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''[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/glory-or-death-chapter-master-quest-40k.6244/ Glory or Death]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' Quest ran by forum moderator Swordomatic on Sufficient Velocity. The Quest was [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/glory-or-death-chapter-master-quest-42k.22290/ eventually rebooted]] due to Swordomatic's writer's block and increasing frustration with the original universe.
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''[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/glory-or-death-chapter-master-quest-40k.6244/ Glory or Death]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' Quest ran by forum moderator Swordomatic on Sufficient Velocity.Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom. The Quest was [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/glory-or-death-chapter-master-quest-42k.22290/ eventually rebooted]] due to Swordomatic's writer's block and increasing frustration with the original universe.
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** The greatest moment of this was the fall of Hive World Archeron, [[spoiler: in which half of Aurelius' command squad (and friends) were killed, a single marine of the 2nd Company who survived left, and the Hive World was turned into a Daemon World]].
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** The greatest moment of this was the fall of Hive World Archeron, [[spoiler: in which half of Aurelius' command squad (and friends) were killed, a single marine of the 2nd Company who survived left, remaining, and the Hive World was turned into a Daemon World]].
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** The greatest moment of this was the fall of Hive World Archeron, [[spoiler: in which half of Aurelius' command squad (and friends) were killed, a single marine of the 2nd Company who survived, and the Hive World was turned into a Daemon World]].
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** The greatest moment of this was the fall of Hive World Archeron, [[spoiler: in which half of Aurelius' command squad (and friends) were killed, a single marine of the 2nd Company who survived, survived left, and the Hive World was turned into a Daemon World]].
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** The greatest moment of this was the fall of Hive World Archeron, [[spoiler: in which half of Aurelius' command squad (and friends) were killed, and there was only a single marine of the 2nd Company who survived, and the Hive World was turned into a Daemon World]].
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** The greatest moment of this was the fall of Hive World Archeron, [[spoiler: in which half of Aurelius' command squad (and friends) were killed, and there was only a single marine of the 2nd Company who survived, and the Hive World was turned into a Daemon World]].
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: It turns out that there was unanimous disagreement from ''all'' Blood Angels successor Chapter Masters to Lord Dante's nomination of Aurelius as Chapter Master.
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''[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/glory-or-death-chapter-master-quest-40k.6244/ Glory or Death]]'' is a TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} Quest currently running on [[Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom Sufficient Velocity]]. It is the story of the Crimson Crusaders, the youngest sons of Sanguinus, as they struggle with the problems of the 42nd Millennium and the aftershocks of the 13th Black Crusade. Their current Chapter Master, Aurelius Asterion, is formerly of the Blood Angels.
Run by Swordomatic, a forum moderator.
Run by Swordomatic, a forum moderator.
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''[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/glory-or-death-chapter-master-quest-40k.6244/ Glory or Death]]'' is a TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' Quest currently running ran by forum moderator Swordomatic on [[Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom Sufficient Velocity]]. It Velocity. The Quest was [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/glory-or-death-chapter-master-quest-42k.22290/ eventually rebooted]] due to Swordomatic's writer's block and increasing frustration with the original universe.
''Glory or Death'' is the story of the Crimson Crusaders, the youngest sons of Sanguinus, as they struggle with the problems of the 42nd Millennium and the aftershocks of the 13th Black Crusade. Their current Chapter Master, Aurelius Asterion, is formerly of the BloodAngels.
Run by Swordomatic, a forum moderator.Angels.
''Glory or Death'' is the story of the Crimson Crusaders, the youngest sons of Sanguinus, as they struggle with the problems of the 42nd Millennium and the aftershocks of the 13th Black Crusade. Their current Chapter Master, Aurelius Asterion, is formerly of the Blood
Run by Swordomatic, a forum moderator.
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-->And thus at the end of these five years, after watching a Battle-Brother miss his mark for the ten thousandth time, Vergilius climbed to the top of Red Mountain, which the Fortress-Monastery is built on, carved out a cave with his bare hands, and began throwing rocks at the initiates and serfs sent to retrieve him.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Archmagos Alpharian Domini's response to the idea of designing a Bolt Sniper Rifle:
-->'''Skiitari Guard:''' "Archmagos, this is Tech-Heresy."
-->'''Archmagos Alpharian:''' "No, it would be Tech-Heresy - mind the capital letters - if we FABRICATED the design out of THIN AIR! Here, we've creatively reinterpreted another existing fragment to reveal this marvel of a weapon! THERE! NOT TECH-HERESY!"
-->'''Skiitari Guard:''' "Archmagos, this is Tech-Heresy."
-->'''Archmagos Alpharian:''' "No, it would be Tech-Heresy - mind the capital letters - if we FABRICATED the design out of THIN AIR! Here, we've creatively reinterpreted another existing fragment to reveal this marvel of a weapon! THERE! NOT TECH-HERESY!"
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** Archmagos Alpharian Domini's response to the idea of designing a Bolt Sniper Rifle:
-->'''Skiitari --->'''Skiitari Guard:''' "Archmagos, this is Tech-Heresy."
-->'''Archmagos"\\
'''Archmagos Alpharian:''' "No, it would be Tech-Heresy - mind the capital letters - if we FABRICATED the design out of THIN AIR! Here, we've creatively reinterpreted another existing fragment to reveal this marvel of a weapon! THERE! NOT TECH-HERESY!"
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'''Archmagos Alpharian:''' "No, it would be Tech-Heresy - mind the capital letters - if we FABRICATED the design out of THIN AIR! Here, we've creatively reinterpreted another existing fragment to reveal this marvel of a weapon! THERE! NOT TECH-HERESY!"
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--> "It is Tech-Heresy if you are found defacing an STC Printout! This is ONLY scribing! Nothing wrong with scribing, or the Adeptus Administratum would have been declared Excommunicate Traitoris by now!"
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* Omake: Many humorous omakes exist, some of which canonically happened, and some of which are in-universe fanfiction written by silly neophytes.
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* Omake: {{Omake}}: Many humorous omakes exist, some of which canonically happened, and some of which are in-universe fanfiction written by silly neophytes.
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* Troll: Ahzek Ahriman, who leads a joint Space Wolf/Crimson Crusaders/[[spoiler: Blood Ravens]] task force on a wild goose chase lasting ''years''.
* Troll: Ahzek Ahriman, who leads a joint Space Wolf/Crimson Crusaders/[[spoiler: Blood Ravens]] task force on a wild goose chase lasting ''years''.
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** Long after his transfer to the Death Watch, the Crusaders' Captains continue to pursue the 'Rios Standard.' They are not always successful.
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** This was a tradition that began when Vergilius got fed up with the poor marksmanship of the marines he was trying to train.
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-->And thus at the end of these five years, after watching a Battle-Brother miss his mark for the ten thousandth time, Vergilius climbed to the top of Red Mountain, which the Fortress-Monastery is built on, carved out a cave with his bare hands, and began throwing rocks at the initiates and serfs sent to retrieve him.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: The Crimson Crusaders as a whole are rather quirky in mannerisms, largely due to being instructed and led by Aurelius, Vergilius, and Osiron from the beginning. But the Imperium really can't argue with the results they bring.
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* TrainingFromHell: The original five-hundred Crusaders have stories to tell about their leaders' training plans. In particular, Aurelius' response to a Captain's request for additional training was to promptly throw him off the balcony of the Fortress Monastery. Followed by jumping after him to start an immediate brawl. This is fairly normal for him.
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--->Aurelius: [[RunningGag Training starts immediately!]]