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[[SomethingCompletelyDifferent Unlike the usual]] ComicsNix story, Bella Swan: Pregnant and Furious lacks the horrifically graphic and disgusting sex descriptions, and instead is a completely random nonsensical action story. As the title suggests, the story is about a pregnant Bella Swan. Shopping for baby clothing, she goes to a baby clothes store run by cannibal ninjas, who have their sights set on her unborn child. Desperate and out of options, Bella makes a DealWithTheDevil to gain incredible powers. All hell literally breaks loose.
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* illainTeamUp: [[spoiler:The story concludes with Satan and Hitler having apparently formed an alliance.]]
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* illainTeamUp: VillainTeamUp: [[spoiler:The story concludes with Satan and Hitler having apparently formed an alliance.]]
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-->Bella: "I want to be saved Satan...they gonna kill my baby!"
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* {{Crack Fic}}
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* DealWithTheDevil
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* {{OOC}}
* OnlyAFleshWound: During the final battle, Bella is punched in the stomach with such force that "she spurt her bowels out of her throat". Didn't seem to have that effect though; and [[InfantImmortality her unborn baby was somehow unharmed]].
* OnlyAFleshWound: During the final battle, Bella is punched in the stomach with such force that "she spurt her bowels out of her throat". Didn't seem to have that effect though; and [[InfantImmortality her unborn baby was somehow unharmed]].
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* [[spoiler: VillainTeamUp: The story concludes with Satan and Hitler having apparently formed an alliance.]]
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* [[spoiler: VillainTeamUp: The illainTeamUp: [[spoiler:The story concludes with Satan and Hitler having apparently formed an alliance.]]
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* MeleeATrois: Besides fighting Bella, the Ninjas and Pirates are mentioned to be fighting each other as well.
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[[SomethingCompletelyDifferent Unlike the usual]] ComicsNix story, Bella Swan: Pregnant and Furious lacks the horrific horrifically graphic and disgusting sex descriptions, and instead is a completely random nonsensical action story. As the title suggests, the story is about a pregnant Bella Swan. Shopping for baby clothing, she goes to a baby clothes store run by cannibal ninjas, who have their sights set on her unborn child. Desperate and out of options, Bella makes a deal with the devil DealWithTheDevil to gain incredible powers. All hell literally breaks loose.
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* PreAsskickingMutter: "Yes [[spoiler: Satan]]!" cries out loud Bella, "fell my soul in your ASS!"
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* PreAsskickingMutter: PreAsskickingOneLiner: "Yes [[spoiler: Satan]]!" cries out loud Bella, "fell my soul in your ASS!"
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[[SomethingCompletelyDifferent Unlike the usual]] ComicsNix story, Bella Swan: Pregnant and Furious lacks the horrific graphic and disgusting sex descriptions, and instead is a completely random nonsensical action story. As the title suggests, the story is about a pregnant Bella Swan. Shopping for baby clothing, she goes to a baby clothes store clothing run by cannibal ninjas, who have their sights set on her unborn child. Desperate and out of options, Bella makes a deal with the devil to gain incredible powers. All hell literally breaks loose.
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* {{Crossover}}: Twilight with ''Film/{{Clash of the Titans|1981}}'' or simply ''Myth/GreekMythology''.
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* {{Crossover}}: Twilight with ''Film/{{Clash of the Titans|1981}}'' or simply ''Myth/GreekMythology''.''Myth/ClassicalMythology''.
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I'm assuming the 1981 version because it was published before the remake was released, but on the other hand I've known of fanfics that were based on just the pre-publicity, so I could be wrong.
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* {{Crossover}}: Twilight with ''Film/ClashOfTheTitans'' or simply ''Myth/GreekMythology''.
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* {{Crossover}}: Twilight with ''Film/ClashOfTheTitans'' ''Film/{{Clash of the Titans|1981}}'' or simply ''Myth/GreekMythology''.
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* {{Crossover}}: Twilight with ''ClashOfTheTitans'' or simply ''Myth/GreekMythology''.
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* {{Crossover}}: Twilight with ''ClashOfTheTitans'' ''Film/ClashOfTheTitans'' or simply ''Myth/GreekMythology''.
* GratuitousNinja: Again, the ninjas.
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddNinja: Again, the ninjas.
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* {{Crossover}}: Twilight with ''ClashOfTheTitans'' or simply ''GreekMythology''.
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* {{Crossover}}: Twilight with ''ClashOfTheTitans'' or simply ''GreekMythology''.''Myth/GreekMythology''.
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[[SomethingCompletelyDifferent Unlike the usual]] ComicsNix story, Bella Swan: Pregnant and Furious lacks the horrific graphic and disgusting sex descriptions, and instead is a completely random nonsensical action story. As the title suggests, the story is about a pregnant Bella Swan. Shopping for baby clothing, she goes to a baby store clothing run by cannibal ninjas, who have their sights set on her unborn child. Desperate and out of options, Bella makes a deal with the devil to gain incredible powers. [[IncrediblyLamePun All hell literally breaks loose]].
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[[SomethingCompletelyDifferent Unlike the usual]] ComicsNix story, Bella Swan: Pregnant and Furious lacks the horrific graphic and disgusting sex descriptions, and instead is a completely random nonsensical action story. As the title suggests, the story is about a pregnant Bella Swan. Shopping for baby clothing, she goes to a baby store clothing run by cannibal ninjas, who have their sights set on her unborn child. Desperate and out of options, Bella makes a deal with the devil to gain incredible powers. [[IncrediblyLamePun All hell literally breaks loose]].
loose.
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* InstantPlunderJustAddPirates: They're here too.
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* {{Pirate}}: They're here too.
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* HotChickWithASword: Bella.
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possible misuse of renamed trope (Mundane Made Awesome)
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome
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[[SomethingCompletelyDifferent Unlike the usual usual]] ComicsNix story, Bella Swan: Pregnant and Furious lacks the horrific graphic and disgusting sex descriptions, and instead is a completely random nonsensical action story. As the title suggests, the story is about a pregnant Bella Swan. Shopping for baby clothing, she goes to a baby store clothing run by cannibal ninjas, who have their sights set on her unborn child. Desperate and out of options, Bella makes a deal with the devil to gain incredible powers. [[IncrediblyLamePun All hell literally breaks loose]].
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* SoBadItsGood: To the point where its better than the actual Twilight series.
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* HotChickWithASword: Bella, but {{YMMV}}.
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* HotChickWithASword: Bella, but {{YMMV}}.Bella.
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Renamed to Unexplained Recovery and removing the Got Better potholes as a stock phrase.
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* DuelToTheDeath: Bella vs [[spoiler: Satan]]...although [[spoiler: [[IGotBetter he comes back about a paragraph later]]]].
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* DuelToTheDeath: Bella vs [[spoiler: Satan]]...although [[spoiler: [[IGotBetter he comes back about a paragraph later]]]].later]].
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* IGotBetter: [[spoiler: Hitler and Satan, both of whom are killed by Bella, are back at the very end plotting their revenge]].
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* UnexplainedRecovery: [[spoiler: Hitler and Satan, both of whom are killed by Bella, are back at the very end plotting their revenge]].
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From the aforementioned ninjas to pirates to Nazis, Bella finds herself in a life or death struggle with just about everything.
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From the aforementioned ninjas to pirates to Nazis, Bella finds herself in a life or death struggle with just about everything.
everything. Now there's [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AgxrYH6xbTU a]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4tsN6JH_RG0 dramatic]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XqeVZCbAvPw reading]].
