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[[caption-width-right:220:A Sailor Moon Fic done right.]]
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* TheLostWoods:
-->'''Loki''': I shall trap her. She shall not escape the infamous Myrkviðr, the great black forest of the Norse!
-->'''Loki''': I shall trap her. She shall not escape the infamous Myrkviðr, the great black forest of the Norse!
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* AdaptationInspiration: Just like in the series Naru Osaka is the first victim of the Dark Kingdom; however the author changes the encounter up, flips it around, and makes it original.
* AdaptationalBadass: So far Tuxedo Mask is shaping up to be a far cry from his anime self. He doesn't appear in the high window of OSA-P, but more like he's found rummaging through their jewelery cases and then breaks ''through'' a window where he begins dueling with a man wielding two lances.
** The author also had Experiment-D-U-D cut him off at what could have been the start of a cheesy one-liner.
* AdultFear: Megumi, the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
* AllMythsAreTrue: The very first villain Moon faces is a reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology. after that is Eros and Psyche from Greek Mythology. There have been a fair number of Experiment's since then.
* AdaptationalBadass: So far Tuxedo Mask is shaping up to be a far cry from his anime self. He doesn't appear in the high window of OSA-P, but more like he's found rummaging through their jewelery cases and then breaks ''through'' a window where he begins dueling with a man wielding two lances.
** The author also had Experiment-D-U-D cut him off at what could have been the start of a cheesy one-liner.
* AdultFear: Megumi, the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
* AllMythsAreTrue: The very first villain Moon faces is a reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology. after that is Eros and Psyche from Greek Mythology. There have been a fair number of Experiment's since then.
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* AdaptationInspiration: Just like in the series Naru Osaka is the The first victim attack of the Dark Kingdom; however story happens to Naru in OSA-P, but the author changes the encounter up, flips it around, and makes it original.
* AdaptationalBadass:So far Tuxedo Mask is shaping has shaped up to be a far cry from his anime self. He doesn't appear in the high window of OSA-P, but more like he's found rummaging through their jewelery cases His entrances are realistic and then breaks ''through'' a window where he begins dueling with a man wielding two lances.
** The author also had Experiment-D-U-D cut him off at what could have been the start of a cheesy one-liner.
his speeches short and far from cheesy.
* AdultFear:Megumi, Megumi kidnaps (presumably) and murders males (children and men), leaving their bodies behind in the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be freezer where she works or hanging them above a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
tub filled with their blood and body parts.
* AllMythsAreTrue:The very first villain Moon faces is a As mentioned in the intro heroes/villains of mythology are reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology. after that is Eros and Psyche from Greek Mythology. There have been a fair number of Experiment's since then.to fight for the Dark Kingdom.
* AdaptationalBadass:
** The author also had Experiment-D-U-D cut him off at what could have been the start of a cheesy one-liner.
* AdultFear:
* AllMythsAreTrue:
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** The Silver Guard and Protectors play this part as well, before receiving an official introduction to the former, the Guard is only mentioned and seen as a fleet of black cars that come to clean up Warrior Moon's messes.
* AnimateDead: The second kind of enemy in the story are enemies revived from the dead. Exta also can do this. See Necromancer.
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Experiment-D-U-D's red lance, Gae Dearg, flies through a barrier Jadeite erects.
* AnimateDead: The second kind of enemy in the story are enemies revived from the dead. Exta also can do this. See Necromancer.
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Experiment-D-U-D's red lance, Gae Dearg, flies through a barrier Jadeite erects.
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** The Silver Guard and Protectors play this part as well, well before their official introduction in "Silver Guard" before receiving an official introduction to the former, the Guard is only mentioned and seen as a fleet of black cars that come to clean up Warrior Moon's messes.
* AnimateDead: The second kind of enemy in the story are enemies revived from thedead. dead, see in intro and All Myths Are True. Exta also can do this. See this, see Necromancer.
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Experiment-D-U-D's red lance, Gae Dearg,flies can pierce or fly through a barrier Jadeite erects.any defence according to legend.
* AnimateDead: The second kind of enemy in the story are enemies revived from the
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Experiment-D-U-D's red lance, Gae Dearg,
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* AnAxeToGrind: Sweet, timid, diminutive Losna swings her axe like a pro.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Sweet, timid, and diminutive Losna swings her axe like a pro.lumberjack.
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* TheChainOfHarm: Inverted, in the first chapter, during Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask's encounter on the roof, when Jadeite chides Mask for interfering with the hunt for the [[spoiler: Silver Crystal]] he makes a nearby helicopter to explode.
* ChekhovsGun: Usagi and Naru find a small gem on the ground after their friend leaves, Usagi tells Naru to keep it and later that gem releases a reborn hero known as Experiment-D-U-D into Naru's home. [[spoiler: After an unseen altercation he then proceeds to rape Naru.]]
* ChekhovsGun: Usagi and Naru find a small gem on the ground after their friend leaves, Usagi tells Naru to keep it and later that gem releases a reborn hero known as Experiment-D-U-D into Naru's home. [[spoiler: After an unseen altercation he then proceeds to rape Naru.]]
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* TheChainOfHarm: Inverted, in the first chapter, Inverted during Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask's encounter on the roof, when roof in "Rabbit Over The Moon" Jadeite chides Mask for interfering with the hunt for the [[spoiler: Silver Crystal]] he then makes a nearby helicopter to explode.
* ChekhovsGun: Usagi and Naru find asmall gem on the ground after their friend leaves, Usagi tells that Naru to keep it and keeps. That gem later that gem releases a reborn hero known as Experiment-D-U-D servant of the Dark Kingdom into Naru's home. [[spoiler: After an unseen altercation he then proceeds to rape Naru.]]
* ChekhovsGun: Usagi and Naru find a
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* DamselInDistress: Naru right off the bat, Usagi occasionally.
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* DamselInDistress: Naru right off the bat, Naru, Usagi occasionally.
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* DramaticWind: Played almost a little too straight in chapter four. After Usagi has made it clear to Luna she refused to become a Warrior Luna explains how the Dark Kingdom will drop her into hell by killing her family and friends before finally killing her. Just before Luna finishes a gust of wind picks up.
* DualWielding: Experiment-D-U-D uses two lances and also possesses two swords, which he and his clones use simultaneously. Warrior Venus occasionally, when she attaches her disc halves to her wrists it gives her two bladed weapons.
