convinced of her own superiority]].
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* WorldTour: In course of the story Jaune and Gang visited all kingdoms including Menagerie (Technically they don't visited Atlas itself only Argus).
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* TattleTail: The Faunus doctor Tsune when she insists to Ozpin that there's no ulterior interest behind her desire to test the organ donor applications of a perpetually-regenerating man afflicted with Salem's magic:
-->"He could be the world's first perpetual organ donor. Think of all the lives he could save."\\
"Tsune." Ozpin stated firmly. "We are ''not'' mutilating my friend for science. Nor are we turning him into some kind of organ-harvesting operation to sate your professional curiosity." His eyes narrowed. "Or what I dearly hope is professional curiosity."\\
"Of course it is!"\\
Her lazily wagging tail did not fill him with confidence.
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* NamedByAdaptation: Penny's team name is unknown in canon, here's it's called PXCL (Pixel).
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* UndignifiedDeath: Not all of Ozpin's deaths over his millennia as an immortal were dramatic, glorious or even dignified -- one of his past incarnations died when he slipped on a wet floor and broke his neck on a bathtub. And to add insult to injury, the next body that Ozpin incarnated into was a young female and this killed his marriage to his previous incarnation's wife due to incompatible orientation.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards:

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* EvenEvilHasStandards:EvenEvilHasStandards: Sometimes played seriously (like with the Crown), other times PlayedForLaughs.



** [[spoiler:Even Adam Taurus, the anti-human leader of the White Fang, asks Mercury if he's considered therapy when he reveals he most wants to date Blake for her parents]].

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** [[spoiler:Even Adam Taurus, the anti-human leader of the White Fang, asks is stunned when Mercury reveals that he mostly wants to date Blake so that he can receive her parents' affections, flatly asking Mercury if he's ever considered therapy when he reveals he most wants to date Blake for her parents]].getting therapy]].



** During a discussion between the group, Ilia brings up the potential for Emerald to look at herself in a mirror to inflict herself with her Semblance and live out her wildest fantasies. Salem immediately nixes the thought of doing so until "out of the earshot of those of us trying to sleep."

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** During a discussion between the group, Ilia brings up the potential for Emerald to look at herself in a mirror to inflict herself with her Semblance and live out her wildest fantasies. Salem immediately nixes the thought of doing so until "out of the earshot of those of us trying to sleep."" Emerald meanwhile requests to be allowed to go to the bathroom, [[spoiler:promising that it's ''not'' so she can report to Cinder this time]].
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* AdaptationalSympathy: Leonardo Lionheart to a degree. Rather than the P.O.S. DirtyCoward that canon made him out to be; although he's still that in this fic, the fic makes it quite clear how horrible and unenviable his position as Oxpin's ostensible top ally and Salem's secret mole is, even if it ''is'' PlayedForLaughs due to the fic's genre. Lionheart is caught between the most dangerous woman on Remnant (who would torture and kill him and anyone he knows without batting an eye) and the most dangerous man on Remnant, living every minute of his life in constant fear of having his cover blown, on top of all the responsibilities that come with his role as headmaster of one of the world's four prime huntsman academies; to say nothing of all the absolute ''chaos'' that gets dropped at his feet in the fic's present by Salem, Jaune and Tyrian's meandering across Remnant.
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* ProdigalFamily: Raven shows up after having ditched her family out of selfish motives; she wants Taiyang to protect her. All she does is act disdainfully and mockingly toward her twin brother Qrow, her daughter, and even Taiyang.
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** The only reason that Raven reunites with her estranged family is self-preservation, not any latent affection for Taiyang (who she looks to for protection) or her twin brother Qrow. She even mocks her daughter as having “gotten weaker” than when she she was born [[InsaneTrollLogic because she at least left her womb then]], [[KickTheDog as opposed to not even breaking her Aura now]] (never mind that Raven has herself gotten much stronger).

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** The only reason that Raven reunites with her [[ProdigalFamily estranged family family]] is self-preservation, not any latent affection for Taiyang (who she looks to for protection) or her twin brother Qrow. She even mocks her daughter as having “gotten weaker” than when she she was born [[InsaneTrollLogic because she at least left her womb then]], [[KickTheDog as opposed to not even breaking her Aura now]] (never mind that Raven has herself gotten much stronger).
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** Team [=RWBY=] end up becoming this themselves towards the end, as their priority has become get {{Revenge}} on Tyrian over everything else. When the Battle of Beacon begins, they ignore the fact that its an EnemyMine situation with Salem's group and seize the chance to attack Tyrian. Jaune manages to win them over by ''bribing'' them with an opportunity for a straight-up fight with Tyrian in exchange for killing Cinder.

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** Team RWBY in particular whenever it involves Raven, Salem, Tyrian, or Jaune. The team is often been roped into crazy situations. Said situation usually are and not limited to; Tyrian attacking them as part of "training", multiple detentions from breaking the rules constantly, and starting situations due to misunderstandings. This changes under Tyrian's tutelage, at which point they become the [[TheDreaded opposite...]]

