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* BadassArmy: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. The army of Vale is noted to be very small, but very elite, insular and vicious.


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* DisappearedDad: While Jack speaks of it at some length, Cielo is a little more flippantly quiet about his orphan status, although he does make a joke about being a dumpster baby and states how there are definitely benefits to having no parents in a place like Beacon.


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* FantasticSlur: There are a few


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* FromCamouflageToCriminal: Jack speaks at length of former Huntsman who went criminal, and claims that half of all serious violent crime is caused by former Huntsman.

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* CasanovaWannabe: Jack seems to think of himself as one. His smooth-talking doesn't really work on Yang, and even Ruby calls it cringy. Although his intent was to distract Yang from realizing he'd tried pick-pocketing her.


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* DirtyCommies: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]]. Union Labor it stated to have some good ideas, but dangerous leadership, and so the conservatives are planning to slowly cooperate their positions over time to defang them.


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* OneSteveLimit: Indigo arc and Indigo Jack. Jaune discusses this, initially thinking that Jack has a woman's name.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Three of the OC protagonists are hinted to have this to an extent. Cielo being an apparent orphan from a broken home, a life of crime, and an [[spoiler: implied connection to the Branwen tribe.]] Jack having grown up on the streets of a rough part of Vale and also having lived a life of crime. And Cards' severe lack of self-confidence seeming to stem from an overly strict, demanding mother.

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Three of the OC protagonists are hinted to have this to an extent. Cielo being an apparent orphan from a broken home, a life of crime, and an a [[spoiler: implied connection to the Branwen tribe.]] Jack having grown up on the streets of a rough part of Vale and also having lived a life of crime. And Cards' severe lack of self-confidence seeming to stem from an overly strict, demanding mother.
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** Indigo Arc is also this to her baby brothr, Jaune.

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** Indigo Arc is also this to her baby brothr, brother, Jaune.
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** Indigo Arc is also this to her baby brothr, Jaune.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Despite being an extremist and major member of a terrorist organization, Adam Taurus is extremely unnerved by Cinder's plan to attack Beacon—finding it to be unnecessarily cruel considering Vale is one of the few places outside Menagerie where the Faunus can live relatively peaceful lives. He's also incredibly creeped out by Dr. Merlot.]]

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Despite being an extremist and major member of a terrorist organization, Adam Taurus is extremely unnerved by Cinder's plan to attack Beacon—finding it to be unnecessarily cruel considering Vale Beacon is one of the few places outside Menagerie where the institutions to offer Faunus can live relatively peaceful lives.equal cohabitation. He's also incredibly creeped out by Dr. Merlot.]]
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* CoolBigSis: Same as canon, Yang is this to Ruby. When talking with Cards amd Cielo, she gushes about how proud of Ruby she is for making friends.

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* CoolBigSis: Same as canon, Yang is this to Ruby. When talking with Cards amd and Cielo, she gushes about how proud of Ruby she is for making friends.
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%%* UnlockingTheTalent: This is what Chloe and her high expectations are doing to Jaune, though it’s more pronounced than in canon between him amd Pyrrha.

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%%* UnlockingTheTalent: This is what Chloe and her high expectations are doing to Jaune, though it’s more pronounced than in canon between him amd and Pyrrha.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Cards seems to have almost been bred for this role. A hapless, but [[DeTerminator determined]] young woman who only becomes cuter the harder she tries (and fails). Ruby Rose and Jaune Arc also occupy this role, as per canon.

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* {{Casanova}}: Jack seems to think of himself as one.
** CasanovaWannabe: His smooth-talking doesn't really work on Yang, and even Ruby calls it cringy. Although his intent was to distract Yang from realizing he'd tried pick-pocketing her.

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** [[spoiler: Dr. Merlot]] is a more villainous example of this.

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* LopsidedDichotomy: These tend to pop up whenever Cielo or Jack are around.

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* {{Tsundere}}: Weiss, natch.

* UnlockingTheTalent: This is what Chloe and her high expectations are doing to Jaune, though it’s more pronounced than in canon between him amd Pyrrha.

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UnlockingTheTalent: This is what Chloe and her high expectations are doing to Jaune, though it’s more pronounced than in canon between him amd Pyrrha.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Same as in canon, but emphasized to a greater degree. Mistral is notably separated in two, Greece and East Asia respectively. Cielo is from the Heartland, the more Asian-inspired part of Mistral, whereas Pyrrha is Northern Mistrali, which is has a strong Greek feel to it. Chloe, a native of Vacuo, is also noted to have come from a ''kraal'', thus making her Remnant's equivalent of an Afrikaner.

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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Same as in canon, but emphasized to a greater degree. Mistral is notably separated in two, Greece and East Asia respectively. Cielo is from the Heartland, the more Asian-inspired part of Mistral, whereas Pyrrha is Northern Mistrali, which is has a strong Greek feel who appear to it.be Greek. Chloe, a native of Vacuo, is also noted to have come from a ''kraal'', thus making her Remnant's equivalent of an Afrikaner.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Same as in canon, but emphasized to a greater degree. Mistral is notably separated into North and South, Greece and East Asia respectively. Cielo seems to be from a very Japanese-inspired part of Central Mistral, whereas Pyrrha is Northern Mistrali (Greek). Chloe, a native of Vacuo, is also noted to have come from a ''kraal'', thus making her Remnant's equivalent of an Afrikaner.

