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** {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much that this was apparently one of the reasons Sirius' mother ''tried to get a court order to make him go home''. (Sirius, of course, hated this potential arrangement, and so did Bellatrix; even Regulus thought it was ridiculous until Sirius pranked him.) Thankfully, they eventually backed down.
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** {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he she was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much that this was apparently one of the reasons Sirius' mother ''tried to get a court order to make him go home''. (Sirius, of course, hated this potential arrangement, and so did Bellatrix; even Regulus thought it was ridiculous until Sirius pranked him.) Thankfully, they eventually backed down.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of [[spoiler:being drowned by Inferi while retrieving the Locket Horcrux]], [[spoiler:Regulus]] was (most likely) killed by [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy]].
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From what Harry could tell, Regulus had truly longed for two things at the age of fifteen: to have his family reunited, and [[spoiler:to be with Narcissa Malfoy]]. [[spoiler:''I don't even care if Narcissa is in the Dark Lord's service,'' he had written, ''because I know how passionate she is about family.'' Was that what Regulus had sought in the Death Eaters? A way to have his family reunited?
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'''Ron:''' (after a split second)'' Big deal. If you go back far enough you've got a something-great[-]grandmother with the maiden name Weasley.
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'''Ron:''' (after ''(after a split second)'' Big deal. If you go back far enough you've got a something-great[-]grandmother with the maiden name Weasley.
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* DeadFic: The last update on the fanfic was in 2015, with the author announcing that they had a baby in the end notes. One might presume that they are currently busy raising their child.
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* FantasticRacism: Due to Remus being the one rumoured to work with Voldemort, anti-werewolf prejudice is very apparent and rampant, moreso than canon. In the first chapter alone, Stan suggests that Remus was "a big follower of You-Know-Who" ''because'' of his lycanthropy, among many other comments. Later chapters reveal that [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero even normally-sympathetic Gryffindor characters show bias against werewolves]], some even thinking werewolves did not deserve to be educated for being "a bunch of dark creatures".
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* FantasticRacism: FantasticRacism:
** Due to Remus being the one rumoured to work with Voldemort, anti-werewolf prejudice is very apparent and rampant, moreso than canon. In the first chapter alone, Stan suggests that Remus was "a big follower of You-Know-Who" ''because'' of his lycanthropy, among many other comments. Later chapters reveal that [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero even normally-sympathetic Gryffindor characters show bias against werewolves]], some even thinking werewolves did not deserve to be educated for being "a bunch of darkcreatures".creatures".
** Pureblood supremacy remains a common belief throughout the magical world, especially among Slytherins. [[spoiler:Regulus Black, at the very least, got over it enough to get engaged to a Half-blood witch with a Muggle for a grandmother.]]
** Due to Remus being the one rumoured to work with Voldemort, anti-werewolf prejudice is very apparent and rampant, moreso than canon. In the first chapter alone, Stan suggests that Remus was "a big follower of You-Know-Who" ''because'' of his lycanthropy, among many other comments. Later chapters reveal that [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero even normally-sympathetic Gryffindor characters show bias against werewolves]], some even thinking werewolves did not deserve to be educated for being "a bunch of dark
** Pureblood supremacy remains a common belief throughout the magical world, especially among Slytherins. [[spoiler:Regulus Black, at the very least, got over it enough to get engaged to a Half-blood witch with a Muggle for a grandmother.]]
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** Later, [[spoiler:Regulus]] realized he was attracted to his first cousin [[spoiler:Narcissa, but Narcissa was already married by the time he made that realization]].
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** Later, [[spoiler:Regulus]] realized he was attracted to his first cousin [[spoiler:Narcissa, but Narcissa was already married by the time he made that realization]].realization. He got over it at some point in the next several years]].
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* SympathyForTheDevil: In Chapter 59, Harry feels sorry for Regulus even though the latter is still a Pureblood supremacist who experienced [[spoiler:incestuous attraction to his cousin]].
