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** Chapter 9: Survival training in the Academy is explained.


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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: Shikako thinks that part of the training in the Academy is desensitizing the students to better prepare them for the realities of being a ninja.
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* LaserBlade: The Sword of the Thunder God. It's similarity to a [[StarWars lightsaber]] is [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by Shikako.

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* LaserBlade: The Sword of the Thunder God. It's similarity to a [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars lightsaber]] is [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by Shikako.
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--> Civilians have odd expectations for ninja. They expect us to dress in black, wear masks, and carry lots of weaponry. In short, they expect us to look like ANBU. Which is ironic, because to civilians, ANBU don't exist and they certainly don't take missions.\\
To a civilian bright, blinding orange wasn't an appropriate colour for a ninja. Therefore, it was actually a perfect colour for a ninja. Oh, sure, it stood out like hell in a forest, but the fact was, most of our time spent hiding wasn't among trees - it was among ''other people''. The best ninja is the one you can't tell from a civilian.\\
It confounded their expectations. A tall guy dressed head to toe in black carrying a small armoury? Ninja. Small, loud blond kid in orange? Are you kidding? Ninja were invisible not because of jutsu (most of the time) but because they looked just like normal people.\\
That was the whole point. Even the standard Jounin-Chunin 'uniform' looked like normal civilian clothes. It took someone familiar with ninja to recognise the flack jacket as something other than a vest. And frankly, a fellow ninja was more likely to recognise your chakra than your clothes.


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* {{Irony}}: An in-universe example with what civilians expect ninja to be. Shikako notes that civilians expect people who are dressed up as ANBU. She says that this is ironic because the ANBU don't take missions from civilians due to the fact that to the latter, the former don't exist.
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* HighlyVisibleNinja: Played with. Shikako notes in Chapter 9 that wearing clothes that are good for stealth is less important than blending in with a civilian population.

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* HighlyVisibleNinja: Played with.Jusified. Shikako notes in Chapter 9 that wearing clothes that are good for stealth is less important than blending in with a civilian population.

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** Chapter 8: The Chakra Pathway System is expanded upon a bit.
---> Channelling chakra through your feet was supposedly one of the most difficult ways of channelling chakra. That was because most people moulded chakra in the Hara, the centre of energies located near the stomach, and then transported it through the body to the point they wanted to emit it. This required them to keep tight control over the moulded energy or risk losing or wasting energy as it travelled.

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The Chakra Pathway System chakra pathway system is expanded upon a bit.
---> ----> Channelling chakra through your feet was supposedly one of the most difficult ways of channelling chakra. That was because most people moulded chakra in the Hara, the centre of energies located near the stomach, and then transported it through the body to the point they wanted to emit it. This required them to keep tight control over the moulded energy or risk losing or wasting energy as it travelled.travelled.
*** How fuinjutsu works and some of the different kinds are explained.
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* GeometricMagic: Fuinjutsu are jutsus that use writings and symbols, known as seals, to create an effect. There are various kinds of these, and few are able to master them. Skilled users of fuinjutsu are able to [[InstantRunes create and modify seals with just their hands]].

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* GeometricMagic: Fuinjutsu are jutsus jutsu that use writings and symbols, known as seals, to create an effect. There are various kinds of these, and few are able to master them. Skilled users of fuinjutsu are able to [[InstantRunes create and modify seals with just their hands]].
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** Chapter 8: The Chakra Pathway System is expanded upon a bit.
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* InASingleBound: Chapter 8 reveals that this is called the Leaping Monkey technique.



* WalkOnWater: This is a basic ability that can be done by any ninja through training with chakra control.

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* WalkOnWater: This is a basic ability that The Water Walking technique can be done by any ninja through enough training with chakra control.
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* WalkOnWater: This is a basic ability that can be done by any ninja through training with chakra control.
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* TrueCompanions: Team 7 - the bond here is stronger than in canon thanks to Shikako establishing the traditions of post-fight discussions to critique on another on each others abilities, and post-mission dinner celebrations at the Nara Residence. To a lesser extent, the Rookie Nine are all fairly close friends and acquaintances.

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* TrueCompanions: Team 7 - the bond here is stronger than in canon thanks to Shikako establishing the traditions of post-fight discussions to critique on another on each others abilities, and post-mission dinner celebrations at the Nara Residence. To a lesser extent, the Rookie Nine Leaf Twelve are all fairly close friends and acquaintances.

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* NoodleIncident: Shikamaru threatens Sasuke [[spoiler:after he hurt Shikako while under the effect of the curse seal.]] We don't get to find out what he said, but it made Sasuke nervous around him.
** Also, we never find out exactly what earned Shikako her reputation as a MadBomber.

