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Unfortunately, this story seems to have disappeared from Fan Fiction dot net. If anyone can point to a backup file of it, it would be very appreciated.
net, but [[https://web.archive.org/web/20120414131609/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/Falling_The_Fate_of_Ahsoka_Tano still available]] on [[Website/InternetArchive The Wayback Machine]].
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* BiTheWay: Ahsoka having a crush on Anakin, becomes FriendsWithBenefits with Barriss in Chapter 12.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/bFalling_b_The_bFate_b_of_bAhsoka_b_Tano Falling: The Fate of Ahsoka Tano]]''''' is a ''StarWarsTheCloneWars'' FanFic written by Lion Lad. It tells the story of Ahsoka developing a [[HotForTeacher crush on her master]], [[TheChosenOne Anakin Skywalker]], and (presumably) going over to TheDarkSide because of it. Notable for its diverse roster of {{original character}}s, including a group of Ahsoka's friends from the Jedi Temple and a menagerie of psychotic Jedi-hating villains.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/bFalling_b_The_bFate_b_of_bAhsoka_b_Tano Falling: The Fate of Ahsoka Tano]]''''' is a ''StarWarsTheCloneWars'' ''WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars'' FanFic written by Lion Lad. It tells the story of Ahsoka developing a [[HotForTeacher crush on her master]], [[TheChosenOne Anakin Skywalker]], and (presumably) going over to TheDarkSide because of it. Notable for its diverse roster of {{original character}}s, including a group of Ahsoka's friends from the Jedi Temple and a menagerie of psychotic Jedi-hating villains.
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** At one point, Anakin goes undercover as "Captain [[IndianaJones Indy]] [[Creator/HarrisonFord Ford]]".
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** At one point, Anakin goes undercover as "Captain [[IndianaJones [[Franchise/IndianaJones Indy]] [[Creator/HarrisonFord Ford]]".
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* BiTheWay: Ahsoka having a crush on Anakin, becomes FriendsWithBenefits with Barriss in Chapter 12.
* FantasticArousal: During their undercover meeting with the informant on Mustafar, Anakin -pretending to be her lecherous slaver, and [[IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn unaware of how sensitive it is]]- starts stroking Ahsoka's hind headtail, to the girl's great discomfort.
* FantasticArousal: During their undercover meeting with the informant on Mustafar, Anakin -pretending to be her lecherous slaver, and [[IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn unaware of how sensitive it is]]- starts stroking Ahsoka's hind headtail, to the girl's great discomfort.
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** At one point, Anakin goes undercover as "Captain [[IndianaJones Indy]] [[Creator/HarrisonFord Ford]]"Ford]]".
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* SpyCatsuit: Ahsoka dons one for the aforementioned undercover mission.
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* SpyCatsuit: Ahsoka dons one for the aforementioned undercover mission.mission, and it's impracticality is almost immediately lampshaded, as she finds it suffocating and bunching up constantly in awkward places.
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TRS wick cleaning
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* EstrogenBrigadeBait: Anakin, In-Universe
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* OriginalCharacter: Several highly developed ones. Ahsoka's fellow teenage Jedi-in-training include a polite Gungan, a hyperactive Rodian, a somber Zabrak girl with strong political inclinations, and a Wookiee. There's also a nasty group of criminals who despise the Jedi, including a mutated clone with MismatchedEyes, a Nautolan FemmeFatale and a Bothan with a colorfully SplitPersonality.
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* OriginalCharacter: Several highly developed ones. Ahsoka's fellow teenage Jedi-in-training include a polite Gungan, a hyperactive Rodian, a somber Zabrak girl with strong political inclinations, and a Wookiee. There's also a nasty group of criminals who despise the Jedi, including a mutated clone with MismatchedEyes, heterochromia, a Nautolan FemmeFatale and a Bothan with a colorfully SplitPersonality.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 mentions "[[HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Master Lupin's]] [[HarryPotter Defense Against the Dark Side]] classes."
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 mentions "[[HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban "[[Literature/HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Master Lupin's]] [[HarryPotter [[Franchise/HarryPotter Defense Against the Dark Side]] classes."
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—[[CompleteMonster Maverick]], rogue clone
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namespace, yo...
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** At one point, Anakin goes undercover as "Captain [[IndianaJones Indy]] [[HarrisonFord Ford]]"
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Maverick is quite charming, even though he's probably going to rape/torture you.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Maverick is quite charming, even though he's probably going to rape/torture torture you.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/bFalling_b_The_bFate_b_of_bAhsoka_b_Tano Falling: The Fate of Ahsoka Tano]]''''' is a ''StarWarsTheCloneWars'' FanFic written by Lion Lad. It tells the story of Ahsoka developing a [[HotForTeacher crush on her master]], [[ChosenOne Anakin Skywalker]], and (presumably) going over to TheDarkSide because of it. Notable for its diverse roster of {{original character}}s, including a group of Ahsoka's friends from the Jedi Temple and a menagerie of psychotic Jedi-hating villains.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/bFalling_b_The_bFate_b_of_bAhsoka_b_Tano Falling: The Fate of Ahsoka Tano]]''''' is a ''StarWarsTheCloneWars'' FanFic written by Lion Lad. It tells the story of Ahsoka developing a [[HotForTeacher crush on her master]], [[ChosenOne [[TheChosenOne Anakin Skywalker]], and (presumably) going over to TheDarkSide because of it. Notable for its diverse roster of {{original character}}s, including a group of Ahsoka's friends from the Jedi Temple and a menagerie of psychotic Jedi-hating villains.
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* FetishFuel: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by a villainous OC while unzipping poor Ahsoka's bodysuit. He comments to his minion (also a Togruta) about how it must turn him on.
