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** Felicia's defense of Kaze may remind one of [[LightNovel/{{Toradora}} Taiga's infamous "RYUUJI'S MINE!" speech.]]
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** Felicia's defense of Kaze may remind one of [[LightNovel/{{Toradora}} [[Literature/{{Toradora}} Taiga's infamous "RYUUJI'S MINE!" speech.]]
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* SlapstickKnowsNoGender: Everyone is subject to pranks; Camilla and Hinoka get caught up in a LovePotion prank, and Kaze ends up getting knocked out escaping his UnwantedHarem.
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* SlapstickKnowsNoGender: {{Slapstick}}: Everyone is subject to pranks; Camilla and Hinoka get caught up in a LovePotion prank, and Kaze ends up getting knocked out escaping his UnwantedHarem.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: One of the fic's explicitly stated goals was to break the mold set by other Reactsverse fics. Thus far, the usual elements found in others, such as UnresolvedSexualTension, are either absent or heavily lampshaded and played with.
** The fic represents a broken streak of female protagonists: Corrin is the first male protagonist of a Reactsverse fic after [[Fanfic/WeissReacts Weiss]], [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Lucina]] and [[Fanfic/HomuraReacts Homura]].
** Similarly, Azura and Corrin are the first Reactsverse primary protagonists not to have UnresolvedSexualTension with each other ala [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Robin and Lucina]], although ShipTease does exist.
** [[spoiler: Corrin is the first protagonist to be an Antic Order member. The story is slated to be set from the perspective of an Antic Order member for once. Not only that, but he's the first (discounting [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Cordelia]], who only worked with the Order and wasn't a member) Order member to succeed in pairing up a couple (Benny and Beruka).]]
** The fic represents a broken streak of female protagonists: Corrin is the first male protagonist of a Reactsverse fic after [[Fanfic/WeissReacts Weiss]], [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Lucina]] and [[Fanfic/HomuraReacts Homura]].
** Similarly, Azura and Corrin are the first Reactsverse primary protagonists not to have UnresolvedSexualTension with each other ala [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Robin and Lucina]], although ShipTease does exist.
** [[spoiler: Corrin is the first protagonist to be an Antic Order member. The story is slated to be set from the perspective of an Antic Order member for once. Not only that, but he's the first (discounting [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Cordelia]], who only worked with the Order and wasn't a member) Order member to succeed in pairing up a couple (Benny and Beruka).]]
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* TakeThat: The MarySue chapter seems to be this to, well, Sues and to an extent the concept of an OriginalCharacter.
** A minor TakeThat towards [[AllThereInTheManual Leo's apparent feelings]] [[BrotherSisterIncest towards Camilla]] is present in the second half of the Harems chapter; Camilla ends up drugged by the LovePotion in the wine and mistakes Flora for Leo. Leo promptly expresses {{Squick}} at the idea of such a relationship with his sister.
** A minor TakeThat towards [[AllThereInTheManual Leo's apparent feelings]] [[BrotherSisterIncest towards Camilla]] is present in the second half of the Harems chapter; Camilla ends up drugged by the LovePotion in the wine and mistakes Flora for Leo. Leo promptly expresses {{Squick}} at the idea of such a relationship with his sister.
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* TakeThat: The MarySue chapter seems to be this to, well, Sues and to an extent the concept of an OriginalCharacter.
**A minor TakeThat one towards [[AllThereInTheManual Leo's apparent feelings]] [[BrotherSisterIncest towards Camilla]] is present in the second half of the Harems chapter; Camilla ends up drugged by the LovePotion in the wine and mistakes Flora for Leo. Leo promptly expresses {{Squick}} at the idea of such a relationship with his sister.
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* RealityEnsues: Just because you plan everything perfectly [[spoiler: doesn't mean there won't be a SpannerInTheWorks that will derail it all]], as Corrin finds out [[spoiler: when Jakob, after all Corrin's work to get him to come with Flora to the Festival, rejects her.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Just because you plan everything perfectly [[spoiler: doesn't mean there won't be another outcome that will derail it all]], as Corrin finds out [[spoiler: when Jakob, after all Corrin's work to get him to come with Flora to the Festival, rejects her.]]