* DualWielding: Experiment-D-U-D uses two lances and also possesses two swords, which he and his clones use simultaneously. Warrior Venus occasionally, when she attaches her disc halves to her wrists it gives her two bladed weapons.
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* DramaticWind: Played almost a little too straight in chapter four. "Crossing The Rubicon". After Usagi has made it clear to Luna she refused refuses to become a Warrior Luna explains how the Dark Kingdom will drop ruin her into hell by life before killing her family and friends before finally killing her.her.. Just before Luna finishes a gust of wind picks up.
* DualWielding: Experiment-D-U-Duses possesses two lances and also possesses two swords, which he and his clones use simultaneously. both sets get used. Warrior Venus occasionally, when she attaches her disc halves to her wrists it gives her two bladed weapons.occasionally.
* DualWielding: Experiment-D-U-D
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* EarlyBirdCameo: The author said the characters would be coming in out of order, and they weren't kidding. We met Ami, Makoto, Artemis, Minako, Rei and her grandpa, Haruka, Michiru, and Souichi Tomoe all ahead of schedule.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: The author said A majority of the characters would be coming in out main cast has already been introduced within the first 20 chapters. All of order, and they weren't kidding. We met Ami, Makoto, Artemis, Minako, Rei and her grandpa, Haruka, Michiru, and Souichi Tomoe all ahead of schedule.the Warrior civilian identities (excluding Hotaru) have been introduced.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Experiments seem to be able to fight well, even when they're dying. As long as they can ignore pieces of their body falling off. Beryl slices Experiment-D-U-D up after letting the Warriors get away and Megumi rips apart her victims, draining their blood and eating their flesh.
** Megumi also apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.
** Megumi also apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Experiments seem to be able to fight well, even when they're dying. As long as they can ignore die by pieces of their body falling off. Beryl slices slices up Experiment-D-U-D up after letting the Warriors get away and inside a coffin (ripping flesh by bone). Megumi rips apart her victims, draining their blood and eating their flesh.
** Megumi also apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.flesh.
** Megumi also apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.
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* FetalPositionRebirth: Chapter seven, Jadeite comes across Experiment D-U-D like this in a tank. Could also be NakedonRevival.
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* FetalPositionRebirth: Chapter seven, In "The Warrior of Love", Jadeite comes across Experiment D-U-D like this in a tank. Could also be NakedonRevival.NakedOnRevival.
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* GodivaHair: Megumi in chapter eight.
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* GodivaHair: Megumi in chapter eight."Years of Conspiracy".
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Warrior Moon bifurcates Eros with Moon Blade Slash.
* HeartDrive: After being punctured with darts, going head to head with Tuxedo Mask and having his spine stabbed by Warrior Moon, Experiment-D-U-D appears soon after completely healed. However, when his life gem is crushed, Experiment-D-U-D crumbles away into black dust.
* HeartDrive: After being punctured with darts, going head to head with Tuxedo Mask and having his spine stabbed by Warrior Moon, Experiment-D-U-D appears soon after completely healed. However, when his life gem is crushed, Experiment-D-U-D crumbles away into black dust.
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Warrior Moon bifurcates Eros with Moon Blade Slash.
Eros.
* HeartDrive: Afterbeing punctured with darts, going head to head with battling Warrior Moon and Tuxedo Mask and having his spine stabbed by Warrior Moon, (and sustaining extensive wounds) Experiment-D-U-D appears soon after completely healed. However, when his life gem is crushed, Experiment-D-U-D he crumbles away into black dust.dust.
**This could have been a different clone of his that appeared healed, it was never mentioned
* HeartDrive: After
**This could have been a different clone of his that appeared healed, it was never mentioned
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* InfoDump: Part of the history we were expecting came in chapter 3, but the brunt of it, along with information regarding Usagi's transformation and weapon came in a flash back in chapter 5.
** After dropping hints and giving the readers tidbits about the Silver Guard, and briefly the Protectors, chapter nine delivers the explanation we were expecting. Mani reveals the Protectors are only a small part of the Guard and makes references to other Divisions, so we can expect more chapters like it.
** After dropping hints and giving the readers tidbits about the Silver Guard, and briefly the Protectors, chapter nine delivers the explanation we were expecting. Mani reveals the Protectors are only a small part of the Guard and makes references to other Divisions, so we can expect more chapters like it.
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* InfoDump: Part "Evil Sleeps When It's Dead" gave us part of the history of the Moon Kingdom we were expecting came in chapter 3, but expecting, the brunt of it, rest, along with information regarding an explanation of Usagi's transformation transformations and weapon attacks, came a few chapters later in a flash back in chapter 5.
** After dropping hints and giving the readers tidbits about the"Blonde Ambition 1". The Silver Guard, Guard were given a full introduction and briefly the Protectors, chapter nine delivers the explanation we were expecting. Mani reveals in the Protectors are only a small part of the Guard and makes references to other Divisions, so we can expect more aptly titled chapters like it."Silver Guard 1" and "Silver Guard 2".
** After dropping hints and giving the readers tidbits about the
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* KidnappedScientist: More like scientists. Luna explains that there were a string of kidnappings years ago that can be connected to the Dark Kingdom. They're to blame for Experiments.
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* KidnappedScientist: More like scientists. Luna explains that there were The Dark Kingdom kidnapped a string number of kidnappings the scientists in the years ago that can be connected to before the Dark Kingdom. They're story began, they're to blame for Experiments.
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* TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday: Stack Attack is a kind of example of this, although it wasn't mentioned as just appearing, it was described as being a new building. The House of Fortune as well. Pet Shop Perfume wasn't mentioned as being new, it could be assumed it wasn't there before the Dark Kingdom's plan for it began.
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* TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday: Stack Attack is a kind of example of this, although it wasn't mentioned as just appearing, it was described as being a new building. The House of Fortune as well. Pet Shop Perfume wasn't mentioned as being new, but it could be assumed it wasn't there before the Dark Kingdom's plan for it began.
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* MysteriousNote: Minako received a note in her locker from someone claiming to her identity as Sailor V.
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* MysteriousNote: Minako received a note got one in her locker from someone claiming to her identity as Sailor V.Eros.
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* NothingIsScarier: The story seems to do this well, when Usagi finds Experiment-D-U-D, that whole mysterious man, with a strange presence, choking your friend in the hall, illuminated by blocks of moonlight scene accomplishes this.
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* NothingIsScarier: The story seems to do this well, when When Usagi finds Experiment-D-U-D, that whole mysterious man, with a strange presence, choking your friend in the hall, illuminated by blocks of moonlight mysterious-man-with-a-strange-presence-choking-your-friend-in-the-hall-illuminated-by-blocks-of-moonlight scene accomplishes this.
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* PowerGlows: Warrior Moon's Moon Blade Slash, in order to use the attack she forces energy into her lance which then glows white.
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* PowerGlows: Warrior Moon's lance glows white before she uses Moon Blade Slash, in order to use the attack she forces energy into her lance which then glows white.Slash.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:After the attack on Naru in chapter two, Usagi is left in the dark about what really happens until chapter four when her rape is revealed.]]
* TheReveal: The revelation of [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] in chapter 4.
** Usagi revealing herself as Warrior Moon to Naru in chapter 10. We also finally get Experiment-D-U-D's reason behind attacking Naru.
* TheReveal: The revelation of [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] in chapter 4.
** Usagi revealing herself as Warrior Moon to Naru in chapter 10. We also finally get Experiment-D-U-D's reason behind attacking Naru.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:After the attack on Naru in chapter two, "Goodbye, Halcyon", Usagi is left in the dark about what really happens until chapter four when her rape is revealed.]]
* TheReveal: The revelation of [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] inchapter 4.
"Crossing The Rubicon".
** Usagi revealing herself as Warrior Moon to Naru inchapter 10.The Warrior of Storms. We also finally get Experiment-D-U-D's reason behind attacking Naru.
* TheReveal: The revelation of [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] in
** Usagi revealing herself as Warrior Moon to Naru in
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** Again in chapter 11 with a full cast including: Warriors Venus and Jupiter, Artemis, Tuxedo Mask, Jadeite, and Bikuta.
* ShoutOut: There are many lines that seem to be taken directly from the anime, and woven flawlessly into the story.
* ShoutOut: There are many lines that seem to be taken directly from the anime, and woven flawlessly into the story.
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** Again in chapter 11 "Savage Love, Dearest Storm" with a full cast including: Warriors Venus and Jupiter, Artemis, Tuxedo Mask, Jadeite, and Bikuta.
* ShoutOut:There are many A few lines that seem to be are taken directly from the anime, my favorite being Naru's quip of "Do we care?" when Umino complains about his grade.
** Experiment-D-U-D, Diarmuid, pursued Naru because he thought she was a woman he once loved. This was a reference to The Pursuit of Diarmuid andwoven flawlessly into Grainne in the story.Fenian Cycle of CelticMythology.
** The Warriors wear masks like Lisa Yadomaru of {{Bleach}}.
* ShoutOut:
** Experiment-D-U-D, Diarmuid, pursued Naru because he thought she was a woman he once loved. This was a reference to The Pursuit of Diarmuid and
** The Warriors wear masks like Lisa Yadomaru of {{Bleach}}.
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* TortureCellar: Luna stumbles upon what looks like a meeting room, but after examining it finds it to be the Youma's torture room. Equipped with a vest capable of ripping someone's chest open, numerous hooks, chains, and a Judas cradle. Not quite a cellar, but torture definitely happens there.
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* TortureCellar: Luna stumbles upon what looks like a meeting room, but after examining it finds it to be the Youma's torture room. Equipped Megumi has one, equipped with a vest capable of ripping someone's chest open, numerous hooks, chains, and a Judas cradle. Not quite a cellar, but torture definitely happens there.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Artemis and Luna are capable is changing in and out of their feline forms at will.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Artemis and Luna are capable is changing in and out of their feline forms at will.Luna.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka. Usagi rushes to her aid and while attempting to save her friend Usagi is aided by Luna, the strange black cat that's been following her, and transforms into the Cosmic Warrior Moon.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka. Usagi rushes to her aid and while attempting to save her friend Usagi she is aided by Luna, the strange black cat that's been following her, and transforms into the Cosmic Warrior Moon.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka, claiming a man has broken in her home. Usagi rushes to her aid and comes across a robbery in progress followed by the man Naru mentioned. While attempting to save her friend Usagi is aided by Luna, the strange black cat that's been following her, and transforms into the Cosmic Warrior, Warrior Moon. With further help from a masked thief, manages to save her friend. She is then told about her past and her duty to save the planet before a darkness like the world has never known takes over, thus putting an end to life as they know it.
In the opening note for the story, the author expresses the changes that have been made to the story, citing artistic license as the reason for changing: the flow of plot, the villains, transformations, attacks, as well as the order in which the character we've come to know and love will be introduced.
In the opening note for the story, the author expresses the changes that have been made to the story, citing artistic license as the reason for changing: the flow of plot, the villains, transformations, attacks, as well as the order in which the character we've come to know and love will be introduced.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka, claiming a man has broken in her home. Osaka. Usagi rushes to her aid and comes across a robbery in progress followed by the man Naru mentioned. While while attempting to save her friend Usagi is aided by Luna, the strange black cat that's been following her, and transforms into the Cosmic Warrior, Warrior Moon. With further help from a masked thief, manages to save her friend. She is then told about her past and her duty to save the planet before a darkness like the world has never known takes over, thus putting an end to life as they know it.
Moon.
In the opening note for the story, the author expresses the changes that have been made to the story, citing artistic license as the reason for changing: the flow of plot, the villains, transformations, attacks, as well as the order in which thecharacter characters we've come to know and love will be introduced.
In the opening note for the story, the author expresses the changes that have been made to the story, citing artistic license as the reason for changing: the flow of plot, the villains, transformations, attacks, as well as the order in which the
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* ChildEater: Megumi.
* Fantastic Racism: Nikkal tells Jarilo she would preferred to let humans die than come and help them.
-->'''Nikkal''': The only humans I like are the ones laying dead on my operating table.
-->'''Nikkal''': The only humans I like are the ones laying dead on my operating table.
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--> "They had done their part. My Queen with that team, the Sound Siblings, five of them were more useful dead to me than they were alive... With Exta being able to reanimate their corpses and any form of nature nearby, it was the perfect plan." - Jadeite
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* PickyPeopleEater: Loki only ate the heart of the man he captured in "Eat, Die, Love".
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* Necromancer:
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* Necromancer: {{Necromancer}}:
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* TortureCellar: Luna stumbles upon what looks like a meeting room, but after exmaining it finds it to be the Youma's torture room. Equipped with a vest capable of ripping someone's chest open, numerous hooks, chains, and a Judas cradel. Not quite a cellar, but torture definetly happens there.