* MoodWhiplash: In one sentence, Chapter 4 goes from a charming (if awkward) moment between Ahsoka and Anakin to Ahsoka picking her SpyCatsuit wedgie.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 mentions "[[HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Master Lupin's]] [[HarryPotter Defence Against the Dark Side]] classes."
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 mentions "[[HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Master Lupin's]] [[HarryPotter Defence Defense Against the Dark Side]] classes."
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* SpyCatsuit: Ahsoka dons one for the aforementioned undercover mission... [[MostWritersAreMale for some reason]]
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* EvillyAffable: Maverick is quite charming, even though he's probably going to rape/torture you.
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* OriginalGeneration: Commendable for its highly developed OCs: Ahsoka's fellow teenage Jedi-in-training include a polite Gungan, a hyperactive Rodian, a somber Zabrak girl and a Wookiee. There's also a nasty group of villains who despise the Jedi, including a mutated clone with MismatchedEyes, a Nautolan FemmeFatale and a Bothan with a colorfully SplitPersonality.
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* OriginalGeneration: Commendable for its OriginalCharacter: Several highly developed OCs: ones. Ahsoka's fellow teenage Jedi-in-training include a polite Gungan, a hyperactive Rodian, a somber Zabrak girl with strong political inclinations, and a Wookiee. There's also a nasty group of villains criminals who despise the Jedi, including a mutated clone with MismatchedEyes, a Nautolan FemmeFatale and a Bothan with a colorfully SplitPersonality.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/bFalling_b_The_bFate_b_of_bAhsoka_b_Tano Falling: The Fate of Ahsoka Tano]]''''' is a ''StarWarsTheCloneWars'' FanFic written by Lion Lad. It tells the story of Ahsoka developing a [[HotForTeacher crush on her master]], [[ChosenOne Anakin Skywalker]], and (presumably) going over to TheDarkSide because of it. Notable for its diverse roster of {{original character}}s, including a group of Ahsoka's friends from the Jedi Temple, and a menagerie of psychotic Jedi-hating villains.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/bFalling_b_The_bFate_b_of_bAhsoka_b_Tano Falling: The Fate of Ahsoka Tano]]''''' is a ''StarWarsTheCloneWars'' FanFic written by Lion Lad. It tells the story of Ahsoka developing a [[HotForTeacher crush on her master]], [[ChosenOne Anakin Skywalker]], and (presumably) going over to TheDarkSide because of it. Notable for its diverse roster of {{original character}}s, including a group of Ahsoka's friends from the Jedi Temple, Temple and a menagerie of psychotic Jedi-hating villains.
* EstrogenBrigadeBait: Anakin, In-Universe
* FetishFuel: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by a villainous OC while unzipping poor Ahsoka's bodysuit. He comments to his minion (also a Togruta) about how it must turn him on.
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* OriginalGeneration: Commendable for its highly developed OCs.OCs: Ahsoka's fellow teenage Jedi-in-training include a polite Gungan, a hyperactive Rodian, a somber Zabrak girl and a Wookiee. There's also a nasty group of villains who despise the Jedi, including a mutated clone with MismatchedEyes, a Nautolan FemmeFatale and a Bothan with a colorfully SplitPersonality.
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* DidTheResearch: One of the characters is a crab-like being called a Tarc. As the author points out, the [[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Tarc Tarc]] are an actual ExpandedUniverse race.
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** Also Anakin goes undercover as "Captain [[IndianaJones Indy]] [[HarrisonFord Ford]]"Ford]]"
* SpyCatsuit: Ahsoka dons one for the aforementioned undercover mission... [[MostWritersAreMale for some reason]]
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 mentions "[[HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Master Lupin's]] [[HarryPotter Defence Against the Dark Side]] classes."
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PrecociousCrush
* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 mentions "[[HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Master Lupin's]] [[HarryPotter Defence Against the Dark Side]] classes.""
** Also Anakin goes undercover as "Captain [[IndianaJones Indy]] [[HarrisonFord Ford]]"
* ShoutOut: Chapter 3 mentions "[[HarryPotterAndThePrisonerOfAzkaban Master Lupin's]] [[HarryPotter Defence Against the Dark Side]] classes.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/bFalling_b_The_bFate_b_of_bAhsoka_b_Tano Falling: The Fate of Ahsoka Tano]]''''' is a ''StarWarsTheCloneWars'' FanFic written by Lion Lad.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6324534/1/bFalling_b_The_bFate_b_of_bAhsoka_b_Tano Falling: The Fate of Ahsoka Tano]]''''' is a ''StarWarsTheCloneWars'' FanFic written by Lion Lad.
Lad. It tells the story of Ahsoka developing a [[HotForTeacher crush on her master]], [[ChosenOne Anakin Skywalker]], and (presumably) going over to TheDarkSide because of it. Notable for its diverse roster of {{original character}}s, including a group of Ahsoka's friends from the Jedi Temple, and a menagerie of psychotic Jedi-hating villains.
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* EvillyAffable: Maverick is quite charming, even though he's probably going to rape you.
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* DidTheResearch: One of the characters is a crab-like being called a Tarc. As the author points out, the [[http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Tarc Tarc]] are an actual ExpandedUniverse race.
* EvillyAffable: Maverick is quite charming, even though he's probably going torape you.rape/torture you.
* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 4 goes from a charming (if awkward) moment between Ahsoka and Anakin
* OriginalGeneration: Commendable for its highly developed OCs.
* PrecociousCrush:
* EvillyAffable: Maverick is quite charming, even though he's probably going to
* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 4 goes from a charming (if awkward) moment between Ahsoka and Anakin
* OriginalGeneration: Commendable for its highly developed OCs.
* PrecociousCrush: