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* %%Administrivia/ZeroContextExample DistractedByTheSexy: Poor, poor Fritz.

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* {{Prequel}}: To Frozen Fever.
* SickEpisode: For Fritz.

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* {{Prequel}}: To Frozen Fever.
Takes place before "Frozen Fever" and sets up the circumstances that lead to Elsa having a cold in it.
* SickEpisode: For Fritz.This installment revolves around Fritz having a cold.
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* HeroicBSOD: Mary suffers one towards the end.

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* DirtyCop: The original Admiral of the royal guards.

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* DistractedByTheSexy: Poor, poor Fritz.

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* GilliganCut: Done repeatedly. Since this is prose, the "cut" is a line break to indicate an abrupt scene change.

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* LemonyNarrator: The narration tends to slip into this for the humorous parts.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Elsa seems to be trying to become this trope.

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* SarcasmBlind: Mary has a brief moment of this.

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* SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan: Fritz and Samson. To a lesser extent, Fritz and Kristoff.

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* {{Yandere}}: Elsa is lucky enough to have ''two'' villains act this way towards her, the wight and [[spoiler:Mary.]]

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* %%Administrivia/ZeroContextExample* {{Yandere}}: Elsa is lucky enough to have ''two'' villains act this way towards her, the wight and [[spoiler:Mary.]]



* ZergRush: [[spoiler:The magic-hating mob tries this on Elsa. It... doesn't end well for them.]]

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* %%Administrivia/ZeroContextExample* ZergRush: [[spoiler:The magic-hating mob tries this on Elsa. It... doesn't end well for them.]]
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* DeadpanSnarker [=/=] ServileSnarker: Anders. Since he's been [[OldRetainer in the household for decades]], Elsa lets him get away with it.

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* DeadpanSnarker [=/=] ServileSnarker: DeadpanSnarker: Anders. Since he's been [[OldRetainer in the household for decades]], Elsa lets him get away with it.
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** "Evilsa", the name fandom has used to describe Elsa before she was revised into her current protagonist form, is used by Anna to describe Elsa after she gets brainwashed by the wight.

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** "Evilsa", the name fandom has used to describe Elsa from early versions of the movie scripts before she was revised into her current protagonist form, is used by Anna to describe Elsa after she gets brainwashed by the wight.
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** During "For the First Time In Forever," Anna jumped in front of a painting called ''The Swing'', or rather, a censored version that omitted a few things from the original, like the PeepingTom hiding in the bushes. This is observed when they get a replacement for the new gallery.

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** During "For the First Time In Forever," Anna jumped in front of a painting called ''The Swing'', or rather, a censored version that omitted a few things from the original, like the PeepingTom ThePeepingTom hiding in the bushes. This is observed when they get a replacement for the new gallery.
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** At one point, Fritz suggests that Elsa might fall for him if he acts quirky and awkward. Anna, being Princess {{Adorkable}}, scoffs at the idea.

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** At one point, Fritz suggests that Elsa might fall for him if he acts quirky and awkward. Anna, being Princess {{Adorkable}}, Dorky, scoffs at the idea.
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* TheCameo: [[spoiler: [[Disney/{{Tangled}} Rapunzel, Eugene, Maximus]] and [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast Lefou]] in Chapter 80.]]
** And earlier, in chapter 48, there are some silhouettes that sound suspiciously similar to [[Disney/{{Fantasia}} Chernabog]], [[Disney/SleepingBeauty Maleficent]], and [[Franchise/KingdomHearts the Heartless]]. [[spoiler:And later on, Chernabog is specifically referenced by name.]]

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* TheCameo: [[spoiler: [[Disney/{{Tangled}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}} Rapunzel, Eugene, Maximus]] and [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast [[WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast Lefou]] in Chapter 80.]]
** And earlier, in chapter 48, there are some silhouettes that sound suspiciously similar to [[Disney/{{Fantasia}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Fantasia}} Chernabog]], [[Disney/SleepingBeauty [[WesternAnimation/SleepingBeauty Maleficent]], and [[Franchise/KingdomHearts the Heartless]]. [[spoiler:And later on, Chernabog is specifically referenced by name.]]



** After ''Disney/OlafsFrozenAdventure'' came out, a time skip was added at the start of chapter 5 to place the main events of the conflict after that story.

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** After ''Disney/OlafsFrozenAdventure'' ''WesternAnimation/OlafsFrozenAdventure'' came out, a time skip was added at the start of chapter 5 to place the main events of the conflict after that story.



* CrossoverPunchline: Towards the end, there's a joke that only makes sense if you happen to be familiar with ''Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast'', specifically [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3gZ0OgA_8G0 a certain song about things no one does like Gaston...]]

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* CrossoverPunchline: Towards the end, there's a joke that only makes sense if you happen to be familiar with ''Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast'', ''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast'', specifically [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3gZ0OgA_8G0 a certain song about things no one does like Gaston...]]



* {{Expy}}: Anders for [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Alfred]], Samson for [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]], and Olympus for [[Disney/{{Tangled}} Maximus]]. Brandr, while pretending to be a human private eye, tries to act like he's some sort of SherlockHolmes, even smoking a pipe and acting like Olympus is his [[TheWatson Dr. Watson]].

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* {{Expy}}: Anders for [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Alfred]], Samson for [[Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast [[WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast Gaston]], and Olympus for [[Disney/{{Tangled}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}} Maximus]]. Brandr, while pretending to be a human private eye, tries to act like he's some sort of SherlockHolmes, even smoking a pipe and acting like Olympus is his [[TheWatson Dr. Watson]].