-->He couldn't say he liked the teenage Regulus who had written the diary -- they probably would have despised each other if they'd ever met -- but at the same time, Harry felt sorry for him. He could understand Regulus in a way -- he knew what it was like to feel lonely, to want a happy family. Had Regulus truly wanted to kill Muggles and Muggle-borns? Or had he just never seen them as equals? It was hard to imagine Regulus wanting Nymphadora to die -- or Selene Harris, the beautiful Muggle-born girl in his house.\\
-->He couldn't say he liked the teenage Regulus who had written the diary -- they probably would have despised each other if they'd ever met -- but at the same time, Harry felt sorry for him. He could understand Regulus in a way -- he knew what it was like to feel lonely, to want a happy family. Had Regulus truly wanted to kill Muggles and Muggle-borns? Or had he just never seen them as equals? It was hard to imagine Regulus wanting Nymphadora to die -- or Selene Harris, the beautiful Muggle-born girl in his house.\\
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* SympathyForTheDevil: In Chapter 59, Harry feels sorry for Regulus even though the latter is still a Pureblood supremacist who [[spoiler:formerly]] experienced [[spoiler:incestuous attraction to his cousin]].
cousin as a teenager]].
-->He couldn't say he liked the teenage Regulus who had written the diary -- they probably would have despised each other if they'd ever met -- but at the same time, Harry felt sorry for him. He could understand Regulus in a way -- he knew what it was like to feel lonely, to want a happy family. Had Regulus truly wanted to kill Muggles and Muggle-borns? Or had he just never seen them as equals? It was hard to imagine Regulus wanting Nymphadora to die -- or Selene Harris, the beautiful Muggle-born [actually Half-blood] girl in his house.\\
-->He couldn't say he liked the teenage Regulus who had written the diary -- they probably would have despised each other if they'd ever met -- but at the same time, Harry felt sorry for him. He could understand Regulus in a way -- he knew what it was like to feel lonely, to want a happy family. Had Regulus truly wanted to kill Muggles and Muggle-borns? Or had he just never seen them as equals? It was hard to imagine Regulus wanting Nymphadora to die -- or Selene Harris, the beautiful Muggle-born [actually Half-blood] girl in his house.\\
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* ThroatSlittingGesture: Ron does this at Malfoy in Chapter 64, just before the Quidditch Cup finale starts.
-->Ron pointed at Malfoy, closed his eyes, and drew one finger across his throat.
-->Ron pointed at Malfoy, closed his eyes, and drew one finger across his throat.
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* DiedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Instead of [[spoiler:being drowned by Inferi while retrieving the Locket Horcrux]], [[spoiler:Regulus]] was killed by [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy]].
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Before formally meeting and being introduced to her, Regulus referred to Nymphadora Tonks as "Nymphatlantis".
* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: In this continuity, the Fat Friar, [[NamedByTheAdaptation here named Friar John Overhill]], wanted magical people of England to be able to attend church like Muggles without fear of persecution because he saw magic as an ability given by God. After several years of preaching, he was asked to return to Hogwarts as the school chaplain. He brought Octavius the Black with him as his secretary, being his companion for years after Octavius sought shelter from him after he had a row with his friend Salazar Slytherin and no one else would take him in. The Friar stayed for a year until he had a heart attack and died. In canon, he joined the clergy as part of a mendicant religious order and was executed because senior church officials grew suspicious of his magical abilities.
* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: In this continuity, the Fat Friar, [[NamedByTheAdaptation here named Friar John Overhill]], wanted magical people of England to be able to attend church like Muggles without fear of persecution because he saw magic as an ability given by God. After several years of preaching, he was asked to return to Hogwarts as the school chaplain. He brought Octavius the Black with him as his secretary, being his companion for years after Octavius sought shelter from him after he had a row with his friend Salazar Slytherin and no one else would take him in. The Friar stayed for a year until he had a heart attack and died. In canon, he joined the clergy as part of a mendicant religious order and was executed because senior church officials grew suspicious of his magical abilities.
* DiedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Instead of [[spoiler:being drowned by Inferi while retrieving the Locket Horcrux]], [[spoiler:Regulus]] was killed by [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy]].
* GoodShepherd: The Fat Friar, according to his backstory.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Other than canon instances like James and Lily, Regulus mentions in a diary entry that Narcissa and Lucius "have been together since they were fifteen", got married when Narcissa was a few months short of turning 21, and have stayed married to the present day of the plot.
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* KissingCousins: {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much that this was apparently one of the reasons Sirius' mother ''tried to get a court order to make him go home''. (Sirius, of course, hated this potential arrangement.) Thankfully, they eventually backed down.
