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* AdaptationDyeJob: Due to her trigger event, Taylor's hair goes from black to white.
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* LockedIntoStrangeness: Due to her trigger event, Taylor's hair goes from black to white.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, we don't know enough about Anne Barnes to even know her sexuality. Here, she's a lesbian.
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** Contessa makes an appearance in Muscle 3.11. [[spoiler:It's implied that she had sex with Rodin, if her limp is any indication.]]
** Bayonetta makes a brief appearance at the end of Muscle 3.y.
** Contessa makes an appearance in Muscle 3.11. [[spoiler:It's implied that she had sex with Rodin, if her limp is any indication.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Since his daughter is involved in the bullying campaign against Taylor, which is the driving force and the main reason behind the lawsuit against Winslow High School, Alan can't actually get involved in any sort of legal action due to any sort of conflicting interests there might be. As a result, he has to hand the case over to Carol.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: After news of Shadow Stalker's misdeeds came to light, Colin has been trying to reconnect with the Wards, specifically Chris, though the former is convinced he no longer wants anything to do with him and tells Hannah as much. Hannah tells him Chris has been smiling more often since Colin offered to help advise him. Instead of thinking that, yes, Chris ''is'' happy he's teaching him again, Colin asks Hannah if Chris got a girlfriend recently.
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Neil Pelham AKA Manpower of the New Wave was rendered crippled by the Bloody Cape and is paralyzed from the waist down. This, along with Mark Dallon's death and Fleur's some years later contribute to the New Wave disbanding.
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Neil Pelham AKA Manpower of the New Wave was rendered crippled by the Bloody Cape and is paralyzed from the waist down. This, along with Mark Dallon's death and Fleur's some years later contribute contributed to the New Wave disbanding.
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* InterfaceScrew: This is the case in ''Style 2.2'', where as Taylor is Triggering and the Queen Administrator is trying to connect to her, [[spoiler:[[NothingIsScarier something]] interferes with the process]].
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* InterfaceScrew: This is the case in ''Style 2.2'', where as Taylor is Triggering and the Queen Administrator is trying to connect to her, [[spoiler:[[NothingIsScarier something]] [[spoiler:''[[NothingIsScarier something]]'' interferes with the process]].process]].
* ItsAllMyFault: In Interlude 3.x, Armsmaster considers his inability to handle Shadow Stalker [[MyGreatestFailure his greatest failure]]. He blames his ineptitude in properly managing the Wards since he focused more on his work and personal glory, reasoning if he had been more strict with Sophia, Taylor would never have Triggered or become Vergil.
* ItsAllMyFault: In Interlude 3.x, Armsmaster considers his inability to handle Shadow Stalker [[MyGreatestFailure his greatest failure]]. He blames his ineptitude in properly managing the Wards since he focused more on his work and personal glory, reasoning if he had been more strict with Sophia, Taylor would never have Triggered or become Vergil.
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: Taylor and the Protectorate don't really believe that Purity is reforming. Miss Militia wants to give her the benefit of a doubt, citing Kaiser potentially knowing her civilian identity as why she hasn't fully severed ties with them, only for Armsmaster to point out that Purity has solely targeted the ABB, a gang comprised of pan-Asian ethnicities when she could have also targeted the Merchants, who accept pretty much everyone willing to join.
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* BreatherEpisode: ''Style 2.3'' to ''2.7'' have mainly been this, focusing on Taylor adjusting to the new developments in her life and learning about the aftermath of the locker incident.
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* HeroKiller: Aside from the Endbringers, the Bloody Cape has earned this title due to most of they're victims being heroic individuals. Among them was [[DeathByAdaptation Mark Dallon]].
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* HeroKiller: Aside from the Endbringers, the Bloody Cape has earned this title due to most of they're its victims being heroic individuals. Among them was [[DeathByAdaptation Mark Dallon]].