** [[Disney/{{Hercules}} "The Gospel Truth"]] when Brandr is discussing the early history of the earth, interrupted by Brandr being [[HollywoodToneDeaf terrible at singing]]. This scene is removed in a later draft of the story, though.

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** [[Disney/{{Hercules}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}} "The Gospel Truth"]] when Brandr is discussing the early history of the earth, interrupted by Brandr being [[HollywoodToneDeaf terrible at singing]]. This scene is removed in a later draft of the story, though.



* ShoutOut: On top of the usual name-drops of other fictional Disney countries like [[Disney/{{Tangled}} Corona]], this fanfic also has a few nods to ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' and ''ComicStrip/CalvinAndHobbes''.

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* ShoutOut: On top of the usual name-drops of other fictional Disney countries like [[Disney/{{Tangled}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}} Corona]], this fanfic also has a few nods to ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' and ''ComicStrip/CalvinAndHobbes''.



** Anna's collection of trashy romance books includes ''[[WesternAnimation/{{Brave}} Divorce in Dunbroch]]'', ''[[Disney/{{Aladdin}} Adultery in Agrabah]]'', and ''[[Series/OnceUponATime Seduction in Storybrooke]]''.

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** Anna's collection of trashy romance books includes ''[[WesternAnimation/{{Brave}} Divorce in Dunbroch]]'', ''[[Disney/{{Aladdin}} ''[[WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}} Adultery in Agrabah]]'', and ''[[Series/OnceUponATime Seduction in Storybrooke]]''.



* TimeSkip: The first four chapters take place in the weeks immediately after Elsa's eternal winter in ''Frozen''. Chapter 5 skips ahead to the following spring, after the events of ''Disney/OlafsFrozenAdventure''.

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* TimeSkip: The first four chapters take place in the weeks immediately after Elsa's eternal winter in ''Frozen''. Chapter 5 skips ahead to the following spring, after the events of ''Disney/OlafsFrozenAdventure''.''WesternAnimation/OlafsFrozenAdventure''.



* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Brandr's fate. The changelings, seeing that the humans have rejected Brandr's ideology and are more willing to fight to keep their magic, drag him back to the otherworld and feed him to [[Disney/{{Fantasia}} Chernabog]]]].

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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Brandr's fate. The changelings, seeing that the humans have rejected Brandr's ideology and are more willing to fight to keep their magic, drag him back to the otherworld and feed him to [[Disney/{{Fantasia}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Fantasia}} Chernabog]]]].
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A complete [[{{Continuation}} sequel fic]] to ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' by troper ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5597209/thebandragoness thebandragoness]]''.

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A complete [[{{Continuation}} sequel fic]] to ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ''WesternAnimation/Frozen2013'' by troper ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5597209/thebandragoness thebandragoness]]''.
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* BigBadEnsemble: At first the wight is set up to be the ManBehindTheMan to Adrian, but [[spoiler:both of them are eventually killed]] and a bigger threat comes in the form of [[spoiler:Mary, an evil snowwoman, and then Brandr the Cryomancer-Slayer. And then the wight comes back and Mary comes back and Brandr comes back and by the end none of them really seem to be the BiggerBad.]]

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* BigBadEnsemble: At first the wight is set up to be the ManBehindTheMan to Adrian, but [[spoiler:both of them are eventually killed]] and a bigger threat comes in the form of [[spoiler:Mary, an evil snowwoman, and then Brandr the Cryomancer-Slayer. And then the wight comes back and Mary comes back and Brandr comes back and by the end none of them really seem to be the BiggerBad.back.]]
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* ReplacementLoveInterest: [[spoiler: Subverted. When Charlotte the maid is introduced, it looks very much like she's being set up as Fritz's eventual love interest for when he gets over Elsa... but just as Fritz himself is starting to consider this, he finds out she's married.]]

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* ReplacementLoveInterest: ReplacementGoldfish: [[spoiler: Subverted. When Charlotte the maid is introduced, it looks very much like she's being set up as Fritz's eventual love interest for when he gets over Elsa... but just as Fritz himself is starting to consider this, he finds out she's married.]]

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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In chapter 11, while the wight is about to kill a waitress, her last thoughts are, "What is this ''thing'' eating me?", "How did I get here?" and "Why does his cave have [[StalkerShrine a painting of Princess Anna]]?".

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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In chapter 11, while the wight is about to kill a waitress, her last thoughts are, "What is this ''thing'' eating me?", "How did I get here?" and "Why does his cave have [[StalkerShrine a painting of Princess Anna]]?".Anna]]?"
* BestServedCold: Daniel froze Emma's head and let her slowly freeze to death from the inside out, the process turning her into a sculpture with Elsa's eternal winter, all as revenge for Olive having moved on to have a family with Adrian.



** However, as the title was changed to "Frozen Wight," [[AntagonistTitle the wight seems to be treated as the most important antagonist]], if only because the whole plot is instigated by him.

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** However, as the title was changed to "Frozen Wight," [[AntagonistTitle the wight seems to be treated as the most important antagonist]], if only because the whole plot is instigated by him.his past actions.


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* ExactWords: When Anna and Elsa first meet Olive, and learn the truth about Adrian's daughter Emma, Olive makes a remark about Emma having hair just like Anna's. For the longest time, Anna thinks this means they had similar twin pigtails hairstyles...until, while investigating Daniel, she finds a portrait of Emma and realizes what Olive meant was that Emma had a SkunkStripe just like Anna's.
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* MaliciousSlander: Anna and Elsa have to deal with malicious rumors about them being involved in an incestuous relationship.
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* CannotKeepASecret: Keeping secrets is not Olaf's greatest strength.

