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Disparate Pieces is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfic written by space_trash_princess.
Kylo Ren finds Rey eight weeks after she lands on Ach-to, not long after killing Emperor Snoke and declaring himself Emperor. Kylo has a proposal for Rey: He will allow the resistance to keep Hoth and all other remaining Republic territories, declare a permanent ceasefire, and return all prisoners currently being housed by the First Order back to their friends and families.
In exchange, Rey will stay with Kylo and become his apprentice... and ''companion''.
The fic can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9347093 here]].
!!Disparate Pieces provides the following tropes:
*AdaptationExpansion:
**Rey’s childhood (before and on Jakku) is explored in more detail, as is Ben Solo’s to a lesser extent.
**The fate of Rey’s parents is explored more thoroughly.
**Darth Vader's castle on Mustafar is built on the ancient remains of a Sith temple.
**Hux’s father was involved with Stormtrooper training during the old Empire.
*AdaptationNameChange: Rey’s surname in this fic is Andara rather than [[spoiler:Palpatine]] or [[spoiler:Skywalker]].
*AdultFear: Ben and Rey's infant daughter Lyris gets kidnapped from a place previously believed to be safe.
*AffectionateGestureToTheHead:
**Vassik (the doctor who delivers Lyris) gives Lyris a pat on the head while saying his goodbyes to Ben and Rey.
**Chewie pats Lyris on the head after she attempts to speak Shyriiwook.
*AffectionateNickname: Rey often addresses Lyris as "Starlight".
*AnArmAndALeg: Kylo Ren loses his right arm (already damaged by Rey from [[Film/TheForceAwakens their fight on Starkiller base]]) to a blaster bolt, necessitating its amputation.
*ArtificalLimbs: After his right arm is amputated, Kylo gains an artificial arm.
*AssassinationAttempt/VilianousRescue: A stormtrooper attempts to murder Rey with a blaster only for Kylo to save her at the last second.
TheAtoner: Sev (a former Stormtrooper on Coruscant) escapes and joins the Resistance as penance for his years of service.
*BabysFirstWords: Lyris's first word is “Pa”.
*BearHug: Chewie gives one to Ben after he tells him that he’s proud of him.
*BiteOfAffection: Rey bites Ben on his shoulder as part of their lovemaking after arriving on Kashyyyk.
*BlindfoldedTrip: A variation occurs when Kylo gets a cloth bag over his head while en route to a holding cell at the Resistance base.
*BloodTransfusionPlot: Kylo serves as Rey’s blood donor when Rey goes into premature labor due to a placental abruption.
*CheckovsGun: Hux's dropped code cylinder is picked up by Rey and later used to gain access to an Imperial facility.
*ChildByRape: Lyris, as she was conceived in circumstances of QuestionableConsent.
*TheCoup: Hux stages one against Kylo.
*CreditChip: Kylo has an untraceable one that’s used to purchase things on Cendril and later used to help fund the Resistance.
*DarkIsNotEvil: Rey wears a black dress with black gems upon arriving on Coruscant.
*DeerInTheHeadlights: Finn becomes paralyzed with shock and fear when he encounters Ben on Kashyyyk.
*DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In canon, [[spoiler:Leia]] dies when she uses her force powers to keep her son alive long enough to help Rey defeat [[spoiler:Palpatine]]. Here she’s killed at the base on Hoth when Hux orders it to be bombarded.
*DreamingOfThingsToCome: Part of a nightmare Rey has shortly before giving birth to Lyris involves her daughter being carried out of flames by an unknown male figure. Towards the end of the fic, this part of her dreams comes true.
*DressingAsTheEnemy: A few Resistance members preparing for a raid on an Imperial facility swap wear stolen imperial uniforms.
*TheEmperor: Kylo becomes the new Emperor after killing Emperor Snoke, only for [[spoiler:Hux]] to claim the title of Emperor in a coup. By the end of the fic, the title of Emperor has been returned to Ben Solo.
*FlowerMotifs: The Lyris flower crops up a couple times as a metaphor for good and strong things coming out of a bad situation.
*FreakinessShame: Downplayed with Kylo, who grew his hair out as a child to cover up his ears.
*FriendToAllChildren: Children (and credits) are among the few things that Vassik cares for.
*FrontierDoctor: Vassik works as a doctor on Cendril, a moon in the Outer Rim.