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* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
** In Chapter 6, Ino alludes to something that Shikako did in the Academy. All we know is that it involved Shikako attempting to create and modify exploding tags.
---> '''Ino:''' You just had that look on your face. You know, 'some one has done something interesting and I must find out why'!\\
'''Shikako:''' That's a look?\\
'''Ino:''' Right up there with 'this book is interesting' and 'I just had an idea about how to make things explode'.\\
'''Shikako:''' I don't explode things! [[IResembleThatRemark Often.]]\\
'''Ino:''' Exploding tags. That's all I'm going to say
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Shikamaru threatens Sasuke [[spoiler:after he hurt Shikako while under the effect of the curse seal.]] We don't get to find out what he said, but it made Sasuke nervous around him.
** Also, we never find out exactly what earned Shikako her reputation as a MadBomber.
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%%* TruthInTelevision: Shikako's description of karate philosophy is actually accurate.
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** Chapter 115: [[spoiler:Shikamaru loses his arm, on a mission Shikako commanded]].

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** Chapter 115: 113: [[spoiler:Shikamaru loses his arm, on a mission Shikako commanded]].
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* HiddenPurposeTest: The story has a few of these, as in canon.
** The first is the bell test. Shikako realizes the real purpose of both the order to not eat and the bell test. She explains to Naruto and Sasuke the former before their test begins and the latter after it is over.
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* FlashStep: The Body Flicker Jutsu allows this. It comes in two variations: a shorter less controlled combat version, and the longer version most ninja used for transport.
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Now that I thought about it… it wasn't something that had been covered in the Academy ''explicitly''. It was just… there. Implicit in everything; ninja work in teams. Something you just knew from family, from stories. It wasn't something that you got told.

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Now that I thought about it… it wasn't something that had been covered in the Academy ''explicitly''. It was just… there. Implicit in everything; ninja work in teams. Something you just knew from family, from stories. It wasn't something that you got told.
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** Shiako realizes in Chapter 5 that the Academy doesn't actually say some things that people from ninja families would know due to stories from the latter. This leaves students with civilian families or orphans in a disadvantage, as they wouldn't know the "unspoken rules" of being a ninja.
---> (''about Sasuke'') I could see the 'don't get in my way' written on his face. He clearly didn't like being put on a three person team, and certainly not with Naruto. I found it interesting that he didn't seem to have expected the teams.\\
Now that I thought about it… it wasn't something that had been covered in the Academy ''explicitly''. It was just… there. Implicit in everything; ninja work in teams. Something you just knew from family, from stories. It wasn't something that you got told.

Which left a lot of people out in the cold, civilian kids, orphans… they'd have no idea of the 'unspoken rules'. I hadn't even realised there were any.

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** Chapter 4: The general divisions of Konoha's ninja are given.
---> Ninja in Konoha were divided into three basic sections. ANBU, Medic Corp, and General Operations. ANBU recruited members from the other two sectors and answered only to the Hokage, I didn't know much about their internal structure, nobody did, but it was assumed they were run in small teams led by a Captain. The Medic Corps were divided into two 'sections', the field medics, and the hospital medics, or rather, those that went on missions, and those that didn't. The former were usually recruited from the General Operations, as they had to have some field abilities, while the later could be anyone with the ability to use healing chakra, civilians, academy students, and there were even several clans that focused solely on their healing skills and never produced a field ready shinobi. General Operations was the largest of the three sections, and contained all active duty shinobi. Of course, shinobi never really retired, but there were those that stopped requesting missions, like my mother. Entry into General Operations happened in two ways, the Jounin Squads, which we would be tested for after graduation, and the Genin Corps. If you failed the Jounin test, you went to the Genin Corps and your chances of rising above genin were very low indeed. The Jounin Squads took the budding geniuses, the politically sensitive, the important and those students with the extra ''something'' that made people think they might succeed.

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The general divisions of Konoha's ninja are given.
---> ----> Ninja in Konoha were divided into three basic sections. ANBU, Medic Corp, and General Operations. ANBU recruited members from the other two sectors and answered only to the Hokage, I didn't know much about their internal structure, nobody did, but it was assumed they were run in small teams led by a Captain. The Medic Corps were divided into two 'sections', the field medics, and the hospital medics, or rather, those that went on missions, and those that didn't. The former were usually recruited from the General Operations, as they had to have some field abilities, while the later could be anyone with the ability to use healing chakra, civilians, academy students, and there were even several clans that focused solely on their healing skills and never produced a field ready shinobi. General Operations was the largest of the three sections, and contained all active duty shinobi. Of course, shinobi never really retired, but there were those that stopped requesting missions, like my mother. Entry into General Operations happened in two ways, the Jounin Squads, which we would be tested for after graduation, and the Genin Corps. If you failed the Jounin test, you went to the Genin Corps and your chances of rising above genin were very low indeed. The Jounin Squads took the budding geniuses, the politically sensitive, the important and those students with the extra ''something'' that made people think they might succeed.succeed.
*** Konoha has specific alarms for specific situations.
----> Konoha had an intricate system of alarms, some loud, some quiet, some silent. There were signal hawks and personal messenger pigeons. There were always messenger nin running around the village. The alarm system was coded for everything from invasion to disease outbreak to escaped dogs, and I remember being drilled in the different codes as soon as I could talk.

