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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12312602/1/Black-victory-Legendary-rescue Black victory: Legendary rescue]] is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' Adventure/Supernatural fanfiction written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~mewsiul Mew Siul]] in Fanfiction.net published in Jan 8, 2017.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12312602/1/Black-victory-Legendary-rescue Black victory: Victory: Legendary rescue]] Rescue]] is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' Adventure/Supernatural fanfiction written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~mewsiul Mew Siul]] in Fanfiction.net published in Jan 8, 2017.
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* ReincarnatedAsANonHumanoid: We don't get a lot of description of pre-Victini Black but we know he was human.
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* UncannyValley: In-Universe. Realistic pokemon are just wrong when you’ve only seen the cartoons and games. Black has this reaction when he first sees himself and Celebi.
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* RantInducingSlight: A good rant at the end of chapter 1. See Berserk Button to see why but to sum it up, this is a future version of the protagonist who has endured unknown trials and a WarIsHell setting, upon recognizing his past self's naivety he snaps at him.
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* AnimalisticAbomination: A Pokenoid abomination actually, but since Black is a human soul reincarnated in a legendary's body, he also has powers that don't really fit with a Victini, such as TimeMaster powers and an [[PocketDimension Inventory]]. The later is given to him by Arceus to aid him, the former by ''himself''.
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* AnimalisticAbomination: A Pokenoid abomination actually, but since Black is a human soul reincarnated in a legendary's body, he also has powers that don't really fit with a Victini, such as TimeMaster powers and an [[PocketDimension [[{{Hammerspace}} Inventory]]. The later is given to him by Arceus to aid him, the former by ''himself''.
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* AnimalisticAbomination: A Pokenoid abomination actually, but since Black is a human soul reincarnated in a legendary’s body, he also has powers that don't really fit with a Victini, such as TimeMaster powers and an [[PocketDimension Inventory]]. The later is given to him by Arceus to aid him, the former by ''himself''.
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* TheChosenOne: There is a prophecy saying that Black will save the day. Celebi explicatelly refuses to say the ExactWords when prompted to by [[GenreSavvy Black]].
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* {{Xenofiction}}: A world of only pokemon. The story's main key distinctive trait from similar stories of similar nature and themes in the Pokemon fandom is that thre's not and there has never been anything tied to humanity apart from the protagonist.
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* UncannyValley: Realistic pokemon are just wrong when you’ve only seen the cartoons and games. Black has this reaction when he first sees himself and Celebi.
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* PurposefullyOverpowered: Justified. Unlike most Self Inserts out there, Black was specifically reincarnated [[ResurrectedForAJob reincarnated]] to be a PersonOfMassDestruction SuperSoldier, a [[OlympusMons legendary]] and a harbinger of victory itself, of course he would be damn powerful.
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** Both sets of legendaries count too.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12312602/1/Black-victory-Legendary-rescue Black victory: Legendary rescue]] is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' Adventure/Supernatural fanfiction written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~mewsiul Mew Siul]] in Fanfiction.net published in Jan 8, 2017.
It's still in its beggining stages with the basic plot just being laid out.
It's about a SI who dies in a [[RetCon ret conned prequel]], being reincarnated into the pokemon world as a [[OlympusMons Victini]] by [[{{God}} Arceus]] [[VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon Mistery Dungeon style]] to save it from the enigmatic and sinister [[GodOfEvil Dark Arceus]].
This story stands out for having a DarkerAndEdgier pokemon only world that's portrayed as stuck as wild. The main character dies brutally again in ''the second chapter''.
!! Black victory: Legendary rescue contains examples of:
* AnimalisticAbomination: A Pokenoid abomination actually, but since Black is a human soul reincarnated in a legendary’s body, he also has powers that don't really fit with a Victini, such as TimeMaster powers and an [[PocketDimension Inventory]]. The later is given to him by Arceus to aid him, the former by ''himself''.
* BerserkButton: Black saying this is all a game makes his future self snap, he also doesn’t take being killed very well.
* BigBad: Dark Arceus. It hasn't even appeared yet, but the story starts with the main character being summoned to help with the war effort against it.
* TheChosenOne: There is a prophecy saying that Black will save the day. Celebi explicatelly refuses to say the ExactWords when prompted to by [[GenreSavvy Black]].
* ComboPlatterPowers: PlayingWithFire, PsychicPowers, TimeMaster... Black’s abilities run around multiple types.
* ExactWords: [[GenreSavvy Black]] asks Celebi the exact wording of the prophecy the ''instant'' he learns she's its creator, she politely refuses, claiming that they would be risking the bad guys learning about it too.
* FutureMeScaresMe: Black sure is scared when his future self snaps and goes on an angry tirade.
* GenkiGirl: Celebi comes out as quite hyper for someone her size. This might be to stick with the canon movie interpretation of her.
* HealingHands: Celebi has this ability, and uses it to accelerate Black's healing.
* IHatePastMe: Future Black definitely doesn’t like the current one, pushing his BerserkButton probably has a lot to do with it.
* IHaveManyNames: Pokemon have four different types of names: The true name which is their real name and their most closely guarded secret and a great source of power, the social name which is what they socialize with, a rough equivalent would be our term of “username”, the species name which should be obvious to all of us and finally the [[RedBaron folk name]], which is a moniker or several that other people grant you.