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* PapaWolf: In ''Muscle 3.9'', Purity reveals to Taylor that Kaiser is threatening to go to war with the Fallen. Among the missing persons suspected of being kidnapped by the Fallen [[spoiler:is Theo Anders]].
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* AdultFear: Both Danny and Alan go through this when they learn about the bullying Taylor endured at Winslow. The former is horrified by it and questions why Taylor never told him about it before asking himself how he could have failed at being a parent so bad his only child ended up in a coma while the other has just learned his youngest daughter turned on her best friend just to prove she "moved on from her weakness."
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Since his daughter is involved in the bullying campaign against Taylor, which is the driving force and the main reason behind the lawsuit against Winslow High School, Alan can't actually get involved in any sort of legal action due to any sort of conflicting interests there might be. As a result, he has to hand the case over to Carol.
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* RealityEnsues: Since his daughter is involved in the bullying campaign against Taylor, which is the driving force and the main reason behind the lawsuit against Winslow High School, Alan can't actually get involved in any sort of legal action due to any sort of conflicting interests there might be. As a result, he has to hand the case over to Carol.
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** Amy Dallon's power is a much weaker cell manipulation ability, which while weaker than her canon powers has been stated to offer more options.
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** Played straight with Strix, a member of the Fallen who uses a SinisterScythe and can summon [[TechnicolorFire purple flames]].
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** Played straight with Strix, a member of the Fallen who uses a SinisterScythe and can summon [[TechnicolorFire purple flames]]. [[spoiler:He's actually a demon himself.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: It's doubtful that Rodin's manhandling of Hookwolf can even be considered this, effortlessly destroying any metal weaponry the Empire cape makes with hardly any effort.
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** It's doubtful that Rodin's manhandling of Hookwolf can even be considered this, effortlessly destroying any metal weaponry the Empire cape makes with hardly anyeffort.effort.
** In ''Muscle 3.3'', Strix stomps all over Vergil, Antares and Barricade with barely any effort. Throughout the whole fight, he only gets hit once while dancing around the Wards and Taylor.
** It's doubtful that Rodin's manhandling of Hookwolf can even be considered this, effortlessly destroying any metal weaponry the Empire cape makes with hardly any
** In ''Muscle 3.3'', Strix stomps all over Vergil, Antares and Barricade with barely any effort. Throughout the whole fight, he only gets hit once while dancing around the Wards and Taylor.
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Neil Pelham AKA Manpower of the New Wave was rendered crippled by the Bloody Cape and is paralyzed from the waist down. This, along with Mark Dallon's death and Felur's some years later contribute to the New Wave disbanding.
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Neil Pelham AKA Manpower of the New Wave was rendered crippled by the Bloody Cape and is paralyzed from the waist down. This, along with Mark Dallon's death and Felur's Fleur's some years later contribute to the New Wave disbanding.
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* ElementalPowers: [[spoiler:The demon Orthrus can spew both fire and ice from its right head and left head respectively. It retains these powers as a [[ElementalWeapon Devil's Arm]] that comes into Taylor's possession.
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* {{Hellhound}}: Not Rachel, mind you, [[spoiler:but the demon Taylor encounters in ''Style 2.8'' at the Trainyard, being bigger than Rachel's and sporting two heads for extra measur]].
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* {{Hellhound}}: Not Rachel, mind you, [[spoiler:but the demon Taylor encounters in ''Style 2.8'' at the Trainyard, being bigger than Rachel's and sporting two heads for extra measur]].measure]].
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* ArcVillain: The villain of the ''Subhuman'' arc is the Bloody Cape: A serial killer who hunts down capes and has murdered both heroes and villains prior to coming to Brockton Bay.