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* KissingCousins: IWantGrandkids: Regulus' aunt and Bellatrix and Narcissa's mother, Druella, is quite insistent on her daughters bearing their own offspring. Regulus has a couple of accounts of this recorded in his diary -- one (dated to 27 December, 1975) about how Druella thought Bellatrix's biological clock was ticking and wanted her to see a specialist to see how much longer she had until she wouldn't be able to bear a child, and another (dated to 26 April, 1976) about her wanting her recently-married youngest daughter, Narcissa, to have kids as soon as possible, even though Narcissa didn't want to risk [[spoiler:after having a miscarriage a couple of years before]].
-->''Bellatrix isn't speaking to their [her and her sisters'] mother because she said Bellatrix ought to see a specialist and find out how many years she has left to have a baby. I don't understand why everyone acts as though she's so old. Mum didn't have Sirius until she was thirty-nine and Bella isn't even thirty.\\
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Narcissa says Aunt Druella is driving her mad because she keeps asking when Cissa and Lucius are going to have a baby. Why is everyone fascinated with other people having babies? I told Narcissa that she should tell Aunt Druella they can't have a baby until they figure out how to make one, which Cissa thought was funny. Later I wish I hadn't said it, though. Sometimes there are things you don't want to think about.''
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** {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much that this was apparently one of the reasons Sirius' mother ''tried to get a court order to make him go home''. (Sirius, of course, hated this potentialarrangement.arrangement, and so did Bellatrix; even Regulus thought it was ridiculous until Sirius pranked him.) Thankfully, they eventually backed down.down.
** Later, [[spoiler:Regulus]] realized he was attracted to his first cousin [[spoiler:Narcissa, but Narcissa was already married by the time he made that realization]].
-->''Bellatrix isn't speaking to their [her and her sisters'] mother because she said Bellatrix ought to see a specialist and find out how many years she has left to have a baby. I don't understand why everyone acts as though she's so old. Mum didn't have Sirius until she was thirty-nine and Bella isn't even thirty.\\
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Narcissa says Aunt Druella is driving her mad because she keeps asking when Cissa and Lucius are going to have a baby. Why is everyone fascinated with other people having babies? I told Narcissa that she should tell Aunt Druella they can't have a baby until they figure out how to make one, which Cissa thought was funny. Later I wish I hadn't said it, though. Sometimes there are things you don't want to think about.''
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** {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much that this was apparently one of the reasons Sirius' mother ''tried to get a court order to make him go home''. (Sirius, of course, hated this potential
** Later, [[spoiler:Regulus]] realized he was attracted to his first cousin [[spoiler:Narcissa, but Narcissa was already married by the time he made that realization]].
* MatchmakerFailure: One of Regulus' diary entries notes that Evan Rosier kept trying to match him up with his sister Charis because he didn't approve of the boy Charis liked.
-->''As you might suspect, it's not working. It would be funny if it did, though, because then I'd be [[TangledFamilyTree both Narcissa's first cousin and her first-cousin-in-law]] -- Evan and Charis's father is Aunt Druella's brother.''
* MayDecemberRomance: Chapter 54 has Sirius mention one of his family's ancestors, Octavius the Black, fathering his first child at the age of 70... while his wife was 24.
-->''As you might suspect, it's not working. It would be funny if it did, though, because then I'd be [[TangledFamilyTree both Narcissa's first cousin and her first-cousin-in-law]] -- Evan and Charis's father is Aunt Druella's brother.''
* MayDecemberRomance: Chapter 54 has Sirius mention one of his family's ancestors, Octavius the Black, fathering his first child at the age of 70... while his wife was 24.
* NamedByTheAdaptation:
** The Fat Friar is named Friar John Overhill, who [[NonIndicativeName didn't live over the hill]].
** Edgar Bones' wife was named Charis Rosier and was the sister of Evan Rosier, and the two's children were named Ambrose, Felicity, and Rosamund.
** The Fat Friar is named Friar John Overhill, who [[NonIndicativeName didn't live over the hill]].
** Edgar Bones' wife was named Charis Rosier and was the sister of Evan Rosier, and the two's children were named Ambrose, Felicity, and Rosamund.
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* NoSuchThingAsWizardJesus: There's a discussion about religion, and a chapter even takes place in the magical version of the Catholic Church. Jesus, however, isn't stated as a wizard.
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* NoSuchThingAsWizardJesus: There's a discussion about religion, and a chapter Chapter 59 even takes place in the magical version of the Catholic Church. Jesus, however, isn't stated as a wizard.wizard.