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* TheBeastmaster: Besides the canon summoners, [[spoiler:Ino becomes the new Chameleon Summoner and Shikako the new Deer Summoner]].



* SummonMagic: Anyone with a Summoning Contract. Includes: all of Team 7, Gai, Jiraiya, Tsunade, Orochimaru, Anko, and [[spoiler:Ino]].

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* SummonMagic: Anyone with a Summoning Contract. Includes: all of Team 7, Gai, Jiraiya, Tsunade, Orochimaru, Anko, Contract can summon an animal to aid them, be it in battle or for support. Besides the canon summoners, [[spoiler:Ino becomes the new Chameleon Summoner and [[spoiler:Ino]].Shikako the new Deer Summoner]].
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** Chapter 4: The general divisions of Konoha's ninja are given.
---> Ninja in Konoha were divided into three basic sections. ANBU, Medic Corp, and General Operations. ANBU recruited members from the other two sectors and answered only to the Hokage, I didn't know much about their internal structure, nobody did, but it was assumed they were run in small teams led by a Captain. The Medic Corps were divided into two 'sections', the field medics, and the hospital medics, or rather, those that went on missions, and those that didn't. The former were usually recruited from the General Operations, as they had to have some field abilities, while the later could be anyone with the ability to use healing chakra, civilians, academy students, and there were even several clans that focused solely on their healing skills and never produced a field ready shinobi. General Operations was the largest of the three sections, and contained all active duty shinobi. Of course, shinobi never really retired, but there were those that stopped requesting missions, like my mother. Entry into General Operations happened in two ways, the Jounin Squads, which we would be tested for after graduation, and the Genin Corps. If you failed the Jounin test, you went to the Genin Corps and your chances of rising above genin were very low indeed. The Jounin Squads took the budding geniuses, the politically sensitive, the important and those students with the extra ''something'' that made people think they might succeed.

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* BeenThereShapedHistory: Team 7 has been involved with arguably 6 separate regime changes at this point; [[spoiler: prevented leadership over throw in the lands of Birds and Moon, helped it in Water and Snow, as for Leaf and Sand, helping to find Tsunade, and helped Gaara put on a show for an international crowd and reform him as canon.]]

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* BeenThereShapedHistory: Team 7 has been involved with arguably 6 separate regime changes at this point; [[spoiler: prevented [[spoiler:prevented leadership over throw in the lands of Birds and Moon, helped it in Water and Snow, as for Leaf and Sand, helping to find Tsunade, and helped Gaara put on a show for an international crowd and reform him as canon.]]]]
* BehavioralConditioning: Shikako notes on how their society turns the occupation of being a ninja into something all children should aspire to attain.
--> It's hard to describe what it was like. Ninja were respected, of course, almost revered in some cases. Even the lowest of genin had standing beyond that of a civilian. Ninja, or clans, with skills could become quite wealthy and that was a draw too. But there was more to it than that. It was almost a sense of patriotism. Ninja ''contributed'' to Konoha. It was both a duty and a honour, concepts which had been foreign to me, but had quickly rooted themselves in my soul. I didn't know any jobs in my home-world that compared. Maybe a hundred years ago that was what it was like to be a soldier, but I had known nothing like it.\\
There was expectation. Children were expected to try to, to ''want'' to, become ninja. To have the skills and ''not'' was nearly unthinkable.\\
That was why Shikamaru was willing to entertain the idea of work. Why Ino, who would rather run the flowershop, and Sakura, who was so self-conscious of her appearance, were training to become killers.\\
That, I reflected wryly, was social conditioning at its finest.
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* RunningGag: Every C-rank or above mission they go on quickly goes to hell and becomes a higher rank mission.
** Shikako and explosives.

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* RunningGag: Every RunningGag:
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C-rank or above mission they go that Team 7 goes on quickly goes to hell and becomes a higher rank mission.
** Shikako and her usage of explosives.
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--> ''This was something I could never have done with ninjutsu. I didn't have the chakra, I didn't have the control, and I didn't have the concentration. The cost was too high. But fuinjutsu was different – you paid in time and knowledge instead. That made it less useful in battle where you so rarely had '''time''', but sometimes. Sometimes it was perfect.''

