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* DeadFic: The fic has not been updated since June 2015.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Azula and Aang are this to Zuko and Katara.
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* WeakButSkilled: Zuko and Katara are this compared to Aang and Azula.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Zuko notes that Aang, even if he wins, has nothing left to go to.
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* Depower: According to chapter 14, the surviving Air Nomads were so grief-stricken over the genocide that the were all depowered, and no new airbender had been born for some time.
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* Depower: DePower: According to chapter 14, the surviving Air Nomads were so grief-stricken over the genocide that the were all depowered, and no new airbender had been born for some time.
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* Depower: According to chapter 14, the surviving Air Nomads were so grief-stricken over the genocide that the were all depowered, and no new airbender had been born for some time.
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* ItWasAGift: Zuko has a number of these. (He started out the story with the Earth Kingdom dagger and Mai’s heartstone; now he also has slate and bedroll.)
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* ItWasAGift: Zuko has a number of these. (He started out the story with the Earth Kingdom dagger and Mai’s heartstone; now he also has the slate and bedroll.)
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** They're also plotting a long-range resistance conspiracy thing, largely in Zuko's memory while they believe he's dead.
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** They're also plotting a long-range resistance conspiracy thing, largely in Zuko's memory while they believe he's dead. After they find out he's alive, they ponder whether or not to recruit him and Iroh.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: The Fire Nation royal family, which isn't that different from their canon versions.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: The Fire Nation royal family, which isn't that different from their canon versions.very surprising.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Aang's old friend Kuzon placed his life at risk to help the surviving Air Nomads escape the Fire Nation and find sanctuary, eventually leading them to a refuge in the Foggy Swamp, which was abandoned when Aang found it: what happened to the people there is unknown.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Aang's old friend Kuzon placed his life at risk to help the surviving Air Nomads escape the Fire Nation and find sanctuary, eventually leading them to a refuge in the Foggy Swamp, which was abandoned when Aang found it: what happened to the people there is unknown.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Zuko's whole attitude toward Aang understandably changes after the Siege of the North and the massive slaughter that ''someone he trusted and let walk free'' has inflicted on his countrymen. They've patched it up a bit, but Aang and Blue are still very definitely not friends anymore.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Played straight at first, then subverted in Chapter 14, when Zuko explains how he cut through the chains holding Aang. Turns out the chain was designed to be soft(though still strong enough to hold a human being), so if it were to be heated up by firebending it would exploded, with the chain acting as lethal sharpel
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Played straight at first, then subverted in Chapter 14, when Zuko explains how he cut through the chains holding Aang. Turns out the chain was designed to be soft(though still strong enough to hold a human being), so if it were to be heated up by firebending it would exploded, with the chain acting as lethal sharpel
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* BecomingTheMask: The more time Zuko spends as Blue, the more his Prince façade, his Blue façade and his 'true' self all start to mix together.
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* BecomingTheMask: The more time Zuko spends as Blue, the more his Prince façade, his Blue façade and his 'true' self all start to mix together.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: Played straight, subverted, and lampshaded. Whenever dealing with a difficult Fire Nation Officer, Zuko notes that, despite the inconvenience it places to him, the Fire Nation really needs more men like that. He even makes a mental note to follow one guy's career should he get back in a place of power.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: Played straight, subverted, and lampshaded. Whenever dealing with a difficult Fire Nation Officer, Zuko notes that, despite the inconvenience it places to on him, the Fire Nation really needs more men like that. He even makes a mental note to follow one guy's career should he get back in a place of power.
