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The story is on-going, though not updated regularly, and can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9321017/1/Freedom-s-Limits here]].
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The story was first posted in May 2013; it is on-going, though not updated regularly, and incomplete, having received its most recent update in July 2016. It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9321017/1/Freedom-s-Limits here]].
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* TheCameo: Aragorn very briefly appears when the slaves are liberated, though Madavi can't see him well from the back of the crowd. Grazad and Rukhash are both mentioned; in fact, Smador indicates he and Rukhash hooked up. Cadoc also appears briefly in Chapter Six.
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* TheCameo: Aragorn very briefly appears when the slaves are liberated, though Madavi can't see him well from the back of the crowd. Grazad and Rukhash are both mentioned; in fact, Smador indicates he and Rukhash hooked up. Cadoc also appears briefly in Chapter Six.Six along with Hedon (though the latter's name isn't mentioned).
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* DeathBySex: Madavi is executed for having sex with an orc.
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* SexSignalsDeath: Madavi is executed for having sex with an orc.
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* BrattyTeenageDaughter / SpoiledBrat: Seri. Her ''own father'' calls her an "insolent, spoiled child" and she goes out of her way to be nasty to Madavi and Pratima, even mocking the latter when she falls from a wagon and knocks her head.
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* BrattyTeenageDaughter / SpoiledBrat: BrattyTeenageDaughter: Seri. Her ''own father'' calls her an "insolent, [[SpoiledBrat spoiled child" child]]" and she goes out of her way to be nasty to Madavi and Pratima, even mocking the latter when she falls from a wagon and knocks her head.
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* TheIngenue: Madavi has shades of this. Though she's not a virgin for most of the story (and in fact is quite sexually active later on), she's young, beautiful, kind-hearted and rather innocent and naïve. Some of this is justified to due being BornIntoSlavery and never setting foot outside of Barad-dûr before she was fourteen, but even Pratima says she can be too trusting at times. Given the story's ForegoneConclusion, this ultimately leads to tragedy (see also TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth below).
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* TheIngenue: Madavi has shades of qualifies as this. Though she's not a virgin for most of the story (and in fact is quite sexually active later on), she's young, beautiful, kind-hearted and rather innocent and naïve. Some of this is justified to due being BornIntoSlavery and never setting foot outside of Barad-dûr before she was fourteen, but even Pratima says she can be too trusting at times. Given the story's ForegoneConclusion, this ultimately leads to tragedy (see also TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth below).
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* ArmourPiercingSlap / OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When Seri continues taunting Pratima after she was injured falling off a wagon, everyone is shocked when ''Madavi'', [[AllLovingHero of all people]], smacks her across the face.
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* OCs: The vast majority of the characters. As with ''Splint'', they are generally well-written and avoid some of the common problems associated with this.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When Seri continues taunting Pratima after she was injured falling off a wagon, everyone is shocked when ''Madavi'', [[AllLovingHero of all people]], smacks her across the face.
* OriginalCharacter: The vast majority of the characters. As with ''Splint'', they are generally well-written and avoid some of the common problems associated with this.
* OriginalCharacter: The vast majority of the characters. As with ''Splint'', they are generally well-written and avoid some of the common problems associated with this.
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* RapeAsDrama: Some of the female slaves, including Madavi (who's only thirteen), are used as [[SexSlave sex slaves]] by the human soldiers fighting for Sauron. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance They don’t really seem to consider it a violation as most people would]] – [[LieBackAndThinkOfEngland they don't actively fight back]], they view being 'chosen' as an inconvenience more than anything and Madavi doesn't even consider it the worst thing she's ever had done to her. That said, they're ''told'' not to fight back to get it over with more quickly, it's doubtful the soldiers would stop if they protested and Madavi doesn't even seem to fully understand what is being done to her. Not to mention, she's only ''thirteen''. Madavi doesn't give it much thought, until Smador informs her how sex is actually supposed to function between friends. She is surprised, saying she "didn't think it was meant for me" and they go on to have [[GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex a very happy, consensual sexual relationship]].
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* RapeAsDrama: Some of the female slaves, including Madavi (who's only thirteen), are used as [[SexSlave sex slaves]] by the human soldiers fighting for Sauron. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance They don’t really seem to consider it a violation as most people would]] – [[LieBackAndThinkOfEngland they don't actively fight back]], they view being 'chosen' as an inconvenience more than anything and Madavi doesn't even consider it the worst thing she's ever had done to her. That said, they're ''told'' not to fight back to get it over with more quickly, it's doubtful the soldiers would stop if they protested and Madavi doesn't even seem to fully understand what is being done to her. Not to mention, she's only ''thirteen''. Madavi doesn't give it much thought, until Smador informs her how sex is actually supposed to function between friends. She is surprised, saying she "didn't think it was meant for me" and they go on to have [[GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex a very happy, consensual sexual relationship]].relationship.
