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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: While rewriting the story, the author decided to remove the antagonistic relationship between Dillon, Eren, and Mikasa in the original version to better develop their character interactions, feeling he let his dislike of Eren color his writing in the original version.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: While rewriting the story, the author decided to remove the antagonistic relationship between Dillon, Eren, and Mikasa in the original version to better develop their character interactions, feeling he let his dislike of Eren color his writing in the original version.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: While rewriting the story, the author decided to remove the antagonistic relationship between Dillon, Eren, and Mikasa in the original version to better develop their character interactions, feeling he let his dislike of Eren color his writing in the original version.
* AmbiguousSituation: [[spoiler: How much of Matthew's sudden personality shift was the result of Elise' MindRape versus the repressed rage he'd blocked.]]
** [[spoiler: Did Elise know Atticus had restarted Project Psion? Was she a massive {{Hypocrite}} or an UnwittingPawn?]]
* AttentionWhore: [[spoiler: Its strongly implied that Carolyn wants to be publicly recognized for her good work, explaining why was so distraught at seeing Project Psion dismantled and why she chose to be a lawyer openly fighting the corruption of the Military Police.]]
* AmbiguousSituation: [[spoiler: How much of Matthew's sudden personality shift was the result of Elise' MindRape versus the repressed rage he'd blocked.]]
** [[spoiler: Did Elise know Atticus had restarted Project Psion? Was she a massive {{Hypocrite}} or an UnwittingPawn?]]
* AttentionWhore: [[spoiler: Its strongly implied that Carolyn wants to be publicly recognized for her good work, explaining why was so distraught at seeing Project Psion dismantled and why she chose to be a lawyer openly fighting the corruption of the Military Police.]]
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* DarkestHour: [[spoiler: After Chap. 64, Dillon's screwup has cost him everything he had left including his relationship with Annie.]]
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* DarkestHour: [[spoiler: After Chap. 64, Dillon's screwup has cost him everything he had left including his relationship with Annie.]] [[spoiler: It gets worse. He's manipulated into going after Zeke and the other infiltrators who easily capture him and in Marley he's turned over to Atticus whose restarted Project Psion. Plus Ymir Fritz was manipulating him all along.]]
* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler: Dillon in going after the Titan Shifters, was aiming for this. Too bad that was exactly what the enemy wanted.]]
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** [[spoiler: Even though he has little regard for Dillon by that point, Levi is disturbed by Carolyn's lack of concern towards her son's potential execution.]]
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** [[spoiler: Even though he has little regard for Dillon by that point, Levi is disturbed by Carolyn's lack of concern towards her son's potential execution.execution and deliberately leaves her behind in jail. Zoe is equally disgusted by his disregard and takes satisfaction in beating her up to provide a cover story for the coup.]]
** [[spoiler: Reeves may have not particularly liked Matthew Amsdale, but still expresses sympathy for his son.]]
** [[spoiler: Reeves may have not particularly liked Matthew Amsdale, but still expresses sympathy for his son.]]
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** Dillon's impulsiveness borderlining on recklessness has caused no shortage of problems with Annie, his friends, and the Scout Regiment.[[spoiler: Sure, because of this trait, he was able to ensure Mikasa would survive when she lost the will to live, and he saved Annie during the most critical moment in the story. However, he had to be verbally restrained from committing treason to rescue the Shiganshina Trio when Eren was almost executed by the Garrison, he chased after his mother's kidnapper despite being on trial for treason, and he attacked Captain Levi in Annie's mind (It Makes Sense In Context). The worst of them all is what he did to prevent a battle breaking out between Dauper and the Scout Regiment. He severed the mind links between Levi and Hanji with the rest of the Scouts to prevent them from summoning reinforcements with a single thought. That action resulted in Levi and Hanji being imprisoned, Dillon finally being branded as a traitor, and nearly everyone tearing him a new one for his stunt.]]
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** Dillon's impulsiveness borderlining on recklessness has caused no shortage of problems with Annie, his friends, and the Scout Regiment.[[spoiler: Sure, because of this trait, he was able to ensure Mikasa would survive when she lost the will to live, and he saved Annie during the most critical moment in the story. However, he had to be verbally restrained from committing treason to rescue the Shiganshina Trio when Eren was almost executed by the Garrison, he chased after his mother's kidnapper despite being on trial for treason, and he attacked Captain Levi in Annie's mind (It Makes Sense In Context). The worst of them all is what he did to prevent a battle breaking out between Dauper and the Scout Regiment. He severed the mind links between Levi and Hanji with the rest of the Scouts to prevent them from summoning reinforcements with a single thought. That action resulted in Levi and Hanji being imprisoned, Dillon finally being branded as a traitor, and nearly everyone tearing him a new one for his stunt.stunt with Annie breaking up with him.]]
** [[spoiler: However it's revealed that Ymir Fritz was egging on this trait, to push him into alienating his friends and allies so she could freely manipulate him.]]
