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* HollywoodBoardGames: The first scene opens with a ''TabletopGame/{{Battleship}}'' game between Suzu and a face-changing individual that haunts her dreams. Her mood is sour and she loathes having to interact with him but is afraid of venturing into the dark nothingness surrounding their table. It's later revealed that this recurring dream is a coping mechanism because the individual is [[spoiler: Suzu's late brother Seiji]]. This also explains her attitude: she's well aware this is unhealthy but can't bring herself to let it go.
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Throughout the fic, Suzu has to deal with love, her past emotional trauma, and a never-ending game of battleship with the grim reaper himself. Despite this, the fic manages to stay with a snarky, lighthearted sense of humor, meshing well with the sleepy commentary from the Protagonist.
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Throughout the fic, Suzu has to deal with love, her past emotional trauma, and a never-ending game of battleship ''TabletopGame/{{Battleship}}'' with the grim reaper himself. Despite this, the fic manages to stay with a snarky, lighthearted sense of humor, meshing well with the sleepy commentary from the Protagonist.
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* [[ChessWithDeath Battleship With Death]]: The very first scene opens with the game in progress. [[spoiler:It's actually her dead brother Seiji, and it started as a way to cope with his death, but things changed.]]
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* [[ChessWithDeath Battleship With Death]]: ChessWithDeath: The very first scene opens with the a game of ''Battleship'' in progress. [[spoiler:It's actually her dead brother Seiji, and it started as a way to cope with his death, but things changed.]]
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: Death is friendly enough most of the time, and he does play a mean game of battleship.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: Death is friendly enough most of the time, and he does play a mean game of battleship.''Battleship''.
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: Suzu and Miki are ... ''extremely'' close, often sleeping together or cuddling for hours on end. Really, for an outside observer, they can look closer than Suzu and Hisao. [[spoiler: Of course, this is in part to help each other deal with their respective issues, but still.]]
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: PseudoRomanticFriendship: Suzu and Miki are ... ''extremely'' close, often sleeping together or cuddling for hours on end. Really, for an outside observer, they can look closer than Suzu and Hisao. [[spoiler: Of course, this is in part to help each other deal with their respective issues, but still.]]
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: Suzu and Miki are ... ''extremely'' close, often sleeping together or cuddling for hours on end. Really, for an outside observer, they can look closer than Suzu and Hisao. [[spoiler: Of course, this is in part to help each other deal with their respective issues, but still.]]
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: Suzu and Miki are ... ''extremely'' close, often sleeping together or cuddling for hours on end. Really, for an outside observer, they can look closer than Suzu and Hisao. [[spoiler: Of course, this is in part to help each other deal with their respective issues, but still.]]
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moved to trivia.
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* DevelopmentGag: Suzu mentions that there's room in the literature club because Lelouche had left. Lelouche was a student who appeared in the class 3-3 photo in the original Act 1 Demo of the game, but was replaced with a different student when the full game was released.
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* WhiteKnighting: At first, Hisao actually manages to avoid his overprotective tendencies but after Suzu [[spoiler: tells him about her dead brother]] he puts this in full effect. [[spoiler: Like in some routes in the visual novel, this leads to a bad ending.]]
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It just struck me as something that should be here.
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: Suzu and Miki are ... ''extremely'' close, often sleeping together or cuddling for hours on end. Really, for an outside observer, they can look closer than Suzu and Hisao. [[spoiler: Of course, this is in part to help each other deal with their respective issues, but still.]]
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6192 A Pseudo-Pseudo Suzu Route]] is a KatawaShoujo {{Shipping}} fic featuring Suzu Suzuki, a girl from the front row of Hisao's class, who suffers from a chronic sleep disorder named [[http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmedhealth/PMH0001805/ narcolepsy]]. The fic is set from Suzu's perspective, and runs from Hisao's introduction to the class and then for the usual four arc style.
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6192 A Pseudo-Pseudo Suzu Route]] is a KatawaShoujo ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo'' {{Shipping}} fic featuring Suzu Suzuki, a girl from the front row of Hisao's class, who suffers from a chronic sleep disorder named [[http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmedhealth/PMH0001805/ narcolepsy]]. The fic is set from Suzu's perspective, and runs from Hisao's introduction to the class and then for the usual four arc style.
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* [[spoiler: [[BigSleep Big Sleep]]: In the Bad Ending, Suzu experiences this. Except she isn't dying and then closes her eyes peacefully, she closes her eyes first and then falls off the school's roof.]]
* [[ChessWithDeath Battleship With Death]]: The very first scene opens with the game in progress. [[spoiler: It's actually her dead brother Seiji, and it started as a way to cope with his death, but things changed.]]
* [[ChessWithDeath Battleship With Death]]: The very first scene opens with the game in progress. [[spoiler: It's actually her dead brother Seiji, and it started as a way to cope with his death, but things changed.]]
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* [[spoiler: [[BigSleep Big Sleep]]: In BigSleep: [[spoiler:In the Bad Ending, Suzu experiences this. Except she isn't dying and then closes her eyes peacefully, she closes her eyes first and then falls off the school's roof.]]
* [[ChessWithDeath Battleship With Death]]: The very first scene opens with the game in progress.[[spoiler: It's [[spoiler:It's actually her dead brother Seiji, and it started as a way to cope with his death, but things changed.]]
* [[ChessWithDeath Battleship With Death]]: The very first scene opens with the game in progress.
