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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41608/flutterspy Flutterspy]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy fanfic by Kavonde that's available from Website/FimfictionDotNet. As you've probably guessed from the PunBasedTitle, it takes [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy Fluttershy]], the gentlest and most peaceful member of the Mane Six, and plunges her into the world of TuxedoAndMartini SpyFiction.[[note]]Technically, this is more of a Bathtub Gin Flavored story, since the main character is a civilian who's mixed up in a spy adventure.[[/note]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41608/flutterspy Flutterspy]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy fanfic by Kavonde that's available from Website/FimfictionDotNet.Platform/FimfictionDotNet. As you've probably guessed from the PunBasedTitle, it takes [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy Fluttershy]], the gentlest and most peaceful member of the Mane Six, and plunges her into the world of TuxedoAndMartini SpyFiction.[[note]]Technically, this is more of a Bathtub Gin Flavored story, since the main character is a civilian who's mixed up in a spy adventure.[[/note]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41608/flutterspy Flutterspy]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy fanfic by Kavonde that's available from Website/FimfictionDotNet. As you've probably guessed from the PunBasedTitle, it takes [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy Flutter]][[SelfDemonstrating/{{Fluttershy}} shy]], the gentlest and most peaceful member of the Mane Six, and plunges her into the world of TuxedoAndMartini SpyFiction.[[note]]Technically, this is more of a Bathtub Gin Flavored story, since the main character is a civilian who's mixed up in a spy adventure.[[/note]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41608/flutterspy Flutterspy]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy fanfic by Kavonde that's available from Website/FimfictionDotNet. As you've probably guessed from the PunBasedTitle, it takes [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy Flutter]][[SelfDemonstrating/{{Fluttershy}} shy]], Fluttershy]], the gentlest and most peaceful member of the Mane Six, and plunges her into the world of TuxedoAndMartini SpyFiction.[[note]]Technically, this is more of a Bathtub Gin Flavored story, since the main character is a civilian who's mixed up in a spy adventure.[[/note]]
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->'''Fleur de Lis:''' Elite young fillies and colts from [[UsefulNotes/{{France}} Fancè]] are sometimes trained to serve Princess Celestia in... ways not greatly publicized. We work in the shadows, protecting Equestria from threats from without, and from within. We are... the ''Agents Secret''.
->'''Fluttershy:''' I've never heard of them.
->'''Fleur de Lis:''' Oui. There is reason for that.
->'''Fluttershy:''' I've never heard of them.
->'''Fleur de Lis:''' Oui. There is reason for that.
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->'''Fleur de Lis:''' Elite young fillies and colts from [[UsefulNotes/{{France}} Fancè]] are sometimes trained to serve Princess Celestia in... ways not greatly publicized. We work in the shadows, protecting Equestria from threats from without, and from within. We are... the ''Agents Secret''.
->'''Fluttershy:'''Secret''.\\
'''Fluttershy:''' I've never heard ofthem.
->'''Fleurthem.\\
'''Fleur de Lis:''' Oui. There is reason for that.