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* SuperStrength: Tuxedo Mask seems to have this, he was able to snap Baphomet's neck with just a kick.
* TortureCellar: Luna stumbles upon what looks like a meeting room, but afterexmaining examining it finds it to be the Youma's torture room. Equipped with a vest capable of ripping someone's chest open, numerous hooks, chains, and a Judas cradel. cradle. Not quite a cellar, but torture definetly definitely happens there.
* TortureCellar: Luna stumbles upon what looks like a meeting room, but after
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* AllMythsAreTrue: The very first villain Moon faces is a reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology. There have been a fair number of Experiment's since then.
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* AllMythsAreTrue: The very first villain Moon faces is a reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology. after that is Eros and Psyche from Greek Mythology. There have been a fair number of Experiment's since then.
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** The author also had Diarmuid cut him off at what could have been the start of a cheesy one-liner.
* AdultFear: Chapter eight brought us our first taste of a real monster in Cosmic Warriors, Megumi, the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
* AllMythsAreTrue: The very first villain Moon faces is a reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology. As if the author's notes about bringing more mythology into the story wasn't enough, it is clearly stated that there will be more Experiments coming.
* AloofAlly: Safe to say this will be Tuxedo Mask.
* AdultFear: Chapter eight brought us our first taste of a real monster in Cosmic Warriors, Megumi, the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
* AllMythsAreTrue: The very first villain Moon faces is a reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology. As if the author's notes about bringing more mythology into the story wasn't enough, it is clearly stated that there will be more Experiments coming.
* AloofAlly: Safe to say this will be Tuxedo Mask.
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** The author also had Diarmuid Experiment-D-U-D cut him off at what could have been the start of a cheesy one-liner.
* AdultFear:Chapter eight brought us our first taste of a real monster in Cosmic Warriors, Megumi, the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
* AllMythsAreTrue: The very first villain Moon faces is a reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology.As if the author's notes about bringing more mythology into the story wasn't enough, it is clearly stated that there will be more Experiments coming.
There have been a fair number of Experiment's since then.
* AloofAlly:Safe to say this will be Tuxedo Mask.
* AdultFear:
* AllMythsAreTrue: The very first villain Moon faces is a reincarnated Diarmuid Ua Duibhne, a hero from Irish mythology.
* AloofAlly:
* AnimateDead: The second kind of enemy in the story are enemies revived from the dead. Exta also can do this. See Necromancer.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Desi and it's assumed the rest of the Protectors (even though Artemis and Luna haven't been scene in their uniforms). See also HotChickInABadassSuit below.
** Chapter 12 gave us our first glimpse at the Protectors in action and it didn't disappoint. They certainly live up their hype.
** Chapter 12 gave us our first glimpse at the Protectors in action and it didn't disappoint. They certainly live up their hype.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Desi and it's assumed the rest of the The Protectors (even though Artemis and Luna haven't been scene in their uniforms). See also HotChickInABadassSuit below.
** Chapter 12 gave us our first glimpse at the Protectors in action and it didn't disappoint. They certainly live up their hype.below.
** Chapter 12 gave us our first glimpse at the Protectors in action and it didn't disappoint. They certainly live up their hype.
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* BearerOfBadNews: Saeko Mizuno when she reveals [[spoiler: Naru's rape.]]
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* BearerOfBadNews: Saeko Mizuno when she reveals [[spoiler: Naru's rape.]]]] Luna occasionally.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: Experiment-D-U-D after being double-teamed by Mask and Moon.
* BreatherEpisode: A few chapters, 4, 6, and 9 so far.
** But even these chapters are attention keeping. [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] keeps us in 4. Jadeite's malice in 6 and the long-awaited explanation of the Guard in 9.
* CallingYourAttacks: Warrior Moon needs to call out Moon Blade Slash for it to happen. Warrior Venus as well.
* TheCavalryArrivesLate: In chapter two, although Naru calls the police before calling Usagi they don't arrive until after Usagi fights with the man attacking Naru.
* TheChainOfHarm: Inverted, in the first chapter, during Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask's encounter on the roof, when Jadeite chides Mask for interfering with the hunt for the [[spoiler: Silver Crystal]] he causes a nearby helicopter to explode.
* BreatherEpisode: A few chapters, 4, 6, and 9 so far.
** But even these chapters are attention keeping. [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] keeps us in 4. Jadeite's malice in 6 and the long-awaited explanation of the Guard in 9.
* CallingYourAttacks: Warrior Moon needs to call out Moon Blade Slash for it to happen. Warrior Venus as well.
* TheCavalryArrivesLate: In chapter two, although Naru calls the police before calling Usagi they don't arrive until after Usagi fights with the man attacking Naru.
* TheChainOfHarm: Inverted, in the first chapter, during Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask's encounter on the roof, when Jadeite chides Mask for interfering with the hunt for the [[spoiler: Silver Crystal]] he causes a nearby helicopter to explode.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: Experiment-D-U-D after being double-teamed by Mask and Moon.
Moon. Jadeite, see IncurableCoughOfDeath below.
* BreatherEpisode: A few chapters, 4, 6, 9, and9 14 so far.
** But even these chapters are attention keeping. [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] keeps us in 4. Jadeite's malice in 6 and the long-awaited explanation of the Guard in 9.
far, they're far from boring though.
* CallingYourAttacks:Warrior Moon needs to The Warrior's call out Moon Blade Slash for it the names of their stronger attacks, but seem to happen. Warrior Venus as well.
be able to attack with less powerful attacks or versions without calling out the names.
* TheCavalryArrivesLate: In chapter two, although Naru calls the police before calling Usagi they don't arrive until afterUsagi fights with the man attacking Naru.
fight is over.
* TheChainOfHarm: Inverted, in the first chapter, during Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask's encounter on the roof, when Jadeite chides Mask for interfering with the hunt for the [[spoiler: Silver Crystal]] hecauses makes a nearby helicopter to explode.
* BreatherEpisode: A few chapters, 4, 6, 9, and
** But even these chapters are attention keeping. [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] keeps us in 4. Jadeite's malice in 6 and the long-awaited explanation of the Guard in 9.