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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Same as in canon, but emphasized to a greater degree. Mistral is notably separated into North and South, in two, Greece and East Asia respectively. Cielo seems to be is from a very Japanese-inspired the Heartland, the more Asian-inspired part of Central Mistral, whereas Pyrrha is Northern Mistrali (Greek).Mistrali, which is has a strong Greek feel to it. Chloe, a native of Vacuo, is also noted to have come from a ''kraal'', thus making her Remnant's equivalent of an Afrikaner.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Same as in canon, but emphasized to a greater degree. Mistral is notably separated into North and South, Greece and East Asia respectively. Cielo seems to be from a very Japanese-inspired part of South Mistral, whereas Pyrrha is Northern Mistrali (Greek). Chloe, a native of Vacuo, is also noted to have come from a ''kraal'', thus making her Remnant's equivalent of an Afrikaner.

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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Same as in canon, but emphasized to a greater degree. Mistral is notably separated into North and South, Greece and East Asia respectively. Cielo seems to be from a very Japanese-inspired part of South Central Mistral, whereas Pyrrha is Northern Mistrali (Greek). Chloe, a native of Vacuo, is also noted to have come from a ''kraal'', thus making her Remnant's equivalent of an Afrikaner.
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* InSeriesNickName: As always, both Jack and Cielo are responsible for giving characters these, with Jack referring to Pyrrha as "Nikki" and Cielo referring to Cards by a different type of card game every time he speaks to her. Actually, Cielo is much ''worse'' since he [[{{TheNicknamer}} constantly makes up nicknames for people whose names he can't be bothered to remember or remember.]]

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* InSeriesNickName: As always, both Jack and Cielo are responsible for giving characters these, with Jack referring to Pyrrha as "Nikki" and Cielo referring to Cards by a different type of card game every time he speaks to her. Actually, Cielo is much ''worse'' since he [[{{TheNicknamer}} constantly makes up nicknames for people whose names he can't be bothered to remember or remember.]]
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* ADorkable: Cards seems to have almost been bred for this role. A hapless, but [[DeTerminator determined]] young woman who only becomes cuter the harder she tries (and fails). Ruby Rose and Jaune Arc also occupy this role, as per canon.

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* ADorkable: {{Adorkable}}: Cards seems to have almost been bred for this role. A hapless, but [[DeTerminator determined]] young woman who only becomes cuter the harder she tries (and fails). Ruby Rose and Jaune Arc also occupy this role, as per canon.
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: So far it looks like Chloe and Jaune are shaping up to be this.

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* {{Deuteragonist}}: So far it looks like Chloe The team consisting of Jaune, Chloe, Ruby, and Jaune are shaping up Weiss seem to be this.
this. Cielo even refers to them as the “B-Team” at one point.
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** Cielo uses a long, single-edged [[{{HeroesPreferSwords}}sword]] that [[{{BifurcatedWeapon}} splits]] into [[{{DualWielding}} a pair of short swords]] that are also capable of being used as [[{{GunsAkimbo}}a pair of firearms.]]

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** Cielo uses a long, single-edged [[{{HeroesPreferSwords}}sword]] [[{{HeroesPreferSwords}} sword]] that [[{{BifurcatedWeapon}} splits]] into [[{{DualWielding}} a pair of short swords]] that are also capable of being used as [[{{GunsAkimbo}}a pair of firearms.]]
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** Cielo uses a long, single-edged sword that [[{{BifurcatedWeapon}} splits]] into [[{{DualWielding}} a pair of short swords]] that are also capable of being used as [[{{GunsAkimbo}}a pair of firearms.]]

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** Cielo uses a long, single-edged sword [[{{HeroesPreferSwords}}sword]] that [[{{BifurcatedWeapon}} splits]] into [[{{DualWielding}} a pair of short swords]] that are also capable of being used as [[{{GunsAkimbo}}a pair of firearms.]]
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* CoolBigSis: Same as canon, Yang is this to Ruby. When talking with Cards amd Cielo, she gushes about how proud of Ruby she is for making friends.
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-> '''Jaune:''' "You know, I’m not really sure how I’m supposed to hold a conversation with you."
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** [[spoiler: Dr. Merlot]] is a more villainous example of this.
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* WrongNameOutburst: Inverted. Cielo accidentally refers to Cards by her ''actual'' name once they meet the Handyman. She doesn’t fail to notice this.

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* WrongNameOutburst: Inverted. Cielo accidentally refers to Cards by her ''actual'' name once they meet start fighting the Handyman. She doesn’t fail to notice rub it in his face after she notices this.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Despite being an extremist and major member of a terrorist organization, Adam Taurus is extremely unnerved by Cinder's plan to attack Beacon—finding it to be unnecessarily cruel considering Vale is one of the few places outside Menagerie where the Faunus can live relatively peaceful lives. He's also
incredibly creeped out by Dr. Merlot.]]

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Despite being an extremist and major member of a terrorist organization, Adam Taurus is extremely unnerved by Cinder's plan to attack Beacon—finding it to be unnecessarily cruel considering Vale is one of the few places outside Menagerie where the Faunus can live relatively peaceful lives. He's also
also incredibly creeped out by Dr. Merlot.]]

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