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* CannotKeepASecret: Keeping secrets is not Olaf's greatest strength. It doesn't take long for word of Fritz's crush on Elsa to to get around the castle.

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Following the events of the movie, Queen Elsa is ready to settle down, assume her duties, and live a normal life, but it turns out some of the villagers aren't too happy with her for the eternal winter. Furthermore, she makes the discovery that now that her ice and snow powers are under control, she has the ability to feel heat. [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes And also that she hates heat.]] And if that weren't enough, a [[OurWightsAreDifferent man-eating wight]] arrives in Arendelle who is mysteriously obsessed with her and Anna.

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Following the events of the movie, Queen Elsa is ready to settle down, assume her duties, duties as the sovereign ruler of Arendelle, and live a normal life, but it turns out some of the villagers aren't too happy with her for the eternal winter. Furthermore, she makes the discovery that now that her ice and snow powers are under control, she has the ability to feel heat. [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes And also that she hates heat.]] And if that weren't enough, a [[OurWightsAreDifferent man-eating wight]] arrives in Arendelle who is mysteriously obsessed with her and Anna.


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* AdultFear: Adrian was driven to revenge by his only daughter being killed.

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** Anna smuggles ice cream into her bedroom when she's grounded by Elsa for botching negotiations with Weselton and then ditching her bodyguard to go see Kristoff despite the imminent wight threat. She begins noshing on it as she goes through her breakup blues:

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** Anna smuggles ice cream into her bedroom when she's grounded by Elsa for botching negotiations with Weselton and then ditching her bodyguard to go see Kristoff despite the imminent wight threat. She begins Her response to being grounded is spend the hours lying in bed pouting, and eventually resorting to noshing on it as she goes through her breakup blues:ice cream:



* MrsFanservice: Elsa's natural beauty and her magic mean that she's the subject of multiple guards (and [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer even one of the maids]]) making passes at her.

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* MrsFanservice: MsFanservice: Elsa's natural beauty and her magic mean that she's the subject of multiple guards (and [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer even one of the maids]]) making passes at her.



** In chapter 3, a runaway pig somehow gets into the castle thanks to a careless Olaf. It's a nod to a deleted scene called "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbfX42STecU Halt, you swine!]]" where Anna befriended a village boy named Anders (whose name supplies the name for Elsa's chief of staff in this work) and his pig got away, and Anna had to chase him down, causing destruction in her wake

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** In chapter 3, a runaway pig somehow gets into the castle thanks to a careless Olaf. It's a nod to a deleted scene called "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbfX42STecU Halt, you swine!]]" where Anna befriended a village boy named Anders (whose name supplies the name for Elsa's chief of staff in this work) and his pig got away, and Anna had to chase him down, causing destruction in her wakewake.



* ShipperOnDeck: Once Anna learns about Fritz's crush on Elsa, she tries her best to help Fritz express himself, much to Elsa's consternation.



** One of the books in Anna's collection is ''[[Film/{{Brave}} Divorce in Dunbroch]]''. Anders has a book called ''[[Disney/{{Aladdin}} Adultery in Agrabah]]''.

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** One of the books in Anna's collection is ''[[Film/{{Brave}} of trashy romance books includes ''[[WesternAnimation/{{Brave}} Divorce in Dunbroch]]''. Anders has a book called Dunbroch]]'', ''[[Disney/{{Aladdin}} Adultery in Agrabah]]''.Agrabah]]'', and ''[[Series/OnceUponATime Seduction in Storybrooke]]''.



* InterruptedIntimacy: Mary accidentally walks in on Anna and Kristoff in the midst of making love. Her attempt to replicate things with Fritz ends badly, with Fritz rejecting her. Elsa is forced to gather everyone together for a talk on sexual education.

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* InterruptedIntimacy: Mary accidentally walks in on Anna and Kristoff in the midst of making love. Her attempt She tries to replicate things this with Fritz, only to leave Fritz ends badly, with Fritz rejecting her.completely catatonic. Elsa is forced to gather everyone together for a talk on sexual education.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: InUniverse, the Paganians have their own holy book for their Elsa-centric religion known as "Elsianity", but they think that Elsa was the one who got engaged to Hans instead of Anna, that Anna has fire powers and is in an incestuous relationship with Elsa, and Elsa knows someone named Jack Frost.

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* CriticalResearchFailure: InUniverse, the Paganians have their own holy book for their Elsa-centric religion known as "Elsianity", but they think that Elsa was the one who got engaged to Hans instead of Anna, that Anna has fire powers and is in an incestuous relationship with Elsa, and Elsa knows someone named [[WesternAnimation/RiseOfTheGuardians Jack Frost.Frost]].
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* PaperThinDisguise: Elsa and Anna disguise themselves as commoners to try and gauge the public's opinion of Elsa. Within the first few seconds, Anna nearly blows their cover, and then Elsa burns herself, accidentally uses her magic, and flees the tavern.
-->'''Bartender:''' Heeeeey, that girl has ice powers! Funny, [[NarrowedItDownToTheGuyIRecognize our queen has the exact same thing]].....

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* PaperThinDisguise: Elsa and Anna disguise themselves as commoners to try and gauge the public's opinion of Elsa. Within the first few seconds, Anna nearly blows their cover, and then cover but manages to hold on. Then Elsa burns herself, accidentally uses her magic, and flees the tavern.
-->'''Bartender:''' Heeeeey, that girl has ice powers! Funny, [[NarrowedItDownToTheGuyIRecognize [[SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay our queen has the exact same thing]].....