*GemEncrusted: The outfits that Rey and Kylo wear when arriving on Coruscant are encrusted with black gems.
*GildedCage: Rey regards her stay at the Imperial Palace on Coruscant as such.
*GreenEyedMonster: It's implied that Kylo is jealous of Rey's friendship with Finn.
*HandHolding: Rey holds Kylo's hands after he confesses that he regrets killing his father.
*HealingSpring: Kylo and Rey bathe in one. Justified, since the heat and minerals promote muscle regeneration and improve blood flow.
*HeelFaceTurn: Kylo undergoes one after finding out that Rey is pregnant and after the death of [[spoiler:his mother]].
*IntimateHairBrushing: A variant occurs between [[Film/TheStarWarsHolidaySpecial Malla and Waroo]], as the former grooms and pulls out burrs and twigs from the latter’s fur.
*KingIncognito: Rey (The Emperor’s mistress) leaves the palace on Coruscant to experience the greater city without wearing makeup or fancy dresses and goes unrecognized by the general populace.
*KlingonPromotion: Kylo becomes Emperor by killing off Emperor Snoke.
*LadyInWaiting: An older woman named Mal serves as Rey’s handmaiden and stylist during Rey and Kylo’s stay on Coruscant.
*LeonineContract: Rey and Kylo enter into one at the start of the fic that involves Rey staying with Kylo in exchange for the safety of the Resistance.
*LightIsNotGood: Hux is the fic’s main antagonist and wears white as Emperor.
*MeaningfulName: Lyris’s name is chosen in reference to the Lyris flowers that were present at the hot spring where she was likely conceived, as well as being a good thing that came out of a bad situation (like the Lyris growing in the bowels of a Sith castle).
*MeaningfulRename: Kylo Ren goes back to using his original name of Ben Solo after Lyris is born.
*MetaphoricalMarriage: Ben “marries” Rey with the Japor snippet that [[Film/ThePhantomMenace Anakin carved for Padmé]].
*NeverRecycleABuilding: The Resistance uses the old Rebel base on Hoth as their base of operations.
*OrbitalBombardment: Gentry fires the super weapon of a mothership down on Coruscant with the intent of killing both Ben and Hux. [[Spoiler:A large part of the palace is destroyed, and Hux is killed when the ceiling collapses.]]
*OriginalCharacters: Mal Tarilla, Kalen and Mila Andara, Major Kalonia, Vassik Cherrim, Karé Kun, Ziff, L’ulo, Sev, Pamich Nerro.
*PatchworkFic: Although the fic is set in the new canon, [[Franchise/StarWarsLegends Meerians]] make an aappearance as slave labor on Vorisk.
*PatchworkKids: Lyris has Rey’s eyes and Ben’s hair.
*PetTheDog: Even before his proper HeelFaceTurn, Kylo decides to dissolve the Stormtrooper program with the intent of making reparations to those personally affected by the program.
*PhysicalTherapyPlot: Finn needs to undergo physical therapy after fighting with Kylo on Starkiller base.
*PimpedOutDress: Of the dresses described, one is encrusted with black gems and has a gauzy skirt while the other garments are described as being “beaded”.
*PointOfView: The fic is written in Third Person-Limited perspective, focusing on Rey’s experiences in the Galaxy.
*PrematureBirthDrama: Lyris is born two months early and with respiratory issues.
*PunchAWall: Kylo repeatedly punches the wall of the ‘fresher after Hux reminds him of the fact that he coerced Rey into his bed.
*PurpleIsPowerful: While reintroducing himself to the Galaxy as Emperor Ben Solo, he wears a purple cloak.
*QuestionableConsent: All of Rey and Kylo’s sexual interactions in the first part of the fic fall under this category.
*TheReveal:
**Rey's parents have been dead since not long after they dropped her off on Jakku, having been accidentally killed by [[spoiler:Luke]] during a skirmish.
**[[spoiler:Luke]] is the figure who carries Lyris out of the flames.
*ShoutOut/MythologyGag: Finn’s barracks is room [[Film/Thx1138 1138]].
*ShowerOfAngst: Rey takes a bath after her first time with Kylo, feeling defiled.
*ShrineToTheFallen: Kylo has one consisting of items significant to Darth Vader such as his helmet and Anakin’s lightsaber.
*SickeningCrunch: When Kylo kills a Stormtrooper who attempts to murder Rey, the Stormtrooper’s head makes a hollow cracking noise when it’s slammed against the pavement.