* NomDeMom: It's mentioned in one of Regulus' diary entries in his fifth year (the Marauders' sixth) that Severus Snape was having a feud with both his parents because he wanted to change his surname to Prince but neither would let him. Since it was mentioned a sentence earlier that Snape claimed he was a Death Eater then, it's not hard to guess [[FantasticRacism why]].
* NomDeMom: It's mentioned in one of Regulus' diary entries in his fifth year (the Marauders' sixth) that Severus Snape was having a feud with both his parents because he wanted to change his surname to Prince but neither would let him. Since it was mentioned a sentence earlier that Snape claimed he was a Death Eater then, it's not hard to guess [[FantasticRacism why]].
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* SympathyForTheDevil: In Chapter 59, Harry feels sorry for Regulus even though the latter is still a Pureblood supremacist who experienced [[spoiler:incestuous attraction to his cousin]].
-->He couldn't say he liked the teenage Regulus who had written the diary -- they probably would have despised each other if they'd ever met -- but at the same time, Harry felt sorry for him. He could understand Regulus in a way -- he knew what it was like to feel lonely, to want a happy family. Had Regulus truly wanted to kill Muggles and Muggle-borns? Or had he just never seen them as equals? It was hard to imagine Regulus wanting Nymphadora to die -- or Selene Harris, the beautiful Muggle-born girl in his house.\\
From what Harry could tell, Regulus had truly longed for two things at the age of fifteen: to have his family reunited, and [[spoiler:to be with Narcissa Malfoy]]. [[spoiler:''I don't even care if Narcissa is in the Dark Lord's service,'' he had written, ''because I know how passionate she is about family.'' Was that what Regulus had sought in the Death Eaters? A way to have his family reunited?
-->He couldn't say he liked the teenage Regulus who had written the diary -- they probably would have despised each other if they'd ever met -- but at the same time, Harry felt sorry for him. He could understand Regulus in a way -- he knew what it was like to feel lonely, to want a happy family. Had Regulus truly wanted to kill Muggles and Muggle-borns? Or had he just never seen them as equals? It was hard to imagine Regulus wanting Nymphadora to die -- or Selene Harris, the beautiful Muggle-born girl in his house.\\
From what Harry could tell, Regulus had truly longed for two things at the age of fifteen: to have his family reunited, and [[spoiler:to be with Narcissa Malfoy]]. [[spoiler:''I don't even care if Narcissa is in the Dark Lord's service,'' he had written, ''because I know how passionate she is about family.'' Was that what Regulus had sought in the Death Eaters? A way to have his family reunited?
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* AdaptationNameChange: Though Sirius doesn't have a canon middle name, and most fan-works posit with giving him the middle name 'Orion', this fic names him Sirius ''Aurelius'' Black.
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* DoubleInLawMarriage: {{Discussed|Trope}}. According to Chapter 53, as a child, Andromeda used to plan to find three Pureblood brothers to marry with her sisters, before she developed more egalitarian views as she grew older. Of course, this turns out very differently from the sisters expected.
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* KissingCousins: {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much that this was apparently one of the reasons Sirius' mother ''tried to get a court order to make him go home''. (Sirius, of course, hated this potential arrangement.) They eventually backed down.
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* KissingCousins: {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much that this was apparently one of the reasons Sirius' mother ''tried to get a court order to make him go home''. (Sirius, of course, hated this potential arrangement.) They Thankfully, they eventually backed down.down.
* LoopholeAbuse: An antagonistic example, as Kreacher the House Elf and Sirius mutually despise each other even though the former has to follow the latter's orders, so Kreacher resorts to loopholes in Sirius' orders just to make his life difficult.[[note]]Quotation from Chapter 53.[[/note]]
-->'''Sirius:''' I tell him to stay out of my bedroom and he stands in the doorway levitating my things. I tell him to make chicken soup and he leaves white feathers floating in the bowl. Once I told him to get out of my sight and he put out all the lights in the room.
* LoopholeAbuse: An antagonistic example, as Kreacher the House Elf and Sirius mutually despise each other even though the former has to follow the latter's orders, so Kreacher resorts to loopholes in Sirius' orders just to make his life difficult.[[note]]Quotation from Chapter 53.[[/note]]
-->'''Sirius:''' I tell him to stay out of my bedroom and he stands in the doorway levitating my things. I tell him to make chicken soup and he leaves white feathers floating in the bowl. Once I told him to get out of my sight and he put out all the lights in the room.