* CallingYourAttacks:
* TheCavalryArrivesLate: In chapter two, although Naru calls the police before calling Usagi they don't arrive until after
* TheChainOfHarm: Inverted, in the first chapter, during Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask's encounter on the roof, when Jadeite chides Mask for interfering with the hunt for the [[spoiler: Silver Crystal]] he
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* CoolMask: Tuxedo Mask of course! However, Warrior Moon and the rest of the Warriors also gets masks that covers their entire face, reminiscent of a Vizard mask.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Youma attacking, eating, and draining people and children of their blood. An Experiment pops up in a public school after raping one of its students just recently.
* DaylightHorror: Furfur and Megumi had no qualms about eating their co-workers or running wild through the streets, blowing up cars, during the daylight hours.
* DramaticWind: Played almost a little too straight in chapter four. After Usagi has made it clear to Luna she's refusing to become a warrior Luna explains how the Dark Kingdom will drop her into hell by killing her family and friends before finally killing her. Just before Luna finishes a gust of wind picks up.
* DualWielding: Experiment-D-U-D uses two lances and also possesses two swords, which he and his clones use simultaneously.
* DaylightHorror: Furfur and Megumi had no qualms about eating their co-workers or running wild through the streets, blowing up cars, during the daylight hours.
* DramaticWind: Played almost a little too straight in chapter four. After Usagi has made it clear to Luna she's refusing to become a warrior Luna explains how the Dark Kingdom will drop her into hell by killing her family and friends before finally killing her. Just before Luna finishes a gust of wind picks up.
* DualWielding: Experiment-D-U-D uses two lances and also possesses two swords, which he and his clones use simultaneously.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Youma attacking, eating, and draining people and children of their blood. An Experiment pops up in a public school after raping one of its students just recently.
students.
* DaylightHorror: Furfur and Megumi had no qualms about eating their co-workers or running wild through thestreets, streets and blowing up cars, during the daylight hours.
* DramaticWind: Played almost a little too straight in chapter four. After Usagi has made it clear to Lunashe's refusing she refused to become a warrior Warrior Luna explains how the Dark Kingdom will drop her into hell by killing her family and friends before finally killing her. Just before Luna finishes a gust of wind picks up.
* DualWielding: Experiment-D-U-D uses two lances and also possesses two swords, which he and his clones use simultaneously. Warrior Venus occasionally, when she attaches her disc halves to her wrists it gives her two bladed weapons.
* DaylightHorror: Furfur and Megumi had no qualms about eating their co-workers or running wild through the
* DramaticWind: Played almost a little too straight in chapter four. After Usagi has made it clear to Luna
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: The way which Experiment's die seems to be extremely cruel, alive while pieces of their bodies turn black and break away.
** Megumi apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.
** Megumi apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: The way which Experiment's die seems Experiments seem to be extremely cruel, alive while able to fight well, even when they're dying. As long as they can ignore pieces of their bodies turn black body falling off. Beryl slices Experiment-D-U-D up after letting the Warriors get away and break away.
Megumi rips apart her victims, draining their blood and eating their flesh.
** Megumi also apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.
** Megumi also apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.
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* FlashForward: Before Usagi transforms she sees flashes of images in her mind. Judging by the descriptions it's pretty easy to tell she's seeing future villains. Perhaps this is a clue that this fic will cover more than just the Dark Kingdom arc?
* FourIsDeath: They haven't all been introduced yet, but this is Sailor Moon, the Shitennou of course.
* FourIsDeath: They haven't all been introduced yet, but this is Sailor Moon, the Shitennou of course.
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* FlashForward: Before Usagi transforms for the first time she sees flashes of images in her mind. Judging by the descriptions it's pretty easy to tell she's seeing future villains. Perhaps this is a clue that this fic will cover more than just the Dark Kingdom arc?
* FourIsDeath:They haven't all been introduced yet, but this This is Sailor Moon, the Shitennou of course.
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* HeartDrive: After being punctured with darts, going head to head with Tuxedo Mask and haven't his spine stabbed by Warrior Moon, Experiment-D-U-D appears soon after completely healed. However, when his life gem is crushed, Experiment-D-U-D crumbles away into black dust.
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* HeartDrive: After being punctured with darts, going head to head with Tuxedo Mask and haven't having his spine stabbed by Warrior Moon, Experiment-D-U-D appears soon after completely healed. However, when his life gem is crushed, Experiment-D-U-D crumbles away into black dust.
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* HeroSecretService: The Silver Guard, although it's only been mentioned a few times it's shaping up to be extremely significant.
** The Protectors
* HotChickInABadassSuit: Ilargi. Her description probably has the most detail of all the Protectors in chapter 9. Usagi thinks she's beautiful and stunning, and when she smiled at Usagi the girl responds with a nervous chuckle. She wears the same uniform as the others, but with her cleavage exposed.
** The Protectors
* HotChickInABadassSuit: Ilargi. Her description probably has the most detail of all the Protectors in chapter 9. Usagi thinks she's beautiful and stunning, and when she smiled at Usagi the girl responds with a nervous chuckle. She wears the same uniform as the others, but with her cleavage exposed.
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* HeroSecretService: The Silver Guard, although it's only been mentioned a few times it's shaping up to be extremely significant.
** The Protectors
Guard and the Protectors.
* HotChickInABadassSuit: Ilargi. Her description probably has the most detail of all the Protectors in chapter 9. Usagi thinks she's beautiful and stunning, and when she smiled at Usagi the girl responds with a nervous chuckle. She wears the same uniform as the others, but with her cleavage exposed.
** The Protectors
* HotChickInABadassSuit: Ilargi. Her description probably has the most detail of all the Protectors in chapter 9.
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* TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday: Stack Attack is a kind of example of this, although it wasn't mentioned as just appearing, it was described as being a new building. The House of Fortune as well. And although Pet Shop Perfume wasn't mentioned as being new, it could be assumed it wasn't there before the Dark Kingdom's plan for it began.
* MeaningfulName: The Protectors were guardians during the time of the Silver Millennium, who all lived on the Moon. It makes sense then that the author named each of the Protectors, excluding the twins and Kalla, directly after a Lunar deity.
* MeaningfulName: The Protectors were guardians during the time of the Silver Millennium, who all lived on the Moon. It makes sense then that the author named each of the Protectors, excluding the twins and Kalla, directly after a Lunar deity.
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* TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday: Stack Attack is a kind of example of this, although it wasn't mentioned as just appearing, it was described as being a new building. The House of Fortune as well. And although Pet Shop Perfume wasn't mentioned as being new, it could be assumed it wasn't there before the Dark Kingdom's plan for it began.
