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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7945599/1/Gods_of_This_New_World Gods of This New World]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3830006/BlueWolf1923 BlueWolf1923]] is a ''Manga/DeathNote'' ActionAdventure FanFic in which, with Ryuk and Misa's help, Light kills off the taskforce and persuades L to join him in his cause and they go on to seize control of the world. However L warns them that it's not over—they still have to win against Mello and Near.
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* BrattyHalfPint: Near.
* BrokenPedestal: L to Mello and Near.
* ButtMonkey: Near.
* ChastityCouple: Light and Misa
* TheChessmaster: Light, L, Near, and Mello
* CollectiveIdentity: Light, Ryuk, Misa, and L are all Kira.
* CoolSword: A SwordOfPlotAdvancement that was ForgedByTheGods
* BrokenPedestal: L to Mello and Near.
* ButtMonkey: Near.
* ChastityCouple: Light and Misa
* TheChessmaster: Light, L, Near, and Mello
* CollectiveIdentity: Light, Ryuk, Misa, and L are all Kira.
* CoolSword: A SwordOfPlotAdvancement that was ForgedByTheGods
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* HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday
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* MonsterRoommate: Ryuk and Shidoh.
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* OneManArmy: Kira.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: A lot.
* SnarkyNonHumanSideKick: Ryuk.
* SoreLoser: [[spoiler: Near]] "No fair! You cheated!"
* StoryBreakerPower: First Light gets an upgrade, then Mello.
* StuffBlowingUp
* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Light's backup plan for dealing with Mello.]]
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Mello and Near.
* SnarkyNonHumanSideKick: Ryuk.
* SoreLoser: [[spoiler: Near]] "No fair! You cheated!"
* StoryBreakerPower: First Light gets an upgrade, then Mello.
* StuffBlowingUp
* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Light's backup plan for dealing with Mello.]]
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Mello and Near.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Everyone but [[ButtMonkey Near]] and [[TheLoad Matt]].
* TookALevelInDumbass: L.
* TookALevelInKindness: Light.
* TookALevelInDumbass: L.
* TookALevelInKindness: Light.
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* VillainousFriendship: Light, Ryuk, Misa, and L are TrueCompanions here.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Misa.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Light and L.
* WeCanRuleTogether: Light to L.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Misa.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Light and L.
* WeCanRuleTogether: Light to L.
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* RatedMForManly: Light, L, Mello... when strategy fails, problems are solved with [[TalkToTheFist one's fist]] and [[StuffBlowingUp blowing shit up]].
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* FriendsRentControl: Team Kira lives together in a penthouse mansion. Justified because [[RichIdiotWithNoDayJob L is on their side]].
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* FriendsRentControl: Team Kira lives together in a penthouse mansion. Justified because [[RichIdiotWithNoDayJob [[TheTeamBenefactor L is on their side]].
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* AcePilot: L pilots a harrier jet
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* AcePilot: L pilots a harrier jetHarrier jet, apropos of nothing.
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* OldShame: The summary on fanfiction.net now reads: "Don't read this. I'm serious. It's short, poorly written, ridiculously pro-Kira and narmy. It's my first story, but I won't delete it because it has a Tv Tropes page. Even though I wince every time I read said page."
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Misuse of Five Man Band. Too many members, the roles are all wrong, and ZCE.
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* DyingMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: Light and Misa]].
* EvilIsOneBigHappyFamily: Well, Team Kira certainly is.
* EvilIsOneBigHappyFamily: Well, Team Kira certainly is.
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* FallenHero: L.
* FiveManBand
** BigBad and EvilGenius: Light.
** TheDragon: L.
*** DragonInChief: [[spoiler: The Shinigami King.]]
** TheBrute: Ryuk and Shidoh.
** TheDarkChick: Misa.
** TeamPet: Gelus ([[WeNamedTheMonkeyJack Misa's kitty]]).
** SixthRangerTraitor: [[spoiler: Shidoh.]]
* FiveManBand
** BigBad and EvilGenius: Light.
** TheDragon: L.
*** DragonInChief: [[spoiler: The Shinigami King.]]
** TheBrute: Ryuk and Shidoh.
** TheDarkChick: Misa.
** TeamPet: Gelus ([[WeNamedTheMonkeyJack Misa's kitty]]).
** SixthRangerTraitor: [[spoiler: Shidoh.]]
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* FiveManBand
** BigBad and EvilGenius: Light.
** TheDragon: L.
*** DragonInChief: [[spoiler: The Shinigami King.]]
** TheBrute: Ryuk and Shidoh.
** TheDarkChick: Misa.
** TeamPet: Gelus ([[WeNamedTheMonkeyJack Misa's kitty]]).
** SixthRangerTraitor: [[spoiler: Shidoh.]]
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* ActionGirl: When Mello goes to kidnap Sayu, [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome he fails miserably because she was waiting for him with a gun]] and had [[BashBrothers L at her back]]. Later Misa [[spoiler: when Mello [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice stabs her in the chest with his Shinigami-slaying sword]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome she gets up and keeps fighting him anyway.]]]]
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* ActionGirl: When Mello goes to kidnap Sayu, [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome he fails miserably because she was waiting for him with a gun]] and had [[BashBrothers L at her back]]. Later Misa [[spoiler: when Mello [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice stabs her in the chest with his Shinigami-slaying sword]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome she gets up and keeps fighting him anyway.]]]]]]
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* FiveBadBand
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* FiveBadBandFiveManBand
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* BadAss: Light and Misa but ''especially'' [[TookALevelInBadass Misa]] who gets up and keeps fighting the BigBad [[spoiler: ''[[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice after being stabbed in the chest]] with a [[CoolSword sword]]!'']] Also [[AcePilot L pilots a harrier jet]] and Sayu fights off Mello with her GunFu skills when he tries to kidnap her in an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome.
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* IDontWantToDie: Light, [[spoiler: even though he has been assured of what will happen to him after death]] he is in no hurry to die because he has so much [[SerialKillerKiller work]] [[SamaritanSyndrome left to do.]]
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* OldShame: The summary on fanfiction.net now reads: "Don't read this. I'm serious. It's short, poorly written, ridiculously pro-Kira and narmy. It's my first story, but I won't delete it because it has a Tv Tropes page. Even though I wince every time I read said page."
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* BadAss: Light and Misa but ''especially'' [[TookALevelInBadass Misa]] who gets up and keeps fighting the BigBad [[spoiler: ''[[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice after being stabbed in the chest]] with a [[CoolSword sword]]!'']] Also [[AcePilot L pilots a harrier jet]] and Sayu fights off Mello when her GunFu skills when he tries to kidnap her in an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome.
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* BadAss: Light and Misa but ''especially'' [[TookALevelInBadass Misa]] who gets up and keeps fighting the BigBad [[spoiler: ''[[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice after being stabbed in the chest]] with a [[CoolSword sword]]!'']] Also [[AcePilot L pilots a harrier jet]] and Sayu fights off Mello when with her GunFu skills when he tries to kidnap her in an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome.
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* AcePilot: L pilots a harrier jet.
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* AcePilot: L pilots a harrier jet. jet
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* ShoutOut: Ryuk plays ''PrinceOfPersia'' and Matt and Mello listen to [[{{Music/Metallica}} "Fade To Black" and "Trapped Under Ice"]].
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* ShoutOut: Ryuk plays ''PrinceOfPersia'' a ''Franchise/PrinceOfPersia'' game and Matt and Mello listen to [[{{Music/Metallica}} "Fade To Black" and "Trapped Under Ice"]].
