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* BadassBystander: Maria.
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* AliensInCardiff: While the Core Timeline has a lot of examples all over the place, it is still pretty surprising for Maria (for a couple of seconds) to be smack in the middle of a ''Firebender'' attack on a ''NewJersey'' beach.
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* AliensInCardiff: While the Core Timeline has a lot of examples all over the place, it is still pretty surprising for Maria (for a couple of seconds) to be smack in the middle of a ''Firebender'' attack on a ''NewJersey'' ''UsefulNotes/NewJersey'' beach.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Turns out that the Agni Kai Triads used [[DoctorWho Time Lord]] technology for their force field, which intrigues Maria. This same renegade Time Lord provides the technology that the Weather Wizard uses on ''Fanfic/CLINEStormWarning''.]]
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Turns out that the Agni Kai Triads used [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho Time Lord]] technology for their force field, which intrigues Maria. This same renegade Time Lord provides the technology that the Weather Wizard uses on ''Fanfic/CLINEStormWarning''.]]
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''[[http://marcoasalazarm.deviantart.com/art/CORELINE-A-Terrific-Summer-s-End-479261053 CORELINE: A Terrific Summer's End]]'' is a one-shot story that occurs on the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse. It features JusticeSocietyOfAmerica member Dr. Maria Vincennes aka Miss Terrific trying to enjoy her vacation in Cape May, New Jersey. Unfortunately, the [[WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra Agni Kai Triad]] has other plans...
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''[[http://marcoasalazarm.deviantart.com/art/CORELINE-A-Terrific-Summer-s-End-479261053 CORELINE: A Terrific Summer's End]]'' is a one-shot story that occurs on the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse. It features JusticeSocietyOfAmerica ComicBook/JusticeSocietyOfAmerica member Dr. Maria Vincennes aka Miss Terrific trying to enjoy her vacation in Cape May, New Jersey. Unfortunately, the [[WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra Agni Kai Triad]] has other plans...
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* DieHardOnAnX: Basically, this is [[DieHardOnAnX Die Hard on a Beach.]]
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* DieHardOnAnX: Basically, this is [[DieHardOnAnX Die Hard Hard]] [[BeachEpisode on a Beach.]]
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* CelebritySurvivor: Aside from Maria, the person (and {{Mon}}) who kicks the biggest Triad ass of the whole party crowd is the Alternate of [[Franchise/{{Digimon}} Mimi Tachibana]] (a pop singer) and her Digimon.
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* ClosedCircle: The Agni Kai Triad soldiers which are stealing the partygoers make sure that nobody will interfere with their raid (from the ''[[DidNotSeeThatComing outside]]'', that is) by activating a forcefield that surrounds the party's perimeter.
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* ClosedCircle: The Agni Kai Triad soldiers which are stealing from the partygoers make sure that nobody will interfere with their raid (from the ''[[DidNotSeeThatComing outside]]'', that is) by activating a forcefield that surrounds the party's perimeter.
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* AliensOnCardiff: While the Core Timeline has a lot of examples all over the place, it is still pretty surprising for Maria (for a couple of seconds) to be smack in the middle of a ''Firebender'' attack on a ''NewJersey'' beach.
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* AliensOnCardiff: AliensInCardiff: While the Core Timeline has a lot of examples all over the place, it is still pretty surprising for Maria (for a couple of seconds) to be smack in the middle of a ''Firebender'' attack on a ''NewJersey'' beach.
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* AliensOnCardiff: While the Core Timeline has a lot of examples all over the place, it is still pretty surprising for Maria (for a couple of seconds) to be smack in the middle of a ''Firebender'' attack on a ''NewJersey'' beach.
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''[[http://marcoasalazarm.deviantart.com/art/CORELINE-A-Terrific-Summer-s-End-479261053 CORELINE: A Terrific Summer's End]]'' is a one-shot story that occurs on the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse. It features Dr. Maria Vincennes aka Miss Terrific trying to enjoy her vacation in Cape May. Unfortunately, the Agni Kai Triad has other plans...
