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As Time Diverges: The Mitakihara Case is a Manga/DeathNote[=/=]Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica crossover fanfiction that asks the question of "What if Light and L were in Mitakihara City during the course of Puella Magi Madoka Magica?" then answers it like so.
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* ChekhovsGun: Light's hand gets bitten by the suicidal woman in episode 2. This [[JustForPun bites]] him in the ass when he [[spoiler:tries to save Mami]].
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* ChekhovsGun: Light's hand gets bitten by the suicidal woman in episode 2. This [[JustForPun [[{{Pun}} bites]] him in the ass when he [[spoiler:tries to save Mami]].
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It's sequel can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7432607/1/24_Days_The_Second_Mitakihara_Case here.]] It involves a fusion with ''LightNovel/LChangeTheWorld''.
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It's sequel can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7432607/1/24_Days_The_Second_Mitakihara_Case here.]] It involves a fusion with ''LightNovel/LChangeTheWorld''.
''Literature/LChangeTheWorld''.
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* DarkMessiah: [[spoiler:Light. A bump down from AGodAmI.]]
* DyingDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Kyousuke's last words to Sayaka in chapter 17.]]
* EvilRedhead: [[spoiler:Light.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree Light.]]]]
* DyingDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Kyousuke's last words to Sayaka in chapter 17.]]
* EvilRedhead: [[spoiler:Light.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree Light.]]]]
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-->'''[=NaXyld=]''', the author of this fic.
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!This Crossover Contains The Following Tropes
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!!This Crossover Contains The Following Tropes
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-->"We remember her, so we are not alone."
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* [[spoiler:TogetherInDeath: L dies in the final chapter of the sequel, but thanks to the Soul Gem that Madoka gave him in the third chapter, he was welcome to her Paradise in order to prevent him from fading into nothingness. There, he was reunited with the other Puella Magis, including Watari.]]
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* [[spoiler:TogetherInDeath: L TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:L dies in the final chapter of the sequel, but thanks to the Soul Gem that Madoka gave him in the third chapter, he was welcome to her Paradise in order to prevent him from fading into nothingness. There, he was reunited with the other Puella Magis, including Watari.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6921201/1/As_Time_Diverges_The_Mitakihara_Case The story can be read here]]. Though just be warned for spoilers from both sides.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6921201/1/As_Time_Diverges_The_Mitakihara_Case The story can be read here]]. Though here.]] Though, just be warned for spoilers from both sides.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Non-lethal version. Kyubey [[spoiler:eliminates L from the timeline.]]
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Non-lethal version. Kyubey [[spoiler:eliminates L from the timeline.]]timeline]].
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* {{Crossover}}: Well duh. But it also briefly crosses over with "''Homura's Encyclopedia of Witches''". See ShoutOut below for more details.
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* {{Crossover}}: Well Well, duh. But it also briefly crosses over with "''Homura's Encyclopedia of Witches''". See ShoutOut below for more details.
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* CurbstompBattle: [[spoiler:Octavia]] gets both ends of the spectrum in two separate battles. In the first battle, she was defeated by Walpurgisnacht, and the second battle, she beats down Elsa Maria. Even L noted about how easy that second battle was.
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* CurbstompBattle: CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Octavia]] gets both ends of the spectrum in two separate battles. In the first battle, she was defeated by Walpurgisnacht, and the second battle, she beats down Elsa Maria. Even L noted about how easy that second battle was.
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* EvilRedhead: [[spoiler:Light]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree Light]]]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree Light]]]]
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* EvilRedhead: [[spoiler:Light]]
[[spoiler:Light.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThreeLight]]]]Light.]]]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree
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* HeroicBSOD: Light and L after [[spoiler:Mami's death.]] They move on from it, but it hits them hard.
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* HeroicBSOD: Light and L after [[spoiler:Mami's death.]] death]]. They move on from it, but it hits them hard.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Octavia still disappears prior to Walpurgis Night, [[spoiler:but this time she lives. She arrives during Walpurgis Night however, but gets curbstomped by Walpurgisnacht]] .
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:The fanfic goes with the interpretation that Kyubey had planned for stuff like Mami's death and Kyousuke's failed surgery to happen]].
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:The fanfic goes with the interpretation that Kyubey had planned for stuff like Mami's death and Kyousuke's failed surgery to happen]].
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* InSpiteOfANail: Octavia still disappears prior to Walpurgis Night, [[spoiler:but this time she lives. She arrives during Walpurgis Night however, but gets curbstomped by Walpurgisnacht]] .
Walpurgisnacht]].
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Much like all Madoka fanfics, crossover or not, [[spoiler:InUniverse AlternateTimeline is at play here.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:The fanfic goes with the interpretation that Kyubey had planned for stuff like Mami's death and Kyousuke's failed surgery tohappen]].happen.]]
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Much like all Madoka fanfics, crossover or not, [[spoiler:InUniverse AlternateTimeline is at play here.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:The fanfic goes with the interpretation that Kyubey had planned for stuff like Mami's death and Kyousuke's failed surgery to
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:Light ends up with the Death Note and becomes Kira after L manipulates Kyubey into going back in time as part of a BatmanGambit]]
* NoKillLikeOverkill: L [[LampshadeHanging points this out]] to Mami when she pulls off the infamous "Unlimited Musket Works" attack.
* NoKillLikeOverkill: L [[LampshadeHanging points this out]] to Mami when she pulls off the infamous "Unlimited Musket Works" attack.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:Light ends up with the Death Note and becomes Kira after L manipulates Kyubey into going back in time as part of a BatmanGambit]]
* NoKillLikeOverkill: L [[LampshadeHanging points this out]] to Mami when she pulls off the infamous "Unlimited Musket Works" attack.BatmanGambit.]]
* NoKillLikeOverkill: L [[LampshadeHanging points this out]] to Mami when she pulls off the infamous "Unlimited Musket Works" attack.
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* RousingSpeech: L delivers this to Mami when she talks about how lonely her life is before she fights Charlotte. [[spoiler:Twice]].
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready Naturally.]] However, Chapter 12 shows an exclusive example in the form of having ''L'' subdue the suicidal woman instead of Light as it will [[ItMakesSenseInContext prevent her from biting Light's hand]]. This turns out to be the best route.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready Naturally.]] However, Chapter 12 shows an exclusive example in the form of having ''L'' subdue the suicidal woman instead of Light as it will [[ItMakesSenseInContext prevent her from biting Light's hand]]. This turns out to be the best route.
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* RousingSpeech: L delivers this to Mami when she talks about how lonely her life is before she fights Charlotte. [[spoiler:Twice]].
[[spoiler:Twice.]]
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong:[[YouShouldKnowThisAlready [[LateArrivalSpoiler Naturally.]] However, Chapter 12 shows an exclusive example in the form of having ''L'' subdue the suicidal woman instead of Light as it will [[ItMakesSenseInContext prevent her from biting Light's hand]]. This turns out to be the best route.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong:
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story follows the same flow as Madoka Magica. Mami saves Light, L, Sayaka, and Madoka to her fighting a Witch to [[spoiler:Mami dying]] to Sayaka being a Puella Magi to Sayaka and Kyouko fighting to the AwfulTruth to Hitomi telling Sayaka that she likes Kyousuke to [[spoiler:Sayaka's Witchification]]. It starts to split off from the plot however [[spoiler:when Light kills Kyouko prior to her fight with Sayaka's Witch.]] Not to mention L's deductions and his conversations with Homura making another split from the plot.
** As of Chapter 12, it's following ''it's own'' stations of the canon, with massive changes to the formula.
** As of Chapter 12, it's following ''it's own'' stations of the canon, with massive changes to the formula.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story follows the same flow as Madoka Magica. Mami saves Light, L, Sayaka, and Madoka to her fighting a Witch to [[spoiler:Mami dying]] to Sayaka being a Puella Magi to Sayaka and Kyouko fighting to the AwfulTruth to Hitomi telling Sayaka that she likes Kyousuke to [[spoiler:Sayaka's Witchification]]. It starts to split off from the plot however [[spoiler:when Light kills Kyouko prior to her fight with Sayaka's Witch.]] Witch]]. Not to mention L's deductions and his conversations with Homura making another split from the plot.
** As of Chapter 12, it's following ''it's own'' stations of the canon, with massive changes to theformula.formula.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: L [[LampshadeHanging points this out]] to Mami when she pulls off the infamous "Unlimited Musket Works" attack.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: L [[LampshadeHanging points this out]] to Mami when she pulls off the infamous "Unlimited Musket Works" attack.
* VisionaryVillain: [[spoiler:Yeah, even without the Death Note, Light still gets this mindset, although he doesn't go for the AGodAmI route.]]
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** Chapter 9 on the other hand, while it adapts Episodes 7 and 8, pulls off a twist with [[spoiler:not only having Light turning evil, but also having him ''kill'' Kyouko before she confronted Octavia.]]
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** Chapter 9 on the other hand, while it adapts Episodes 7 and 8, pulls off a twist with [[spoiler:not only having Light turning evil, but also having him ''kill'' Kyouko before she confronted Octavia.]]Octavia]].
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** Chapter 15, much like chapter 14, has little punch compared to the others, but it does have [[spoiler:Light finding out about one of the Magical Girl's AwfulTruth and it ends with L beginning to tell the girls the other AwfulTruth.]] On a Meta Standard, the reveal that there will be a sequel might shock some people.
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** Chapter 15, much like chapter 14, has little punch compared to the others, but it does have [[spoiler:Light finding out about one of the Magical Girl's AwfulTruth and it ends with L beginning to tell the girls the other AwfulTruth.]] AwfulTruth]]. On a Meta Standard, the reveal that there will be a sequel might shock some people.
* WhatTheHellHero: Light calls out L for [[spoiler:allying with Kyubey]].
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* YouCannotFightFate: [[spoiler:Mami and Sayaka]] still have their fates sealed, and while Light tried to save [[spoiler:Mami, the pain from the bite he received from the suicidal woman threw off his aim.]] [[spoiler:Kyouko still dies, but from different means.]]
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* YouCannotFightFate: YouCantFightFate: [[spoiler:Mami and Sayaka]] still have their fates sealed, and while Light tried to save [[spoiler:Mami, the pain from the bite he received from the suicidal woman threw off his aim.]] [[spoiler:Kyouko aim. Kyouko still dies, but from different means.]]means]].
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Non-lethal version. Kyubey [[spoiler:eliminates L from the timeline.]]
* YouShouldKnowThisAlready: Much like all Madoka fanfics, crossover or not, [[spoiler:InUniverse AlternateTimeline is at play here.]]
* VisionaryVillain: [[spoiler:Yeah, even without the Death Note, Light still gets this mindset, although he doesn't go for the AGodAmI route.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Light calls out L for [[spoiler:allying with Kyubey]].
* YouShouldKnowThisAlready: Much like all Madoka fanfics, crossover or not, [[spoiler:InUniverse AlternateTimeline is at play here.]]
* VisionaryVillain: [[spoiler:Yeah, even without the Death Note, Light still gets this mindset, although he doesn't go for the AGodAmI route.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Light calls out L for [[spoiler:allying with Kyubey]].
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Non-lethal version. Kyubey [[spoiler:eliminates L from the timeline.]]
* YouShouldKnowThisAlready: Much like all Madoka fanfics, crossover or not, [[spoiler:InUniverse AlternateTimeline is at play here.]]
* VisionaryVillain: [[spoiler:Yeah, even without the Death Note, Light still gets this mindset, although he doesn't go for the AGodAmI route.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Light calls out L for [[spoiler:allying with Kyubey]].]]
* YouShouldKnowThisAlready: Much like all Madoka fanfics, crossover or not, [[spoiler:InUniverse AlternateTimeline is at play here.]]
* VisionaryVillain: [[spoiler:Yeah, even without the Death Note, Light still gets this mindset, although he doesn't go for the AGodAmI route.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: Light calls out L for [[spoiler:allying with Kyubey]].
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** [[spoiler: And even Kira is erased in the post-goddess timeline, since no witches means no Shinigami King means no Death Note; so Light is a good guy.]]
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nm, since Shinigami are familiars of the Shinigami King, a Witch, no witches meant no Shinigami means no Death Note
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* AlternateContinuity: The sequel, being a fusion of ''LightNovel/LChangeTheWorld''; [[spoiler: has Light not being evil]] despite the ending of the first story saying this happened. Making it an alternative continuity to an alternative continuity [[BeyondTheImpossible to an alternate continuity.]]
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* AlternateContinuity: The sequel, being a fusion of ''LightNovel/LChangeTheWorld''; [[spoiler: has Light not being evil]] despite the ending of the first story saying this happened. Making it an alternative continuity to an alternative continuity [[BeyondTheImpossible to an alternate continuity.]]
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It's sequel can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7432607/1/24_Days_The_Second_Mitakihara_Case here.]]
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It's sequel can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7432607/1/24_Days_The_Second_Mitakihara_Case here.]]
]] It involves a fusion with ''LightNovel/LChangeTheWorld''.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: L and cake, obviously. [[spoiler:That is until Mami dies. He then stops eating cake due to how he compares the cake to Charlotte. He shifts to Kyouko's TrademarkFavoriteFood, {{Pocky}}.]]
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: L and cake, obviously. [[spoiler:That is until Mami dies. He then stops eating cake due to how he compares the cake to Charlotte. He shifts to Kyouko's TrademarkFavoriteFood, {{Pocky}}.Pocky.]]
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: L is the one who [[spoiler:gave Madoka Sayaka's Grief Seed]] in a previous timeline.
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* TheGump: L is the one who [[spoiler:gave Madoka Sayaka's Grief Seed]] in a previous timeline.