->'''Fluttershy:'''
'''Fluttershy:''' I've never heard of
->'''Fleur
'''Fleur de Lis:''' Oui. There is reason for that.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41608/flutterspy Flutterspy]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy fanfic by Kavonde that's available from Website/FimfictionDotNet. As you've probably guessed from the PunBasedTitle, it takes [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy Flutter]][[SelfDemonstrating/Fluttershy shy]], the gentlest and most peaceful member of the Mane Six, and plunges her into the world of TuxedoAndMartini SpyFiction.[[note]]Technically, this is more of a Bathtub Gin Flavored story, since the main character is a civilian who's mixed up in a spy adventure.[[/note]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41608/flutterspy Flutterspy]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy fanfic by Kavonde that's available from Website/FimfictionDotNet. As you've probably guessed from the PunBasedTitle, it takes [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy Flutter]][[SelfDemonstrating/Fluttershy Flutter]][[SelfDemonstrating/{{Fluttershy}} shy]], the gentlest and most peaceful member of the Mane Six, and plunges her into the world of TuxedoAndMartini SpyFiction.[[note]]Technically, this is more of a Bathtub Gin Flavored story, since the main character is a civilian who's mixed up in a spy adventure.[[/note]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41608/flutterspy Flutterspy]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy fanfic by Kavonde that's available from Website/FimfictionDotNet. As you've probably guessed from the PunBasedTitle, it takes [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy Fluttershy]], the gentlest and most peaceful member of the Mane Six, and plunges her into the world of TuxedoAndMartini SpyFiction.[[note]]Technically, this is more of a Bathtub Gin Flavored story, since the main character is a civilian who's mixed up in a spy adventure.[[/note]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41608/flutterspy Flutterspy]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy fanfic by Kavonde that's available from Website/FimfictionDotNet. As you've probably guessed from the PunBasedTitle, it takes [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy Fluttershy]], Flutter]][[SelfDemonstrating/Fluttershy shy]], the gentlest and most peaceful member of the Mane Six, and plunges her into the world of TuxedoAndMartini SpyFiction.[[note]]Technically, this is more of a Bathtub Gin Flavored story, since the main character is a civilian who's mixed up in a spy adventure.[[/note]]
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* BadassCrew[=/=]PowerTrio: Worthy's ninjas.
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* BadassCrew[=/=]PowerTrio: BadassCrew: Worthy's ninjas.
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* TookALevelInBadass: PlayedWith. As shownn in canon, Fluttershy is capable of being a great warrior, but only if one of her {{Berserk Button}}s is pressed. Fleur de Lis' training is intended to overcome this.
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* TookALevelInBadass: PlayedWith. As shownn shown in canon, Fluttershy is capable of being a great warrior, but only if one of her {{Berserk Button}}s is pressed. Fleur de Lis' training is intended to overcome this.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: InvokedTrope{{ when Fluttershy tries to defuse the tension after one of Worthy's insults (see TheCityVsTheCountry above) by acting like Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara. It works because everypony reacts with StunnedSilence.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: InvokedTrope{{ InvokedTrope when Fluttershy tries to defuse the tension after one of Worthy's insults (see TheCityVsTheCountry above) by acting like Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara. It works because everypony reacts with StunnedSilence.
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* FrenchJerk: {{Averted}}, as Fleur de Lis is a kind, polite NiceGirl.
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* FrenchJerk: {{Averted}}, AvertedTrope, as Fleur de Lis is a kind, polite NiceGirl.
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* MultinationalTeam: Worthy's ninjas. Red Adder is from [[UsefulNotes/{{Russia}} Stalliongrad]], Blue Cobra is from [[UsefulNotes/{{Britain}} Trottingham]], and Yellow Viper is from [[UsefulNotes/{{Japan}} Okineighwa]].
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* MultinationalTeam: Worthy's ninjas. Red Adder is from [[UsefulNotes/{{Russia}} Stalliongrad]], Blue Cobra is from [[UsefulNotes/{{Britain}} Trottingham]], Trotting]][[UsefulNotes/TheMidlands ham]], and Yellow Viper is from [[UsefulNotes/{{Japan}} Okineighwa]].
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: {{Invoked}} InvokedTrope{{ when Fluttershy tries to defuse the tension after one of Worthy's insults (see TheCityVsTheCountry above) by acting like Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara. It works because everypony reacts with StunnedSilence.
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* TookALevelInBadass: PlayedWith. As we've seen in canon, Fluttershy is capable of being a great warrior, but only if one of her {{Berserk Button}}s is pressed. Fleur de Lis' training is intended to overcome this.
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* TookALevelInBadass: PlayedWith. As we've seen shownn in canon, Fluttershy is capable of being a great warrior, but only if one of her {{Berserk Button}}s is pressed. Fleur de Lis' training is intended to overcome this.
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* ForgetsToEat: When Rarity is working on her second set of designs, she's too busy to eat, sleep or shower.
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* ForgetsToEat: ForgetsToEat[=/=]SleepDeprivation: When Rarity is working on her second set of designs, she's too busy to eat, sleep or shower.