* KnightTemplar: [[spoiler: Elise who MindRapes Matthew and tortures Carolyn for what happed in Project Psion.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Annie breaking up with Dillon. While understandable given Dillon's self-destructive behavior, it plays right into Ymir Fritz's plans and leaves Dillon vulnerable and weak for her manipulations to send him right into Marley's hands.]]
* SecretProjectRefugeeFamily:[[spoiler: Horribly subverted with Mathew, Carolyn and Dillon Amsdale, the MadScientist, her experimental subject, and her TykeBomb son whose family disintigrates over the course of the fic.]]
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* TheUnfettered: [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale. Her intention are theoretically good, but she's willing to do anything in the pursuit of her goals]]
* UnluckyChildhoodFriend: Bertolt for Annie. [[spoiler: Which leads to a near murder of Dillon by the Colossal Titan.]]
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Annie has no problem hurting people who hurt Dillon,[[spoiler:squashing Elsie like a bug, going after Ymir with a vengeance, and even threatening Historia when she blows up at Dillon.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Erwin and [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale something that disturbs Levi.]]
* UnluckyChildhoodFriend: Bertolt for Annie. [[spoiler: Which leads to a near murder of Dillon by the Colossal Titan.]]
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Annie has no problem hurting people who hurt Dillon,[[spoiler:squashing Elsie like a bug, going after Ymir with a vengeance, and even threatening Historia when she blows up at Dillon.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Erwin and [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale something that disturbs Levi.]]
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* TragicVillain: [[spoiler: Matthew Amsdale. Although he crosses into murder and abuse by the end, he was the victim of MindRape and dies before he can be helped.]]
* TheUnfettered: [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale. Her intention are theoretically good, but she's willing to do anything in the pursuit of hergoals]]
goals. For example she was willing to turn her son into a weapon to stamp out rampant corruption in the interior.]]
* UnluckyChildhoodFriend: Bertolt for Annie. [[spoiler: Which leads to a near murder of Dillon by the Colossal Titan. It gets worse when Bertholt learns of Dillon's powers and starts believing he brainwashed Annie into turning on them.]]
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Annie has no problem hurting people who hurt Dillon,[[spoiler:squashingElsie Elise like a bug, going after Ymir with a vengeance, and even threatening Historia when she blows up at Dillon.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Erwin and [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale have this in common something that disturbs Levi.]]
* TheUnfettered: [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale. Her intention are theoretically good, but she's willing to do anything in the pursuit of her
* UnluckyChildhoodFriend: Bertolt for Annie. [[spoiler: Which leads to a near murder of Dillon by the Colossal Titan. It gets worse when Bertholt learns of Dillon's powers and starts believing he brainwashed Annie into turning on them.]]
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Annie has no problem hurting people who hurt Dillon,[[spoiler:squashing
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Erwin and [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale have this in common something that disturbs Levi.]]
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* ShoutOut: Surprisingly quite a few to Creator/MattewStover 's novelization of ''Literature/RevengeOfTheSith'' homaging a number of his phrases especially with Dilon's fight against the MP in Chap 69 which echoes the description of Anakin's duel with Dooku in the book.
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* BrokenAce: Dillon is basically this by Chap. 62.
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* DarkestHour: [[spoiler: After Chap. 64, Dillon's screwup has cost him everything he had left including his relationship with Annie.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Dillon undergoes this when he learns Annie is the Female Titan to the point Erwin puts him under suicide watch.
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* TheUnfettered: [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale. Her intention are theoretically good, but she's willing to do anything in the pursuit of her goals]]
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Annie has no problem hurting people who hurt Dillon,[[spoiler:squashing Elsie like a bug, going after Ymir with a vengeance, and even threatening Historia when she blows up at Dillon.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Erwin and [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale something that disturbs Levi.]]
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Erwin and [[spoiler: Carolyn Amsdale something that disturbs Levi.]]
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* EveryOneHasStandards: Zoe and Levi are both nauseated when they learn first hand how Titan powers transferred via Annie's memories.
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"When Wall Maria falls to the titans, a young blacksmith from Wall Sina enlists in the 104th Training Corps, determined to make a difference for the survival of humanity. But he didn't expect to catch the interest of a cold blond girl named Annie, who carries a terrible secret. It's a good thing he holds his own power to even the odds."
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* RealityEnsues: The constant trauma and grinding makes many main characters start to crack.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12902407/1/Attack-on-Titan-A-Blacksmith-s-Tale-REMASTERED A Blacksmiths Tale]]'' is a ''Manga/AttackOnTitan'' fanfic by crod42.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12902407/1/Attack-on-Titan-A-Blacksmith-s-Tale-REMASTERED Attack On Titan A Blacksmiths Tale]]'' is a ''Manga/AttackOnTitan'' fanfic by crod42.