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--> ''This This was something I could never have done with ninjutsu. I didn't have the chakra, I didn't have the control, and I didn't have the concentration. The cost was too high. But fuinjutsu was different – you paid in time and knowledge instead. That made it less useful in battle where you so rarely had '''time''', ''time'', but sometimes. Sometimes it was perfect.''

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* OneHitKill: The Academy teaches this in the taijutsu classes.
--> 'The easiest way to win a fight is to avoid it'. There is no reason to fight if you don't have to. But if there is, if you have to fight, commit to it 100%. Commit to every action as though it will win the fight. You should throw the first punch and throw the last punch and make sure the two of them are the same strike. In the academy they talked about this, they called it 'Ikken Hissatsu'. 'To kill with one strike'. Here they actually meant it.



--> At the academy we were all taught an adaptation of the basic Konoha-ryu style, called the Shorin-ryu, the 'small forest style'. It was a version of the Konoha based taijutsu style that had been adapted specifically for children and teenagers. It emphasised dodging and deflection with the understanding that any opponents we encountered were likely to be taller, stronger and faster than us. On the surface, it appeared to be a rather simplistic style, with limited numbers of strikes, block and kicks. Of course, given that it was being taught to children, this straightforwardness was probably more an advantage than a disadvantage. There were no flashy moves or complicated locks; things that could easily fall apart in actual combat. It was the basics of the basics, something that we could build on with our family styles, or simply once we left the academy and started gaining personal experience.

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--> ---> At the academy we were all taught an adaptation of the basic Konoha-ryu style, called the Shorin-ryu, the 'small forest style'. It was a version of the Konoha based taijutsu style that had been adapted specifically for children and teenagers. It emphasised dodging and deflection with the understanding that any opponents we encountered were likely to be taller, stronger and faster than us. On the surface, it appeared to be a rather simplistic style, with limited numbers of strikes, block and kicks. Of course, given that it was being taught to children, this straightforwardness was probably more an advantage than a disadvantage. There were no flashy moves or complicated locks; things that could easily fall apart in actual combat. It was the basics of the basics, something that we could build on with our family styles, or simply once we left the academy and started gaining personal experience.
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** Academy students are taught a fighting style that takes into account their smaller sizes and inexperience.
--> At the academy we were all taught an adaptation of the basic Konoha-ryu style, called the Shorin-ryu, the 'small forest style'. It was a version of the Konoha based taijutsu style that had been adapted specifically for children and teenagers. It emphasised dodging and deflection with the understanding that any opponents we encountered were likely to be taller, stronger and faster than us. On the surface, it appeared to be a rather simplistic style, with limited numbers of strikes, block and kicks. Of course, given that it was being taught to children, this straightforwardness was probably more an advantage than a disadvantage. There were no flashy moves or complicated locks; things that could easily fall apart in actual combat. It was the basics of the basics, something that we could build on with our family styles, or simply once we left the academy and started gaining personal experience.
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* GeometricMagic: Seals, or fuinjutsu, are jutsus that use writings and symbols to create an effect. There are various kinds of these, and few master them.

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* GeometricMagic: Seals, or fuinjutsu, Fuinjutsu are jutsus that use writings and symbols symbols, known as seals, to create an effect. There are various kinds of these, and few are able to master them.them. Skilled users of fuinjutsu are able to [[InstantRunes create and modify seals with just their hands]].
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* GeometricMagic: Seals, or fuinjutsu, are jutsus that use writings and symbols to create an effect. There are various kinds of these, and few master them.
--> Seals were the machines of the elemental nations. Seals are Kanji. That surprised me to discover. I had always thought they would involve a specialised alphabet or complex symbols - esoteric lines and circles - but it wasn't. It was Kanji. Yes, there were specific ways in which they should be combined for best effect, but in that manner it was more like writing a contract or telling a story. That was … interesting to learn.\\
Of course, it was limited. It took time and space and ink and paper. Only the very best seal masters could use seals in combat, because they were the only ones that could design or alter and apply a seal with merely a twist of chakra, a hand seal and maybe some blood. Minato Namikaze was lauded as a genius for a reason.
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* ArtisticLicenseMedicine: Shikako lampshades this in her head in Chapter 3, but accepts that medicine could work a little differently from how she understands it due to the fact that she's in a different world.
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*** The Nara clan's membership and duties are expanded upon.
----> The clan was rather large and sprawling. From the show I think I had assumed that Shikamaru's family was the entirety of the Nara clan. It wasn't. In fact, those that lived within the walls of Konoha weren't the entirety of the clan. The Nara ran many farms in Fire country to supply the ingredients for our medicines. Farming took up a great deal of room, and Konoha proper was a walled village. There simply wasn't space.\\
Within Konoha itself, we had a small forested area where we ran a herd of deer, as well as a few workshops that produced our medicine and research.

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