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* BerserkButton: While fighting Endbringers, subverting disasters and other global problems, Scion has come across several demons inhabiting Earth Bet well before Taylor Triggered. Scion's actions would eventually lead to him being despised by the Underworld. This hate even extends to anyone the demons think may be connected to Scion, [[spoiler:as Orthrus becomes agitated upon seeing Parian, who Triggered with one of Scion's Shards.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: Twofold in ''Style 2.9''. [[spoiler:Taylor saves Parian from being killed by Orthrus, which would later lead to Parian making her a costume as thanks days later. Later in that same chapter, Taylor is saved by Rodin when she's too injured to continue fighting.]]
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* BullyingTheDragon: [[SarcasmMode Yes, Hookwolf. Try and intimidate and pick a fight with Rodin. See where that gets you.]] Even ''Kaiser'' has more sense not to pick a fight with the bar owner and backs off.
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** [[SarcasmMode Yes, Hookwolf. Try and intimidate and pick a fight with Rodin. See where that gets you.]] Even ''Kaiser'' has more sense not to pick a fight with the bar owner and backsoff.off.
** [[spoiler:''Style 2.9'' has Orthrus picking a fight with Rodin when the latter saves Taylor from being killed. [[ForgoneConclusion And considering Orthrus is currently Taylor's Devil's Arm]], it clearly bit off more than it could chew.]]
** [[SarcasmMode Yes, Hookwolf. Try and intimidate and pick a fight with Rodin. See where that gets you.]] Even ''Kaiser'' has more sense not to pick a fight with the bar owner and backs
** [[spoiler:''Style 2.9'' has Orthrus picking a fight with Rodin when the latter saves Taylor from being killed. [[ForgoneConclusion And considering Orthrus is currently Taylor's Devil's Arm]], it clearly bit off more than it could chew.]]
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* CrashIntoHello: How Taylor meets Victoria when the former and Danny go to Arcadia for Taylor's placement tests.
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* {{Hellhound}}: Not Rachel, mind you, [[spoiler:but the demon Taylor encounters in ''Style 2.8'' at the Trainyard, being bigger than Rachel's and sporting two heads for extra measur]].
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* AdaptationalAttractiveness: Downplayed. After waking up from her coma, Taylor discovers she's gone from being stick-thin to having the physique of an amateur athlete.
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** Though we have yet to see her proper, the fact that Carol Dallon allowed Amy and Victoria to join the Wards implies she lacks '''a lot''' of her ControlFreak tendencies in ''Worm'' proper.
* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Part of the norm when it comes to Alt!Power fanfics for Taylor, as instead of bugs Taylor is turned into a half-demon with powers similar to that of Vergil. [[spoiler:Justified, as ''Style 2.2'' has an unknown party interfere with Queen Administrator as it's connecting to Taylor as she's Triggering]].
* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Part of the norm when it comes to Alt!Power fanfics for Taylor, as instead of bugs Taylor is turned into a half-demon with powers similar to that of Vergil. [[spoiler:Justified, as ''Style 2.2'' has an unknown party interfere with Queen Administrator as it's connecting to Taylor as she's Triggering]].
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Part of the norm when it comes to Alt!Power fanfics for Taylor, as instead of bugs Taylor is turned into a half-demon with powers similar to that of Vergil. [[spoiler:Justified, as ''Style 2.2'' has an unknown party interfere with Queen Administrator as it's connecting to
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* BigBad: ''Subhuman'''s main villain is the "Bloody Cape", a serial killer that specializes in killing capes and has been active for years.
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* BigBad: ''Subhuman'''s main The villain of the ''Subhuman'' arc is the "Bloody Cape", a Bloody Cape: A serial killer that specializes in killing who hunts down capes and has been active for years. murdered both heroes and villains prior to coming to Brockton Bay.
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** DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Although unnamed, WordOfGod states that the Merchant cape that was murdered by the Bloody Cape in ''Subhuman 1.1'' was Mush.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation:
**DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Although unnamed, WordOfGod states that the Merchant cape that was murdered by the Bloody Cape in ''Subhuman 1.1'' was Mush.Mush.