*SingleBiomePlanet: Cendril is described as “an endless forest of black leaves”.
*SlasherSmile: The enforcer smiles morbidly before interrogating Poe.
*SparedByTheAdaptation:
** In canon, [[spoiler:Luke]] dies protecting the Resistance from Kylo Ren. Here he survives through the end of the story.
**In ''Film/TheRiseOfSkywalker'', [[spoiler:Kylo Ren]] dies while fighting [[spoiler:Palpatine]]. Here he survives through the end of the story.
*SpitefulSpit: Poe spits blood on an enforcer’s boots in response to being asked where the Resistance’s base is and who sent him.
*StealthHiBye: Rey is so absorbed in looking for clothing that she fails to notice Kylo until his artificial arm joins hers in a basket of clothes.
*StockholmSyndrome: Averted, Rey falls in love with Ben after their deal is called off.
*StrongFamilyResemblance: Aside from sharing her mother’s eyes, Lyris looks remarkably similar to a young Ben Solo.
*SurprisePregnancy: Rey discovers that she’s pregnant with Lyris five months into her pregnancy.
*ThatManIsDead: When the enforcer expresses surprise that Kylo Ren is alive, Ben responds:
----'''Ben''': Kylo Ren is dead. My name is Ben Solo.
*TheirFirstTime: Rey’s first time with Kylo is unfulfilling and initially painful for her.
*TrojanPrisoner: Finn volunteers to be a prisoner so that he can get close to Hux.
*UndergroundRailroad: Finn, Poe, and Wexley set up an underground network for defecting stormtroopers to escape into Resistance territory.
*UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: There’s no indication that Rey is related to [[spoiler:Palpatine]], her canonical grandfather.
TheUnreveal: We never find out why none of the staff at Mustafar's command center stopped Rey from escaping, nor do we find out why the shields were down.
*VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: The flint mice on Cendril have six legs.
*WhenSheSmiles: After seeing Rey smile while enjoying herself in the marketplace—the first time during their arrangement—Kylo's first thought when a stormtrooper tries to murder her is that he fears that she’ll never smile like that again.
*YouKilledMyFather: Karé’s motivation for joining the Resistance? The First Order killed her father.
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Kylo Ren finds Rey eight weeks after she lands on Ach-to, not long after killing Emperor Snoke and declaring himself Emperor. Kylo has a proposal for Rey: He will allow the resistance to keep Hoth and all other remaining Republic territories, declare a permanent ceasefire, and return all prisoners currently being housed by the First Order back to their friends and families.
In exchange, Rey will stay with Kylo and become his apprentice... and ''companion''.
The fic can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9347093 here]].
!!Disparate Pieces provides the following tropes:
*AdaptationExpansion:
**Rey’s childhood (before and on Jakku) is explored in more detail, as is Ben Solo’s to a lesser extent.
**The fate of Rey’s parents is explored more thoroughly.
**Darth Vader's castle on Mustafar is built on the ancient remains of a Sith temple.
**Hux’s father was involved with Stormtrooper training during the old Empire.
*AdaptationNameChange: Rey’s surname in this fic is Andara rather than [[spoiler:Palpatine]] or [[spoiler:Skywalker]].
*AdultFear: Ben and Rey's infant daughter Lyris gets kidnapped from a place previously believed to be safe.
*AffectionateGestureToTheHead:
**Vassik (the doctor who delivers Lyris) gives Lyris a pat on the head while saying his goodbyes to Ben and Rey.
**Chewie pats Lyris on the head after she attempts to speak Shyriiwook.
*AffectionateNickname: Rey often addresses Lyris as "Starlight".
*AnArmAndALeg: Kylo Ren loses his right arm (already damaged by Rey from [[Film/TheForceAwakens their fight on Starkiller base]]) to a blaster bolt, necessitating its amputation.
*ArtificalLimbs: After his right arm is amputated, Kylo gains an artificial arm.
*AssassinationAttempt/VilianousRescue: A stormtrooper attempts to murder Rey with a blaster only for Kylo to save her at the last second.
TheAtoner: Sev (a former Stormtrooper on Coruscant) escapes and joins the Resistance as penance for his years of service.
*BabysFirstWords: Lyris's first word is “Pa”.
*BearHug: Chewie gives one to Ben after he tells him that he’s proud of him.
