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"Boys Do Tankary"[[note]]That’s how the title is spelled[[/note]] is a Anime/GirlsUndPanzer {{fanfic}} by vinini966 that [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin involves new male students getting involved in tankery]].
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"Boys Do Tankary"[[note]]That’s how the title is spelled[[/note]] is a Anime/GirlsUndPanzer ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'' {{fanfic}} by vinini966 that [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin involves new male students getting involved in tankery]].
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* CharacterExaggeration: Anzu has most of her canonical nuances removed, reducing her to a {{troll}} who likes dried sweet potatoes.
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* GoOutWithASmile: Nyra dies with a smile on her face, after getting Vincent to shoot her so that they won't both be killed. [[spoiler:Of course, she actually isn't dead]].
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* GoOutWithASmile: Nyra dies with a smile on her face, after getting Vincent to shoot her so that they won't both be killed. [[spoiler:Of course, she actually isn't dead]].dead.]]
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* OverrankedSoldier: Vincent, who appears to be a high school student, is already a Major in the army; even considering that he was enlisted [[ChildSoldiers when he was six]], this is highly unbelievable. The other boys, who range from a Private (Ian) to a Staff "Sargent" (Josh) vary but are less extreme. It's pointed out that the main reason Ian is only a Private is because of his womanizing ways.
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* OverrankedSoldier: Vincent, who appears to be a high school student, is already a Major in the army; even considering that he was enlisted [[ChildSoldiers when he was six]], this is highly unbelievable. The other boys, who range from a Private (Ian) to a Staff "Sargent" "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin Sargent]]" (Josh) vary but are less extreme. It's pointed out that the main reason Ian is only a Private is because of his womanizing ways.
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* LoveTriangle: Vincent and Saori are in love, and Miho briefly jealous of Saori for getting the boy she wants.
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* TriangRelations: A Type 4 with Vincent and Saori in love, and Miho briefly jealous of Saori for getting the boy she wants.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Hana is significantly more temperamental than canon and has a much more active sex drive, as evidenced by her relationship with Ian.
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: Hana is significantly more temperamental than canon and has a much more active sex drive, as evidenced by her relationship with Ian.
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* ObligatoryWarCrimeScene: The men on Vincent’s side raping and killing female [=POWs=], then when Vincent spares Nyra, having them locked in a room with a gun that has a single bullet for a month until one kills the other, and promising to kill both if neither does.
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Such general goes under the original series the fic stems from.
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* FandomSpecificPlot: Boys getting involved in tankery is a fairly common one for Girls Und Panzer.
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* ArtisticLicenceMilitary: Modified tanks aren't allowed in tankery. The moment the boys told Darjeeling what they were driving, she could have had them disqualified on the spot.
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Outnumbered Sibiling is no longer a trope. Zero Context Examples and examples that do fit existing tropes will be deleted.
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* OutnumberedSibling: Vincent has six older sisters and no brothers. Of course, [[FridgeHorror considering how quickly and callously Vincent was abandoned, he may not be the only boy his mother gave up]].