* MeaningfulName: The Protectors were guardians during the time of the SilverMillennium, Millennium who all lived on the Moon. It makes sense then that the author named each of the Protectors, excluding the twins and Kalla, directly after a Lunar deity.
* MeaningfulName: The Protectors were guardians during the time of the Silver
* Necromancer:
--> "They had done their part. My Queen with that team, the Sound Siblings, five of them were more useful dead to me than they were alive... With Exta being able to reanimate their corpses and any form of nature nearby, it was the perfect plan." - Jadeite
--> "They had done their part. My Queen with that team, the Sound Siblings, five of them were more useful dead to me than they were alive... With Exta being able to reanimate their corpses and any form of nature nearby, it was the perfect plan." - Jadeite
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* PaperThinDisguise: Inverted with a full body suit and mask that leaves only lines for Usagi to see and breathe through, her signature buns even disappear as a Warrior.
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* TortureCellar: Not quite a cellar, but torture definetly happens there. Luna stumbles upon what looks like a meeting room, but after exmaining it finds it to be the Youma's torture room. Equipped with a vest capable of ripping someone's chest open, numerous hooks, chains, and a Judas cradel.
* TransformationTrinket: Usagi's moon charm bracelet, Minako's earrings, and Makoto's bracelets
* TransformationTrinket: Usagi's moon charm bracelet, Minako's earrings, and Makoto's bracelets
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* TortureCellar: Not quite a cellar, but torture definetly happens there. TortureCellar: Luna stumbles upon what looks like a meeting room, but after exmaining it finds it to be the Youma's torture room. Equipped with a vest capable of ripping someone's chest open, numerous hooks, chains, and a Judas cradel.
cradel. Not quite a cellar, but torture definetly happens there.
* TransformationTrinket: Usagi's moon charm bracelet, Minako's earrings, and Makoto'sbraceletsbracelets.
* TransformationTrinket: Usagi's moon charm bracelet, Minako's earrings, and Makoto's
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* WoundThatWillNotHeal: Experiment-D-U-D's golden spear inflicts wounds that won't heal naturally.
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* WoundThatWillNotHeal: Experiment-D-U-D's golden spear inflicts wounds that won't heal naturally.naturally.
* WreathedInFlames: Blaise gained this effect after Artemis tried to burn him, it was never specified if this was an ability he already had or not.
* WreathedInFlames: Blaise gained this effect after Artemis tried to burn him, it was never specified if this was an ability he already had or not.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8886470/1/Cosmic-Warriors Cosmic Warriors]] is an ongoing {{AlternateUniverse}} {{Fanfic}} of [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]] created by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2985435/SomeoftheFame SomeoftheFame]].
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!!''Cosmic Warriors has examples of the following:''
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!!''Cosmic Warriors Warriors'' has examples of the following:''following tropes:
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* AnAxeToGrind: Sweet, timid, diminutive Losna swings her axe like a pro.
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* BreatherEpisode: A few chapters, 4, 6, and 9 so far.
** But even these chapters are attention keeping. [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] keeps us in 4. Jadeite's malice in 6 and the long-awaited explanation of the Guard in 9.
** But even these chapters are attention keeping. [[spoiler: Naru's rape]] keeps us in 4. Jadeite's malice in 6 and the long-awaited explanation of the Guard in 9.
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* WeaponOfChoice: Each of the Protectors seems to use their own special kind of weapon. Not to mention the Warrior's weapons as well.
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* TortureCellar: Not quite a cellar, but torture definetly happens there. Luna stumbles upon what looks like a meeting room, but after exmaining it finds it to be the Youma's torture room. Equipped with a vest capable of ripping someone's chest open, numerous hooks, chains, and a Judas cradel.
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* AdultFear: Although there haven't been any real monsters yet, the emotional fear that comes with sexual assault is enough to make even jaded adults cringe.
** Chapter eight brought us our first taste of a real monster in Cosmic Warriors, Megumi, the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
** Chapter eight brought us our first taste of a real monster in Cosmic Warriors, Megumi, the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
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* AdultFear: Although there haven't been any real monsters yet, the emotional fear that comes with sexual assault is enough to make even jaded adults cringe.
**Chapter eight brought us our first taste of a real monster in Cosmic Warriors, Megumi, the once beautiful pancake shop employee turned out to be a man (child) eating Youma in disguise.
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* ArmorPiercingAttack: Diarmuid's red lance, Gae Dearg, flies through a barrier Jadeite erects.
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* BloodBath: Well... Megumi DID have a bathtub filled with blood, above which dangled the [[spoiler: bodies of dead children]]
* BloodFromTheMouth: Diarmuid after being double-teamed by Mask and Moon.
* BloodFromTheMouth: Diarmuid after being double-teamed by Mask and Moon.
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* BloodBath: Well... Megumi DID have a bathtub filled with blood, above which dangled the [[spoiler: bodies of dead children]]
children.]]
* BloodFromTheMouth:Diarmuid Experiment-D-U-D after being double-teamed by Mask and Moon.
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* CoolMask: Tuxedo Mask of course! However, Warrior Moon also gets a mask that covers her entire face, reminiscent of a Vizard mask. Since Warrior Venus also has a mask, it can be assumed the rest of the Warriors will as well.
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* CoolMask: Tuxedo Mask of course! However, Warrior Moon and the rest of the Warriors also gets a mask masks that covers her their entire face, reminiscent of a Vizard mask. Since Warrior Venus also has a mask, it can be assumed the rest of the Warriors will as well.mask.
** By chapter 10 all of the original twenty Jadeite summoned have been killed.
** Megumi apparently kidnaps children (little boys), presumably tortures them before she kills them and eventually leaves their bodies to hang in her torture room.
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* FlashForward: Before Usagi transforms she has flashes of images come before her, judging by the descriptions it's pretty easy to tell she's seeing future villains. Perhaps this is a clue that this fic will cover more than just the Dark Kingdom arc?
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* FlashForward: Before Usagi transforms she has sees flashes of images come before her, judging in her mind. Judging by the descriptions it's pretty easy to tell she's seeing future villains. Perhaps this is a clue that this fic will cover more than just the Dark Kingdom arc?