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: When Fluttershy is hit by Red Viper's dart in the final chapter, it removes all of her angry inhibitions and attacks the Snakes without mercy.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: When Fluttershy is hit by Red Viper's dart in the final chapter, it removes all of her angry inhibitions and she attacks the Snakes without mercy.]]
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Fluttershy is surprised, but an even bigger shock is headed her way. While she and Rarity are taking a carriage back to their hotel, it's hijacked--and Fluttershy recognizes the perp as Red Adder, one of Worthy's models! Red Adder attacks her--and then Fancy Pants' girlfriend, supermodel Fleur de Lis, comes out of nowhere to save her! Later, Fleur explains that she's actually a secret agent working for Princess Celestia, and she's here because Fancy Pants and Rarity are both in danger--sort of. Despite his upper class roots, Fancy Pants believes in equality and egalitarianism, and his enemy Worthy is using the fashion show as "an opportunity to prove the nobility's superiority, and to win hearts and minds from Fancy's cause." To help accomplish this, she plans to destroy Rarity's career with the help of her "models", who are actually three highly-trained {{Ninja}}s. And since Fluttershy is now involved, Fleur de Lis enlists her as an ally.
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Fluttershy is surprised, but an even bigger shock is headed her way. While she and Rarity are taking a carriage back to their hotel, it's hijacked--and hijacked -- and Fluttershy recognizes the perp as Red Adder, one of Worthy's models! Red Adder attacks her--and her -- and then Fancy Pants' girlfriend, supermodel Fleur de Lis, comes out of nowhere to save her! Later, Fleur explains that she's actually a secret agent working for Princess Celestia, and she's here because Fancy Pants and Rarity are both in danger--sort danger -- sort of. Despite his upper class roots, Fancy Pants believes in equality and egalitarianism, and his enemy Worthy is using the fashion show as "an opportunity to prove the nobility's superiority, and to win hearts and minds from Fancy's cause." To help accomplish this, she plans to destroy Rarity's career with the help of her "models", who are actually three highly-trained {{Ninja}}s. And since Fluttershy is now involved, Fleur de Lis enlists her as an ally.
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* WhatWouldXDo: Fluttershy is trapped in the theater's storage room with Yellow Viper. She [[ImagineSpot imagines]] how the rest of the Mane Six would react, and realizes that most of their solutions wouldn't work for her. Desperate, she uses Pinkie Pie's method--dressing up in the old costumes and [[ScoobyDooHoax pretending to be a hostile ghost]]--because it's CrazyEnoughToWork.
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* WhatWouldXDo: Fluttershy is trapped in the theater's storage room with Yellow Viper. She [[ImagineSpot imagines]] how the rest of the Mane Six would react, and realizes that most of their solutions wouldn't work for her. Desperate, she uses Pinkie Pie's method--dressing method -- dressing up in the old costumes and [[ScoobyDooHoax pretending to be a hostile ghost]]--because it's CrazyEnoughToWork.
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: When Fluttershy was hit by Red Viper's dart in the final chapter, it removes all of her angry inhibitions and attacks the Snakes without mercy.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: When Fluttershy was is hit by Red Viper's dart in the final chapter, it removes all of her angry inhibitions and attacks the Snakes without mercy.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Once Fluttershy was hit by Red Viper's poison joke tipped dart, she gives the Snakes quite the beat-down.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Once Fluttershy was is hit by Red Viper's poison joke tipped joke-tipped dart, she gives the Snakes quite the beat-down.]]
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* StealthExpert: Pretty much every spy in the story. And Fleur is helping Fluttershy become an even better expert at stealth.
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* StealthExpert: Pretty much every spy in the story. And story, and Fleur is helping Fluttershy become an even better expert at stealth.
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* StealthExpert: Pretty much every spy in the story. And Fleur is helping Fluttershy become an even better expert at stealth.
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* NoHoldsBeatDown: [[spoiler:Once Fluttershy was hit by Red Viper's poison joke tipped dart, she gives the Snakes quite the beatdown.]]