*BiteOfAffection: Rey bites Ben on his shoulder as part of their lovemaking after arriving on Kashyyyk.
*BlindfoldedTrip: A variation occurs when Kylo gets a cloth bag over his head while en route to a holding cell at the Resistance base.
*BloodTransfusionPlot: Kylo serves as Rey’s blood donor when Rey goes into premature labor due to a placental abruption.
*CheckovsGun: Hux's dropped code cylinder is picked up by Rey and later used to gain access to an Imperial facility.
*ChildByRape: Lyris, as she was conceived in circumstances of QuestionableConsent.
*TheCoup: Hux stages one against Kylo.
*CreditChip: Kylo has an untraceable one that’s used to purchase things on Cendril and later used to help fund the Resistance.
*DarkIsNotEvil: Rey wears a black dress with black gems upon arriving on Coruscant.
*DeerInTheHeadlights: Finn becomes paralyzed with shock and fear when he encounters Ben on Kashyyyk.
*DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In canon, [[spoiler:Leia]] dies when she uses her force powers to keep her son alive long enough to help Rey defeat [[spoiler:Palpatine]]. Here she’s killed at the base on Hoth when Hux orders it to be bombarded.
*DreamingOfThingsToCome: Part of a nightmare Rey has shortly before giving birth to Lyris involves her daughter being carried out of flames by an unknown male figure. Towards the end of the fic, this part of her dreams comes true.
*DressingAsTheEnemy: A few Resistance members preparing for a raid on an Imperial facility swap wear stolen imperial uniforms.
*TheEmperor: Kylo becomes the new Emperor after killing Emperor Snoke, only for [[spoiler:Hux]] to claim the title of Emperor in a coup. By the end of the fic, the title of Emperor has been returned to Ben Solo.
*FlowerMotifs: The Lyris flower crops up a couple times as a metaphor for good and strong things coming out of a bad situation.
*FreakinessShame: Downplayed with Kylo, who grew his hair out as a child to cover up his ears.
*FriendToAllChildren: Children (and credits) are among the few things that Vassik cares for.
*FrontierDoctor: Vassik works as a doctor on Cendril, a moon in the Outer Rim.
*GemEncrusted: The outfits that Rey and Kylo wear when arriving on Coruscant are encrusted with black gems.
*GildedCage: Rey regards her stay at the Imperial Palace on Coruscant as such.
*GreenEyedMonster: It's implied that Kylo is jealous of Rey's friendship with Finn.
*HandHolding: Rey holds Kylo's hands after he confesses that he regrets killing his father.
*HealingSpring: Kylo and Rey bathe in one. Justified, since the heat and minerals promote muscle regeneration and improve blood flow.
*HeelFaceTurn: Kylo undergoes one after finding out that Rey is pregnant and after the death of [[spoiler:his mother]].
*IntimateHairBrushing: A variant occurs between [[Film/TheStarWarsHolidaySpecial Malla and Waroo]], as the former grooms and pulls out burrs and twigs from the latter’s fur.
*KingIncognito: Rey (The Emperor’s mistress) leaves the palace on Coruscant to experience the greater city without wearing makeup or fancy dresses and goes unrecognized by the general populace.
*KlingonPromotion: Kylo becomes Emperor by killing off Emperor Snoke.
*LadyInWaiting: An older woman named Mal serves as Rey’s handmaiden and stylist during Rey and Kylo’s stay on Coruscant.
*LeonineContract: Rey and Kylo enter into one at the start of the fic that involves Rey staying with Kylo in exchange for the safety of the Resistance.
*LightIsNotGood: Hux is the fic’s main antagonist and wears white as Emperor.
*MeaningfulName: Lyris’s name is chosen in reference to the Lyris flowers that were present at the hot spring where she was likely conceived, as well as being a good thing that came out of a bad situation (like the Lyris growing in the bowels of a Sith castle).
*MeaningfulRename: Kylo Ren goes back to using his original name of Ben Solo after Lyris is born.
*MetaphoricalMarriage: Ben “marries” Rey with the Japor snippet that [[Film/ThePhantomMenace Anakin carved for Padmé]].
*NeverRecycleABuilding: The Resistance uses the old Rebel base on Hoth as their base of operations.
*OrbitalBombardment: Gentry fires the super weapon of a mothership down on Coruscant with the intent of killing both Ben and Hux. [[Spoiler:A large part of the palace is destroyed, and Hux is killed when the ceiling collapses.]]
