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* RatedMForManly: As stated by Guile, a young man like him mustn't lose to an old lady.
** Guile himself. For starters, he's BloodKnight. He hunts for bounties (more challenge, better), beats the crooks with GoodOldFisticuffs, drinks in the bar, finds new bounties, and so on. He feels bored when he isn't doing any of that.
** Guile himself. For starters, he's BloodKnight. He hunts for bounties (more challenge, better), beats the crooks with GoodOldFisticuffs, drinks in the bar, finds new bounties, and so on. He feels bored when he isn't doing any of that.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: See RapeAsBackstory.
* DeadlyDisc: Trashcan lid.
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* MrExposition: Jijimon.
** Gabumon also qualifies.
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* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice King]]: Guile starts off cold and apathetic towards Gabumon, but when he's seriously injured during the fight against [=RedVegiemon=], Gabumon is concerned about him. He calls out to Guile, which thaws Guile out and enables him to flip the table.
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* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice King]]: DefrostingIceQueen: Guile starts off cold and apathetic towards Gabumon, but when he's seriously injured during the fight against [=RedVegiemon=], Gabumon is concerned about him. He calls out to Guile, which thaws Guile out and enables him to flip the table.
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** While this has yet to be revealed, it may play a role in Guile's insecurity towards strangers.
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*** In short, Guile is a badass HotBlooded BloodKnight BountyHunter who beats up crooks with GoodOldFisticuffs and often spends time drinking in a bar.
* ShockAndAwe: [=ModokiBetamon=].
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*** In short, Guile is a {{Badass}} HotBlooded BloodKnight BountyHunter who beats up crooks with GoodOldFisticuffs and often spends time drinking in a bar.
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*** In short, Guile is a {{Badass}} badass HotBlooded BloodKnight BountyHunter who beats up crooks with GoodOldFisticuffs and often spends time drinking in a bar.
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* {{Badass}}: Guile. Takes out two vandals with GoodOldFisticuffs. The said vandals are using magic against him. He suffers some burns and bruises from the battle, but he considers the pain as 'paltry irritation that can be eliminated with low level magic spell'.
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** Agumon's Pepper Breath is shooting {{Fireball}}.
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** Agumon's Pepper Breath is shooting {{Fireball}}.{{Fireballs}}.
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* [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting Ice King]]: Guile starts off cold and apathetic towards Gabumon, but when he's seriously injured during the fight against [=RedVegiemon=], Gabumon is concerned about him. He calls out to Guile, which thaws Guile out and enables him to flip the table.
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* GreenThumb: Palmon.
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** When [=RedVegiemon=] has just finished talking about Digimon level and is revealed to be a Champion level Digimon, Guile simply boots him on the face before taunting him.
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* MadeOfIron: Guile, despite being a wizard. Thrashed by [=RedVegiemon's=] mace-like tentacles, took [=RedVegiemon's=] Rotten Rainballs in point-blank range, and then thrashed again by [=RedVegiemon's=] tentacles. Guile's endurance surprised [=RedVegiemon=] and impressed Gabumon.
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** Gabumon also qualifies.
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* PoisonousPerson: [=RedVegiemon=] Guile gets hit by his Rotten Rainballs point-blank and is severely weakened.
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* RapeAsBackstory: Poor Guile. This turns him into a cranky guy, as suspected by Fortuna.
** While this has yet to be revealed, it may play a role in Guile's insecurity towards strangers.
* RapeDiscretionShot: Fortuna has seen it in chapter 2 by 'reading' Guile, but we're seeing things through Guile's point-of-view. And then, in chapter 3, it's cut off in Fortuna's mind when she recalls it.
** While this has yet to be revealed, it may play a role in Guile's insecurity towards strangers.
* RapeDiscretionShot: Fortuna has seen it in chapter 2 by 'reading' Guile, but we're seeing things through Guile's point-of-view. And then, in chapter 3, it's cut off in Fortuna's mind when she recalls it.
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** Guile's spell, Lightning Wave.
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* SquishyWizard: Guile averts this. The aversion may be justified, as Guile's job as a BountyHunter requires him to incapacitate crooks instead of killing them. Knowing an arsenal of deadly spells, Guile chooses to rely on GoodOldFisticuffs to avoid killing the crooks.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Guile appears to have one. Has yet to be revealed.
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* IWorkAlone: Fortuna suggests Guile to work together with her and later split the bounty in half, but Guile refuses.
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*** In short, Guile is a {{Badass}} HotBlooded BloodKnight BountyHunter who beats up crooks with GoodOldFisticuffs and often spends time drinking in a bar.