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* TheAlcatraz: There's a prison on an island halfway between the Southern Isles and Arendelle where both nations send their more serious prisoners.



* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Adrian is persuaded by the wight to lead a rebellion against Elsa because he blames her for the death of his daughter.



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* LargeHam: Brandr puts on a very flamboyant show.

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* LargeHam: Brandr puts on a very flamboyant show. show, whether as his true faerie self or when posing as a human bounty hunter.



* LastMinuteHookUp: [[spoiler:Fritz and Mary.]]

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* LastMinuteHookUp: [[spoiler:Fritz and Mary.Mary get this. Also, Anders begins a romance with Olive, Adrian's widow.]]



* MrsFanservice: Elsa's natural beauty and her magic mean that she's the subject of multiple guards (and [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer even one of the maids]]) making passes at her.



** A scene where a runaway pig somehow gets into the castle thanks to a careless Olaf, is a nod to a deleted scene called "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbfX42STecU Halt, you swine!]]" where Anna befriended a village boy named Anders (whose name supplies the name for Elsa's chief of staff in this work) and his pig got away, and Anna had to chase him down, causing destruction in her wake

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** A scene where In chapter 3, a runaway pig somehow gets into the castle thanks to a careless Olaf, is Olaf. It's a nod to a deleted scene called "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbfX42STecU Halt, you swine!]]" where Anna befriended a village boy named Anders (whose name supplies the name for Elsa's chief of staff in this work) and his pig got away, and Anna had to chase him down, causing destruction in her wake



** After Elsa transforms the castle into a second ice palace early in the story to cover up the rebellion damage, the castle stays that way for most of the story. However, in the last chapter, Elsa mentions to Anna that she's going to undo most of the ice-related changes as it's hard to constantly maintain the ice, especially the new ice tower (this all partially explaining why the castle is back to its normal appearance in ''Frozen Fever'').

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** After Elsa transforms the castle into a second ice palace early in the story to cover up the rebellion damage, the castle stays that way for most of the story. However, in the last chapter, Elsa mentions to Anna that she's going to undo most of the ice-related changes as it's hard to constantly maintain the ice, especially the new ice tower (this all partially explaining (since the story takes place after ''Olaf's Frozen Adventure'' but before ''Frozen Fever'', this also explains why the castle is back to its normal appearance in ''Frozen Fever'').by the latter story).



* SparedByTheAdaptation: Earlier drafts originally had Grand Pabbie being killed by the wight after being forced to brainwash Elsa. Later, the story was revised to have him live, albeit hobbling on a cane.



** Chapter 18 contains an extremely thinly-veiled one to the Elsanna shippers, when some guards capture a street artist who has been trying to sell some illicit paintings of the royal sisters (even trying to sell to Kristoff). [[RealityEnsues The sisters find them disgusting.]]
** Then it turns out the peddler is actually the curator of a local art gallery, and brother to the deceased court painter that had been hired to do Elsa's and Anna's new portraits, only to be killed by the wight. [[FoeYayShipping And he's made paintings depicting Elsa getting it on with Hans]].
** During "For the First Time In Forever," Anna jumped in front of a painting called ''The Swing'', or rather, a censored version that omitted a few things from the original, like the perverted man hiding in the bushes. This is observed when they get a replacement for the new gallery.

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** Chapter **The fanfic loves to make fun of various shipper fandoms.
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18 contains an extremely thinly-veiled one to the Elsanna shippers, when some guards capture a street artist who has been trying to sell some illicit paintings of the royal sisters (even trying to sell to Kristoff). [[RealityEnsues The sisters find them disgusting.]]
** Then ***Then it turns out the peddler is actually the curator of a local art gallery, and brother to the deceased court painter that had been hired to do Elsa's and Anna's new portraits, only to be killed by the wight. [[FoeYayShipping And he's made paintings depicting Elsa getting it on with Hans]].
** During "For the First Time In Forever," Anna jumped in front of a painting called ''The Swing'', or rather, a censored version that omitted a few things from the original, like the perverted man PeepingTom hiding in the bushes. This is observed when they get a replacement for the new gallery.



* TimeSkip: The first four chapters take place in the two weeks following the events of ''Frozen''. Chapter 5 skips ahead to the following spring and after the events of ''Disney/OlafsFrozenAdventure''.

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* TimeSkip: The first four chapters take place in the two weeks following the events of immediately after Elsa's eternal winter in ''Frozen''. Chapter 5 skips ahead to the following spring and spring, after the events of ''Disney/OlafsFrozenAdventure''.



* TroubledBackstoryFlashback: Part 2 has one running concurrent with the main plot, mostly to reiterate that Elsa and Anna had bad childhoods (showing off some of the things that "Do You Want to a Build a Snowman?" may have only hinted at), and relapsing into that situation would be undesirable. [[spoiler:And to show the creation of Mary.]]

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* TroubledBackstoryFlashback: Part 2 has one running concurrent with the main plot, mostly to reiterate that Elsa and Anna had bad childhoods (showing off some of the (expanding on things that "Do You Want to a Build a Snowman?" may have only hinted at), and relapsing into that situation would be undesirable. [[spoiler:And to show the creation of Mary.]]]]
* UsedToBeASweetKid: Adrian. Even before the rebellion, Kristoff comments that he used to be as friendly and jovial as his fellow ice harvesters, not knowing about the death of his daughter Emma.



* WakingUpElsewhere: Subverted. In chapter 17, Anna is awoken by a sudden chill. She wakes up and finds every surface of her bedroom covered in ice. For a moment, Anna thinks she's been transported to Elsa's ice palace on the North Mountain. It takes her a few moments to realize that she's still in her own bedroom and Elsa just gave the castle an overnight makeover.

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* WakingUpElsewhere: Subverted. In chapter 17, Subverted with Elsa's transformation of the castle. Anna is awoken by a sudden chill. She wakes up and finds every surface of her bedroom covered in ice. For a moment, Anna thinks she's been transported to Elsa's ice palace on the North Mountain. It takes her a few moments to realize that she's still in her own bedroom and Elsa just gave the castle an overnight makeover.
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** After Elsa transforms the castle into a second ice palace early in the story to cover up the rebellion damage, the castle stays that way for most of the story. However, in the last chapter, Elsa mentions to Anna that she's going to undo most of the ice-related changes as it's hard to constantly maintain the ice, especially the new ice tower (this all partially explaining why the castle is back to its normal appearance in ''Frozen Fever'').

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** [[spoiler:When the rebellion happens, Elsa is quick to entrap them. Her disloyal Admiral then tries to lure her into the courtyard to be ambushed by archers, whom she thwarts by making an ice-chainmail suit and ice shields.]]

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** [[spoiler:When the rebellion happens, Elsa is quick to entrap them. Her disloyal Admiral then tries to lure her into the courtyard to be ambushed by archers, whom she thwarts by making an ice-chainmail suit and ice shields.shields, making her an ice variant of Joan of Arc.]]



** Anna does this in the form of late night snacking after the rebellion.

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** Anna does this in the form of late night snacking after the rebellion.rebellion, with Gerda watching over her. Elsa initially disapproves, but when Anna spills out the truth about how terrified she was being held hostage by Adrian, Elsa decides to join in.



* HonestJohnsDealership: Brock the Mystical claims he can restore Anna's memories. Anna, despite her past experiences with being too trusting of strangers, decides to take him for his word. He only succeeds in burning down the forest, and the fire rampages until Elsa is able to get over her pyrophobia long enough to extinguish the flames.

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* HonestJohnsDealership: Brock the Mystical claims he can restore Anna's memories. Anna, despite her past experiences with being too trusting of strangers, decides to take him for his word.word against Elsa's warnings. He only succeeds in burning down the forest, and the fire rampages until Elsa is able to get over her pyrophobia long enough to extinguish the flames.



** One of the books in Anna's collection is ''[[Film/{{Brave}} Divorce in Dunbroch]]''. Anders has a book called ''[[Disney/{{Aladdin}} Adultery in Agrabah]]''.



* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Brandr's fate. The changelings drag him back to the otherworld and feed him to Chernabog]].

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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:Brandr's fate. The changelings changelings, seeing that the humans have rejected Brandr's ideology and are more willing to fight to keep their magic, drag him back to the otherworld and feed him to Chernabog]].[[Disney/{{Fantasia}} Chernabog]]]].

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* AdultsAreUseless: Anna lampshades how in so many books, the authorities are useless and it's always a group of teenagers who catch the bad guy.

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* AccidentalPervert: Olaf has to be part of the sex education talk because, as Elsa claims, he's been caught wandering into the maids' changing rooms on too many occasions.
* AdultsAreUseless: When dealing with Sussebassen, Anna lampshades how in so many books, the authorities are useless and it's always a group of teenagers who catch the bad guy.



* InnocentlyInsensitive: Olaf has to be part of the sex education talk because, as Elsa claims, he's been caught wandering into the maids' changing rooms on too many occasions.

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Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10196597/1/Frozen-Wight here]].

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Read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10196597/1/Frozen-Wight [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/2601779 here]].



Read the sequel [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10845727/1/Anatomy-of-a-Snowwoman here.]]

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Read the sequel [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10845727/1/Anatomy-of-a-Snowwoman [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/2665370/ here.]]



Read ''Fritz: The Musical'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11319534/1/Fritz-The-Musical here.]]

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Read ''Fritz: The Musical'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11319534/1/Fritz-The-Musical [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4149891 here.]]



** After Brock the Mystical's botched attempt to restore Anna's memories burns down the trolls' forest in chapter 5, he's thrown in a cave where the trolls keep their prisoners. When Anna and Elsa visit the cave in chapter 73 to check on the wight, they also see Brock practicing a harmonica.



** Anna smuggles ice cream into her bedroom when she's grounded by Elsa for botching negotiations with Weselton. She begins noshing on it as she goes through her breakup blues:

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** Anna smuggles ice cream into her bedroom when she's grounded by Elsa for botching negotiations with Weselton.Weselton and then ditching her bodyguard to go see Kristoff despite the imminent wight threat. She begins noshing on it as she goes through her breakup blues:



* HonestJohnsDealership: Brock the Mystical claims he can restore Anna's memories. Anna, despite her past experiences with being too trusting of strangers, decides to take him for his word. He only succeeds in burning down the forest, and the fire rampages until Elsa is able to get over her pyrophobia long enough to extinguish the flames.



* INeverSaidItWasPoison: After the mob rebellion, Elsa figures out from their use of torches that Fritz must have said something to the head of the rebels since only he could've known about her fear of heat. She lets Fritz off the hook once he admits that the rebellion leader got him drunk and loosened his lips.



* BodyguardCrush: Anna once had a crush on one guard thrice her age back when she was an early teen. He politely rejected her, told her parents, and they sat her down for the big talk.



* InterruptedIntimacy: Mary accidentally walks in on Anna and Kristoff in the act, and this leads to some resulting fallout which finally forces Elsa to hold TheTalk.