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** EmpoweredBadassNormal: [[spoiler: Not as of Chapter 23, when Blue reveals to the gaang that he's a firebender]]
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** EmpoweredBadassNormal: [[spoiler: Not Now as of Chapter 23, when Blue reveals to the gaang that he's a firebender]]
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Played straight at first, then subverted in Chapter 14, when Zuko explains how he cut through the chains holding Aang. Turns out the chain was designed to be soft(though still strong enough to hold a human being), so if it were to be heated up by firebending it would exploded, with the chain acting as lethal sharpel
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** [[spoiler: Not as of Chapter 23, when Blue reveals to the gaang that he's a firebender]]
** BadassAbnormal: Zuko!Blue when he is being assisted by [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue]].
** BadassAbnormal: Zuko!Blue when he is being assisted by [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue]].
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** EmpoweredBadassNormal: [[spoiler: Not as of Chapter 23, when Blue reveals to the gaang that he's a firebender]]
** BadassAbnormal: Zuko!Blue when he is being assisted by [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue]].firebender]]
** BadassAbnormal: Zuko!Blue when he is being assisted by [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue]].
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So as far as the Gaang was concerned, Blue was someone whod just rescued Aang and continued to be a good ally and later, friend. Zuko found such naïve trust ridiculous, but all the same, it was hard not to respond to it, or to dislike them for it. As Zuko struggled with the way that the Avatar and his companions were nothing like he expected, he began to realize that perhaps, he’d been wrong about some things – about the Avatar, about friendship, about the role of the Fire Nation in the war… Zuko believed in living by his father’s harsh rules, but he couldn’t easily apply them here. In turn, the Gaang also learned to see some new perspectives. Slowly, all their destinies began to change.
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So as far as the Gaang was concerned, Blue was someone whod who’d just rescued Aang and continued to be a good ally and later, friend. Zuko found such naïve trust ridiculous, but all the same, it was hard not to respond to it, or to dislike them for it. As Zuko struggled with the way that the Avatar and his companions were nothing like he expected, he began to realize that perhaps, he’d been wrong about some things – about the Avatar, about friendship, about the role of the Fire Nation in the war… Zuko believed in living by his father’s harsh rules, but he couldn’t easily apply them here. In turn, the Gaang also learned to see some new perspectives. Slowly, all their destinies began to change.
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* StealthHiBye: Blue always arrives this way when he's meeting up with the Gaang.
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So as far as the Gaang was concerned, Blue was someone who’d just rescued Aang and continued to be a good ally and later, friend. Zuko found such naïve trust ridiculous, but all the same, it was hard not to respond to it, or to dislike them for it. As Zuko struggled with the way that the Avatar and his companions were nothing like he expected, he began to realize that perhaps, he’d been wrong about some things – about the Avatar, about friendship, about the role of the Fire Nation in the war… Zuko believed in living by his father’s harsh rules, but he couldn’t easily apply them here. In turn, the Gaang also learned to see some new perspectives. Slowly, all their destinies began to change.
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So as far as the Gaang was concerned, Blue was someone who’d whod just rescued Aang and continued to be a good ally and later, friend. Zuko found such naïve trust ridiculous, but all the same, it was hard not to respond to it, or to dislike them for it. As Zuko struggled with the way that the Avatar and his companions were nothing like he expected, he began to realize that perhaps, he’d been wrong about some things – about the Avatar, about friendship, about the role of the Fire Nation in the war… Zuko believed in living by his father’s harsh rules, but he couldn’t easily apply them here. In turn, the Gaang also learned to see some new perspectives. Slowly, all their destinies began to change.
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* TheWhitePrince: Zuko, although he’s well on the way to becoming a WisePrince instead.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Zuko's whole attitude toward Aang understandably changes after the Siege of the North and the massive slaughter that ''someone he trusted and let walk free'' has inflicted on his countrymen. They've patched it up a bit, but Aang and Blue are still very definitely not friends anymore.
** They're also plotting a long-range resistance conspiracy thing, largely in Zuko's memory while they believe he's dead.
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* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue for Zuko]]
* TheStoic: The Gaang assumes Blue is this.
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* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue for Zuko]]
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* TheStoic: The Gaang assumes Blue is this. He kinda is.
* TheStoic: The Gaang assumes Blue is this. He kinda is.
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** TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: Played straight, subverted, and lampshaded. Whenever dealing with a difficult Fire Nation Officer, Zuko notes that, despite the inconvenience it places to him, the Fire Nation really needs more men like that. He even makes a mental note to follow one guy's career should he get back in a place of power.