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''[[http://marcoasalazarm.deviantart.com/art/CORELINE-A-Terrific-Summer-s-End-479261053 CORELINE: A Terrific Summer's End]]'' is a one-shot story that occurs on the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse. It features JusticeSocietyOfAmerica member Dr. Maria Vincennes aka Miss Terrific trying to enjoy her vacation in Cape May. May, New Jersey. Unfortunately, the [[WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra Agni Kai Triad Triad]] has other plans...
* ClosedCircle: The Agni Kai Triad soldiers which are stealing the partygoers make sure that nobody will interfere with their raid (from the ''[[DidNotSeeThatComing outside]]'', that is) by activating a forcefield that surrounds the party's perimeter.
* EndOfAnEra: Minor example: Maria feels a bit of forlornness from knowing that the summer season (and her vacation) is bound to end soon.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Miss Terrific serves as this to the Agni Kai Triad. They really weren't expecting a superhero to be in the crowd.
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* MobWar: It is mentioned in passing that the [[WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra Agni Kai]] [[TheTriadsAndTheTongs Triads]] are trying to muscle in on the New Jersey underground... which means that they are getting quite a lot of resistance from [[Series/TheSopranos the Soprano crime family]] (which is one of the most powerful criminal organizations of the state).
* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Turns out that the Agni Kai Triads used [[DoctorWho Time Lord]] technology for their force field, which intrigues Maria. This same renegade Time Lord provides the technology that the Weather Wizard uses on ''Fanfic/CLINEStormWarning''.]]
* SpannerInTheWorks: Miss Terrific serves as this to the Agni Kai Triad. They really weren't expecting a superhero to be in thecrowd.crowd.
* WalkingSwimsuitScene: Aside from Her Miss Terrific mask and jacket, Maria spends the entire confrontation (and story) running around on a bikini. She even mentions to a police officer on the aftermath of the fight that no, this is ''not'' her regular superhero uniform.
* SequelHook: [[spoiler:Turns out that the Agni Kai Triads used [[DoctorWho Time Lord]] technology for their force field, which intrigues Maria. This same renegade Time Lord provides the technology that the Weather Wizard uses on ''Fanfic/CLINEStormWarning''.]]
* SpannerInTheWorks: Miss Terrific serves as this to the Agni Kai Triad. They really weren't expecting a superhero to be in the
* WalkingSwimsuitScene: Aside from Her Miss Terrific mask and jacket, Maria spends the entire confrontation (and story) running around on a bikini. She even mentions to a police officer on the aftermath of the fight that no, this is ''not'' her regular superhero uniform.
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* JumpPhysics: One of the things working in Miss Terrific's favor is the fact that she spent part of her summer [[WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack with some friendly monkeys, learning to "jump good".]]
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* DieHardOnAnX: Basically, this is [[DieHardOnAnX Die Hard on a Beach.]]
* HeroesGoneFishing: Miss Terrific is just trying to relax and enjoy the end of her summer vacation by attending a concert. Unfortunately, the Agni Kai Triad cuts her enjoyment (and the concert) short.
* HeroesGoneFishing: Miss Terrific is just trying to relax and enjoy the end of her summer vacation by attending a concert. Unfortunately, the Agni Kai Triad cuts her enjoyment (and the concert) short.
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* TheKnightsWhoSaySquee: After everything is said and done. Miss Terrific makes a point of getting Mimi to autograph one of her T-Spheres.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Miss Terrific serves as this to the Agni Kai Triad. They really weren't expecting a superhero to be in the crowd.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Miss Terrific serves as this to the Agni Kai Triad. They really weren't expecting a superhero to be in the crowd.
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''[[http://marcoasalazarm.deviantart.com/art/CORELINE-A-Terrific-Summer-s-End-479261053 CORELINE: A Terrific Summer's End]]'' is a one-shot story that occurs on the ''Fanfic/CoreLine'' SharedUniverse. It features Dr. Maria Vincennes aka Miss Terrific trying to enjoy her vacation in Cape May. Unfortunately, the Agni Kai Triad has other plans...
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