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** Team RWBY in particular whenever it involves Raven, Salem, Tyrian, or Jaune. The team is often been roped into crazy situations. Said situation usually are and not limited to; Tyrian attacking them as part of "training", multiple detentions from breaking the rules constantly, and starting situations due to misunderstandings. This changes under Tyrian's tutelage, at which point they most definitely stop being this and become the [[TheDreaded opposite...]]



* CaptainErsatz: Pyrrha's parter and the team leader of Team [=JNPR=]... Juan. He looks exactly like Jaune, but he wears a sombrero, speaks in random spanish phrases, and carries a guitar everywhere.

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* CaptainErsatz: Pyrrha's parter and the team leader of Team [=JNPR=]... Juan. He looks exactly like Jaune, but he wears a sombrero, speaks in random spanish Spanish phrases, and carries a guitar everywhere.


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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Ozpin. While understandably at first suspicious of Salem, Jaune, and their entourage, as more and more evidence comes to light that Salem is changing for the better and that their actions are not part of some EvilPlan (or arguably even ''a'' plan), he increasingly pursues a path of de-escalation and ultimately gives Salem the encouragement she needs to pursue a romance with Jaune.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: After Salem defeats Team RWBY in the CurbStopBattle detailed above, she instructs Tyrian to train them so they can [[WorthyOpponent Worthy Opponents]] against Jaune during the Vytal Tournament, thereby making him look good.[[spoiler: Tyrian turns them into "merciless murder machines" who outright trash the field and leave Team [=SSSN=] out cold. Even Salem accepts Jaune would be screwed facing them, and changes the plan from Jaune facing them to avoiding them at all costs and hoping some other team knocks RWBY out of the running]].

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* GoneHorriblyRight: After Salem defeats Team RWBY in the CurbStopBattle CurbStompBattle detailed above, she instructs Tyrian to train them so they can [[WorthyOpponent Worthy Opponents]] against Jaune during the Vytal Tournament, thereby making him look good.[[spoiler: Tyrian turns them into "merciless murder machines" who outright trash the field and leave Team [=SSSN=] out cold. Even Salem accepts Jaune would be screwed facing them, and changes the plan from Jaune facing them to avoiding them at all costs and hoping some other team knocks RWBY out of the running]].
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* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler: Tyrian training Team [=RWBY=] to be tough opponents for Jaune goes a little too well: he turns them into merciless murder machines who outright trash the field and leave Team [=SSSN=] out cold. Even Salem accepts Jaune would be screwed, and changes her plan from having Jaune use them as [[WorthyOpponent worthy opponents]] on his path to tournament victory to make sure he avoids them at all costs]].

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* GoneHorriblyRight: After Salem defeats Team RWBY in the CurbStopBattle detailed above, she instructs Tyrian to train them so they can [[WorthyOpponent Worthy Opponents]] against Jaune during the Vytal Tournament, thereby making him look good.[[spoiler: Tyrian training Team [=RWBY=] to be tough opponents for Jaune goes a little too well: he turns them into merciless "merciless murder machines machines" who outright trash the field and leave Team [=SSSN=] out cold. Even Salem accepts Jaune would be screwed, screwed facing them, and changes her the plan from having Jaune use facing them as [[WorthyOpponent worthy opponents]] on his path to tournament victory to make sure he avoids avoiding them at all costs]].costs and hoping some other team knocks RWBY out of the running]].
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** Team RWBY in particular whenever it involves Raven, Salem, Tyrian or Jaune. The team has often been roped into crazy situations. Said situation usually are and not limited to; Tyrian attacking them as part of "training", multiple detentions from breaking the rules constantly, and starting situations due to misunderstandings. The team cannot not catch a break from it and it just keeps getting worse for them.

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** Team RWBY in particular whenever it involves Raven, Salem, Tyrian Tyrian, or Jaune. The team has is often been roped into crazy situations. Said situation usually are and not limited to; Tyrian attacking them as part of "training", multiple detentions from breaking the rules constantly, and starting situations due to misunderstandings. The team cannot not catch a break from it and it just keeps getting worse for them.This changes under Tyrian's tutelage, at which point they become the [[TheDreaded opposite...]]



** After going through weeks of "training" with [[spoiler:Tyrian]], RWBY get another chance to show what they're made of. They're put against Team SSSN, what would before have been a decent matchup. [[spoiler:RWBY then burn the arena to the ground, carpet bomb the remainder, and choke out the one boy who remained conscious afterwards, all without taking a hit. In the doubles round, Yang and Weiss set a new all-time record for having left a conversation, and defeated their opponents in the time it took for the people they left to continue the conversation for a handful of sentences]].

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** After going through weeks of "training" with [[spoiler:Tyrian]], RWBY get another chance to show what they're made of. They're put against Team SSSN, what would before have been a decent matchup. [[spoiler:RWBY then burn the arena to the ground, carpet bomb the remainder, and choke out the one boy who remained conscious afterwards, all without taking a hit. In the doubles round, Yang and Weiss set a new all-time record for having left a conversation, and defeated their opponents in the time it took for the people they left to continue the conversation for a handful of sentences]]. sentences. When the team is bribed by Jaune into going after Cinder, the only reason it]] ''[[spoiler: isn't]]'' [[spoiler: one of these is because Cinder is at this point is MadeOfIron and is almost unkillable, and otherwise the fight sees her smacked around by RWBY like a pinball.]]