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* ChekhovsGun: ''The Fair Art of Blood Magick'', a book on blood magic and how to perform it, found in the basement of a bookshop in Hogsmeade. Hermione wants to purchase it as of Chapter 38 in the hopes of figuring out Remus was doing with all the blood in his cell, but the shop owners refused to sell it to her. She later considers sneaking out to Hogsmeade three chapters later to purchase it, and discusses it with Harry and Ron over this, but when Sirius bans Harry from sneaking out, Hermione writes to Brutus Swift, Sirius' lawyer, about it. [[spoiler:In Chapter 48-49, the book reveals that what Remus was doing in his cell was doing a protective ritual for Harry, and this, along with later logical deductions, can get him acquitted for his "crimes".]]
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Or, well, godfather. Harry has been shown to have a lot of issues with Sirius after learning he was his godfather but "abandoned" him to the Dursleys, who treated him like dirt, but it's later clarified that Sirius had a blood condition with multiple complications that prevented him from taking ''physical'' custody as opposed to legal custody, as explained in Chapter 45.
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Or, well, godfather. Harry has been shown to have a lot of issues with Sirius after learning he was his godfather but "abandoned" him to the Dursleys, who treated him like dirt, but it's later clarified that Sirius had a blood condition with multiple complications (as a result of doing something something "reckless" and "stupid") that prevented him from taking ''physical'' custody as opposed to legal custody, as explained in Chapter 45.44.
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* EnemyMine: On a smaller scale. Pansy Parkinson convinces her Potions classmates (well, everyone except Draco Malfoy) to sign a ''Petition to End Assigned Seating'' because Snape has previously assigned students that dislike each other to sit next to each other and partner up, and she felt that "they just make everyone miserable". Although [[KickTheDog this fails because Snape argues that the class was "not a democracy"]], it earns her Ron's respect as proof that "she's not a hundred percent rotten".
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* EnemyMine: On a smaller scale. Pansy Parkinson convinces her Potions classmates (well, everyone except Draco Malfoy) Malfoy, whom she had a row with) to sign a ''Petition to End Assigned Seating'' because Snape has previously assigned students that dislike each other to sit next to each other and partner up, and she felt that "they just make everyone miserable". Although [[KickTheDog this fails because Snape argues that the class was "not a democracy"]], it earns her Ron's respect as proof that "she's not a hundred percent rotten".
* FamilyThemeNaming: While sisters Lily and Petunia Evans (later Potter and Dursley, respectively) are both [[FloralThemeNaming named after flowers]], it's clear that they got it from their mother, named Daisy in this fic according to Chapter 51.
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** Snape recommends that Harry should find information on Remus in the published records of the Wizengamot the year he was arrested, rather than books on werewolves, in Chapter 21. When the Trio check the records for real eight chapters later, several fishy things ''in'' said records reveal that [[MiscarriageOfJustice there's something up with the judicial system in magical Britain]].
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** Snape recommends that Harry should find information on Remus in the published records of the Wizengamot the year he was arrested, rather than books on werewolves, in Chapter 21. When the Trio check the records for real eight chapters later, several fishy things ''in'' said records reveal that [[MiscarriageOfJustice there's something up with the judicial system in magical Britain]].
%%*Britain]], and as it turns out, [[spoiler:one of the reasons for Remus' conviction was Lucius Malfoy's clout and influence.]]
** Hermione writes a letter to Brutus Swift, Sirius' lawyer, about a book on blood magic, which contains information on ''why'' Remus' cell was covered in blood. Brutus later concludes from these findings in Chapter 49 that [[spoiler:Remus might be innocent and could be acquitted]].
--->'''Brutus:''' Sirius, if [[spoiler:Remus ends up being found innocent]] because she wrote to me about this, I won't just like Hermione Granger, I'll throw her a party, write her an ode every year, and remember her in my will.
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** Hermione writes a letter to Brutus Swift, Sirius' lawyer, about a book on blood magic, which contains information on ''why'' Remus' cell was covered in blood. Brutus later concludes from these findings in Chapter 49 that [[spoiler:Remus might be innocent and could be acquitted]].
--->'''Brutus:''' Sirius, if [[spoiler:Remus ends up being found innocent]] because she wrote to me about this, I won't just like Hermione Granger, I'll throw her a party, write her an ode every year, and remember her in my will.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Sirius describes the Remus he knew to be this, that he would have preferred to have "a nice pot of hot tea and a peaceful life" over "ruling over Muggles or sitting at Voldemort's right hand", but wonders if that had been the real Remus all along given the "betrayal"
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Sirius describes the Remus he knew to be this, that he would have preferred to have "a nice pot of hot tea and a peaceful life" over "ruling over Muggles or sitting at Voldemort's right hand", but wonders if hand".