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* [[spoiler: [[DrivenToSuicide Driven To Suicide]]: Possibly, in the bad ending. After feeling guilty for indirectly causing Hisao to have another heart attack, Suzu sits right on the edge of the school roof, fully knowing what might happen if she fell asleep. And then she does.]]
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* [[spoiler: [[DrivenToSuicide Driven To Suicide]]: Possibly, DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Possibly, in the bad ending. After feeling guilty for indirectly causing Hisao to have another heart attack, Suzu sits right on the edge of the school roof, fully knowing what might happen if she fell asleep. And then she does.]]
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-->"The sensation of Hisao's body next to mine is more soothing than any... any thing that is usually really soothing but not as good as this."
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* [[WhiteKnighting White Knighting]]: At first, Hisao actually manages to avoid his overprotective tendencies but after Suzu [[spoiler: tells him about her dead brother]] he puts this in full effect. [[spoiler: Like in some routes in the visual novel, this leads to a bad ending.]]
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* [[WhiteKnighting White Knighting]]: WhiteKnighting: At first, Hisao actually manages to avoid his overprotective tendencies but after Suzu [[spoiler: tells him about her dead brother]] he puts this in full effect. [[spoiler: Like in some routes in the visual novel, this leads to a bad ending.]]]]
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* SleepyHead: [[CaptainObvious Obviously]]SleepyHead
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* DeathByFallingOver: Due to Suzu's condition, this is an actual possibility which she needs to be careful of all the time [[spoiler: and in her brother's case, a reality]].
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* DeathByFallingOver: Due to Suzu's condition, this is an actual possibility which she needs to be careful of all the time time. [[spoiler: and in In her brother's case, it's was a reality]].
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* DeathByFallingOver: Due to Suzu's condition, this is an actual possibility which she needs to be careful of all the time [[spoiler: and in her brother's case, a reality]].
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* ThemeNaming: The names of every member of the Suzuki family start with an S.
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* [[spoiler: [[DrivenToSuicide Driven To Suicide]]: Possibly, in the bad ending. After feeling guilty for indirectly causing Hisao to have another heart attack, Suzu sits right on the edge of the roof, fully knowing what might happen if she fell asleep. And then she does.]]
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* [[spoiler: [[DrivenToSuicide Driven To Suicide]]: Possibly, in the bad ending. After feeling guilty for indirectly causing Hisao to have another heart attack, Suzu sits right on the edge of the school roof, fully knowing what might happen if she fell asleep. And then she does.]]
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* [[spoiler: [[DrivenToSuicide Driven To Suicide]]: Possibly, in the bad ending. After feeling guilty for indirectly causing Hisao to have another heart attack, Suzu sits right on the edge of the roof, fully knowing what might happen if she fell asleep. And then she does.]]
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* DevelopmentGag: Suzu mentions that there's room in the literature club because Lelouche had left. Lelouche was a student who appeared in the class 3-3 photo in the original Act 1 Demo of the game, but was replaced with a different student when the full game was released.
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* HeavySleeper: Due to the narcolepsy, it can be hard to wake Suzu.
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* HeavySleeper: Due to the narcolepsy, it can be hard to wake Suzu. Hisao is the same after pulling an all-nighter.
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* ArtisticLicenseMedicine: Suzu's narcolepsy is not presented very realistically. This is made worse by other authors, knowing that this fic is so popular, using the exact same Suzu in other stories.
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6192 A Pseudo-Pseudo Suzu
Throughout the fic, Suzu has to deal with love, her past emotional trauma, and a never-ending game of battleship with the grim reaper himself. Despite this, the fic manages to stay with a snarky, lighthearted sense of humor, meshing well with the sleepy commentary from the Protagonist.
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* AllJustADream: Because the protagonist spends most of her time asleep, dream sequences come up consistently.
* [[spoiler: [[BigSleep Big Sleep]]: In the Bad Ending, Suzu experiences this. Except she isn't dying and then closes her eyes peacefully, she closes her eyes first and then falls off the school's roof.]]
* [[ChessWithDeath Battleship With Death]]: The very first scene opens with the game in progress. [[spoiler: It's actually her dead brother Seiji, and it started as a way to cope with his death, but things changed.]]
* CloudCuckoolander: This is a fic with Kenji in it.
* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: Death is friendly enough most of the time, and he does play a mean game of battleship.
* HeavySleeper: Due to the narcolepsy, it can be hard to wake Suzu.
* {{Metaphorgotten}}: Suzu tends to lose her train of thought and trail off while making comparisons.
-->"The sensation of Hisao's body next to mine is more soothing than any... any thing that is usually really soothing but not as good as this."
* NotAMorningPerson: Suzu considers waking up before midday on a weekend ungodly.
* SleepyHead: [[CaptainObvious Obviously]]
* TemptingFate: Suzu quickly realizes her mistake
-->"What could go wrong? Wait wait wait, no. Can I take back a thought? Can I--no, nope, no. I'm sure something horrible will happen and everything will be ruined forever. Yeah. That was close. We should be good now."
* TheSchizophreniaConspiracy: [[CloudCuckoolander Kenji]] finds a sleeping girl outside of his dormroom, assumes that she is a member of the feminist conspiracy, [[spoiler: and kidnaps her.]]
* [[WhiteKnighting White Knighting]]: At first, Hisao actually manages to avoid his overprotective tendencies but after Suzu [[spoiler: tells him about her dead brother]] he puts this in full effect. [[spoiler: Like in some routes in the visual novel, this leads to a bad ending.]]
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