** As Team RWBY's "training" progresses, it becomes clear that sparring with them is not a good idea. CRDL are now in therapy after their match, nobody else will volunteer, anyone who is selected for it goes into a crying panic, and people only ''half''-jokingly talk like RWBY might actually kill someone. Pyrrha notes that it's only her pride as the Mistralian Champion that's preventing her from withdrawing from the Vytal Festival early.

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** As Team RWBY's "training" progresses, it becomes clear that sparring with them is not a good idea. CRDL are now in therapy after their match, nobody else will volunteer, anyone who is selected for it goes into a crying panic, and people only ''half''-jokingly talk like RWBY might actually kill someone. Pyrrha notes that it's only her pride as the Mistralian Champion that's preventing her from withdrawing from the Vytal Festival early. Salem herself variously describes them as "merciless murder machines," a "team of psychopaths," and a "cadre of stone-cold executioners."



* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler: Tyrian training Team [=RWBY=] to be tough opponents for Jaune goes a little too well: he turns them into merciless murder machines who outright trash the field and leave Team [=SSSN=] out cold. Even Salem accepts Jaune might be screwed]].

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* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler: Tyrian training Team [=RWBY=] to be tough opponents for Jaune goes a little too well: he turns them into merciless murder machines who outright trash the field and leave Team [=SSSN=] out cold. Even Salem accepts Jaune might would be screwed]].screwed, and changes her plan from having Jaune use them as [[WorthyOpponent worthy opponents]] on his path to tournament victory to make sure he avoids them at all costs]].
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Mostly a wacky comedy AU. Jaune's application to Beacon coincides with Ozpin disappearing from his post due to contracting a debilitating sickness -- this leads Salem's faction to believe that Ozpin's current incarnation has died and Jaune is his new host, setting off a chain of events wherein Jaune is captured by Salem before reaching Beacon and he somehow restores her humanity.
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** Qrow initially discusses this in regards to Salem stopping the Crown, claiming it might just be an IdenticalStranger whose NamesTheSame. Ozpin defies this by pointing out she's with Tyrian Callows, a known associate with Salem and that the cat they have was clearly a transformed human.

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** Qrow initially discusses this in regards to Salem stopping the Crown, claiming it might just be an IdenticalStranger whose NamesTheSame.with a similar name. Ozpin defies this by pointing out she's with Tyrian Callows, a known associate with Salem and that the cat they have was clearly a transformed human.
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* ShesGotLegs: Salem. Normally they're hidden by her long dresses and robes, but Jaune gets to see them during an accidental upskirt moment.

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* BalefulPolymorph: Salem turns Gillian into a cat. [[MagicMisfire She was aiming for a crow]], but a cat is fine too. [[spoiler:Unlike the Atlesian Specialists who can now shift between from human/faunus to dog, Gillian has yet to learn how to change at will. Gillian finally learns to do this on Chapter 30]]. Pyrrha, when she gets to see it first hand, notes how scary it truly is for Salem to be able to do this.


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* ForcedTransformation: Salem turns Gillian into a cat. [[MagicMisfire She was aiming for a crow]], but a cat is fine too. [[spoiler:Unlike the Atlesian Specialists who can now shift between from human/faunus to dog, Gillian has yet to learn how to change at will. Gillian finally learns to do this on Chapter 30]]. Pyrrha, when she gets to see it first hand, notes how scary it truly is for Salem to be able to do this.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by [=MysteryWhiteFlame=]]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by [=MysteryWhiteFlame=]]][[https://www.deviantart.com/mysterywhiteflame/art/Salems-Travels-872809858 MysteryWhiteFlame]]]]
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.


* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: The Crown has been active for so long that when Jax’s death breaks his hold on the abductees, there’s a slew of terrified people waking up to compromised positions - adult and child alike, many of whom were gone for months or even years. The news on this breaks in record time with Salem, Tyrian and Jaune ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Gillian]], [[TeamPet now a cat]]) prominently displayed where Ozpin can’t miss it.
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* {{Flanderization}}: Not as if Tyrian is known for being calm and rational in canon, but his worshiping devotion to Salem is taken UpToEleven, to the point that 99% of what comes out of his mouth is praise for his Goddess.

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* {{Flanderization}}: Not as if Tyrian is known for being calm and rational in canon, but his worshiping devotion to Salem is taken UpToEleven, to the point that 99% of what comes out of his mouth is praise for his Goddess.



* RoyalBrat: Salem is this UpToEleven; she treats Jaune like a slave and even thinks a damaged Bullhead should obey her just because her word commands it. Yet, she still pales compared to the Asturias siblings...

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* RoyalBrat: Salem is this UpToEleven; she treats Jaune like a slave and even thinks a damaged Bullhead should obey her just because her word commands it. Yet, she still pales compared to the Asturias siblings...

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