* KissingCousins: {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much thathad been this was apparently one of the real Remus all along given the "betrayal"reasons Sirius' mother ''tried to get a court order to make him go home''. (Sirius, of course, hated this potential arrangement.) They eventually backed down.
* KissingCousins: {{Defied|Trope}}. Sirius' parents wanted him to marry his cousin Bellatrix (yes, ''her'') because "[[OldMaid [s]he was nearing the ripe old age of twenty-seven without any marital prospects]]", so much that
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chapter 45 makes a mention to "a dreamy-looking girl with long blonde hair"... if she's Luna...
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%%* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Or, well, godfather. Harry has been shown to have a lot of issues with Sirius after learning he was his godfather but "abandoned" him to the Dursleys, who treated him like dirt.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectHero: Several sympathetic characters in Gryffindor are revealed in Chapters 40-41 to show FantasticRacism against werewolves after the fact that Sirius previously started a school for them was stated in a news article.
-->Percy thought that it was very dangerous and irresponsible for Black to start a school for werewolves, which led Fred and George to declare that [[RebelliousSpirit they intended to do the exact same thing]]. Though he was the twins' best friend, Lee Jordan still maintained that wanting to start a school for dark creatures was decidedly dodgy, which led to some noisy arguments in the common room. Ginny seemed to find the very idea of werewolves to frightening to talk about, while Colin Creevey decided [[NotEvilJustMisunderstood they were probably misunderstood like hippogriffs]]. Angelina said she didn't care one way or another what Black had done before coming to Hogwarts, because he was a good teacher; Alicia thought teaching magic to werewolves would give them too much power; Katie told Harry that Black probably had good intentions, but she didn't think it was a very good idea; and Oliver Wood finally yelled one evening at Quidditch practice that he wished Black had never so much as met a werewolf, and if he heard anyone else talking about Black's werewolf school when they should be concentrating on defeating Slytherin, he was going to make them run extra reflex drills.
-->Percy thought that it was very dangerous and irresponsible for Black to start a school for werewolves, which led Fred and George to declare that [[RebelliousSpirit they intended to do the exact same thing]]. Though he was the twins' best friend, Lee Jordan still maintained that wanting to start a school for dark creatures was decidedly dodgy, which led to some noisy arguments in the common room. Ginny seemed to find the very idea of werewolves to frightening to talk about, while Colin Creevey decided [[NotEvilJustMisunderstood they were probably misunderstood like hippogriffs]]. Angelina said she didn't care one way or another what Black had done before coming to Hogwarts, because he was a good teacher; Alicia thought teaching magic to werewolves would give them too much power; Katie told Harry that Black probably had good intentions, but she didn't think it was a very good idea; and Oliver Wood finally yelled one evening at Quidditch practice that he wished Black had never so much as met a werewolf, and if he heard anyone else talking about Black's werewolf school when they should be concentrating on defeating Slytherin, he was going to make them run extra reflex drills.
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* FantasticRacism: Due to Remus being the one rumoured to work with Voldemort, anti-werewolf prejudice is very apparent and rampant, moreso than canon. In the first chapter alone, Stan suggests that Remus was "a big follower of You-Know-Who" ''because'' of his lycanthropy and being a "Dark Creature", among many other comments.
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* FantasticRacism: Due to Remus being the one rumoured to work with Voldemort, anti-werewolf prejudice is very apparent and rampant, moreso than canon. In the first chapter alone, Stan suggests that Remus was "a big follower of You-Know-Who" ''because'' of his lycanthropy and being a "Dark Creature", lycanthropy, among many other comments.comments. Later chapters reveal that [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero even normally-sympathetic Gryffindor characters show bias against werewolves]], some even thinking werewolves did not deserve to be educated for being "a bunch of dark creatures".
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* EnemyMine: On a smaller scale. Pansy Parkinson convinces her Potions classmates (well, everyone except Draco Malfoy) to sign a ''Petition to End Assigned Seating'' because Snape has previously assigned students that dislike each other to sit next to each other and partner up, and she felt that "they just make everyone miserable". Although [[KickTheDog this fails because Snape argues that the class was "not a democracy"]], it earns her Ron's respect as proof that "she's not a hundred percent rotten".