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* InterruptedIntimacy: Mary accidentally walks in on Anna and Kristoff in the act, and this leads midst of making love. Her attempt to some resulting fallout which finally forces replicate things with Fritz ends badly, with Fritz rejecting her. Elsa is forced to hold TheTalk.gather everyone together for a talk on sexual education.

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* HeartbreakAndIceCream: Fritz indulges himself in ice cream when he feels rejected by Elsa. Anna smuggles ice cream into her bedroom when she's grounded by Elsa for botching negotiations with Weselton.

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* HeartbreakAndIceCream: Fritz HeartbreakAndIceCream:
**Fritz
indulges himself in ice cream when he feels rejected by Elsa. Anna Elsa.
**Anna
smuggles ice cream into her bedroom when she's grounded by Elsa for botching negotiations with Weselton.Weselton. She begins noshing on it as she goes through her breakup blues:
-->"No, I'm being crazy. Of course Kristoff loves me! He was the one who wanted to kiss in the first place!"\\
''Five minutes later:''\\
"Waaaaaaaaah! He hates me! Kristoff hates me!"\\
''Ten minutes later:\\
"Man, I can't wait to get back together with Kristoff. I bet he'll apologize and it'll be soooo sweet..."\\
''Twenty:''\\
"He's found someone else, hasn't he? There's some big, blond beauty out there, and I'll never be able to compete because she's so much fuller than me!"\\
''Forty:''\\
"Stupid Kristoff! Who needs him, anyways? I'll find another guy, and he'll be really hot, and we'll make out all the time, right in front of Kristoff, and then he'll be sorry!"\\
''An hour and twenty minutes later:\\
"My life is over... I'm so lonely... Om nom nom nom..."



* MistakenForGay: Fritz initially mistakes Elsa and Anna's relationship for this while eavesdropping.

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* MistakenForGay: Fritz initially mistakes Elsa and Anna's relationship for this while eavesdropping. One of the trolls also thinks Elsa's problem is her sexuality and not her ice magic.
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* ShotgunWedding: Anders mentions that Anna and Elsa's parents married because their father got his wife knocked up with Elsa.

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* AntiMagic: Brandr has an enchanted sword that can absorb Elsa's ice magic.



* AgentScully: Brandr claims there's no such thing as magic, prompting Elsa and Anna to trade wry glances. [[spoiler:Of course, it's a subversion, as Brandr is a faerie posing as a human.]]

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* AgentScully: Brandr claims there's no such thing as magic, prompting Elsa and Anna to trade wry glances. [[spoiler:Of course, it's a subversion, as at the time, Brandr is a faerie posing as a human.]]



* CallForward: Brandr is always accompanied by his horse Olympus. When he shows up in a flashback all alone, his final line is, "I'm gonna need a horse."

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* CallForward: Brandr CallForward:
**Brandr
is always accompanied by his horse Olympus. When he shows up in a flashback all alone, his final line is, "I'm gonna need a horse.""
**Anders makes warnings to Anna and Elsa's parents how their sheltering of the sisters is making them mentally unhealthy, predicting that Anna will throw herself at the first guy she meets while Elsa is going to have a disastrous loss of control of her powers in public while under pressure.



* CannotKeepASecret: Keeping secrets is not Olaf's greatest strengths.

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* CannotKeepASecret: Keeping secrets is not Olaf's greatest strengths.strength.



* CurbStompBattle: In this fic, Elsa's magic can easily take down entire armies in a matter of seconds.

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* CurbStompBattle: In this fic, Elsa's magic can easily take down entire armies in a matter of seconds. It being a year since the events of the eternal winter, she's had practice.



* HeartbreakAndIceCream: Both Fritz and Anna indulge in this at different points in the story.

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* HeartbreakAndIceCream: Both Fritz and indulges himself in ice cream when he feels rejected by Elsa. Anna indulge in this at different points in the story.smuggles ice cream into her bedroom when she's grounded by Elsa for botching negotiations with Weselton.



* LargeHam: Brandr

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* LargeHam: BrandrBrandr puts on a very flamboyant show.


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* OverlyNervousFlopSweat: While Fritz is tasked with taking Anna out of the castle to avoid disrupting Elsa's negotiations with Weselton, Anna suddenly has a need to go back to the castle to get something. Fritz tries to dissuade her...except Anna sees him sweating profusely.
-->"I know when people are hiding something from me,” said Anna. “I'm not an idiot. But you know what I am? The princess. And as princess, I order this carriage to turn around!"


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** Anna's impulsiveness has big repercussions, like happens when she can't control herself and punches out the Duke of Weselton, ruining Elsa's finalized efforts to reopen negotiations with Weselton.


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* WeNeedADistraction: When Elsa needs to have negotiations with the Duke of Weselton, she has Fritz take Anna to an art exhibition so she won't cross paths with the Duke. Unfortunately, Anna realizes she's forgotten something while in the carriage, and when trying to get Fritz to turn back, he keeps making up excuses which she sees right through. So she pulls rank to turn the carriage around, returns to the castle, storms into Elsa's meeting and punches the Duke out.

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** The first Admiral of the Royal Guard never has his name given. Anna even lampshades it.

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** The first Admiral of the Royal Guard never has his name given. In fact, when Anna even lampshades it.tries asking Elsa what his name is, she's just greeted with shrugs:
-->"So does everyone just call that guy 'the Admiral?' Doesn't he have, like, an actual name?"