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** TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: Played straight, subverted, and lampshaded. Whenever dealing with a difficult Fire Nation Officer, Zuko notes that, despite the inconvenience it places to him, the Fire Nation really needs more men like that. He even makes a mental note to follow one guy's career should he get back in a place of power.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Iroh gets a bit of this.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: The Fire Nation royal family.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: The Fire Nation royal family.family, which isn't that different from their canon versions.
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* ShownTheirWork[=/=]WordOfGod: Much of the background research and information for the story, as well as some of the future developments, are discussed in the comments of [[http://maguena.livejournal.com/6408.html this post]] on the author’s Livejournal account. Warning: Heavy spoilers abound in the discussion.
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* ShownTheirWork[=/=]WordOfGod: Much of the background research and information for the story, as well as some of the future developments, are discussed in the comments of [[http://maguena.livejournal.com/6408.html this post]] on the author’s Livejournal account. Warning: '''Warning:''' Heavy spoilers abound in the discussion.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Iroh gets a bit of this.
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** [[spoiler: Not as of Chapter 23]]
** BadassAbnormal: Zuko!Blue when he is being assisted bySpirit!Blue.[[spoiler: Spirit!Blue]].
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* CastFromHitPoints: What Zuko does to disable the drill. A relatively mild example, however, as he recovers afterwards.
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* CastFromHitPoints: What Zuko does to disable [[spoiler: the drill.drill]]. A relatively mild example, however, as he recovers afterwards.
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* CrypticConversation: Every conversation Zuko has with Spirit!Blue is one of these. Iroh is also fond of them.
* DealWithTheDevil[=/=]BargainWithHeaven: Zuko’s deal with Spirit!Blue in Chapter 20.
* DealWithTheDevil[=/=]BargainWithHeaven: Zuko’s deal with Spirit!Blue in Chapter 20.
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* CrypticConversation: Every conversation Zuko has with Spirit!Blue [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue]] is one of these. Iroh is also fond of them.
* DealWithTheDevil[=/=]BargainWithHeaven: Zuko’s deal withSpirit!Blue [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue]] in Chapter 20.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: WordOfGod has stated that the blue dragon imagery that Spirit!Blue occasionally uses in communication with Zuko is foreshadowing.
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* HealItWithFire: Zuko and Iroh both use the straight version; Zuko goes on to develop a more metaphorical version that he teaches to Iroh. The consequences of burning self in the straight version are handwaved through a) Iroh has Just That Much Control, and b) ability to apply incredibly helpful healing salve afterwards.
* HoldingTheFloor: Toph pulls this in Chapter 22 to give the approaching Blue a chance to end the standoff between the Gaang and Mai.
* HoldingTheFloor: Toph pulls this in Chapter 22 to give the approaching Blue a chance to end the standoff between the Gaang and Mai.
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* HealItWithFire: Zuko and Iroh both use the straight version; [[spoiler: Zuko goes on to develop a more metaphorical version that he teaches to Iroh.Iroh]]. The consequences of burning self in the straight version are handwaved through a) Iroh has Just That Much Control, and b) ability to apply incredibly helpful healing salve afterwards.
* HoldingTheFloor: Toph pulls this in Chapter 22 to give the approaching Blue a chance to end the standoff between the Gaang andMai.[[spoiler: Mai]].
* HoldingTheFloor: Toph pulls this in Chapter 22 to give the approaching Blue a chance to end the standoff between the Gaang and
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* LaResistance: Sokka thinks that Blue might be working for a resistance group. There is also the Order of the White Lotus and the conspiracy started by Zuko’s former crew with the goal of forcing the Fire Nation’s military command structure to change.
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* LaResistance: Sokka thinks that Blue might be working for a resistance group. There is also the Order of the White Lotus and the conspiracy started by [[spoiler: Zuko’s former crew with the goal of forcing the Fire Nation’s military command structure to change.change]].