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* NiceGuy: Like in canon, Cedric Diggory is ''very'' nice; due to him befriending Harry a year earlier, he personally visits him in the Hospital Wing after the fateful Quidditch match and secretly sends him advice on what replacement broomstick to get.
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* NiceGuy: Like in canon, Cedric Diggory is ''very'' nice; due to him befriending Harry a year earlier, he personally visits him in the Hospital Wing after the fateful Quidditch match and secretly sends him advice on what replacement broomstick to get. Even ''Oliver Wood'' trusts him to keep their [[spoiler:Firebolt]] broomsticks safe to settle a 'debt' because he saw him as "goodness and honor personified".
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One of Regulus' coat buttons was found in the woods near Malfoy Manor around Chapter 35, years after his disappearance. I wonder if this will lead to anything since the fic started in 2004, if it will be a Chekhovs Gun or a Red Herring
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%%* CoolTeacher: Sirius is considered to be this in this continuity; he compliments students on their spellcasting abilities.
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** The reason Sirius was unable to be the Secret Keeper for the Potters in this continuity is because he was already one for his cousin Andromeda and her family, who had gone into hiding around the same time, kicking off the events of the plot.
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%%* {{Foreshadowing}}: In Chapter 27, Harry notices that one of Sirius' mugs was blue "with white curly handwriting on one side, saying something in another language" that Harry speculates to be German.
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%%** In Chapter 27, Harry notices that one of Sirius' mugs was blue "with white curly handwriting on one side, saying something in another language" that Harry speculates to beGerman.German.
%%** In Chapter 33, Sirius teaches that "a person's sacrifice of their own blood can protect others". [[spoiler:This turns out to be the basis of the ritual Remus was performing in Azkaban to protect Harry.]]
%%** During a Potions test in Chapter 35, when Ron takes out Scabbers from his pocket on Snape's orders (as the rat was disturbing the test), Snape reacts in horror, whispering words like "Can't..." and "not..." to himself.
%%** In Chapter 27, Harry notices that one of Sirius' mugs was blue "with white curly handwriting on one side, saying something in another language" that Harry speculates to be
%%** In Chapter 33, Sirius teaches that "a person's sacrifice of their own blood can protect others". [[spoiler:This turns out to be the basis of the ritual Remus was performing in Azkaban to protect Harry.]]
%%** During a Potions test in Chapter 35, when Ron takes out Scabbers from his pocket on Snape's orders (as the rat was disturbing the test), Snape reacts in horror, whispering words like "Can't..." and "not..." to himself.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: Sirius describes the Remus he knew to be this, that he would have preferred to have "a nice pot of hot tea and a peaceful life" over "ruling over Muggles or sitting at Voldemort's right hand", but wonders if that had been the real Remus all along given the "betrayal"
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** A book on werewolves mentioned that Remus taught at 'The Schwartz Academy for Lycanthropic Wizards' in Berlin. [[spoiler:'Schwartz' is a German-Yiddish surname meaning "black".]]
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** A book on werewolves mentioned that Remus taught at 'The Schwartz Academy for Lycanthropic Wizards' in Berlin. [[spoiler:'Schwartz' 'Schwartz' is a German-Yiddish surname meaning "black".]]"black", [[ThisIsMyNameOnForeign alluding to the surname of the founder]].
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this is still speculative
* TheBGrade: Alluded to when the Trio break into Sirius' office in Chapter 31 and find some graded seventh-year essays in his drawers.
-->("Percy got ninety-nine percent, it'll kill him")
-->("Percy got ninety-nine percent, it'll kill him")
%%* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Or, well, godfather. Harry has been shown to have a lot of issues with Sirius after learning he was his godfather but "abandoned" him to the Dursleys, who treated him like dirt.
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%%** Snape recommends that Harry should find information on Remus in the published records of the Wizengamot the year he was arrested, rather than books on werewolves, in Chapter 21.
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%%** A book on werewolves mentioned that Remus taught at 'The Schwartz Academy for Lycanthropic Wizards' in Berlin. [[spoiler:'Schwartz' is a German-Yiddish surname meaning "black".]]
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keeping the edit commented out because I have a theory that isn't confirmed in the story (yet)
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%%* {{Foreshadowing}}: In Chapter 27, Harry notices that one of Sirius' mugs was blue "with white curly handwriting on one side, saying something in another language" that Harry speculates to be German.