** Some odd years before coming to Brockton Bay, the Bloody Cape murdered Mouse Protector.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Neil Pelham AKA Manpower of the New Wave was rendered crippled by the Bloody Cape and is paralyzed from the waist down. This, along with Mark Dallon's death and Felur's some years later contribute to the New Wave disbanding.
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** Some odd years before coming to Brockton Bay, the Bloody Cape murdered Mouse Protector.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Neil Pelham AKA Manpower of the New Wave was rendered crippled by the Bloody Cape and is paralyzed from the waist down. This, along with Mark Dallon's death and Felur's some years later contribute to the New Wave disbanding.
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: After Flashbang's death years prior, Manpower being permanently crippled and Fleur's death in 2007, the New Wave was officially disbanded. The only active members from the group are Sarah and Crystal Pelham, with Crystal's brother Eric having joined the Wards.
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: After By the start of the story, New Wave has been disbanded. Among the many contributions behind the dissolution of the independent cape group, and arguably the major factors, were Flashbang's death years prior, in 2001, Manpower being permanently crippled in that same fight, and Fleur's death in 2007, the New Wave was officially disbanded. 2007. The only active members capes left from the group remains of New Wave are Sarah and Crystal Pelham, with Crystal's brother Eric having joined the Wards.
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* ForWantOfANail: The Bloody Cape's rampage and murder of certain heroes creates a few nails. The most prominent of those nails is arguably the beginnings of what would eventually become the disbanding of the New Wave. Were it not for their actions, Victoria, Amy and Eric would be with the New Wave and not the PRT.
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* MythologyGag: In ''Subhuman 1.7'', one of the PHO members goes by the username "Tony Redgrave"--an alias that was previously used by Dante in the non-canon prequel novel.
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* MythologyGag: In ''Subhuman 1.7'', one of the a user on PHO members goes by the username "Tony Redgrave"--an alias that was previously used by Dante in the non-canon prequel novel.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Downplayed. In ''Interlude 2.1'', Rodin reveals that the reason he came to Earth Bet was because Bayonetta "kicked [his] ass" and more or less told him to take a vacation.
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** Gladly goes out of his way to compile all the incidents Taylor made to the faculty alongside Mrs. Knotts, which is arguably the most helpful he's been in any fan work he appears in, especially in canon when he walks away from Taylor he sees her cornered by the Trio.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Part of the norm when it comes to Alt!Power fanfics for Taylor, as instead of bugs Taylor is turned into a half-demon with powers similar to that of Vergil. [[spoiler:Justified, as 2.2 has an unknown party interfere with Queen Administrator as it's connecting to Taylor as she's Triggering]].
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Part of the norm when it comes to Alt!Power fanfics for Taylor, as instead of bugs Taylor is turned into a half-demon with powers similar to that of Vergil. [[spoiler:Justified, as ''Style 2.2 2'' has an unknown party interfere with Queen Administrator as it's connecting to Taylor as she's Triggering]].
* BreatherEpisode: ''Style 2.3'' to ''2.7'' have mainly been this, focusing on Taylor adjusting to the new developments in her life and learning about the aftermath of the locker incident.
* BullyingTheDragon: [[SarcasmMode Yes, Hookwolf. Try and intimidate and pick a fight with Rodin. See where that gets you.]] Even ''Kaiser'' has more sense not to pick a fight with the bar owner and backs off.
* BullyingTheDragon: [[SarcasmMode Yes, Hookwolf. Try and intimidate and pick a fight with Rodin. See where that gets you.]] Even ''Kaiser'' has more sense not to pick a fight with the bar owner and backs off.
* CurbStompBattle: It's doubtful that Rodin's manhandling of Hookwolf can even be considered this, effortlessly destroying any metal weaponry the Empire cape makes with hardly any effort.