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* TheMutiny: Jee and the rest of Zuko’s former crew stage a minor one after the Siege of the North when they go back to try and rescue any survivors of Koizilla’s attack. Also, it’s mentioned once that Zuko faced a mutiny from his crew about a year ago.
* NonSequitur: Spirit!Blue’s initial means of communication with Zuko tended to be inserting one of these into Zuko’s train of thought.
* NonSequitur: Spirit!Blue’s initial means of communication with Zuko tended to be inserting one of these into Zuko’s train of thought.
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* TheMutiny: Jee [[spoiler:Jee and the rest of Zuko’s former crew crew]] stage a minor one after the Siege of the North when they go back to try and rescue any survivors of Koizilla’s attack. Also, it’s mentioned once that Zuko faced a mutiny from his crew about a year ago.
* NonSequitur:Spirit!Blue’s [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue’s]] initial means of communication with Zuko tended to be inserting one of these into Zuko’s train of thought.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Every member of the crew of Zuko’s ship was assigned to it as punishment. Also, as punishment for their minor mutiny after the Siege of the North, they get assigned to a dead end patrol.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Every member of [[spoiler:of the crew of Zuko’s ship was assigned to it as punishment. Also, as punishment for their minor mutiny after the Siege of the North, North]], they get assigned to a dead end patrol.
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* SupernaturalAid: Spirit!Blue has given this to Zuko a few times.
* ThisMeansWar: Invoked in Iroh’s thoughts when he finally learns that Azulon had ordered Ozai to kill Zuko and Ozai had been going to do it.
* ThisMeansWar: Invoked in Iroh’s thoughts when he finally learns that Azulon had ordered Ozai to kill Zuko and Ozai had been going to do it.
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* SupernaturalAid: Spirit!Blue [[spoiler: Spirit!Blue]] has given this to Zuko a few times.
* ThisMeansWar: Invoked in Iroh’s thoughts when he finally learns that Azulon had ordered Ozai to kill Zuko and that Ozai had been going to do it.
* ThisMeansWar: Invoked in Iroh’s thoughts when he finally learns that Azulon had ordered Ozai to kill Zuko and that Ozai had been going to do it.
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* SignLanguage: Zuko’s initial means of communicating as Blue.
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A ForWantOfANail AU.
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A ForWantOfANail AU.
AU. The story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6904038/1/ here]].
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* ItWasAGift: Zuko has a number of these. (He started out the story with the Earth Kingdom dagger and Mai’s heartstone; now he also has slate and bedroll.
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* ItWasAGift: Zuko has a number of these. (He started out the story with the Earth Kingdom dagger and Mai’s heartstone; now he also has slate and bedroll.)
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* ItWasAGift - Zuko has a number of those. (He started out the story with the Earth Kingdom dagger and Mai’s heartstone; now he also has slate and bedroll.
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* ItWasAGift - ItWasAGift: Zuko has a number of those.these. (He started out the story with the Earth Kingdom dagger and Mai’s heartstone; now he also has slate and bedroll.
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* GossipEvolution: The whole reason the Blue Spirit's reputation gets more fearsome every time it's mentioned.
* HandSignals: Zuko and Mai have a large vocabulary of them. Toph and Suki also use some with each other.
* HealItWithFire: Zuko and Iroh both use the straight version; Zuko goes on to develop a more metaphorical version that he teaches to Iroh. The consequences of burning self in the straight version are handwaved through a) Iroh has Just That Much Control, and b) ability to apply incredibly helpful healing salve afterwards.
* HandSignals: Zuko and Mai have a large vocabulary of them. Toph and Suki also use some with each other.
* HealItWithFire: Zuko and Iroh both use the straight version; Zuko goes on to develop a more metaphorical version that he teaches to Iroh. The consequences of burning self in the straight version are handwaved through a) Iroh has Just That Much Control, and b) ability to apply incredibly helpful healing salve afterwards.
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* AccidentalTruth: See the story summary.
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* NonSequiter: Spirit!Blue’s initial means of communication with Zuko tended to be inserting one of these into Zuko’s train of thought.
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* AccidentalTruths: See the story summary.