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** Chapter 10 gets worse when TheReveal of Episode 9 rears its head. [[spoiler:Also, it turns out that L got tied up in Madoka's Fate Lines since the third time line ''and'' Kyubey is responsible for Kyousuke's failed operation, all to make Sayaka contract.]]
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** Chapter 10 [[FromBadToWorse gets worse worse]] when TheReveal of Episode 9 rears its head. [[spoiler:Also, it turns out that L got tied up in Madoka's Fate Lines since the third time line ''and'' Kyubey is responsible for Kyousuke's failed operation, all to make Sayaka contract.]]
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** Chapter 10 [[ItGotWorse gets worse]] when TheReveal of Episode 9 rears its head. [[spoiler:Also, it turns out that L got tied up in Madoka's Fate Lines since the third time line ''and'' Kyubey is responsible for Kyousuke's failed operation, all to make Sayaka contract.]]
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** Chapter 10 [[ItGotWorse gets worse]] worse when TheReveal of Episode 9 rears its head. [[spoiler:Also, it turns out that L got tied up in Madoka's Fate Lines since the third time line ''and'' Kyubey is responsible for Kyousuke's failed operation, all to make Sayaka contract.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:The fanfic goes with the interpretation that Kyubey had planned for stuff like Mami's death and Kyousuke's failed surgery to happen]].
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As Time Diverges: The Mitakihara Case is a Manga/DeathNote[=/=]PuellaMagiMadokaMagica crossover fanfiction that asks the question of "What if Light and L were in Mitakihara City during the course of Puella Magi Madoka Magica?" then answers it like so.
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As Time Diverges: The Mitakihara Case is a Manga/DeathNote[=/=]PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Manga/DeathNote[=/=]Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica crossover fanfiction that asks the question of "What if Light and L were in Mitakihara City during the course of Puella Magi Madoka Magica?" then answers it like so.
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*[[spoiler:TogetherInDeath: L dies in the final chapter of the sequel, but thanks to the Soul Gem that Madoka gave him in the third chapter, he was welcome to her Paradise in order to prevent him from fading into nothingness. There, he was reunited with the other Puella Magis, including Watari.]]
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As Time Diverges: The Mitakihara Case is a DeathNote[=/=]PuellaMagiMadokaMagica crossover fanfiction that asks the question of "What if Light and L were in Mitakihara City during the course of Puella Magi Madoka Magica?" then answers it like so.
In an AlternateTimeline, Light doesn't pick up the DeathNote and it falls into the hands of someone else who disposes of it soon after. Light is soon recruited by L to investigate a case involving disappearing girls. As part of the investigation, they spy on one Tomoe Mami, disguised as teachers. This leads them to the world of the Puella Magi, [[ForegoneConclusion where death and despair]] [[YouCannotFightFate will obviously follow]].
In an AlternateTimeline, Light doesn't pick up the DeathNote and it falls into the hands of someone else who disposes of it soon after. Light is soon recruited by L to investigate a case involving disappearing girls. As part of the investigation, they spy on one Tomoe Mami, disguised as teachers. This leads them to the world of the Puella Magi, [[ForegoneConclusion where death and despair]] [[YouCannotFightFate will obviously follow]].
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As Time Diverges: The Mitakihara Case is a DeathNote[=/=]PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Manga/DeathNote[=/=]PuellaMagiMadokaMagica crossover fanfiction that asks the question of "What if Light and L were in Mitakihara City during the course of Puella Magi Madoka Magica?" then answers it like so.
In an AlternateTimeline, Light doesn't pick up theDeathNote Manga/DeathNote and it falls into the hands of someone else who disposes of it soon after. Light is soon recruited by L to investigate a case involving disappearing girls. As part of the investigation, they spy on one Tomoe Mami, disguised as teachers. This leads them to the world of the Puella Magi, [[ForegoneConclusion where death and despair]] [[YouCannotFightFate will obviously follow]].
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* CallBack: To DeathNote's scene with L falling off his chair after hearing about Shinigami. Replace Shinigami with Magical Girls.
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* CallBack: To DeathNote's Manga/DeathNote's scene with L falling off his chair after hearing about Shinigami. Replace Shinigami with Magical Girls.
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Zapping all X Just X examples of Xanatos Gambit. If correct, add back with more detail. Remember its not just \"cunning plan,\" it\'s \"All paths lead to victory.\"
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:Light ends up with the Death Note and becomes Kira after L manipulates Kyubey into going back in time as part of a {{Xanatos Gambit}}]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler:Light ends up with the Death Note and becomes Kira after L manipulates Kyubey into going back in time as part of a {{Xanatos Gambit}}]]BatmanGambit]]