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* AlternateUniverse: Things specifically revealed to be different from the canon ''Fates'' universe: [[spoiler:Scarlet and Izana survived ''Revelation'', and Arete and Mikoto were not blood-related sisters (meaning Corrin and Azura are no longer cousins).]]
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* AlternateUniverse: Things specifically revealed to be different from the canon ''Fates'' universe: [[spoiler:Scarlet and Izana survived ''Revelation'', and Arete and Mikoto were not blood-related sisters (meaning Corrin and Azura are no longer cousins). Furthermore, Corrin and Flora have a far closer relationship than within canon, causing Flora to defect to Corrin's side instead of attacking him as she does when Garon threatens her people.]]
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** Corrin cracks a (badly-received) joke about [[spoiler: [[BlackComedy Mikoto getting]] [[IncrediblyLamePun penetrated]] [[TakingTheBullet during her taking a hit for Corrin]] in the events of the game. The subsequent SneezeCut cuts to [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBlazingBlade Ninian and Eliwood]]. Fans of the game will know [[WhamEpisode exactly]] [[KillTheCutie why]] the SneezeCut cuts to them.]]
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** Corrin cracks a (badly-received) joke about and Azura remark on the fact that, by technicality, [[spoiler: [[BlackComedy Mikoto getting]] [[IncrediblyLamePun penetrated]] [[TakingTheBullet during her taking a hit for Corrin]] in the events of the game.[[BigScrewedUpFamily Corrin's father-in-law killed his mother]]. The subsequent SneezeCut cuts to [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBlazingBlade Ninian and Eliwood]]. Fans of the game will know [[WhamEpisode exactly]] [[KillTheCutie why]] the SneezeCut cuts to them.]]
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** [[spoiler: Flora becoming FireForgedFriends with Corrin results in her gaining UndyingLoyalty to Corrin, enabling her to TakeAThirdOption and betray Garon and save her people while defecting to his side.]]
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* LighterAndSofter: Than canon in general. Specific examples include [[NoSenseOfDirection how Rinkah and Kaze actually got captured by Garon]] and [[DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength how Kaze and Felicia's first meeting went.]]
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* SadisticChoice: Garon tries this on Flora in the backstory, forcing her to choose between him and her people as he does in canon. Key word being ''[[TakeAThirdOption tries]]''.
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** Janus, [[spoiler: his son]] tries to play at being this for Flora and Corrin. Keyword being ''[[EpicFail tries.]]''
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** Janus, [[spoiler: his son]] tries to play at being this for Flora and Corrin. Keyword being ''[[EpicFail tries.]]'']]'' And now Felicia and Elise are joining in on it.
* MeetCute: Felicia and Kaze have an exaggerated version of this, having a MeetCute ''during a fight for both their lives''.
* MeetCute: Felicia and Kaze have an exaggerated version of this, having a MeetCute ''during a fight for both their lives''.
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** Corrin cracks a (badly-received) joke about [[spoiler: [[BlackComedy Mikoto getting]] [[IncrediblyLamePun penetrated]] [[TakingABullet during her taking a hit for Corrin]] in the events of the game. The subsequent SneezeCut cuts to [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBlazingBlade Ninian and Eliwood]]. Fans of the game will know [[WhamEpisode exactly]] [[KillTheOnesYouLove why]] the SneezeCut cuts to them.]]
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** Corrin cracks a (badly-received) joke about [[spoiler: [[BlackComedy Mikoto getting]] [[IncrediblyLamePun penetrated]] [[TakingABullet [[TakingTheBullet during her taking a hit for Corrin]] in the events of the game. The subsequent SneezeCut cuts to [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBlazingBlade Ninian and Eliwood]]. Fans of the game will know [[WhamEpisode exactly]] [[KillTheOnesYouLove [[KillTheCutie why]] the SneezeCut cuts to them.]]