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* NoHoldsBeatDown: NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Once Fluttershy was hit by Red Viper's poison joke tipped dart, she gives the Snakes quite the beatdown.beat-down.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: When Fluttershy was hit by Red Viper's dart in the final chapter, it removes all of her angry inhibitions and attacks the Snakes without mercy.
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: When Fluttershy was hit by Red Viper's dart in the final chapter, it removes all of her angry inhibitions and attacks the Snakes without mercy.]]
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Fluttershy is surprised, but an even bigger shock is headed her way. While she and Rarity are taking a carriage back to their hotel, it's hijacked--and Fluttershy recognizes the perp as Red Adder, one of Worthy's models! Red Adder attacks her--and then Fancy Pants' girlfriend, supermodel Fleur de Lis, comes out of nowhere to save her! Later, Fleur explains that she's actually a secret agent working for Princess Celestia, and she's here because Fancy Pants and Rarity are both in danger--sort of. Despite his upper class roots, Fancy Pants believes in equality and egalitarianism, and his enemy Worthy is using the fashion show as "an opportunity to prove the nobility's superiority, and to win hearts and minds from Fancy's cause." To help accomplish this, she plans to destroy Rarity's career--along with her "models", who are actually three highly-trained {{Ninja}}s. And since Fluttershy is now involved, Fleur de Lis enlists her as an ally.
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Fluttershy is surprised, but an even bigger shock is headed her way. While she and Rarity are taking a carriage back to their hotel, it's hijacked--and Fluttershy recognizes the perp as Red Adder, one of Worthy's models! Red Adder attacks her--and then Fancy Pants' girlfriend, supermodel Fleur de Lis, comes out of nowhere to save her! Later, Fleur explains that she's actually a secret agent working for Princess Celestia, and she's here because Fancy Pants and Rarity are both in danger--sort of. Despite his upper class roots, Fancy Pants believes in equality and egalitarianism, and his enemy Worthy is using the fashion show as "an opportunity to prove the nobility's superiority, and to win hearts and minds from Fancy's cause." To help accomplish this, she plans to destroy Rarity's career--along career with the help of her "models", who are actually three highly-trained {{Ninja}}s. And since Fluttershy is now involved, Fleur de Lis enlists her as an ally.
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-->'''Fluttershy:''' [[LameComeback Well, it would have scared]] ''[[LameComeback me]]''.
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Rarity goes to Canterlot to display her latest fashions at the first annual Equestrian Fashion Forum, which is sponsored by Fancy Pants. She persuades Fluttershy to come "out of retirement" to model the new designs, despite her bad experience [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E20GreenIsntYourColor last time]]. One of the other designers is Miss Worthy, who brings three models with her (the rules allow only one). A resident of [[UsefulNotes/NewYorkCity Mane]][[BigApplesauce hattan]] and "a relation of old royalty", Worthy is also a bigoted {{Jerkass}} who insults Rarity because she takes a dim view of "mud ponies" from rural villages. Although the Forum isn't a competition and Rarity already came with a new set of designs, she resolves to come up with even better ideas just to outdo Worthy.
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-->'''Worthy:''' Certainly, a pony so proud of her rural heritage wouldn't ''put on airs'' and speak with a false accent just to make herself feel better about her mud pony roots... Why, one should think that ''any'' pony so pathetic as to affect a Manehattan accent to cover her natural one must have some rather ''severe'' self-image issues.
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-->'''Worthy:''' Certainly, a pony so proud of her rural heritage wouldn't ''put on airs'' and speak with a false accent just to make herself feel better about her mud pony roots...roots.... Why, one should think that ''any'' pony so pathetic as to affect a Manehattan accent to cover her natural one must have some rather ''severe'' self-image issues.
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* EyeTwitch: How Rarity responds to this speech, along with [[{{Angrish}} stammering]] "Why... you...".
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* EyeTwitch: How Rarity responds to this Worthy's insulting speech, along with [[{{Angrish}} stammering]] "Why... you...".