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* HotChickInABadassSuit: Ilargi. Her description probably has the most detail of all the Protectors in chapter 9. Usagi thinks she's beautiful and stunning, and when she smiled at Usagi the girl responses with a nervous chuckle. She wears the same uniform as the others, but with her cleavage exposed
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* HotChickInABadassSuit: Ilargi. Her description probably has the most detail of all the Protectors in chapter 9. Usagi thinks she's beautiful and stunning, and when she smiled at Usagi the girl responses responds with a nervous chuckle. She wears the same uniform as the others, but with her cleavage exposed exposed.
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** After dropping hints and giving the readers tidbits about the Silver Guard, and briefly the Protectors, chapter nine delivers the explanation we were expecting. Mani reveals the Protector are only a small part of the Guard and makes references to other Divisions, so we can expect more chapters like it.
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** After dropping hints and giving the readers tidbits about the Silver Guard, and briefly the Protectors, chapter nine delivers the explanation we were expecting. Mani reveals the Protector Protectors are only a small part of the Guard and makes references to other Divisions, so we can expect more chapters like it.
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* KidnappedScientist: More like scientists, Luna explains that there were a string of kidnappings years ago that can be connected to the Dark Kingdom. They're to blame for Experiments.
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* KidnappedScientist: More like scientists, scientists. Luna explains that there were a string of kidnappings years ago that can be connected to the Dark Kingdom. They're to blame for Experiments.Experiments.
** Surprisingly enough Souichi Tomoe was one of them.
** Surprisingly enough Souichi Tomoe was one of them.
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* PowerGlows: Warrior Moon's only real powerful attack so far is her Moon Blade Slash, in order to use the attack she forces energy into her lance which then glows white.
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* PowerGlows: Warrior Moon's only real powerful attack so far is her Moon Blade Slash, in order to use the attack she forces energy into her lance which then glows white.white.
** Warrior Venus follows this for her Shot of Love attacks.
** Warrior Venus follows this for her Shot of Love attacks.
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* RooftopConfrontation: Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask in the first chapter. Again in chapter 11 with a full cast including: Warrior's Venus and Jupiter, Artemis, Tuxedo Mask, Jadeite, and Bikuta.
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* RooftopConfrontation: Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask in the first chapter.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Artemis so far, showed he's capable of transforming from human to cat in just a few seconds without any kind of phrase. Luna as well, starting in chapter seven.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Artemis so far, showed he's and Luna are capable is changing in and out of transforming from human to cat in just a few seconds without any kind of phrase. Luna as well, starting in chapter seven.their feline forms at will.
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** Chapter 12 gave us our first glimpse at the Protectors in action and it didn't disappoint. They certainly live up their hype.
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* RooftopConfrontation: Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask in the first chapter.
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* RooftopConfrontation: Jadeite and Tuxedo Mask in the first chapter. Again in chapter 11 with a full cast including: Warrior's Venus and Jupiter, Artemis, Tuxedo Mask, Jadeite, and Bikuta.
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* Fetal Position Rebirth: Chapter seven, Jadeite comes across Experiment D-U-D like this in a tank. Could also be NakedonRevival.
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* Fetal Position Rebirth: FetalPositionRebirth: Chapter seven, Jadeite comes across Experiment D-U-D like this in a tank. Could also be NakedonRevival.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: One way to make a story like Sailor Moon darker would be to add in gruesome monsters who are ripping humans from limb to limb. However the author does it in a subtle way, by making the villains almost human. Although Diarmuid doesn't look like a regular person, he isn't recognizable as a monster, he walks around in public schools doesn't he? The true darkness in Cosmic Warriors lies in the fact that the evil in the world could be sitting beside you in class, or passing you on the street.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: One way to make a story like Sailor Moon darker would be to add in gruesome monsters who are ripping humans from limb to limb. However the author does it Youma attacking, eating, and draining people and children of their blood. An Experiment pops up in a subtle way, by making the villains almost human. Although Diarmuid doesn't look like a regular person, he isn't recognizable as a monster, he walks around in public schools doesn't he? The true darkness in Cosmic Warriors lies in the fact that the evil in the world could be sitting beside you in class, or passing you on the street.school after raping one of its students just recently.
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** In the author notes it's mentioned that chapter four was step one on making this a darker story. By making a main/supporting character a victim of sexual assault it plunges the story into a new kind of depth and catapults Usagi out of her skepticism for becoming a warrior and into vowing to protect her friends and everyone in the process.
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath: Jadeite shows signs of some kind of sickness often, usually after exerting energy. [[spoiler: It was revealed in chapter 10 he was poisoned during the attack on the Moon Kingdom.]] Although he should be dead, he was able to survive, but its affected him ever since.
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* Usagi revealing herself as Warrior Moon to Naru in chapter 10. We also finally get Experiment-D-U-D's reason behind attacking Naru.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka, claiming a man has broken in her home. Usagi rushes to her aid and comes across a robbery in progress followed by the man Naru mentioned. While attempting to save her friend Usagi is visited by Luna, a black cat that had been previously following her, and is given a bracelet with a dangling charm on the end, in the shape of a crescent moon. With the aid of Luna Usagi manages to transform into the Cosmic Warrior, Warrior Moon and with further help from a masked thief, manages to save her friend. She is then told about her past and her duty to save the planet before a darkness like the world has never known takes over, thus putting an end to life as they know it.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka, claiming a man has broken in her home. Usagi rushes to her aid and comes across a robbery in progress followed by the man Naru mentioned. While attempting to save her friend Usagi is visited aided by Luna, a the strange black cat that had that's been previously following her, and is given a bracelet with a dangling charm on the end, in the shape of a crescent moon. With the aid of Luna Usagi manages to transform transforms into the Cosmic Warrior, Warrior Moon and with Moon. With further help from a masked thief, manages to save her friend. She is then told about her past and her duty to save the planet before a darkness like the world has never known takes over, thus putting an end to life as they know it.
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In the first chapter the author shows talent for writing in the way the story opens and gives readers a taste of familiarity with some classic run-ins and mannerisms of the cast. But of course, we're not here to re-read Sailor Moon. The author kicks off the series of changes with a new breed of monsters called Experiments, former heroes of mythology who've been reincarnated to work for the Dark Kingdom. Coupled with that, rather than have our heroine fighting with a tiara in a one-piece, a skirt, and heels, Usagi transforms into a lance wielding warrior in a Zero Suit Samus inspired {{LatexSpaceSuit}}. Luna and Artemis also seem to have bigger roles in this story, as of the latest chapter we've seen Luna as a cat and Artemis transform from human to cat, it's safe to assume soon we'll see a human Luna as well. The two felines are also a part of a secret organization made up of previous guardians from the Moon Kingdom, called the Silver Guard.