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* ContinuityNod: A few to the Reactsverse and Fire Emblem as a whole:
** Corrin cracks a (badly-received) joke about [[spoiler: [[BlackComedy Mikoto getting]] [[IncrediblyLamePun penetrated]] [[TakingABullet during her taking a hit for Corrin]] in the events of the game. The subsequent SneezeCut cuts to [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBlazingBlade Ninian and Eliwood]]. Fans of the game will know [[WhamEpisode exactly]] [[KillTheOnesYouLove why]] the SneezeCut cuts to them.]]
** A lot of the chapters of the fic are based on other chapters from [[Fanfic/WeissReacts other]] [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Reactsverse]] [[Fanfic/HomuraReacts fanfics]] and the very first chapter itself is a {{Homage}} to the very first chapter of ''Weiss Reacts'', right down to the TwistEnding.
** Corrin cracks a (badly-received) joke about [[spoiler: [[BlackComedy Mikoto getting]] [[IncrediblyLamePun penetrated]] [[TakingABullet during her taking a hit for Corrin]] in the events of the game. The subsequent SneezeCut cuts to [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBlazingBlade Ninian and Eliwood]]. Fans of the game will know [[WhamEpisode exactly]] [[KillTheOnesYouLove why]] the SneezeCut cuts to them.]]
** A lot of the chapters of the fic are based on other chapters from [[Fanfic/WeissReacts other]] [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Reactsverse]] [[Fanfic/HomuraReacts fanfics]] and the very first chapter itself is a {{Homage}} to the very first chapter of ''Weiss Reacts'', right down to the TwistEnding.
** Felicia was this during her [[LoveAtFirstSight first meeting with Kaze]]. Elise refuses to believe it, [[LampshadeHanging pointing out it would be unrealistic for her to act like that]].
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* OfficialCouple: As of chapter 6, [[spoiler:Benny and Beruka have hooked up thanks to Corrin.]]
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** Similarly, Corrin gets accused of pranking [[HoistByHisOwnPetard himself]] by Orochi during the Valentines' Incident chapters, causing him to get soused with love potion. [[spoiler: It was Janus.]]
* OfficialCouple: As of chapter 6,[[spoiler:Benny [[spoiler: Benny and Beruka have hooked up thanks to Corrin.]]
* OfficialCouple: As of chapter 6,
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** [[spoiler: [[LiveActionTV/{{Sherlock}} Eurus]] is apparently a terrible kid's name.]]
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: So far, Leo is explicitly shown to have feelings for Hinoka, and [[spoiler: the whole reason Corrin starts the Antic Order chapter of his world is that]] Flora has feelings for Jakob.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: So far, Leo is explicitly shown to have feelings for Hinoka, and [[spoiler: the whole reason Corrin starts the Antic Order chapter of his world is that]] Flora has feelings for Jakob.Jakob [[spoiler: and now Corrin]].
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: [[spoiler: "…..what do you see in Jakob of all people?"]]. This question [[spoiler: directly leads Flora into a LoveEpiphany.]]
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler: Kana and Janus had this aim when they left their original time to ensure Flora's survival.]]
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* WhamEpisode: ''The Valentine's Incident, Part 1''. [[spoiler: It reveals that Kana and Janus are originally from a ''Birthright'' timeline where Flora survived to fall in love and marry Corrin and that some unknown catastrophe befell their happy family, causing Kana and Janus to have to go back to fix it, with the cost being that Corrin and Flora didn't fall in love as early as they did and might not at all. Also, Elise is revealed to have known about the increasingly close bond between her brother and Flora for a long while, making her not as oblivious as she'd been set up to be.]]
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* WhamEpisode: ''The Valentine's Incident, Part 1''. [[spoiler: It reveals that Kana and Janus are originally from a ''Birthright'' timeline where Flora survived to fall in love and marry Corrin and that some unknown catastrophe befell their happy family, causing Kana and Janus to have to go back to fix it, with the cost being that Corrin and Flora didn't fall in love as early as they did and might not at all. Also, Elise is revealed to have known about the increasingly close bond between her brother and Flora for a long while, making her not as oblivious as she'd been set up to be.]]