* KnowWhenToFoldThem: Kaiser realizes very quickly that fighting Rodin is a ''very bad fucking idea'' and opts to instead take Purity and Hookwolf and leave.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Greg Veder ended up being the nail Alan needed to build a case against Winslow, having gotten himself a video of Sophia, Emma and Madison shoving Taylor inside her locker by pure accident and coincidence. Just when he thought about deleting said video, Alan came to visit the Veder family.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Compared to most fan works where he's usually antagonistic towards the Heberts and tries to defend Emma, Alan Barnes does ''not'' do that and is supportive to Danny, even helping him build a case against Winslow when his friend tells him about the locker incident. This is in spite of the fact that doing so has the potential of putting Emma on trial, even if she is underage.
** Though we have yet to see her proper, the fact that Carol Dallon allowed Amy and Victoria to join the Wards implies she lacks '''a lot''' of her ControlFreak tendencies in ''Worm'' proper.
** Compared to most fan works where he's usually antagonistic towards the Heberts and tries to defend Emma, Alan Barnes does ''not'' do that and is supportive to Danny, even helping him build a case against Winslow when his friend tells him about the locker incident. This is in spite of the fact that doing so has the potential of putting Emma on trial, even if she is underage.
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* TheFellowshipHasEnded: After Flashbang's death, Manpower being permanently crippled and Fleur's death in 2007, the New Wave was officially disbanded. The only active members from the group are Sarah and Crystal Pelham, with Crystal's brother Eric having joined the Wards.
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* ForWantOfANail: The Bloody Cape's rampage and murder of certain heroes creates a few nails. The most prominent of those nails is arguably the beginnings of what would eventually become the disbanding of the New Wave. Were it not for their actions, Victoria, Amy and Eric would be with the New Wave and not the PRT.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Part of the norm when it comes to Alt!Power fanfics for Taylor, as instead of bugs Taylor is turned into a half-demon with powers similar to that of Vergil. [[spoiler:Justified, as 2.2 has an unknown party interfere with Queen Administrator as it's connecting to Taylor as she's Triggering]].
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* CallBack: A meta-version. When Uber and Leet ask Rodin if he would be willing to star in one of their videos, he asks if they plan on doing any Nintendo themes in the near future. ''VideoGame/Bayonetta2'' was released for the UsefulNotes/WiiU, a Nintendo console.
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/devil-trigger-devil-may-cry-worm-au.74011/#post-17578630 Devil Trigger]]'' is a {{Crossover}} between {{Literature/Worm}} and ''VideoGame/DevilMayCry''. It is a Worm AU fanfic written by [=SkyRig=], formerly known as Starlight's Poet and Demons Anarchy of Pride of ''Fanfic/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRebellionReset'' fame.
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/devil-trigger-devil-may-cry-worm-au.74011/#post-17578630 Devil Trigger]]'' is a {{Crossover}} between {{Literature/Worm}} ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and ''VideoGame/DevilMayCry''. It is a Worm AU fanfic written by [=SkyRig=], formerly known as Starlight's Poet and Demons Anarchy of Pride of ''Fanfic/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRebellionReset'' fame.
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* PosthumousCharacter: By the time the story starts, both Mark Dallon and Mouse Protector are already dead, [[HeroKiller courtesy of the Bloody Cape]].
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Tying in with her AgeLift, Paige ran away from home to pursue her passion for music and got started thanks to her then-boyfriend's support before everything went to hell for her.
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* ItsPersonal: Victoria has a serious grudge against the Bloody Cape ([[YouKilledMyFather for obvious reasons]]), so much so in fact that the moment she learns the "Case-53" that nearly killed her is the same demon that murdered her Mark Dallon, she all but forgoes questioning Taylor in favor of killing it where it stands.
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* ItsPersonal: Victoria has a serious grudge against the Bloody Cape ([[YouKilledMyFather for obvious reasons]]), so much so in fact that the moment she learns the "Case-53" that nearly killed her she sees Taylor fighting is the same demon that murdered her Mark Dallon, father, she all but forgoes questioning Taylor in favor of killing it where it stands.