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** Agumon's Pepper Breath is shooting {{Fireball}}.
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** Guile himself. For starters, he's BloodKnight. He hunts for bounties (more challenge, better), beats the crooks with GoodOldFisticuffs, drinks in the bar, finds new bounties, and so on. He feels bored when he isn't doing any of that.
*ShoutOut: ShockAndAwe: [=ModokiBetamon=].
* ShoutOut:
** [[Anime/DigimonAdventure And so it begins...]]]]
** [[VideoGame/DigimonWorld "This is my territory!"]] Remember the [=ModokiBetamon=] right below Green Gym in the game?
* TechnicolorFire: Gabumon's Blue Blaster.
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** [[Anime/DigimonAdventure And so it begins...
** [[VideoGame/DigimonWorld "This is my territory!"]] Remember the [=ModokiBetamon=] right below Green Gym in the game?
* TechnicolorFire: Gabumon's Blue Blaster.
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Unbeknownst to him, the said portal actually leads to Digital World...
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Unbeknownst to him, the said portal actually leads to Digital World...
World... And so it begins.
* AudienceSurrogate: This fanfic is written in third person limited [=POV=], so we're basically seeing what Guile sees and reads what [[DeadpanSnarker snarks]] he has got in his mind.
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* TheQuietOne: Guile.
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''Fanfic/EnterDigitalWorld'' is a ''VideoGame/ChronoCross'' and ''Franchise/{{Digimon}}'' crossover FanFic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6279214/ impmontamer03]]. This fanfic is set on 1016 AD, or exactly four years before Chrono Cross event, while the Digimon universe is loosely based on ''VideoGame/DigimonWorld''. This project began on 13th February 2015, and the first chapter was published on 14th February 2015.
Guile spends his days at Magic Guild fighting vandals for bounty and drinking in the bar (while searching for new bounty to hunt). After turning in two crooks for 2,000G, Guile starts to think that he's getting easy money and that isn't fun. He decides to eavesdrop in the bar and later, on the streets for a more challenging and rewarding bounty quest.
Guile soon learns about a bounty quest that offers 1,000,000G for the one who can find Nicholas, the great mage of Magic Guild who has been missing for several months. Interested in the challenge and the reward, Guile sets off to Nicholas' house after learning that Nicholas has probably entered a portal he created in his house.
Unbeknownst to him, the said portal actually leads to Digital World...
Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11044557/1/Enter-Digital-World here]].
!!Provides examples of:
* {{Badass}}: Guile. Takes out two vandals with GoodOldFisticuffs. The said vandals are using magic against him. He suffers some burns and bruises from the battle, but he considers the pain as 'paltry irritation that can be eliminated with low level magic spell'.
* BloodKnight: Guile doesn't like hunting petty crooks for bounty. This is also why he ends up at Digital World.
* BountyHunter: Guile's job.
* GoodOldFisticuffs: Guile's fighting style.
* HotBlooded: Despite being a lonely, quiet guy, Guile is reckless.
* InMediasRes: The story opens with Guile fighting against two vandals.
* PlayingWithFire: The vandals in the beginning of the story attacks with burning fists.
Guile spends his days at Magic Guild fighting vandals for bounty and drinking in the bar (while searching for new bounty to hunt). After turning in two crooks for 2,000G, Guile starts to think that he's getting easy money and that isn't fun. He decides to eavesdrop in the bar and later, on the streets for a more challenging and rewarding bounty quest.
Guile soon learns about a bounty quest that offers 1,000,000G for the one who can find Nicholas, the great mage of Magic Guild who has been missing for several months. Interested in the challenge and the reward, Guile sets off to Nicholas' house after learning that Nicholas has probably entered a portal he created in his house.
Unbeknownst to him, the said portal actually leads to Digital World...
Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11044557/1/Enter-Digital-World here]].
!!Provides examples of:
* {{Badass}}: Guile. Takes out two vandals with GoodOldFisticuffs. The said vandals are using magic against him. He suffers some burns and bruises from the battle, but he considers the pain as 'paltry irritation that can be eliminated with low level magic spell'.
* BloodKnight: Guile doesn't like hunting petty crooks for bounty. This is also why he ends up at Digital World.
* BountyHunter: Guile's job.
* GoodOldFisticuffs: Guile's fighting style.
* HotBlooded: Despite being a lonely, quiet guy, Guile is reckless.
* InMediasRes: The story opens with Guile fighting against two vandals.
* PlayingWithFire: The vandals in the beginning of the story attacks with burning fists.