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!!''Another Prisoner, Another Professor'' provides examples of the following tropes:
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!!''Another Prisoner, Another Professor'' provides examples of the following tropes:
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: {{Downplayed|Trope}}. Cedric Diggory appears a couple of months earlier than canon, while exploring the library and before the first Quidditch match against Gryffindor.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: {{Downplayed|Trope}}. Cedric Diggory appears a couple of months earlier than canon, while exploring the library and before the first Quidditch match against Gryffindor.
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* NiceGuy: Like in canon, Cedric Diggory is ''very'' nice; due to him befriending Harry a year earlier, he personally visits him in the Hospital Wing after the fateful Quidditch match and secretly sends him advice on what replacement broomstick to get.
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I just read this and remembered something about translations... I have a theory but I'm commenting the entry out because it's not confirmed in the story
* AllohistoricalAllusion: In Chapter 22, a book on werewolves mentioned that Remus taught at 'The Schwartz Academy for Lycanthropic Wizards' in Berlin prior to his arrest.
-->'''Ron:''' Wow. Imagine having Lupin as your teacher.
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* ForWantOfANail: The reason Hogwarts has to put up with Severus Snape as a Potions teacher is because Sirius, Dumbledore's first choice, had "other plans".
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** The reason Hogwarts has to put up with Severus Snape as a Potions teacher is because Sirius, Dumbledore's first choice, had "otherplans".plans".
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** The reason Hogwarts has to put up with Severus Snape as a Potions teacher is because Sirius, Dumbledore's first choice, had "other
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* MeaningfulName: One of Percy and the Weasley Twins' past DADA professors was named Professor Somna, an old witch who retired after a year due to problems with narcolepsy. 'Somna' is a letter off from ''Somnia'', the sons of Somnus, the Roman personification-god of sleep.
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** One of Percy and the Weasley Twins' past DADA professors was named Professor Somna, an old witch who retired after a year due to problems with narcolepsy. 'Somna' is a letter off from ''Somnia'', the sons of Somnus, the Roman personification-god ofsleep.sleep.
%%** A book on werewolves mentioned that Remus taught at 'The Schwartz Academy for Lycanthropic Wizards' in Berlin. [[spoiler:'Schwartz' is a German-Yiddish surname meaning "black".]]
** One of Percy and the Weasley Twins' past DADA professors was named Professor Somna, an old witch who retired after a year due to problems with narcolepsy. 'Somna' is a letter off from ''Somnia'', the sons of Somnus, the Roman personification-god of
%%** A book on werewolves mentioned that Remus taught at 'The Schwartz Academy for Lycanthropic Wizards' in Berlin. [[spoiler:'Schwartz' is a German-Yiddish surname meaning "black".]]
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%%* CoolTeacher: Sirius is considered to be this in this continuity; he compliments students on their spellcasting abilities.
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* MemeticBadass: In-universe. One of the rumours about what Sirius was doing before taking the DADA post is that he was fighting Nundus in East Africa. For context, Nundus are essentially beasts of mass destruction that usually take ''a hundred'' trained magical people to subdue.
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* MemeticBadass: In-universe. One of the rumours about what Sirius was doing before taking the DADA post is that he was fighting Nundus in East Africa. For context, Nundus are essentially beasts of mass destruction that usually take ''a hundred'' trained magical people to subdue. Sirius later confirms that this particular rumour isn't true, though he did visit East Africa to collect potions ingredients.
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* MemeticBadass: In-universe. One of the rumours about what Sirius was doing before taking the DADA post is that he was fighting Nundus in East Africa. For context, Nundus are essentially beasts of mass destruction that usually take ''a hundred'' trained magical people to subdue.
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* DramaticIrony: In Chapter 4, Draco Malfoy cites the fact that his mother is a first cousin of Sirius and implies he might receive preferential treatment as a family member. Later the same chapter, Sirius orders Draco and his cronies out of the train compartment for starting a fight, not to mention that Sirius is a CulturalRebel who hates Pureblood supremacists like most of his un-disowned family.
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* DramaticIrony: In Chapter 4, Draco Malfoy cites the fact that his mother is a first cousin of Sirius and implies he might receive preferential treatment as a family member. Later the same chapter, Sirius orders Draco and his cronies out of the train compartment for starting a fight, not to mention that Sirius is a CulturalRebel who hates Pureblood supremacists like most of his un-disowned family. Malfoy comes to realize this after a few weeks and tries to distance himself from Sirius in terms of blood relation as much as possible.