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/devil-trigger-devil-may-cry-worm-au.74011/#post-17578630 Devil Trigger]]'' is a {{Crossover}} between {{Literature/Worm}} and ''VideoGame/DevilMayCry''. It is a Worm AU fanfic written by [=SkyRig=], formerly known as Starlight's Poet and Demons Anarchy of Pride of ''Fanfic/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRebellionReset'' fame.
The locker incident does more than cause Taylor Hebert to Trigger; it knocks her into a month long coma. When she wakes up, she discovers that her body has changed significantly. She now has white hair, she can run faster than ever before and she's become so much stronger. She can hear things much further away and notice even the tiniest of details. It doesn't take her long to figure out she's gotten herself superpowers, but what she doesn't realize is that she is no longer human.
Taylor also doesn't realize that she's been thrown into a world she never knew existed. Demons exist on Earth Bet, and they hide around every corner, stalking their prey and waiting for the opportune moment to strike. And many of them have set their sights on Taylor. Luckily for her, she's found a teacher. [[{{VideoGame/Bayonetta}} Enter Rodin, proprietor of the bar Gates of Hell]] and expert in all things demonic.
Becoming a superhero is already a long and difficult road for Taylor Hebert, but is she prepared for the lifestyle of a Demon Hunter?
!''Devil Trigger'' contains examples of the following tropes:
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Rather than go by her New Wave cape persona "Glory Girl", Victoria joined the Wards as Antares, an identity she wouldn't adopt until ''{{Literature/Ward}}''.
* AdaptationNameChange: Rather than go by Panacea and Shielder, Amy Dallon and Eric Pelham chose the cape names "Soma" and "Barricade" respectively.
* AdultFear: Both Danny and Alan go through this when they learn about the bullying Taylor endured at Winslow. The former is horrified by it and questions why Taylor never told him about it before asking himself how he could have failed at being a parent so bad his only child ended up in a coma while the other has just learned his youngest daughter turned on her best friend just to prove she "moved on from her weakness."
* AnArmAndALeg: When Taylor finds Rune, she discovers she's lost her left arm from the forearm down.
* BigBad: ''Subhuman'''s main villain is the "Bloody Cape", a serial killer that specializes in killing capes and has been active for years.
* CassandraTruth: While Taylor did eventually believe Rodin about the existence of demons and her newfound nature as a half-demon after her run-in with Orthrus, she still doesn't believe that the source of all parahumans' powers come from an EldritchAbomination.
* {{Crossover}}: Between ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and ''VideoGame/DevilMayCry'', with Rodin from ''{{VideoGame/Bayonetta}}'' also being present.
* DeathByAdaptation: Mark Dallon AKA Flashbang of the New Wave died ten years prior to the start of the story at the hands of the Bloody Cape.
** DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Although unnamed, WordOfGod states that the Merchant cape that was murdered by the Bloody Cape in ''Subhuman 1.1'' was Mush.
* TheDreaded: The Bloody Cape is regarded as this, due to them being a serial killer that hunts capes and has killed more heroes than villains.
* ElementalWeapon: The Devil's Arm Orthrus is a sword imbued with the power of both [[AnIcePerson ice]] and [[PlayingWithFire fire]], allowing Taylor to rotate between burning her foes alive with hellfire and subjecting them to freezing temperatures.
* TheFellowshipHasEnded: After Flashbang's death, Manpower being permanently crippled and Fleur's death in 2007, the New Wave was officially disbanded. The only active members from the group are Sarah and Crystal Pelham, with Crystal's brother Eric having joined the Wards.
* ForTheEvulz: When Taylor questions why the Fury demon became the Bloody Cape and hunted parahumans, Rodin states this is the case.
-->'''Rodin:''' As far as the Fury was concerned, parahumans were like deer. Better yet, they were deer who could fight back. Kill it, even. For that thing, they were big game.
