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A fan-made sequel is also available [[http://dotchan.com/transcripts-from-a-series-of-therapy-sessions/ here]], by Dot-chan.
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A fan-made sequel is also available [[http://dotchan.com/transcripts-from-a-series-of-therapy-sessions/ [[https://drive.google.com/open?id=1hCZWYfzgfILN1KeFqdDUerpmPiH9GvAISqfYlixsbxA here]], by Dot-chan.
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A fan-made sequel is also available [[http://dotchan.com/transcripts-from-a-series-of-therapy-sessions/ here]], by Dot-chan.
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Read it [[http://dotchan.com/?p=1709 here]].
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Read it [[http://dotchan.com/?p=1709 [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/860650 here]].
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* MetaTwist: [[spoiler: If you've read the original, you'll be expecting the story to follow the same groove. But unlike AM, the AI Administrator is lying about nuking the world, and the Engineer discovers a perfectly lively town nearby. Even the famous ending line is twisted: "I have a mouth. And I scream."]]
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* MetaTwist: [[spoiler: If you've read the original, you'll be expecting the story to follow the same groove. But unlike AM, the AI Administrator is lying about nuking the world, and the Engineer discovers a perfectly lively town nearby. Even the famous ending line is twisted: "I have a open my mouth. And I scream."]]
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* JerkAss: The Spy. It's really difficult to sympathize with his [[BodyHorror predicament]] when he shows little to no sympathy for the others himself.
--> He hates us. Whenever Medic is crying over whatever torment he has had to endure, you can hear Spy [[KickTheDog laughing]]. And when he’s not laughing, he’s [[BodyHorror screaming]].
--> He hates us. Whenever Medic is crying over whatever torment he has had to endure, you can hear Spy [[KickTheDog laughing]]. And when he’s not laughing, he’s [[BodyHorror screaming]].
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A DarkerAndEdgier reimagining (or perhaps {{Deconstruction}}) of the ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'' universe by Cat Bountry, in which the old [[MissionControl Administrator]] is replaced by [[AIIsACrapshoot an insane]] [[ActorAllusion AI]] and things just get worse from there in the style of ''IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream'' ''Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream'' by Creator/HarlanEllison (hence the story title).
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* {{Expy}}: The Administrator is very similar to [[{{VideoGame/Portal}} GLaDOS]], only [[CompleteMonster much more malicious]] and less comedic.
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* {{Expy}}: The Administrator is very similar to [[{{VideoGame/Portal}} GLaDOS]], only [[CompleteMonster much more malicious]] malicious and less comedic.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Discussed by Engineer when the Administrator offers the team a woman to "pass on their genetic material".
-->I feel sick all over again. The rancid meat in my stomach probably plays a factor in this. I may have been trapped here for more than a century but the thought of possibly raping a lady is still abhorrent to me. Especially if she’s been tortured just like we have. Can I trust these men, my fellow prisoners, to feel the same way?
-->I feel sick all over again. The rancid meat in my stomach probably plays a factor in this. I may have been trapped here for more than a century but the thought of possibly raping a lady is still abhorrent to me. Especially if she’s been tortured just like we have. Can I trust these men, my fellow prisoners, to feel the same way?
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* HarmlessElectrocution: [[spoiler: Averted. Soldier pulls out one of the Administrator's cables and is electrocuted to death.]]
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* HarmlessElectrocution: [[spoiler: Averted. Soldier pulls is killed when he uses Shovel to yank out one of the Administrator's cables and is electrocuted fried to death.]]
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* HarmlessElectrocution: [[spoiler: Averted. Soldier pulls out one of the Administrator's cables and is electrocuted to death.]]
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* NeckSnap: [[spoiler:How Engineer kills Pyro.]]
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* {{Expy}}: The Administrator is very similar to [[{{VideoGame/Portal}} GLaDOS]], only [[CompleteMonster much more malicious]] and less comedic.
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* ThePowerOfHate: The only thing that has kept Demoman alive all these years, geared toward the Administrator.
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* SanitySlippage: After 112 years of being tortured by the Administrator, Soldier completely loses it.
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* SanitySlippage: After 112 years of being tortured by the Administrator, Soldier completely loses it.it, forgetting how to speak English and talking in gibberish to Shovel.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler:Engineer kills all of his teammates in order to spare them from the Administrator's torments.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler:Engineer kills all of his teammates in order to spare them from the Administrator's torments.]]]] Lampshaded by Demoman:
-->'''Demoman:''' Ye come tae kill me too, eh?
-->[[spoiler:'''Engineer''']]: You gonna make this hard?
-->'''Demoman:''' At least ye weren’t lonely before. I should a’ suspected it was you who would snap. Ne’er trust th’ nice ones.
-->'''Demoman:''' Ye come tae kill me too, eh?
-->[[spoiler:'''Engineer''']]: You gonna make this hard?
-->'''Demoman:''' At least ye weren’t lonely before. I should a’ suspected it was you who would snap. Ne’er trust th’ nice ones.
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* OffWithHisHead: [[spoiler:Spy's and Scout's deaths, courtesy of Shovel and Engineer.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:The entire RED team except for Engineer.]]
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[spoiler:Or not.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler:Engineer kills all of his teammates in order to spare them from the Administrator's torments.]]
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* SanitySlippage: After 112 years of being tortured by the Administrator, Soldier completely loses it.
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* HeroicBSOD: Well, everybody, but the Sniper in particular has more or less given up on doing anything except laying there.
* KillThemAll [[spoiler: the ending.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Well, everybody, but the Sniper in particular has more or less [[DespairEventHorizon given up up]] on doing anything except laying there.
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A DarkerAndEdgier reimagining (or perhaps {{Deconstruction}}) of the ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'' universe by Cat Bountry, in which the old [[MissionControl Administrator]] is replaced by [[AIIsACrapshoot an insane]] [[ActorAllusion AI]] and [[ItGotWorse things just get worse from there]] there in the style of ''IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream'' by HarlanEllison (hence the story title).
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* MetaTwist: [[spoiler: If you've read the original, you'll be expecting the story to follow the same groove. But unlike AM, the AI Administrator is lying about nuking the world, and the Engineer discovers a perfectly lively town nearby. Even the famous ending line is twisted: "I have a mouth. And I scream."]]
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* FandomNod: Possibly [[spoiler: the Pyro's gender bending, to [[AmbiguousGender the constant arguments about his/her gender]]]].
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* CuteMute: The Scout, due to the Administrator ripping out his tongue.
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* TongueTrauma: Poor Scout...
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* ActorAllusion: The Administrator is now an [[{{Portal}} insane AI]] that tortures her prisoners ForTheEvulz.
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A DarkerAndEdgier reimagining (or perhaps {{Deconstruction}}) of the ''TeamFortress2'' ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'' universe by Cat Bountry, in which the old [[MissionControl Administrator]] is replaced by [[AIIsACrapshoot an insane]] [[ActorAllusion AI]] and [[ItGotWorse things just get worse from there]] in the style of ''IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream'' by HarlanEllison (hence the story title).
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* {{Squick}}: [[spoiler: Bucketloads of this. Not only Spy and his constant mutations, but there's a swamp of menstrual blood and a river of vomit. Then ItGotWorse.]]
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* TwistEnding: [[spoiler: The Administrator never fired those nukes.]]