* ItGetsEasier: Celebi ''comforts'' Black with this argument to calm him down from hysteria when he first kills a pokemon.
* RedBaron: The folk name is essentially this.
* StableTimeLoop: Invoked and [[ExploitedTrope exploited shamelessly]] by the protagonist. He goes back to the start of his journey from an undisclosed middle point to give himself the abilities he got when ''his'' future self came to him.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Black gets this 3 times, twice for having to kill a Rattata he was hunting for food and another for hurting Celebi's feelings.
* NoJustNoReaction: Black gives one when he deduces Celebi is inside [[OurMonstersAreWeird that thing]] holding her inside it’s body.
* PhysicalGod: Arceus and Dark Arceus are literal gods, or at least, Arceus is, what Dark Arceus is hasn't been established yet.
* PurposefullyOverpowered: Justified. Unlike most Self Inserts out there, Black was specifically reincarnated to be a PersonOfMassDestruction SuperSoldier, a [[OlympusMons legendary]] and a harbinger of victory itself, of course he would be damn powerful.
* RantInducingSlight: A good rant at the end of chapter 1. See Berserk Button to see why but to sum it up, this is a future version of the protagonist who has endured unknown trials and a WarIsHell setting, upon recognizing his past self's naivety he snaps at him.
* UncannyValley: Realistic pokemon are just wrong when you’ve only seen the cartoons and games. Black has this reaction when he first sees himself and Celebi.
It's still in its beggining stages with the basic plot just being laid out.
It's about a SI who dies in a [[RetCon ret conned prequel]], being reincarnated into the pokemon world as a [[OlympusMons Victini]] by [[{{God}} Arceus]] [[VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon Mistery Dungeon style]] to save it from the enigmatic and sinister [[GodOfEvil Dark Arceus]].
This story stands out for having a DarkerAndEdgier pokemon only world that's portrayed as stuck as wild. The main character dies brutally again in ''the second chapter''.
!! Black victory: Legendary rescue contains examples of:
* AnimalisticAbomination: A Pokenoid abomination actually, but since Black is a human soul reincarnated in a legendary’s body, he also has powers that don't really fit with a Victini, such as TimeMaster powers and an [[PocketDimension Inventory]]. The later is given to him by Arceus to aid him, the former by ''himself''.
* BerserkButton: Black saying this is all a game makes his future self snap, he also doesn’t take being killed very well.
* BigBad: Dark Arceus. It hasn't even appeared yet, but the story starts with the main character being summoned to help with the war effort against it.
* TheChosenOne: There is a prophecy saying that Black will save the day. Celebi explicatelly refuses to say the ExactWords when prompted to by [[GenreSavvy Black]].
* ComboPlatterPowers: PlayingWithFire, PsychicPowers, TimeMaster... Black’s abilities run around multiple types.
* ExactWords: [[GenreSavvy Black]] asks Celebi the exact wording of the prophecy the ''instant'' he learns she's its creator, she politely refuses, claiming that they would be risking the bad guys learning about it too.
* FutureMeScaresMe: Black sure is scared when his future self snaps and goes on an angry tirade.
* GenkiGirl: Celebi comes out as quite hyper for someone her size. This might be to stick with the canon movie interpretation of her.
* HealingHands: Celebi has this ability, and uses it to accelerate Black's healing.
* IHatePastMe: Future Black definitely doesn’t like the current one, pushing his BerserkButton probably has a lot to do with it.
* IHaveManyNames: Pokemon have four different types of names: The true name which is their real name and their most closely guarded secret and a great source of power, the social name which is what they socialize with, a rough equivalent would be our term of “username”, the species name which should be obvious to all of us and finally the [[RedBaron folk name]], which is a moniker or several that other people grant you.
* ItGetsEasier: Celebi ''comforts'' Black with this argument to calm him down from hysteria when he first kills a pokemon.
* RedBaron: The folk name is essentially this.
* StableTimeLoop: Invoked and [[ExploitedTrope exploited shamelessly]] by the protagonist. He goes back to the start of his journey from an undisclosed middle point to give himself the abilities he got when ''his'' future self came to him.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Black gets this 3 times, twice for having to kill a Rattata he was hunting for food and another for hurting Celebi's feelings.
* NoJustNoReaction: Black gives one when he deduces Celebi is inside [[OurMonstersAreWeird that thing]] holding her inside it’s body.
* PhysicalGod: Arceus and Dark Arceus are literal gods, or at least, Arceus is, what Dark Arceus is hasn't been established yet.
* PurposefullyOverpowered: Justified. Unlike most Self Inserts out there, Black was specifically reincarnated to be a PersonOfMassDestruction SuperSoldier, a [[OlympusMons legendary]] and a harbinger of victory itself, of course he would be damn powerful.
* RantInducingSlight: A good rant at the end of chapter 1. See Berserk Button to see why but to sum it up, this is a future version of the protagonist who has endured unknown trials and a WarIsHell setting, upon recognizing his past self's naivety he snaps at him.
* UncannyValley: Realistic pokemon are just wrong when you’ve only seen the cartoons and games. Black has this reaction when he first sees himself and Celebi.