* HalfHumanHybrid: When Taylor Triggers, she becomes a half-demon like Vergil and Dante, though WordOfGod states that she's an ArtificialHybrid rather than a natural-one.
* HeroKiller: Aside from the Endbringers, the Bloody Cape has earned this title due to most of they're victims being heroic individuals. Among them was [[DeathByAdaptation Mark Dallon]].
* HeroWithBadPublicity: Subverted. While some people have reservations about Taylor's heroics, her destroying Winslow has been met with positive reception on account of just how bad the school was.
* InMediasRes: Like in ''Worm'' proper, the first arc shows Taylor having already Triggered and is working on honing her powers while hunting demons in Brockton Bay.
* ItsPersonal: Victoria has a serious grudge against the Bloody Cape ([[YouKilledMyFather for obvious reasons), so much so in fact that the moment she learns the "Case-53" that nearly killed her is the same demon that murdered her Mark Dallon, she all but forgoes questioning Taylor in favor of killing it where it stands.
* MythologyGag: In ''Subhuman 1.7'', one of the PHO members goes by the username "Tony Redgrave"--an alias that was previously used by Dante in the non-canon prequel novel.
* NoodleIncident: In ''Subhuman 1.2'', Taylor notes how she'll never forget her first meeting with Rodin, which apparently involved the man beating the hell out of Hookwolf.
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The Fury demon, the true identity of the Bloody Cape, is described by Taylor as being a ten-foot-tall black lizard with scales dyed in blood. It's also been killing capes, villains and heroes alike, for over ten years.
* RedBaron: Before it came to Brockton Bay, the Fury demon was and still is known by the public as the Bloody Cape. When it settled in Brockton Bay, [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast it earned more than a few new ones, including "Brockton Bay's Jack the Ripper"]].
* ShouldntWeBeInSchoolRightNow: Justified for Taylor, as her father pulled her out from Winslow and is working on getting her into Arcadia. As for the rest of the Winslow students, well, Taylor took care of that problem by slicing it into bits.
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Victoria notes how, in spite of having killed the Bloody Cape and got revenge for the death of her father, she doesn't feel happy or as accomplished as she should be.
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The locker incident does more than cause Taylor Hebert to Trigger; it knocks her into a month long coma. When she wakes up, she discovers that her body has changed significantly. She now has white hair, she can run faster than ever before and she's become so much stronger. She can hear things much further away and notice even the tiniest of details. It doesn't take her long to figure out she's gotten herself superpowers, but what she doesn't realize is that she is no longer human.
Taylor also doesn't realize that she's been thrown into a world she never knew existed. Demons exist on Earth Bet, and they hide around every corner, stalking their prey and waiting for the opportune moment to strike. And many of them have set their sights on Taylor. Luckily for her, she's found a teacher. [[{{VideoGame/Bayonetta}} Enter Rodin, proprietor of the bar Gates of Hell]] and expert in all things demonic.
Becoming a superhero is already a long and difficult road for Taylor Hebert, but is she prepared for the lifestyle of a Demon Hunter?
!''Devil Trigger'' contains examples of the following tropes:
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Rather than go by her New Wave cape persona "Glory Girl", Victoria joined the Wards as Antares, an identity she wouldn't adopt until ''{{Literature/Ward}}''.
* AdaptationNameChange: Rather than go by Panacea and Shielder, Amy Dallon and Eric Pelham chose the cape names "Soma" and "Barricade" respectively.
* AdultFear: Both Danny and Alan go through this when they learn about the bullying Taylor endured at Winslow. The former is horrified by it and questions why Taylor never told him about it before asking himself how he could have failed at being a parent so bad his only child ended up in a coma while the other has just learned his youngest daughter turned on her best friend just to prove she "moved on from her weakness."
* AnArmAndALeg: When Taylor finds Rune, she discovers she's lost her left arm from the forearm down.