** During "For the First Time In Forever," Anna jumped in front of a painting called ''The Swing'', or rather, a censored version that omitted a few things from the original, like a man hiding in the bushes:

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** During "For the First Time In Forever," Anna jumped in front of a painting called ''The Swing'', or rather, a censored version that omitted a few things from the original, like a the perverted man hiding in the bushes:bushes. This is observed when they get a replacement for the new gallery.
-->"My childhood is ruined!"

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* AntiMagic: Brandr has an enchanted sword that can absorb Elsa's ice magic.



** In "For the First time in Forever," Anna throws a marble bust and it squashes a cake. At one point in this story, Anna and Elsa come upon Anders cleaning cake residue off of said bust.

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** In "For the First time in Forever," Anna throws a marble bust and it squashes a cake. At one point in this story, A few days later, while walking through the castle, Anna and Elsa come upon see Anders cleaning cake residue off of said bust.



* BullyingADragon: When Elsa visits Fritz's mom to tell her that Daniel has wounded Fritz, she shows herself to be rather callous and misogynistic. Even as frost begins spreading over her shop, she still continues to insult Elsa and essentially calls her a tramp. Elsa responds by freezing up the shop so badly that it takes five weeks to thaw, while Fritz's mom is thrown in the jail.



* CareerEndingInjury: Anders is injured by Elsa's snowmen the first time Mary wreaks havoc. As a result, Elsa grants him a spot on her council of advisor at the end of the story and promotes Kai to replace him.
* CannotKeepASecret: Keeping secrets is not Olaf's greatest strength.

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* CareerEndingInjury: Anders is injured by Elsa's snowmen the first time Mary wreaks havoc. havoc, and has to get around with a cane. As a result, Elsa grants promotes him a spot on to be her council of top advisor at the end of the story (replacing an old-timer who had been making sexist remarks at every meeting) and promotes Kai to replace him.
him as her chief of staff.
* CannotKeepASecret: Keeping secrets is not Olaf's greatest strength.strengths.



* DescriptionCut: When Anna and Elsa find more of the peddler's illicit paintings, Elsa considers giving him jail time, but the peddler pleads, "Please, I'll do anything! Anything you want!" Cut to Gerda looking surprised as a long line of servants haul a truckload of paintings into the castle's gallery:

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* DescriptionCut: When Anna and Elsa find more of the peddler's illicit paintings, Elsa considers giving him jail time, but the peddler pleads, "Please, I'll do anything! Anything you want!" Cut to Gerda looking surprised as a long line Somehow it ends with Anna and Elsa acquiring his entire stock of servants haul a truckload of paintings into the castle's gallery:eccentric paintings.



* IcePalace: The one Elsa created in the movie still exists, but she makes the castle in Arendelle a second ice palace with an overnight renovation.
* IllBeInMyBunk: Fritz is ordered to burn the Elsanna pictures. He runs off with "unexpected speed," though his next scene makes it clear he didn't actually have the nerve to do it.

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* IcePalace: The one Elsa created in the movie still exists, but and is used as a home for Marshmallow and a bunch of her later snowmen. Following the rebellion, she makes the castle in Arendelle a second ice palace with an overnight renovation.
as a means to both show the people of Arendelle she's still willing to use her powers, as well as repair the damage from the rebellion mob's torches.
* IllBeInMyBunk: Fritz is ordered to burn the Elsanna pictures.sketches of Elsa and Anna doing incestuous things. He runs off with "unexpected speed," though his next scene makes it clear he didn't actually have the nerve to do it.



* MindScrew: InUniverse, Elsa resorts to creating {{Modesty Towel}}s out of ice. Anders struggles to understand how she's able to dry herself with the solid form of water. The narrator notes, "If that made even a little bit of sense, it was a strange foreign kind of sense Anders wanted nothing to do with."

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* MindScrew: InUniverse, Elsa resorts to creating {{Modesty Towel}}s out of ice. Anders struggles to understand how she's able to dry herself with the solid form of water. The narrator notes, "If
-->"If
that made even a little bit of sense, it was a strange foreign kind of sense Anders wanted nothing to do with."



* MoveAlongNothingToSeeHere: Kristoff brings Grand Pabbie to the castle for a private meeting with Elsa. Smuggling him into the castle involves Kristoff forcing his way through a crowd and the entry doors whilst holding Grand Pabbie (disguised as a boulder) and saying, "Don't mind me! Just carrying around a [[UnusuallyUninterestingSight completely ordinary rock]]! Nothing to see here..."

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* MoleInCharge: The reason Adrian's rebellion is able to succeed is because the admiral in charge of the royal guard is in on it, allowing for a bunch of rebels to get hired on when Elsa is beefing up security in response to the wight.
* MoveAlongNothingToSeeHere: Following Anna's failed attempt to restore her memories with Brock the Mystical, Kristoff brings Grand Pabbie to the castle for a private meeting with Elsa. Smuggling him into the castle involves Kristoff forcing his way through a crowd and the entry doors whilst holding Grand Pabbie (disguised as a boulder) and saying, "Don't mind me! Just carrying around a [[UnusuallyUninterestingSight completely ordinary rock]]! Nothing to see here..."



** A scene where a runaway pig somehow gets into the castle is a nod to a deleted scene called "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbfX42STecU Halt, you swine!]]" where Anna befriended a village boy named Anders (whose name supplies the name for Elsa's chief of staff in this work) and his pig got away, and Anna had to chase him down, causing destruction in her wake

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** A scene where a runaway pig somehow gets into the castle thanks to a careless Olaf, is a nod to a deleted scene called "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbfX42STecU Halt, you swine!]]" where Anna befriended a village boy named Anders (whose name supplies the name for Elsa's chief of staff in this work) and his pig got away, and Anna had to chase him down, causing destruction in her wake



** Earlier, Fritz is on guard duty outside Elsa's study, while the sisters are inside experimenting with Elsa's powers. Of course, he only hears the noise of furniture moving and parts of their conversation, leading him to think that the sisters are engaging in more....''kinky'' activities. This leads to the Elsanna rumors spreading around the town.