*OriginalCharacters: Mal Tarilla, Kalen and Mila Andara, Major Kalonia, Vassik Cherrim, Karé Kun, Ziff, L’ulo, Sev, Pamich Nerro.
*PatchworkFic: Although the fic is set in the new canon, [[Franchise/StarWarsLegends Meerians]] make an aappearance as slave labor on Vorisk.
*PatchworkKids: Lyris has Rey’s eyes and Ben’s hair.
*PetTheDog: Even before his proper HeelFaceTurn, Kylo decides to dissolve the Stormtrooper program with the intent of making reparations to those personally affected by the program.
*PhysicalTherapyPlot: Finn needs to undergo physical therapy after fighting with Kylo on Starkiller base.
*PimpedOutDress: Of the dresses described, one is encrusted with black gems and has a gauzy skirt while the other garments are described as being “beaded”.
*PointOfView: The fic is written in Third Person-Limited perspective, focusing on Rey’s experiences in the Galaxy.
*PrematureBirthDrama: Lyris is born two months early and with respiratory issues.
*PunchAWall: Kylo repeatedly punches the wall of the ‘fresher after Hux reminds him of the fact that he coerced Rey into his bed.
*PurpleIsPowerful: While reintroducing himself to the Galaxy as Emperor Ben Solo, he wears a purple cloak.
*QuestionableConsent: All of Rey and Kylo’s sexual interactions in the first part of the fic fall under this category.
*TheReveal:
**Rey's parents have been dead since not long after they dropped her off on Jakku, having been accidentally killed by [[spoiler:Luke]] during a skirmish.
**[[spoiler:Luke]] is the figure who carries Lyris out of the flames.
*ShoutOut/MythologyGag: Finn’s barracks is room [[Film/Thx1138 1138]].
*ShowerOfAngst: Rey takes a bath after her first time with Kylo, feeling defiled.
*ShrineToTheFallen: Kylo has one consisting of items significant to Darth Vader such as his helmet and Anakin’s lightsaber.
*SickeningCrunch: When Kylo kills a Stormtrooper who attempts to murder Rey, the Stormtrooper’s head makes a hollow cracking noise when it’s slammed against the pavement.
*SingleBiomePlanet: Cendril is described as “an endless forest of black leaves”.
*SlasherSmile: The enforcer smiles morbidly before interrogating Poe.
*SparedByTheAdaptation:
** In canon, [[spoiler:Luke]] dies protecting the Resistance from Kylo Ren. Here he survives through the end of the story.
**In ''Film/TheRiseOfSkywalker'', [[spoiler:Kylo Ren]] dies while fighting [[spoiler:Palpatine]]. Here he survives through the end of the story.
*SpitefulSpit: Poe spits blood on an enforcer’s boots in response to being asked where the Resistance’s base is and who sent him.
*StealthHiBye: Rey is so absorbed in looking for clothing that she fails to notice Kylo until his artificial arm joins hers in a basket of clothes.
*StockholmSyndrome: Averted, Rey falls in love with Ben after their deal is called off.
*StrongFamilyResemblance: Aside from sharing her mother’s eyes, Lyris looks remarkably similar to a young Ben Solo.
*SurprisePregnancy: Rey discovers that she’s pregnant with Lyris five months into her pregnancy.
*ThatManIsDead: When the enforcer expresses surprise that Kylo Ren is alive, Ben responds:
----'''Ben''': Kylo Ren is dead. My name is Ben Solo.
*TheirFirstTime: Rey’s first time with Kylo is unfulfilling and initially painful for her.
*TrojanPrisoner: Finn volunteers to be a prisoner so that he can get close to Hux.
*UndergroundRailroad: Finn, Poe, and Wexley set up an underground network for defecting stormtroopers to escape into Resistance territory.
*UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: There’s no indication that Rey is related to [[spoiler:Palpatine]], her canonical grandfather.
TheUnreveal: We never find out why none of the staff at Mustafar's command center stopped Rey from escaping, nor do we find out why the shields were down.
*VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: The flint mice on Cendril have six legs.
*WhenSheSmiles: After seeing Rey smile while enjoying herself in the marketplace—the first time during their arrangement—Kylo's first thought when a stormtrooper tries to murder her is that he fears that she’ll never smile like that again.
*YouKilledMyFather: Karé’s motivation for joining the Resistance? The First Order killed her father.
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