* BigBad: ''Subhuman'''s main villain is the "Bloody Cape", a serial killer that specializes in killing capes and has been active for years.
* CassandraTruth: While Taylor did eventually believe Rodin about the existence of demons and her newfound nature as a half-demon after her run-in with Orthrus, she still doesn't believe that the source of all parahumans' powers come from an EldritchAbomination.
* {{Crossover}}: Between ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and ''VideoGame/DevilMayCry'', with Rodin from ''{{VideoGame/Bayonetta}}'' also being present.
* DeathByAdaptation: Mark Dallon AKA Flashbang of the New Wave died ten years prior to the start of the story at the hands of the Bloody Cape.
** DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Although unnamed, WordOfGod states that the Merchant cape that was murdered by the Bloody Cape in ''Subhuman 1.1'' was Mush.
* TheDreaded: The Bloody Cape is regarded as this, due to them being a serial killer that hunts capes and has killed more heroes than villains.
* ElementalWeapon: The Devil's Arm Orthrus is a sword imbued with the power of both [[AnIcePerson ice]] and [[PlayingWithFire fire]], allowing Taylor to rotate between burning her foes alive with hellfire and subjecting them to freezing temperatures.
* TheFellowshipHasEnded: After Flashbang's death, Manpower being permanently crippled and Fleur's death in 2007, the New Wave was officially disbanded. The only active members from the group are Sarah and Crystal Pelham, with Crystal's brother Eric having joined the Wards.
* ForTheEvulz: When Taylor questions why the Fury demon became the Bloody Cape and hunted parahumans, Rodin states this is the case.
-->'''Rodin:''' As far as the Fury was concerned, parahumans were like deer. Better yet, they were deer who could fight back. Kill it, even. For that thing, they were big game.
* HalfHumanHybrid: When Taylor Triggers, she becomes a half-demon like Vergil and Dante, though WordOfGod states that she's an ArtificialHybrid rather than a natural-one.
* HeroKiller: Aside from the Endbringers, the Bloody Cape has earned this title due to most of they're victims being heroic individuals. Among them was [[DeathByAdaptation Mark Dallon]].
* HeroWithBadPublicity: Subverted. While some people have reservations about Taylor's heroics, her destroying Winslow has been met with positive reception on account of just how bad the school was.
* InMediasRes: Like in ''Worm'' proper, the first arc shows Taylor having already Triggered and is working on honing her powers while hunting demons in Brockton Bay.
* ItsPersonal: Victoria has a serious grudge against the Bloody Cape ([[YouKilledMyFather for obvious reasons), so much so in fact that the moment she learns the "Case-53" that nearly killed her is the same demon that murdered her Mark Dallon, she all but forgoes questioning Taylor in favor of killing it where it stands.
* MythologyGag: In ''Subhuman 1.7'', one of the PHO members goes by the username "Tony Redgrave"--an alias that was previously used by Dante in the non-canon prequel novel.
* NoodleIncident: In ''Subhuman 1.2'', Taylor notes how she'll never forget her first meeting with Rodin, which apparently involved the man beating the hell out of Hookwolf.
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The Fury demon, the true identity of the Bloody Cape, is described by Taylor as being a ten-foot-tall black lizard with scales dyed in blood. It's also been killing capes, villains and heroes alike, for over ten years.
* RedBaron: Before it came to Brockton Bay, the Fury demon was and still is known by the public as the Bloody Cape. When it settled in Brockton Bay, [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast it earned more than a few new ones, including "Brockton Bay's Jack the Ripper"]].
* ShouldntWeBeInSchoolRightNow: Justified for Taylor, as her father pulled her out from Winslow and is working on getting her into Arcadia. As for the rest of the Winslow students, well, Taylor took care of that problem by slicing it into bits.
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Victoria notes how, in spite of having killed the Bloody Cape and got revenge for the death of her father, she doesn't feel happy or as accomplished as she should be.
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