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** Earlier, Fritz is on guard duty outside Elsa's study, while the sisters are inside experimenting with Elsa's powers. Of course, he only hears the noise of furniture moving and parts of their conversation, leading him to think that the sisters are engaging in more....''kinky'' activities. This leads to the Elsanna some scandalous rumors spreading around the town.that spread like gossip.



* RealityEnsues: Many fanfic writers have taken to shipping [[IncestShipping Elsa and Anna]]. Here, a peddler tries hawking illicit paintings of the sisters. Elsa and Anna are disgusted by them. The same goes for Hans-Elsa shippers later in the story.

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* RealityEnsues: Many fanfic writers have taken RealityEnsues:
**There are serious repercussions
to shipping [[IncestShipping Elsa's "eternal winter", such as dead crops and livestock.
**FantasticRacism is a thing, with
Elsa and Anna]]. Here, a peddler tries hawking illicit paintings dealing with Adrian, an ice harvester who blames her for the death of his daughter (actually the work of the sisters. wight). Adrian is also able to incite a mob of similar prejudiced people KKK-style to lead a rebellion.
**Given Hans's traitorous actions against the Arendelle throne,
Elsa and Anna are disgusted very much offended by them. The same goes for Hans-Elsa shippers later in the story.discovery of paintings that depict Elsa smooching Hans. Similarly, Elsa considers people spreading lies about her and Anna as a punishable offense.
**Elsa's new ice dress is of course sexy, but it also means she's the subject of multiple guards and even one of the maids trying to make passes at her.



* RememberTheNewGuy: Anders is an OC yet has been on the staff since before Elsa was born.



* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:An angry mob does this at the climax of part 1.]]

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* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:An angry mob does this at incited by Adrian tries to storm the climax castle with torches and pitchforks. They manage to damage large portions of part 1.the castle before Elsa is able to subdue them singlehandedly.]]



** Chapter 18 contains an extremely thinly-veiled one to the Elsanna shippers, when some guards capture a street artist who has been trying to sell some illicit paintings of the royal sisters. [[RealityEnsues The sisters find them disgusting.]]
** The same premise is later used to take a stab at Helsa shippers when it turns out the peddler is actually the curator of a local art gallery. [[FoeYayShipping And he's made paintings depicting Elsa getting it on with Hans]].

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** Chapter 18 contains an extremely thinly-veiled one to the Elsanna shippers, when some guards capture a street artist who has been trying to sell some illicit paintings of the royal sisters.sisters (even trying to sell to Kristoff). [[RealityEnsues The sisters find them disgusting.]]
** The same premise is later used to take a stab at Helsa shippers when Then it turns out the peddler is actually the curator of a local art gallery.gallery, and brother to the deceased court painter that had been hired to do Elsa's and Anna's new portraits, only to be killed by the wight. [[FoeYayShipping And he's made paintings depicting Elsa getting it on with Hans]].



* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Anna wants to go to Brock the Mystical so her memories can be restored. Elsa refuses, because to her, Brock is as much of a stranger to Anna as Hans was.
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' What does he have to gain from helping you?
-->'''Princess Anna:''' I dunno. I think he wants to prove his magic is as good as Grand Pabbie's or something. Does it really matter? I want my memories back, pronto! Come on, what's the worst that could happen?\\
''[Cuts to countless trolls fleeing a massive wildfire, while Elsa stands petrified in the middle of the blaze and Anna and Kristoff wait by the creek]''\\
'''Kristoff:''' Any day now, Elsa!

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* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: Anna wants to go to Brock the Mystical so her memories can be restored. Elsa refuses, because to her, Brock is as much of a stranger to Anna as Hans was.
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' What does he have to gain from helping you?
-->'''Princess Anna:''' I dunno. I think he wants to prove his magic is as good as Grand Pabbie's or something. Does it really matter? I want my memories back, pronto! Come on, what's
was. Anna says the worst that could happen?\\
''[Cuts to countless trolls fleeing a massive wildfire, while Elsa stands petrified in the middle
line, and of course, Brock botches things, instead burning down part of the blaze and Anna and Kristoff wait by the creek]''\\
'''Kristoff:''' Any day now, Elsa!
forest.



* CutawayGag: When Elsa learns of the message from Pagania.
-->'''Anders:''' They didn't send a diplomat. They're only going to trade with us on one condition.
-->'''Elsa:''' What is it?
-->'''Anders:''' They...''[takes a breath]'' They want you to sail over to Pagania and show off your magic.
-->'''Elsa:''' Show off?
-->'''Anders:''' The Paganians have always been....''fond'' of magic.
-->'''Elsa:''' ''How'' fond?
-->''[Cuts to [[RetailRiot a fight happening in a Pagania marketplace over limited edition Elsa dolls at that exact moment in time]]]''
-->'''Random person:''' [[NoIndoorVoice HAND OVER THE LIMITED EDITION SPARKLE SNOW GODDESS DOLL! I NEED THAT FOR MY ALTAR, YOU HEATHEN!]]
-->''[Cuts back to the council meeting]''
-->'''Anders:''' [[{{Understatement}} They enjoy it in moderation]]. They'll treat you well. You should be fine.


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