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* TheTeam:
** The Wandering Blades mercenary company consists of Len (TheLeader, MagicKnight) Yhani (NumberTwo, cleric) Ghazaann (TheBigGuy, hobgoblin warrior), Rinnean (elf rogue), Harsk (shifter scout) and Havaktri (kalashtar psion). At the end of the fic Thyra officially joins, providing her skills as a sorcerer.
** In Part II Kharvin puts together his own team, including himself, Irinali, Haund (a priest of the Blood of Vol), Saeria (half-elf bard and expert in ancient history) and Arlan (artificer and renegade from House Cannith).
** The Wandering Blades mercenary company consists of Len (TheLeader, MagicKnight) Yhani (NumberTwo, cleric) Ghazaann (TheBigGuy, hobgoblin warrior), Rinnean (elf rogue), Harsk (shifter scout) and Havaktri (kalashtar psion). At the end of the fic Thyra officially joins, providing her skills as a sorcerer.
** In Part II Kharvin puts together his own team, including himself, Irinali, Haund (a priest of the Blood of Vol), Saeria (half-elf bard and expert in ancient history) and Arlan (artificer and renegade from House Cannith).
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** The rakshasa [[spoiler: Tarazanthan]] is also skilled as both a swordsman and a sorcerer - it takes the combined efforts of the Wandering Blades ''and'' Valyria and Pitar to put him on the run [[spoiler: and even then, he threw the fight]].
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** The rakshasa [[spoiler: Tarazanthan]] is also skilled as both a swordsman and a sorcerer - -- it takes the combined efforts of the Wandering Blades ''and'' Valyria and Pitar to put him on the run [[spoiler: and even then, he threw the fight]].
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Captain Len of the Wandering Blades is a mercenary down on her luck, in desperate need of funds. When a young woman named Thyra Entarro promises to pay well for a seemingly-routine job, it seems like just the lucky break she needs. But things are never that simple. Thyra has secrets of her own -- dangerous secrets. Secrets which might just explain why a Silver Flame inquisitor seems determined to hunt her down, by any means necessary. The item the mercenaries were hired to acquire turns out to be a map in the possession of a notorious Karrn warlord with ties to Khorvaire's most infamous terrorist organization, the Order of the Emerald Claw -- and he, and his necromancer ally, have their own plans for the ancient artifact they think the map will lead them to. An artifact that, of course, lies buried in the most dangerous place on the continent. And if that wasn't bad enough, the real danger might not come from the Emerald Claw but the mysterious forces that watch and wait from the shadows, determined to reclaim a world that was once theirs. So all in all, [[SarcasmMode just another typical day]].
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Captain Len of the Wandering Blades is a mercenary down on her luck, in desperate need of funds. When a young woman named Thyra Entarro promises to pay well for a seemingly-routine job, it seems like just the lucky break she needs. But things are never that simple. Thyra has secrets of her own -- dangerous secrets. Secrets which might just explain why a Silver Flame inquisitor seems determined to hunt her down, by any means necessary. The item the mercenaries were hired to acquire turns out to be a map in the possession of a notorious Karrn warlord with ties to Khorvaire's most infamous terrorist organization, the Order of the Emerald Claw -- and he, and his necromancer ally, have their own plans for the ancient artifact AncientArtifact they think the map will lead them to. An artifact that, of course, lies buried in the most dangerous place on the continent. And if that wasn't bad enough, the real danger might not come from the Emerald Claw but the mysterious forces that watch and wait from the shadows, determined to reclaim a world that was once theirs. So all in all, [[SarcasmMode just another typical day]].
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''Game of the Ancients'' is an ongoing FanFic series by Tropers/MasterGhandalf, set in the ''TabletopGame/{{Eberron}}'' setting for ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''.
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''Game of the Ancients'' is an ongoing FanFic series by Tropers/MasterGhandalf, Creator/MasterGhandalf, set in the ''TabletopGame/{{Eberron}}'' setting for ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''.