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In the first chapter the author shows talent for writing in the way the story opens and gives readers a taste of familiarity with some classic run-ins and mannerisms of the cast. But of course, we're not here to re-read Sailor Moon. The author kicks off the series of changes with a new breed of monsters called Experiments, former heroes of mythology who've been reincarnated to work for the Dark Kingdom. Coupled with that, rather than have our heroine fighting with a tiara in a one-piece, a skirt, and heels, Usagi transforms into a lance wielding warrior in a Zero Suit Samus inspired {{LatexSpaceSuit}}. Luna and Artemis also seem to have bigger roles in this story, as of roles, the latest chapter we've seen Luna as a cat and Artemis transform from human to cat, it's safe to assume soon we'll see a human Luna as well. The two felines are also a part of a secret organization made up of previous guardians from the Moon Kingdom, called the Silver Guard.
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* BraidsOfAction: When Usagi transforms her pigtails end up braided into a single bun.
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* DramaticWind: Played almost a little too straight in chapter four. After Usagi has made it clear to Luna she's refusing to become a warrior Luna explains how the Dark Kingdom will drop her into hell by killing her family and friends before finally killing her. Just before Luna finishes a gust of wind picks up.
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* PantyShot: When Luna jumps from a window sill (in Tuxedo Mask style) her school uniform skirt flies up upon landing. Giving Tuxedo Mask and Warrior Moon a glimpse at her underwear. It was enough to make Mask uncomfortable.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Desi and it's assumed the rest of the Protectors (even though Artemis and Luna haven't been scene in their uniforms). See also HotChickInABadassSuit below.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka, claiming a man has broken in her home. Usagi rushes to her aid and comes across a robbery in progress followed by the man Naru mentioned. While attempting to save her friend Usagi is visited by Luna, a black cat that had been previously following her, and is given a bracelet with a dangling charm on the end, in the shape of a crescent moon. With the aid Luna Usagi manages to transform into the Cosmic Warrior, Warrior Moon and with further help from a masked thief, manages to save her friend. She is then told about her past and her duty to save the planet before a darkness like the world has never known takes over, thus putting an end to life as they know it.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka, claiming a man has broken in her home. Usagi rushes to her aid and comes across a robbery in progress followed by the man Naru mentioned. While attempting to save her friend Usagi is visited by Luna, a black cat that had been previously following her, and is given a bracelet with a dangling charm on the end, in the shape of a crescent moon. With the aid of Luna Usagi manages to transform into the Cosmic Warrior, Warrior Moon and with further help from a masked thief, manages to save her friend. She is then told about her past and her duty to save the planet before a darkness like the world has never known takes over, thus putting an end to life as they know it.
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--> '''Usagi:''' “According to Naru he's – what was the phrase you used Naru? Sex on legs?”
--> '''Usagi:''' “According to Naru he's – what was the phrase you used Naru? Sex on legs?”
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka,, claiming a man has broken in her home. Usagi rushes to her aid and comes across a robbery in progress followed by the man Naru mentioned. While attempting to save her friend Usagi is visited by Luna, a black cat that had been previously following her, and is given a bracelet with a dangling charm on the end, in the shape of a crescent moon. With the aid Luna Usagi manages to transform into the Cosmic Warrior, Warrior Moon and with further help from a masked thief, manages to save her friend. She is then told about her past and her duty to save the planet before a darkness like the world has never known takes over, thus putting an end to life as they know it.
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Cosmic Warriors follows Usagi Tsukino, a clumsy, irresponsible, and ditzy 14 year old whose life changes when she receives a distressed phone call from her friend, Naru Osaka,, Osaka, claiming a man has broken in her home. Usagi rushes to her aid and comes across a robbery in progress followed by the man Naru mentioned. While attempting to save her friend Usagi is visited by Luna, a black cat that had been previously following her, and is given a bracelet with a dangling charm on the end, in the shape of a crescent moon. With the aid Luna Usagi manages to transform into the Cosmic Warrior, Warrior Moon and with further help from a masked thief, manages to save her friend. She is then told about her past and her duty to save the planet before a darkness like the world has never known takes over, thus putting an end to life as they know it.
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In the first chapter the author shows talent for writing in the way the story opens and gives readers a taste of familiarity with some classic run-ins and mannerisms of the cast. But of course, we're not here to re-read Sailor Moon. The author kicks off the series of changes with a new breed of monsters called Experiments, former heroes of mythology who've been reincarnated to work for the Dark Kingdom. Coupled with that, rather than have our heroine fighting with a tiara in a one-piece, a skirt, and heels, Usagi transforms into a lance wielding warrior in a Zero Suit Samus inspired {{LatexSpaceSuit}}. Luna and Artemis also seem to have bigger roles in this story, as of the latest chapter we've seen Luna as a cat and Artemis transform from human to cat, it's safe to assume soon we'll see a human Luna as well. The two felines are also a part of a secret organization made up a previous guardians from the Moon Kingdom, called the Silver Guard.
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In the first chapter the author shows talent for writing in the way the story opens and gives readers a taste of familiarity with some classic run-ins and mannerisms of the cast. But of course, we're not here to re-read Sailor Moon. The author kicks off the series of changes with a new breed of monsters called Experiments, former heroes of mythology who've been reincarnated to work for the Dark Kingdom. Coupled with that, rather than have our heroine fighting with a tiara in a one-piece, a skirt, and heels, Usagi transforms into a lance wielding warrior in a Zero Suit Samus inspired {{LatexSpaceSuit}}. Luna and Artemis also seem to have bigger roles in this story, as of the latest chapter we've seen Luna as a cat and Artemis transform from human to cat, it's safe to assume soon we'll see a human Luna as well. The two felines are also a part of a secret organization made up a of previous guardians from the Moon Kingdom, called the Silver Guard.
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* AllWomenAreLustful
--> '''Usagi:''' “According to Naru he's – what was the phrase you used Naru? Sex on legs?”
--> '''Usagi:''' “According to Naru he's – what was the phrase you used Naru? Sex on legs?”
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* ChekhovsGun: Usagi and Naru find a small gem on the ground after their friend leaves, Usagi tells Naru to keep it and later that gem releases a reborn hero known as Experiment-D-U-D into Naru's home. [[spoiler: After an unseen altercation he then proceeds to rape Naru.]]